Pinch Hitter by dreamweaver

Jags
11/29/2013 09:09 am
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That was great
Thank you! This was so much fun to write.

04/23/2013 08:43 am
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I simply love this story - and I love your resolution that allows for changes in both the dimensions.   Look forward to the next one.  I have been enjoying reading again some of your works the last few days.

Oh, thank you!  I’m really fond of this pair of stories. :)  I'm so glad you're wenjoying them even on a reread.

04/07/2013 09:55 pm
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Love your Story :)
I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you!

Ivy
02/24/2012 11:33 pm
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What a lovely piece. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this.  Thank you.
Thank you for enjoying it!  It was fun to write - light relief between two longer and more complicated stories. :)

10/13/2009 10:20 am
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Wonderful - Beautiful Story you had Spike perfect and your Buffy's post "Chosen" makes for a very believable development of her loss of  Spike and their reunion-

Sure hope your returned Buffy will find the same joy -
Oh, I'm so glad you liked it!  Thank you!  The follow up for returned Buffy is in 'Revenant' - I hope you'll like that too!

slinkz
09/25/2009 11:03 pm
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Wow!! You made me cry - when they were going to be separated and were trying to reach each other, I was just bawling.  And I kept thinking if she can't stay, why can't he go with her? So when you did it - when you let her keep Spike - it absolutely made my dary. I cried even more, just so chuffed. Thank you.
Oh, thank you!  I'm so glad you liked it!  I couldn't break them apart, hopeless romantic that I am.  They had to end up together.  :)

09/10/2009 06:29 pm
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Wonderful!  What a wonderful journey in a short time to reveal what we already knew existed in Spike's heart!   
Oh, thank you!  I'm so glad you liked it!  I'm starting to put the sequel up now.  I hope you like that too!

Naurolim
08/30/2009 05:00 am
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Hey, just rereading this and still thoroughly enjoying it. You are a wonderful writer and I love all of your stories. I have picked this one to reread as I have read all of your others ones too often so this is still kinda fresh. (mmm may just revise that statement and go read some others too LOL)

Your characterisations (spelling pls) are exactly as I imagine. Hopefully I don't sound to suckupish but you are def one of my fav authors along with Kari and Bloodshedbaby.

The one thing I really appreciate is that you never leave a story WIP so thanks for that.

So hugs and plz get that muse working overtime - Ta!
Oh, thank you so much!  I'm so glad you enjoy my stories!  Thank you for saying I'm getting the characters right - I love Spike and Buffy so much, I'd hate to get them wrong.
I too hate reading stories that never get finished.  I need to find out what happens!  So I made a vow never to leave my readers hanging.  I finish a story before I start to post, when all that's left to do is the clean up.
I've almost finished the next story, which is a sequel to 'Pinch Hitter.'  It should be up soon and I hope you like it too!

08/28/2009 02:42 am
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delightful read, thank you.
Thank you for liking it!  I hope you like the sequel too.

08/20/2009 05:40 am
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Hurray!  A nice, satisfying way to end the story so they could stay together. 
Thank you!  I thought the PTB should be good for something for once! :D  I so glad you enjoyed it!

08/20/2009 05:40 am
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Hurray!  A nice, satisfying way to end the story so they could stay together. 
Thank you!  I thought the PTB should be good for something for once! :D  I so glad you enjoyed it!

Cheryl
08/17/2009 12:09 am
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This is one of the best stories I have read in quite a while - I like your style!

Thanks for your efforts, and can't wait to see what you do next.
I'm so glad you liked it!  Thank you!  I'm working on a follow up, what the original Buffy would do with the fallout. :D

Buffyconvert
08/15/2009 02:05 pm
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     Oh, hurray! I really really didn't think there'd be a happy ending!
Hey, rabid Spuffy girl here!  There had to be a happy ending :D I'm so glad you liked it!  Thank you!

08/14/2009 07:55 pm
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Excellent! Amazing work!
Thank you!  I'm so glad you liked it!

Belle
08/14/2009 03:57 pm
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Ahh! It's over! Madness...not that I'm not happy Spike got to go with Buffy and all, but it kinda makes me sad for the other Buffy, even if she is a..you know. She won't get to know the love Spike would have taught her. Tsk tsk. Great story!! Really loved reading it!!
Didn't deserve him, did she?  :D  But, y'know, there's another story in there - what happens to that Buffy after.  I'll have to look into that once I finish my present WIPs.  I'm so glad you enjoyed this one!  Thank you!

Gill
08/14/2009 10:37 am
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I was hoping you'd get round it like that - how wonderful that this Spike won't have to go through all the angst and bitterness...

Now I can go on holiday happy - how about another one for when I get back?  Please?  I'm away for two weeks... :-D
Two weeks?  Yow!  Not a chance!  It takes me a week to write a chapter.  Maybe in a month I'll have the WIP I'm working on completed. :D  But I'm so glad you liked this story!

Allie
08/14/2009 08:28 am
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AW!!!! Loved it. Beautiful work, Dreamweaver. Thank you ;)
Thank you for liking it!  It was fun to write!

verito
08/14/2009 05:01 am
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 love it, they are so sweet.... when they reach to each other... i love it...
I could just see them straining for that last touch.  I'm so glad you liked it!

Niori
08/14/2009 04:10 am
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You're not evil anymore. lol.
Yay for fluffy, happy endings! I'm so glad that Spike got to go back with Buffy. Go PTB!
Hopefully younger Buffy will get a better deal than what her older counterpart went through (though, life without Spike is plain misery in my humble opinion- lol). And she'll ditich Angel and Riley and find someone better. At least this way she'll get spared a lot of crap.
I kinda felt a tad sorry for Dawn, what with the Spike not knowing her. I mean yeah he'll take to her the exact same way, but that intense connection from summer before season six is gone. On the plus side, he doesn't remember her horribleness to him in season seven. So I guess it even outs.
Anyway, great story! Nice and light hearted and all that jazz. Can't wait for whatever you bring out next!
Dawn chose to treat him that way in S7, so she deserves it.  I'm a little mad at Dawn for that - Xander probably put the rape attempt in the worst possible light, but that intense connection meant that she should have known Spike better and at least considered whether something might have driven him to it.
This story was fluff and fun to write.  I'm so glad you enjoyed it!  Thank you!

08/14/2009 02:03 am
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Ah! Saved by TPTB. You had me worried there for a few minutes. :)
Had to be a way out and why not use a deus ex machina if we've got those Powers hanging around already?  :D

laura
08/14/2009 01:47 am
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Sweet end. but what happens to the other Buffy?
With any luck, she'll learn to see the grays and what's really important in a man and find someone better than Riley or Angel.  With the info the older Buffy left for her, she won't have to die to beat Glory.  She could get Angel to kill Ben for her and also perhaps make him fill in where Spike would have, like keeping an eye on Joyce's aneurysm.  Thank you for liking the story!

08/14/2009 12:27 am
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*sigh*

Oh, thank you for that.  Just lovely.
Thank you for liking it!

SassyFrass
08/14/2009 12:24 am
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Yay! I mean, I totally knew that's how it was going to end up, but still. Yay!
It's all in how you get there, right?  :D  I'm so glad you enjoyed it!  Thank you!

nate
08/14/2009 12:03 am
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i always feel bad for the original spike in these kinds of fics... he dies and then gets replaced by a look alike while the original. the one who suffered all those years to prove himself to buffy, is left dead and most likely being tormented in hell for all eternity while some other guy gets the happily ever after spike so richly deserved
I know!  I feel like that too.  That's why I usually write fics that change everything way before, so Spike never has to suffer.  But some stories, like this one, don't allow it. (Oh, and after sacrificing himself at the Hellmouth, I don't think any just Power would send Spike to hell.)

Sharon
08/13/2009 11:44 pm
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Ah. Big sigh of satisfaction.

Thank you, you did it again. Lovely happy ending, angsty setup, this story had it all.

I really enjoyed this, and don't want to appear greedy, but you can start posting the next one anytime you're ready!

Take care of yourself.
Thank you!  I'm two thirds of the way through the next one and hope to have it up soon.  I'm so glad you enjoyed this one!

slinkz
09/25/2009 10:54 pm
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bugger!!! don't want the other slayer back!
Had to happen.  The PTB couldn't leave a Slayer in limbo.

09/10/2009 06:08 pm
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PTB...great timing as always!  Grrr....
It had to happen.

08/28/2009 02:20 am
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"good news. is he crazy? very good read, thank you.
That's Whistler.  I'm so glad you're liking it!

Buffyconvert
08/15/2009 01:41 pm
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     I can't write anything because all I want to do is curse and I really can't do that in front of Author and most of the readers (because I'm old enough to be your mother). Ooooh! Whistler, you are a menace!
He really is! :D

Belle
08/13/2009 03:45 pm
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Bummer!! And did my eyes deceive me or was that a partial bond that happened?? Wonder how that's going to work. Great chapter! Sad that she's going back already. Means the story is almost over right? Nooooooooooo! T_T
Not yet, just an accidental bit of truth.  He has to take her blood first.  Only one chapter to go.  I'm so glad you're liking it!

Gill
08/13/2009 11:29 am
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Oh, nooooo! :-)

Great bit of writing - is it one more chapter, or two?
One more - and it's up now.  I'm so glad you're liking it!

verito
08/13/2009 06:46 am
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oh my god... you can´t leave it at that....come on.... 


Mean, aren't I?  :D  But the last chapter's up now, so I hope you forgive me.  I'm so glad you're liking it!

08/13/2009 05:37 am
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Oh uh. I don't think spike wants to let her go. I can't wait to find out what comes next.
No, he doesn't.  I'm so glad you're enjoying this!

Pin
08/13/2009 04:19 am
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Gahhh! Much sooner than expected!  can she ake him home with her?
Last chapter up now - check it out!  :D

08/13/2009 03:53 am
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 OMG!!!  What's the what?  Buffy does not want to go back without Spike and any Spike at all will not wish to  be without Buffy.
Had to happen.  Last chapter up now - check it out.  :D

Sharon
08/13/2009 02:53 am
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Oh no! I hope that difference Buffy sees in Spikes eyes is what I think it is!

Thank you so much for sharing your work.

Take care of yourself.
Last chapter up now. :D  Thank you for liking this!

Niori
08/13/2009 02:48 am
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You. Are. Evil.
If I didn't know that you will update tomorrow I may just be pulling my hair out by now.
What ever happened to possibly taking years? That was so NOT years! lol
I'm seriously hoping that PTB will let Spike come back with Buffy.
I cannot wait until tomorrow...it is the end right (which makes me sad).
I really am, aren't I?  :D  I'm so glad you're liking it even so!

Max
08/13/2009 02:18 am
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As much as I want to see Spike just go with Buffy to her dimension for the short and quick "happily ever after" I want to see both of them stick around at least long enough for the other Buffy to get the much needed wake up call about how she is and what she could be if she stopped letting herself be ruled by what everyone else thinks she should do.
Hopefully, she'll learn.  But the other Buffy can't stay.  Thank you for liking this!

08/13/2009 01:35 am
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Uh oh....
Yup.  :D

08/13/2009 01:29 am
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Even Whistler can't be foolish enough to believe that's good news. I wonder if the original Buffy's watcher and friends will decide they need to stop her from becoming so reckless as the older Buffy by being even more harsh and controlling and demanding, and if that will make her hit the breaking point sooner?

Interesting new ideas for using the demons. Gray areas. Great chapter.
I think, except for Xander, they've learned and Willow will keep working on Xander.  I'm so glad you're liking this!

08/13/2009 12:16 am
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Nooooooo!!!!!! You must be evil! I'm hoping that maybe this Spike will return with the other Buffy to her dimension?
Last chapter up now.  I hope you like the resolution!  :D

08/12/2009 11:46 pm
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Okay, you're just mean to leave it there like that.  MEAN.  But fantastic update.
I just can't resist the nasty cliffies! :D  I'm so glad you're liking this!

slinkz
09/25/2009 10:43 pm
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omg i am so pleased she set him free.  Wish she had kicked Riley's butt though!
I wanted to have her kick Riley!  :D  But it would have been out of character - she doesn't beat up humans.  (even she should - *sigh*)

09/10/2009 05:39 pm
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What a dilemma! It will be interesting to see Buffy's response.
She loves him, so she'll take the risk.  I'm so glad you're enjoying this!

08/28/2009 02:06 am
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"I trust you, Spike."  that's all it took. he has fallen. very good chapter, thank you.
You know Spike - the tiniest crumb is enough and this was so much more than that.

Buffyconvert
08/15/2009 01:17 pm
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     This was so exciting! I usually kinda skim over fight sequences, but this was too good.
Oh, thank you!  I'm trying to learn to write action effectively.  I'm so glad you think it was good!

Brett
08/13/2009 05:17 am
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I think Buffy trusting Spike broke whatever defenses Spike had left. She touched his heart, William in this chapter. This was intense chapter, and I loved it.
All Spike ever needs - the slightest indication of faith and love.  Thank you for liking this!

08/12/2009 04:42 pm
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 How can you stop there - especially when we know you've the rest of the story done, <sob>  ;-)
Sorry! :D  I still have to clean up the other chapters.  I'm so glad you're liking this!

Belle
08/12/2009 05:42 am
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Oooh chip being removed early...had to happen cause with all the hoopla with Riley there's no way she could call him up in the future to have them remove the chip then. Awww he's starting to fall for her isn't he!? Question! Are you going to put some of the events from the actual show in here? I mean like Glory or Dawn...or will future Buffy not be staying that long? ah well. Great chapter! Shall continue to wait for the next.
I'd have to go through all of Season 5 to incorporate Dawn and Glory properly and that would make the story too long.  I'm just focusing on the end of Season 4 here.  Thank you for liking it!

verito
08/12/2009 05:13 am
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i so love this story 
Thank you!  I'm so glad you like it!

Niori
08/12/2009 04:02 am
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Another awesome chapter!
And man is Spike ever haivng a good time sticking it to the Scoobies! It's hilarious watching him do it! It keeps making me grin. It's great to see him so happy.
Riley is a douche. I violently hate him- leave it to him to con his men into doing his dirty work. Jerk. Glad he got a verbal beat down (I'm rewatching season five at work, and we just got past Riley's vamp hos phase- I'm feeling some serious hate towards him at the moment).
You know what, I'm shocked that demons never went for revenge for Riley. If I was one of them whose family got caught by the inititave I've have been right on that. Guess demons on the show are better people than me. lol
And yay! He's gonna get the chip out! That makes me happy. Not only because he can defend himself and all that, but he can prove to those stupid morons that the demon doesn't control him. Being able to kill doesn't mean he will kill.
Can't wait for more!
I never thought Riley was the 'nice, normal guy' that canon made him out to be.  I think his morality was in doubt from the minute he as a TA went after a student, then went along with all the Initiative cruelties, then staked Spike just for outing him to Buffy.  (Torture!)  If the demons had gone after the Initiative, I'd have been cheering them on.  Have you noticed how the demons behave so much better than the ostensible heroes in canon?  Something's wrong with Joss' idea of good and evil.  Thank you for liking the story!

Niori
08/12/2009 03:55 am
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08/12/2009 03:06 am
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Can't wait for more!!!
More coming tomorrow! :D

08/12/2009 03:00 am
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Fantastic chapter, using Riley's character but also his background in an unexpected way no one saw coming. I liked Willow and Tara's reactions to Buffy and hope Anya could become more of her friend. I wonder what Buffy is planning to say to Giles about his future actiosn and current prejudices?
That Riley's actions brought about an opportunity for Spike to get the chip removed fit perfectly. Spike wanting Buffy to understand and agree rather than trick or defy her was telling about his thoughts and feelings, even against that wonderful beginning as he thought of her as a dream. I love your writing and I feel absolutely spoiled, and amazed, that you manage to do so many stories, and finish them all before posting.

Just thinking of the Buffy/Spike dynamic gets me all inspired. :D  There are so many variables.  I'm so glad you're liking this!  Thank you so much!

slinkz
09/25/2009 10:07 pm
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“Where have you gone?” asked Buffy. The face looking up at her was remote, resistant, its strong bone-structure suddenly very visible and hard, like something carven out of alabaster, eyes half-lidded and dark, lips closed and still. She had never seen him like this before: Spike’s thoughts and emotions had always been clearly visible on his face, even when she refused to see them. This cool, intransigent stillness made him a stranger.

Interestin.  Because of the change in her, there's a change in Spike - she's seeing parts of him she never saw before.  A learning experience for both of them.

Oh yeah, and really HOT!
You see it in him sometimes - that cool, still face.  My friend, Julie, put it into the banner.  And those hot parts are the most fun to write!  :D  I'm so glad you liked it!

08/28/2009 01:49 am
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so many great lines and scenes in one chapter.  for best line have to go with "take it then." great read, thank you.
Oh, thank you!  She's not holding back anything this time.

Buffyconvert
08/15/2009 12:58 pm
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    Wow. Loved every minute of this chapter. Every. second.
Thank you!  It was so much fun to write.

Brett
08/13/2009 04:59 am
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God this is wonderful. I don't want this Buffy to leave Spike. I can't deny that Buffy is making Spike very happy, and that is making Buffy happy.
Oh, thank you!  I'm so glad you're enjoying this!

08/12/2009 02:59 am
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All I can say is WOW!
Thank you!

08/12/2009 02:03 am
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 I'm off to read the next  chapter.  Love, love this story.  Hope there is lots of Xander bashing, along  with Riley and Angelus, too.
Thank you!  Bashing's coming up. :D

spikestussi
08/11/2009 06:17 pm
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 Do go on......
Coming right up! :D

08/11/2009 10:52 am
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Original and sweet. Loved it =)
I'm so glad you liked it!  More up tomorrow.

jane
08/11/2009 10:31 am
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Wow, thought the Scoobs were gonna explode. Riley really is pretty dim, despite being 4 years older he still thinks this Buffy is his Buffy. Whistler was pretty explicit when he told them she wouldn't be the same. Wonder why he brought Graham.
Great fic looking forward to more. 
Riley's brains move slow. :D  But they're all making the same mistake.  Emotionally, one thinks it's the same person even if one's mind knows it's not.  I'm so glad you're liking it!

Gill
08/11/2009 09:24 am
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Wow - I'm loving this!  I have to say that any way of pushing the buttons of everyone other than Buffy and Spike has always been good.  It's great to have a combination of a grown-up Buffy who knows how mean she was to Spike and a Spike who hasn't yet realised he's in love with Buffy so isn't moony as he was sometimes is great.  I don't want young Buffy to come back!
I only have one problem - I'm going on holiday in 4 days time and I want the end of the story before I go...
You'll just make it.  3 more chapters.  :D  Thank you for liking this!

Asherah4u
08/11/2009 06:02 am
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Love love love it. Bring on the next chapter!
Thank you!  Next chapter will be up tomorrow evening.

08/11/2009 02:29 am
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I strongly suspect Buffy is going to have to put a beat down on Xander before he realizes she's serious; Giles maybe grew a clue in the graveyard, but Xander...*shakes head*  He's just too determined to make Buffy toe the line.

I can't wait to see what happens next!!!
Xander has to be hit over the head first. :D  Thank you for liking the story so far!

Niori
08/11/2009 01:49 am
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Another great two chapters! Loved them.
Oh Spike, how much he enjoyed shafting it to the Scoobies. Good for him. lol.
Can't wait for more.
Spike's having the best time! :D  I'm so glad you're liking this!

08/11/2009 01:06 am
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Hell yes!... And NOW; I`m actually going to read it. Just had to get that off my chest^^.
Had to get home from work.  Put it up right away.  :D

10/13/2009 07:57 am
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WOW - NICE
Thank you!  It was really fun to write. :D

slinkz
09/25/2009 09:54 pm
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hell yeah, talk about settin things straight - riley, angel, all of them!
I really wanted Buffy to kick them around a little. :D

09/10/2009 04:52 pm
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Loverly! And good pre-emptive actions all around.
Buffy with a  chip on her shoulder and thinking. :D

08/28/2009 01:16 am
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second chapter as well done as the first. very good read, thank you.
I'm so glad you liked it!  The role reversal was fun.

Brett
08/13/2009 04:37 am
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Oh this is just hot. Buffy not demanding of Spike. Taking what is offered and giving everything. Love it.
After losing him, this Buffy would.  I'm so glad you liked it!

BloodyHell
08/11/2009 11:59 am
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Okay.I like how you write.It's fluent and nice to read.
I'm not completely happy with Buffy's attitude towards the people who are not Spike but maybe that's because I don't like her bitchy and Faith-like. Maybe that's just me.
Good work again!
Thank you!  I don't usually write stories where Buffy is bitchy, but this one called for her to have a chip on the shoulder about the Scoobies, at least in the beginning - the one she's usually bitchy with is Spike. :D  It's novel and fun for me to be able to write it the other way around.

08/11/2009 12:37 am
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Isn` today the today with the new chapter that was going to come everyday?^^. *Cries*.
Coming right up!

Belle
08/10/2009 10:41 pm
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Hurray!!!!!!!! Another story!! And it's reading like all your other great stories! So glad you had Buffy tell Giles about the helping Spike to be good instead of stepping all over him. 'Cause honestly, who would be able to completely convert into doing good after being evil for 100+ years?? That's insane! Can't wait for the next update!
Yeah, I can't understand why supposedly good people wouldn't help.  Next chapter's up; I hope you like it!

08/10/2009 05:15 pm
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This is a great switch for the Buffy/Spike relationship and you're keeping Spike realistic and this Buffy in character. I love your stories, though sometimes I think Buffy is a little too stubborn about hating her friends, so I'm glad Joyce asked her to ease up on them. Buffy can still be firm enough not to accept any shit from them but remembering how they've wilingly risked their lives and been good people before to want to explain how they should change and not just tell them how they are is unacceptable.

Can't wait to see Spike resisting Buffy but falling in love with her anyway. And is Angel going to stick around? Can't wait for more!
Right at the moment, she's really furious with them - it was only a few days ago for her that she found they had kept Spike's resurrection from her.  But she will start to ease up and think - she always acts first and thinks later, right?  :D  Thank you for liking the story!

laura
08/10/2009 08:40 am
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Love this story! looking forward to Spike falling for Buffy.
I'm so glad you're enjoying it!  Thank you!

Eyghon
08/10/2009 07:50 am
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I know this is written in advance, but I'm so happy with the way this is going! I like this Buffy. Pretty sure the others will try something stupid, even though she warned them.
You know it! :D  I'm so glad you're liking this!  Thank you!

08/10/2009 02:59 am
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Just blew through the first two chapters and had to say wow!  What a great beginning, and what a neat, original concept.  This Buffy is something else.  I love her take charge attitude.  And It's lovely to see Spike at this point in time - all snark and defiance.  I can't wait to read more of this.  You've got me hooked for sure.
Thank you!  I'm so glad you're liking it!  I wanted to play with a chip-on-the-shoulder Buffy and a role reversal between her and Spike.

08/10/2009 02:22 am
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Holy hell, I can`t wait for the next chapter tomorrow...
I'm glad you liked it!  Thank you!  More tomorrow.

spikes_heart
08/10/2009 01:50 am
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If you need me... I do believe I'll be in my bunk. Hot and sweet - what a wonderful combination.
Oh, I'm so glad you liked it!  Thank you!  More coming tomorrow.

Pam S
08/10/2009 12:43 am
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  Enjoying.. especially this Buffy telling the "gang" to get 'f------

  And how could Spike go back to a Buffy that will treat him like dirt for a couple of years.. I know this futureBuffy said she wouldn't let him sacrifice.. but what ripple effect will what she is doing have? He was the one that killed the vampires in the hellmouth..

  Interested in finding out ..
That's coming up.  Thank you for liking this!

08/10/2009 12:33 am
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Wow.  Okay, so my brain is offline right now, but when it comes back up, I'll be certain to tell you how much I liked this update; I love it when Buffy pulls her head out of her ass and realizes what she lost in Spike; I can't wait to watch Spike fall in love with her.  Great update; more please!!!
Next chapter up tomorrow.  I'm so glad you're liking it!  Thank you!

slinkz
09/25/2009 09:41 pm
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Oh wow, I am LOVING this!!!!
Thank you!  It was so much fun to write.

09/10/2009 04:26 pm
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Excellent start! I can just see the shock in the faces at the last action.
Couldn't resist that! :D  Thank you for liking it!

08/28/2009 12:39 am
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love the start. the scoobies are in for a wild ride. thanks for the fun read.
Thank you!  Couldn't resist having Buffy shock everyone. :D

Buffyconvert
08/15/2009 11:34 am
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     This was a very good story - except for one thing: how the heck could Buffy be any skinnier than she was?
I know! :D  She got leaner in S7 though.  When you look at pictures of her at the end of S4, then S7, her face was softer and clearly younger and there's a difference in body shape, so I pushed it here to stress the difference.  I'm so glad you like the story!  Thank you!

Brett
08/13/2009 04:12 am
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Oh yeah. Now that is how I like to see Buffy say hi to Spike.
I couldn't resist it :D  Thank you!

08/12/2009 02:18 am
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I'm already in love with your story!!!
Thank you!  I hope you'll like the rest!

BloodyHell
08/11/2009 11:29 am
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Well well well. It's nothing of the unexpected but that's not a problem.
I think her reaction at the end (PDA) is a little ... weird. But I'll see how you continue the story line in the next chapters.
Good work so far!
She has a chip on her shoulder and wants to freak the Scoobies.  :D

Kate
08/10/2009 07:51 pm
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Originally, I was going to skip over this story thinking it wasn´t up my ally.  However I changed my mind and am so glad I did.  I LOVED the first chapter.  The Buffy-champion in me loves stories where she gets the chance to assert herself with the Scoobies.  I´m not about character bashing, but Buffy standing up for herself again.  So looking forward to futureBuffy and her maturity messing with the minds of the pastScoobies, et al. lol 

And yeah, Buffy´s greeting of Spike was...HOT!  Off to read chapter 2. :)
I agree about Buffy standing up for herself.  I can't understand why she lets them push her around like that.  I'm so glad you're liking it!  Thank you!

spikestussi
08/10/2009 02:46 pm
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 I love it!
Thank you!

08/10/2009 03:39 am
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Hee!  Well, that should give them all something to rant about for a good couple of hours. :)  Be interesting to see how this Spike reacts to that comment.
That's the fun part! :D

08/10/2009 01:46 am
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OH MY FUCKING GOD!!!, *squeals like a teenage girl*. When I got a e-mail saying "There`s a new chapter on the bloodshedverse titled blah blah blah by dreamweaver" I screamed. My boyfriend was like "wtf?", lol. This was just perfect, the ending sentence was sooo yummy :D. Next chapter, here I come!
This one was so much fun to write - just playing :D  I'm so glad you're liking it!

08/09/2009 11:01 pm
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I think we have a winner!  LOL.  I rarely read WIP anymore, but I love this first chapter and I'm looking forward to reading more. 
The story is complete.  I'm just putting a chapter up a day as I get each one cleaned up.  I'm so glad you're liking it!

Carrie
08/09/2009 09:54 pm
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He he, they're stuck with a Buffy that isn't going to take their crap... oh the possibilities.

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“He’s right,” said Angel softly. He and Spike exchanged hostile but understanding glances. “He can’t fight back. If he could, you’d have been dead the minute you laid a hand on him. I don’t like him any more than you do, Finn. But anyone who hits a man who’s under that kind of handicap is a bully and a thug.”
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Couldn't have said it better. One of my biggest disappointments was how NOBODY had any problem with the "good guys" acting like they did when they knew Spike couldn't fight back.

That bothered me too - how abusive the Scoobies are.  They're terrified of Spike when he doesn't have a chip, but shove him around when he can't hurt them.  I've despised Riley ever since he shoved that fake stake into Spike's heart.  That was torture, the way I see it!

spike_lizard
08/09/2009 07:24 pm
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oh i am loving the this buffy
Thank you!  This Buffy is fun to write!

Niori
08/09/2009 07:16 pm
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Yay! Another story!
Love it so far!
I wanted to throttle your 'future' scoobies and Angel (though, loved how the 'present' one stood up for Spike, albeit grudgenly). Leave it to them to put what they think Buffy wants before what she actually wants. Loved when she flipped at them- took her freaking long enough. I would have kicked them to the curb long ago.
Wow are they ever in for a suprise. This Buffy is nothing like there's- I love how, in true fashion, Spike is the only one who expects her to be different. Scoobies are always in lala land aren't they?
And her greeting to Spike? AWESOME! I CANNOT wait for next chapter to see those reactions.
Niori
Ps- I love your fluff and am siked that you decided to put it up.
This is Buffy with a chip on her shoulder. :D  The Scoobies are going to have to wake up.  I'm so glad you're liking it, because this one is just fun!

Pin
08/09/2009 06:58 pm
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Perfectly wonderful! I love the interjection of the older, more self-possessed Buffy.  Really lookingforward to seeingwhat happens.  I love fireworks!
Fireworks will be coming up. :D  Thank you for liking this!

njl
08/09/2009 03:40 pm
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Hi. Am a big fan of your stories and was really pleased to see that you're publishing a new one.
From the looks of the first chapter I reckon we Spuffy fans are going to enjoy the fun! Roll on the rest of the story!
Thank you!  This one is fluffy and just for fun :D

njl
08/09/2009 03:39 pm
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Hi. Am a big fan of your stories and was really pleased to see that you're publishing a new one.
From the looks of the first chapter I reckon we Spuffy fans are going to enjoy the fun! Roll on the rest of the story!
Thank you!  This one is fluffy and just for fun :D

08/09/2009 02:44 pm
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Oh, can it be tomorrow now?  PLEASE???  PLLLLEEEAASSSEEE????  AWESOME, loved the 'Scarlett' line (favorite movie EVER) and I loved how except for Anya & Tara, Buffy was terribly dismissive of the rest of them.  And then how she greeted Spike???  AMAZING!!!!  I CANNOT WAIT FOR TOMORROW!!!
Oh, I'm so glad you like it!  Thank you!  Next chapter's up right now.

08/09/2009 01:53 pm
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Oh I absolutely LOVE this. Sets some nice opportunities for the Story, for lots of conflicts and twists.
Thank you for liking it!  This one is going to be fun.

eyghon
08/09/2009 11:28 am
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"hello lover"? that's just super! Hope Buf will check in with Dawn and Joyce, will they be part of the story as well? poor Spike, must be confused as hell.
Joyce will turn up, but not Dawn since the monks haven't created her yet.  It's just the end of Season 4.   Thank you for liking this!

08/09/2009 10:17 am
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Heh. Absence really does make the heart grow fonder, doesn't it? Only those who've died get the full sunny-Buffy treatment.

Excellent start. I can't wait to find out just how resistant Spike is going to pretend to be! I always love your "do-over" stories, and this is shaping up to be the best yet!
Buffy always seems to value only what she has lost.  *sigh*  This story's just fluff, but I'm having a lot of fun with it.  I'm so glad you like it!

Sharon
08/09/2009 10:10 am
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Oh my, I think the excrement hit the fan there! I am very much looking forward to seeking how Angel, the Scoobies and Spike deal with a Buffy who's decided to be her own woman. I think I will enjoy the ride!

Thank you for sharing your work!
Chip-on-the-shoulder Buffy.  :D  So much fun to write.  I'm so glad you're enjoying this!

sin_amatic
08/09/2009 08:54 am
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OMG... They are gonna explode.  Yes!!!   (Do the Snoopy dance of happiness.)  Love it as always.  Have you ever written anything that isn't first rate?

You just love those wicked cliff hangers.  Oh well, now I have something in my life too look forward to.  (I know I'm pathetic,) but your story(s) are awesome.

Thanks again,


Oh, wow!  Thank you!  But this one's just fluff - I hope you won't be disappointed.  Blame the cliffhangers on Joss - way to make 'em come back after the commercial, right?  :D

Spike's Heart
08/09/2009 08:36 am
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Goddess, that was just lovely! I can use some fluffy right about now... and happy Spuffy is my favorite! Can't wait to see what you have in store for my OTP.
This one's not serious at all, just happy fluffy!  :D  Thank you for liking it!

Aurelia
08/09/2009 07:53 am
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Yeah, I totally squeed when I saw a new fic from you.

I cannot wait to see how this one plays out. You have a real tallent. Your writing never fails to suck me in.
Thank you!  This one is fluff, but so much fun to write!

08/09/2009 07:30 am
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Here is what i love about Dreamweaver... Your stories ideas are great. the writing is condensed, succint, and you don' make us wait forever for another longwinded chapter,  that doesn't move the story forward. Hot diggity dawg!Your story chapters come along in a very timely manner and are never just filler.  I am very glad to read that you have other stories in the works, Spuffy I hope?! 
  I hope my blunt praise doesn't offend any authors out there, I love almost all the great stories out there, I am stunned by all the hard work that goes into this artwork for nothing more than personal satisfaction and reviews.  i just love knowing that dream weaver is not going to be absent with the rest of her wonderful story. Thank you!!!!
I'm so glad you're liking this!  Thank you!  This one is just fun.  I like the stories to have punch, so I keep them tight, with no filler.  The next chapter will be up tomorrow and there'll be one every day as I get them cleaned up and proofed.