Great story, thank you!

 Enjoyed.. 

  LOL - get back is touch Cordy and Harmony..

Love the story - looking forward to the next bit!

Funny, I'm glad joyce has finally accepted her daughter.

loved the chapter!

Aieee!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVED the ending, I was wondering why Spike was acting like Angelus, because he could love before the soul. And William was kind of boring, I'm glad you brought bad-ass Spike back. Is it wrong for me to feel like that?

Uh-oh ... I REALLY hope he doesn't do an Angelus - I always thought better of Spike lol
can't wait for the next chapter :)
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William is an idiot...
The story is great, but still, he's an idiot.

Explains a lot..

No happiness clause? 

Now to wait for Buffy's answer.. 

Enjoyed

Bad, bad timing...

  You gave us enough hints..Spike, the hair, the clothes, Willy, and of course the "family ties",  but the ring.. gave him the ability to be more human in his actions.  

  Now Buffy knows.  And surely she will go to Giles.. and did he know already.. ?

  enjoyed..

So it is our Spike then! From the "A" before on the victim, I thought that Aria had been turned and was after William.  I like the direction you are taking.

very intriguing turn of events.

  Time for William to let Buffy know he is a ....... 

   Need to go back and understand about him being a Watcher.  Is it official and who else knows.. 

   enjoyed.. 

Hmm  black leather - where did that come from?

Is this THE leather coat?!  I love Mystery William.  Definitely not our Spike to turn down a nearly naked Slayer.

buffy has guts, but i'm glad william didn't give in that easily.

Good Cordelia.

Ah - is William a vampire?

The beginning of the Watcher-Slayer relationship..  and how will it be different ?

Getting anxious as to what Buffy will do when she finds out.  This is so strange but loving it.  It would be nice to have a backstory about Aria and the circumstances.

Nice twist having William as Buffy's watcher. 

Tinglies and William Pratt the librarian.. 
Interesting. 

Oooh, I am so liking the switcheroo!

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Giles you sneak! 

This is a great start, can't wait for more!