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Third Time's the Charm by TammyDevil666
very romantic. is dawn really going to end up with connor?
Great Story :) Love it ^_^
Buffy Convert
07/08/2009 04:02 pm
Chapter 22
Excellent job! Every chapter was great & you didn't make the mistake that so many writers (sometimes including professional scribes) do: messing up the epilogue. There was enough build-up all thru the story so that the last chappy was tidy. It would be fun to know what happens next with the two teenagers : ) <hint, hint>
In my opinion, you had just the right amount of my favorite ingredients: dialogue amongst the various charactors, humor, sex, irony, & your own secret ingredients - Parker, for one, not being dead.
In my opinion, you had just the right amount of my favorite ingredients: dialogue amongst the various charactors, humor, sex, irony, & your own secret ingredients - Parker, for one, not being dead.
Buffy Convert
07/08/2009 03:49 pm
Chapter 21
I think it's interesting that you, other fan writers, and i myself tend to speak of Giles & Joyce as "adults", even tho of course Buffy IS an adult by this time - and Spike has been one for awhile. It's just another example of Sunnyhell -speak.
Buffy Convert
07/08/2009 03:38 pm
Chapter 20
Hey! What are you up tol Monster-writer. YOu really ARE a devil!!
stacy
06/24/2009 03:54 am
Chapter 20
oh no, i hope buffy makes it through this.
Oh my God... PLEASE don`t make her die!! :O, update!! Soon!!
Please^^.
Please^^.
Loved this chapter! My favorite part is the Spike/Xander banter.
LOL, Buffy must be a real ray of sun these days :P, haha :)
Buffy Convert
07/08/2009 03:00 pm
Chapter 18
Wonderful! Much prefer Spike & Angel to have a half-way agreeable relationship.
You really have stubborn Buffy down. Definitely feel Spike's anguish over the situation. But I can't believe Angel could be so sedate in the company of Spike :)
sara
06/03/2009 06:09 pm
Chapter 17
loved the chapter!
AWWW!, she`s pregnant :D *squeals*.
one good deed and dru says goodbye, shame. very good read, thank you.
This was just too nice to be a birthday. Alright now, where's the catch? LOL
very good read, thank you. loved the chapter ending.
Loved the romantic beach setting! Wondering what Drusilla has in store for Buffy. Interesting that she saved her.
Happy for the update - looks like things are about to get exciting. Loved the beach - very romantic.
Buffy Convert
07/08/2009 02:40 pm
Chapter 15
Now, which of our supporting cast could have released the demons? The obvious candidate is Drucill. However, Giles really loves Buffy ; he hates evil also,so the torture, of both the guilty and the innocent, might have given him the green light. I guess we'll find out next chappy.
ripper? dru? unexpected turn. very good tale, thank you.
It appears we found, yeah? Love the sense of building apprehension.
Really exciting!, the my-heart-beats-for-you-line was so cute.
Loved it, and the chapter :)
Loved it, and the chapter :)
Buffy Convert
07/08/2009 02:26 pm
Chapter 14
Oh, Spike, that was a very bad mistake! That's 2 times she asked you "what's wrong?" and you lied to her.
Intriguing. What does Drusilla mean, I wonder. A soul?
Dru`s always exciting :D I can`t wait for your update :)
dru is always a fine addition to a tale. very good read, thank you.
Buffy Convert
07/08/2009 02:17 pm
Chapter 13
This is sooo good. It's way sexy & I like this more compassionate Buffy. She's in love with Spike and she has sympathy for her frinemies (Harm & Riley).
You painted a very erotic scene...very romantic.
Thanks for the update. Looking forward to seeing what Harmony has gotten herself into.
Somehow I feel Riley just won't give up.
am afraid to read the next chapter, things are going too well. good chapter, thank you.
Buffy Convert
07/08/2009 01:43 pm
Chapter 11
Oh-ho! Love the whole thing of Spike confiding in Giles & Giles worrying that Buff will be mad at him, as well when she finds out wot's goin' on with her vamp. And even better than that was Spike & Joyce - good bonding with the "in-laws", Spike!
Great rescue scene! And a very sweet scene afterwards even with underlying dread.
A sticky wicket! You couldn't let Buffy and Spike just be happy, now could you? (LOL)
Creepy ending, Spike needs to give Riley and bitchy Maggie a nice hard kick in the ass. I`m loving this, more more more.
shame parker couldn't take harm with him. no, even harm doesn't deserve a "parker." good read, thank you.
But Harmony was useful to get Buffy to see what was right under her eyes. Very nice romantic realization!
Big John
07/08/2009 01:23 pm
Chapter 8
O.K. Sometimes Buffy reminds of Scarlett O'Hara in "gone with the wind" - she wants ALL the guys to want her. Well, of course they do, but still
As much as I dislike Harmony, Buffy certainly deserved this treatment. Shoe on the other foot and all that.
Buffy Convert
07/08/2009 01:09 pm
Chapter 7
This is getting more interesting - and it was already good! Harmony can be a lot of fun.
parker and now harmony? it is a good thing that you write extremely well. good read, thank you.
I love it so much, amazing!
I can`t wait for your update.
I can`t wait for your update.
After all the jealous bluster, looks like Spike will step into it LOL!
04/23/2009 09:57 pm
Chapter 6
aw, poor spike, but this was a cute chapter.
Big John
07/08/2009 01:13 pm
Chapter 5
That Riley is a real jerk, I'm sure we'll see more of him.
riley knows all about buffy, and he can't get her daughter's name right. love it. very good chapter, thank you.
riley knows all about buffy, and he can'r get her daughter's name right. love it. very good chapter, thank you.
Buffy Convert
07/07/2009 11:32 pm
Chapter 4
I love your Spike. I won't be leaving comments every chapter because I am suffering from some yucky ophthmalic problem & can't read as long as I would like at a time.
No no - not Riley! Hope there's another flagpole handy.
good chapter, thank you. have a problem with buffy asking spike to watch dawn so she can go out on date. even she is not that self-absorbed. wait, it's buffy. sorrry.
I feel bad for Spike but it's good that he's hanging in there. Also regarding Buffy's date, I never understood the concept of going out with someone just because they like you. Why sound so apologetic when she's not interested?
Flames to dust
03/13/2009 11:11 am
Chapter 4
A shame that Spike was not coming with Dawn in arms, it would not be an image very badass for his part, but here he was trying to demonstrate his value.
Riley? I hope that Dawn vomits above him!! ; P
Waiting for more.
Nos leemos.^^
lacey
03/12/2009 12:42 am
Chapter 4
i like the cute scene between them in the end, hoping the date doesn't go well.
lOL at Parker hanging from a pole by his tighty whities. Hope Spike continues to kick his butt.
Flames to dust
03/13/2009 11:05 am
Chapter 3
Spike is ¡¡awesome!! Control himself?!? Maybe for Buffy and Dawn...
Like the history. Is a good work!
Nos leemos.^^
Like the history. Is a good work!
Nos leemos.^^
I can only guess what happened in the last chapter to get to such a sweet scene. Very enjoyable.
08/19/2009 01:36 am
Chapter 2
Oi! I like where the story is heading, but it shoud have startet out a lot later; at this point there is no way Buffy could have trusted Soike with a baby. Other than jumping to fast and too easy over some serious issues here, I look forward to read the rest, I am thinking it will het better..
TammyDevil666
ch 2 is not being displayed. Since the site is having problems, I'll go ahead and read ch 3.
ch 2 is not being displayed. Since the site is having problems, I'll go ahead and read ch 3.
I know, the site is still being all wonky and previous chapters aren't showing up, but I have this story in many other sites, like Spuffy Realm, Elysian Fields, etc.
stacy
03/02/2009 11:30 pm
Chapter 2
yes, let yourself fall buffy, there's no harm in that. great chapter!
sweet read, thank you. really enjoyed: "Nibblet has bloody good taste.”
Flames to dust
02/28/2009 07:26 pm
Chapter 2
Posh Spike!! ;DD Lovely pic with Dawn!!
Nice chapter and waitin for the next.
Spike at the Magic Box... durin the day and... ¡¿with Dawn in his dangerous hands?! Freakin a little to the White Hats. O.O'
Nos leemos.^^
Nice chapter and waitin for the next.
Spike at the Magic Box... durin the day and... ¡¿with Dawn in his dangerous hands?! Freakin a little to the White Hats. O.O'
Nos leemos.^^
Odessa2010
03/11/2013 11:41 pm
Chapter 1
Relatively new to Fanfiction. Totally threw me for a loop with this plot. All I could say was "Huh?" thanks for that. Looking forward to reading.
Buffy Convert
07/07/2009 11:07 pm
Chapter 1
And "Huh?" from me too.
have no idea where you are going with this, but if it is such fun as the opening chapter, i'm definitely going to enjoy the ride. thank you,luv.
Both those declarations threw me for a loop. Looking forward to where you will take us with this.
interesting twists--Dawn, Parker, Spike's declaration of love! I'm looking forward to how it all plays out.
Flames to dust
02/26/2009 10:45 am
Chapter 1
Well, I think Buffy said the right words: "huh?"
Dawn her daughter( and PILLOCK Parker?!)... I hope that still there continues being a friendship between the nibblet and Spike. Yes, already I know that she is a baby but I think that she will like more Spike now.; DD
Nice chapter and waiting for the next.
Luck and nos leemos. ^^
Fangfaceandrea
02/26/2009 03:39 am
Chapter 1
and so say all of us. huh?
:D good chapter!
:D good chapter!
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