When She Kept Showing Up by pennydrdful

relurker
10/22/2011 11:24 am
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Beautiful! It kept me holding my breath, such a tangible anguish.
I think that the suspended ending is perfect in this, but it was also a big let-down: what? I wanna know how it goes next!

scarlett2u
08/31/2010 01:53 pm
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This is incredibly beautiful and well done.  Very haunting and poetic. Thanks for writing and sharing it.

10/17/2008 02:50 am
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very good read, thank you.
Thank you for reading!  Glad you enjoyed it.

Ikepear
10/15/2008 11:21 pm
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4 stars. Bittersweet, powerful & well-written. No wasted words, no meanness, just strong feeling clearly portrayed.

Bravo indeed.

Thank you!  I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and I really appreciate the feedback - it's nice and specific. 

All4Spike
10/15/2008 02:12 am
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Heartbreakingly beautiful.
Glad you liked it!

10/15/2008 01:08 am
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Lovely piece.  I especially like the open end that allows the reader to take this anywhere they wish.

Kathleen
Thanks for commenting!  Glad you liked the ending, I know open endings can be very vexing for some readers ;)

10/14/2008 11:14 pm
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Ah, I read this somewhere else. I'm so glad you've posted it here for our readers to enjoy. :)
Ha, thank you for reading twice! :D

10/14/2008 11:13 pm
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Gut-achingly sad and beautiful.  Thankyou
Thank you for reading.