Sad Song in His Heart by Angearia

06/05/2009 04:21 am
Chapter 3         
very good read, thank you.

05/23/2009 05:33 pm
Chapter 3         
Wonderful definition of love!  But OK  a time shift occurred so that Spike would believe Buffy's statement when he came back? 
What has changed in the past that would suggest that?  If a time shift occurred, wouldn't that erase everything Amara did?  She said nothing had needed to be changed in the past because Buffy already believed right?  All the last snippet shows is that yes, Buffy did already believe.  Think of it more as a flashback that shows her dreaming the events that happened to Spike.  But is it just a dream?

It's a little mind trippy.

All4Spike
05/19/2009 02:44 pm
Chapter 3         
A little bit confusing at times, but then I'm easily confused! ;)
A very nice conclusion leaving us believing that Spike is on his way to Buffy... even though he'll turn up in Rome and find it's not her... but that's another tale...

06/05/2009 04:14 am
Chapter 2         
shouldn't be that hard for spike, once he gets his head into the game. wait... this is spike dealing with thoughts of buffy. very good chapter, thank you.

05/23/2009 05:17 pm
Chapter 2         
A diabolical game but intriguing! 

07/17/2009 03:34 am
Chapter 1         
great start - looks like this will be a good story - I like your use of words and how you connect the series with the characters -

Good Luck with this piece -
Thanks!

06/05/2009 04:04 am
Chapter 1         
“Wish granted.” now that is a scary way to end the chapter. very good read, thank you.

tsme
05/21/2009 10:41 am
Chapter 1         
It always seemed sad too me when Spike dismiss Harmony because she was an airhead/vampire.  It's nothing new in the world of Joss, but I had hoped Spike would have championed her just a bit.  (Seeing how he had to deal with such intolerance while he was evolving.)

Oh well, great chappy off to read more.

T

05/19/2009 03:46 am
Chapter 1         
he was able to fence some of the knickknacks he’d swiped from Angel’s penthouse.   Heh heh -there' s the Spike we know and love. 

Like the way you expanded out Spike's dumb butt thinking on why he didn't go to see Buffy. 
Thanks!  Hope you enjoy the rest. :D