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Green-Eyed Monster by ya_lublyu_tebya Great Story :) Lovely story. If only the real Buffy could have used that whole debacle to grow a brain instead of turning all psycho hosebeast. Lovely story. If only the real Buffy could have used that whole debacle to grow a brain instead of turning all psycho hosebeast. Yep, hindsight sure can be a bitch. Lovely story with a perfect ending. sister cuervo 09/27/2008 05:03 pm Thirteen Good for Jonathan and what a fun read! really enjoyed Buffy's development and Xander 's too. spacibo 09/27/2008 07:15 am Thirteen Enjoyed it Rose 09/25/2008 03:19 am Thirteen Finally we found out why green ey monster! LOL great story! as usual! love all your fics!!! keep them coming :D I am, I am - a new one started recently and I'm sure many more to come! :-) Thank you for reading. I'm very glad you enjoyed it. Buffy has learned plenty! Thanks for the lovely ending. She has, hasn't she? She finally realised what Spike meant to her. Thank you very much for reading! Aww, what a great ending to a lovely story! Thank you! :-) I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for reading. All4Spike 09/23/2008 06:27 pm Twelve Yay for Jonathan! What a relief! Tamara 09/22/2008 10:50 pm Twelve Great view of thier patrolling togethre. Spike really is Buffy's partner unlike the others. shadow 09/22/2008 09:52 pm Twelve love it please update soon Thanks for a lovely update - glad the zapper is taken care of. Wondering if we can expect anymore out of Warren? Yep, no more headaches for Spike :-) And I wanted Jonathan to be shown as a bit better than the other two (maybe I've been watching too much S7!) Very glad you liked. Good thing for Jonathan, he was never like the other two. I hope the shooting doesn't still happen. Warren should be more mad at Jonathan, though. Buffy's not the one that broke his balls...lol! Yeah, that part had me laughing. It just had to be done :-) Glad you enjoyed. As reunions go, that was pretty damn fine! shadow 09/18/2008 09:35 pm Eleven love it please update soon Bridget 09/15/2008 03:47 pm Ten Thank you for this chapter. I am glad that you wrote Xander as being somewhat normal and considerate of Buffy's feelings. I also liked the way that Buffy explained everything. Great chapter. Now I hope that Buffy can have an honest conversation with Spike. athena606 09/15/2008 02:51 am Ten If only that had actually happened on the show. shadow 09/15/2008 12:51 am Ten love it please update soon sanityfair 09/14/2008 11:29 pm Ten That went well - I'm quite thankful and happy to see Xander understanding. Looking forward to more soon. That went suspiciously smoothly!! I hope it lasts. wonderfull chapter very lovely yay! go wills and xanman for being good friends! and of course, dawnie is just ecstatic about them being together. lovely chappie! Bridget 09/11/2008 01:55 am Nine I really like this story. Buffy and Spike seem so relaxed with each other when Buffy lets her guard down. They have an easy camraderie. I do hope that at some point they have a talk but I am enjoying reading what you have written so far. Absolutely positively a possibility!!!! Good to see some sensible thinking from the Scoobies. shadow 09/10/2008 11:54 pm Nine love it please update soon Okay...love the way you go back and forth from the Revello revelations and the crypt conversations. By the time Buffy gets home they will have already started to process and that can only help. Xander is already even past the yelling and scream fit stage and that is good. Willow is pretty much on board and Dawn is engineer on the Spuffy train. You've brought up the zapper and I have a feeling it will come into play again once some issues are in the open. It might just be what will trigger (no pun intended) her realization that she DOES love him not just could. Excellent update. Kathleen oh, some scary thoughts Buffy's having, but asking him into her bed is a step in the right direction. Boy, they're having a hard time getting things out when the kissing keeps getting in the way! Looking forward to more of your story soon! shadow 09/08/2008 09:40 pm Eight love it please update soon “You know, the kissing was much easier than this talking thing.” Well, Buffy, you can always play to your strengths! Heh. Very nice chapter, with the actual talking, difficult though it may be. Yeah but the talking is necessary at this point. He needs to head to the light and not let her dwell on that darkness. After Faith it's too scary a place for her to let herself go there no matter how true. YAY an update! Love the story. Expect more Xander trouble and that intervention though. Kathleen Don't tell me she's going to ask the Scoobies' permission. Stick up for yourself, girl!!! Of course she's not! She's not that whipped :-) Thanks for reading! Thanks so much for the update, I'm glad she made the decision to speak with him first. Seems she's taking the right steps, hope she continues in that direction! Guess that time apart - and catching him kissing Anya - really helped to sort out her feelings! And I think talking to him first was important for them- she needs to know what to tell the Scoobies after all :-) shadow 09/02/2008 10:23 pm Seven love it please update soon Thank you very much! Next update should be coming soon... Thanks for reading. Much as I am totally freaked by the knowledge of the Nerds, it seems to have been a catalyst of the much needed talk between these too. fangfaceandrea 09/01/2008 01:39 pm Six I just hope the scoobies , Xander specially , don't be asses. nice timing scoobies... as always. *scoff* oh well. brilliant chapter nonetheless. shadow 08/31/2008 08:18 pm Six love it please update soon Buffy, that was good progress for today. A little honesty is therapeutic. Please continue to work on that. Bridget 08/31/2008 06:39 pm Six Nice chapter. Looking forward to the next one. Thanks for another great chapter - glad they seem to be moving forward! Nice fight with excellent visuals - though Buffy should have dealt with Warren's power source. At least he was out of the way and she can get back to Spike :-) Glad you liked the fight - always the hardest thing to write. Okay, an interesting twist and all, but is she really letting them walk out with the device that can trigger Spike' chip? Buffy is not that tactically idiotic. I think she just wants them gone. She can always go beat them up later. And that ass-whooping might have knocked some sense into them... Thanks for reading! Even though Warren was not aware of the chip's function in canon, I like this version. Poor Spike who's unable to back up the Slayer though. Yeah, he missed a good fight - he would have enjoyed it. :-) Thanks for reading - I always like reading your comments. Oh dear she didn't get the remote control from them! BUFFY YOU IDIOT! Didn't see them coming but it makes perfect sense. Warren still has his magic balls too (that always makes me have a guilty snicker). This is baddddddd... Nice twist! Happy to see the update too. Hope the group saw all that and remind her of what she missed by underestimating these three. Wonderful twist. Kathleen Small oops though....Think you mean "get the best of me" instead of "take the best of me" I think she wasn't exactly on top form after Spike kissage :-) You can't blame the girl really, can you?!! Thanks for the careful reading but yep, I did mean take- as in, they couldn't take her full strength because they're weak little boys. Or so she thought... Thanks for reading! So glad to hear you're thoughts. shadow 08/29/2008 06:06 pm Five love it please update soon Very glad you liked. Thanks for reading! Oh oh oh - please let it be Xander and let Buffy kick his butt. Finally catching up on favorite stories. Ooooooo who could it be??? This is a tense cliff hanger. My mind boggles...could it be Riley? Glad they are all witness to the goings on for so many reasons. It should be clear to all that these two are in a relationship and Xander needs to back the heck off! I much prefer this story to how they went on the show. Excellent. Kathleen kamla 08/26/2008 05:55 pm Four ummmm, i hope you are not sitting there reading reviews when you should be writing so I can find out what is happening!!! lol--sorta. what a great story and I can't wait for the update Hmm...must be Xander. aw, cliffie! dang! lovely chappie on the whole though. really like the emotion in the story. God save us - it's another 'protector'! oooh - evil cliffhanger! Just when it seemed that Spike was making progress. ;) Very exciting chapter - hoping you'll update soon, let us know who this intruder is! June 08/25/2008 12:06 am Four I know some fics have Spike's chip work in different ways, like working on his intent to hurt. so either he thought of hurting whoever came in, understandable at the interruption, or whoever came in was able to make the chip go off, or something I'm totally missing and will be pleasantly surprised by in the next chapter.... Oh, who knows but I look forward to finding out! shadow 08/24/2008 10:54 pm Four love it please update soon Go Spike! What a way to break down defences! Alethea 08/23/2008 04:34 pm Three more, more, more, please ? :) Ciandra 08/20/2008 09:25 am Three Love beautiful. All4Spike 08/19/2008 11:32 pm Three Oh, nice. I'm glad the Scoobies got to see the truth while there was still time to rescue the relationship. Glad Spike didn't shag Anya either. Even though they were both drunk I always thought it was out of character for both of them. Yeah, shagging not good. Did NOT want to repeat that. Thanks for reading! Well said. I do wonder what the kids back home are making of this. shadow 08/19/2008 10:00 pm Three love it please update soon Wonderful chapter- loved their communication-however tentative. Hoping for more soon. It was about time they started communicating. If there had been more of that, Seeing Red would never have happened - in my humble opinion. More to come soon. heh heh - whoops Buffy the secret is out. striker 08/19/2008 04:21 pm Two please i cant wait any longer for the next chapter sliverWolf 08/19/2008 01:44 am Two great story cant wait for next one kw 08/18/2008 05:22 am Two cute hehehehe! I love it! :D sin_amatic 08/17/2008 08:36 am Two Buffy is soooooo BUSTED!!! About time the "Scoobs" learn what their _fearless_ leader is all about. Thanks for another fun chapter. BTW Looking forward to reading about Xander's head imploding!!!! <G> Ta! Sandra 08/17/2008 01:52 am Two Excellent, please update soon! lol, loved it! go dawnie. she is brilliant. like you! hahaha. excellent! do we get to see the same scene but at the magic box in the next chapter? Xander will probably still want to dash off to 'rescue' Buffy, but it looks like she's managing fine rescuing herself. shadow 08/15/2008 10:41 pm Two love it please update soon So glad that Dawn managed to stop Xander. Anxiously awaiting the next chapter! Thanks for having Dawn as the voice of reason and for giving us a fabulous update! I'm looking forward to seeing what that kissing is all about! 08/15/2008 08:54 pm Two NOOO! I really like this story and the last chapter was great reasoning and thoughts from Buffy and how she and Spike really would conflict, but please don't tell me Spike is going to let Buffy use him again! I hated how much of a doormat he let himself be and like he really was only after sex and I hope they break off the kissing and start talking instead next chapter! She started it! I'm curious to see if this change in tactics is going to slow Xander down at all. Good bickering and fighting. Good start lub Bec 08/15/2008 03:20 pm One Great start, hope her friends are catching the violence on tape. It would make life for Buffy a little bit more interesting :) Update soon. 08/15/2008 12:18 pm One great story - every word rings true and is so Spike and Buffy, would like more soon - thanks Very cool! Excited to see more! :) oh, won't wills find the camera in there soon? Brilliant beginning to what I'm sure will turn out to be another brilliant story!!! Can't wait to find out what happens! ooh! looks like the start of another excellant story. can't wait to read what happens next! Oh dear! If Willow has found that camera they'll see he can hit Buffy and it would get very very ugly indeed! Always a treat to see a new story from you. This one look to be a good one too. Glad you had them interrupted before the table sex. This is just as telling about how Buffy really feels though. Kathleen Buffy, Buffy, Buffy. I just hope her friends are getting all this on tape. fangfaceandrea 08/12/2008 10:21 pm One wow! really angry Spuffy fighting, ooh how I miss the old days XD 'course you're doing a great job reminding us XD Btw, Spike's last line? priceless and spot on XD. please note, that while I'm not a Buffy hater, quite the contrary, I do like to see her being on the other side of angry lashing when she deserves it. It makes for fun consequences Great to see something new so quickly. They're all in so much pain--looking forward to where you take us! shadow 08/12/2008 08:40 pm One love it please update soon Michelle D. 08/12/2008 08:01 pm One Great start! I suppose their fight is being caught on camera. 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