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A Link is Forged by behind blue eyes Clara Jean 07/12/2013 10:41 am Chapter Twelve Please please update soon! This is getting to the yummy good parts and I want more. sister cuervo 01/12/2013 09:20 pm Chapter Twelve Love your footnotes to the stories. This looks to be getting so interesting, i am sorry to see you aren't working on it at present. I will certainly check out Fallen, though. It sounds very intriguing.
You are an excellent writer with a wealth of good plotlines.
sweet77 11/19/2012 10:21 pm Chapter Twelve Although I rarely read incomplete fanfics, I love your stories so much that I am taking a chance on this one. Please don't let me down...finish it.
Your imagination and vocabulary are wonderful, and the lists of references at the end are quite considerate.
Thank you. Sweet77,
Thanks ever so for taking a chance on my fic. Unfortunately at this time, I'm not working on this fic. However, I am writing and posting. I'm currently working on:
FaLLen
On the hunt for a killer and following the Bureau’s only lead, FBI Agent, Elizabeth “Buffy” Summers enters an extraordinary and unpredictable new world where her only guide is a mysterious and alluring stranger.
As she spirals further and further into the center of this world, she is torn between her two identities and the idea that this man, whom she surprisingly trusts, knows far more than he’s admitting. How far will she go to catch the killer and ultimately, is it worth risking her very soul?
*This story is based in the supernatural, NOT All Human*
At this time, FaLLen is taking up all my creative juices and time. I don't know if you would find this at all interesting, but if you do, I'm posted on Spuffy Realm and Elysian Fields (when the site goes back up). I update weekly and on Wednesday, will be posting chapter 13 and have EVERY intention in finishing this fic. As for the rest of my WIPs, time will only tell.
I tried to contact you directly, but I was unable to. Hopefully my message will reach you.
Thank you ever so for your lovely review and being a fan.
Big huggers,
BBE 07/17/2012 03:56 pm Chapter Twelve Loved the ebb and flow of emotions in this chapter! At least now, both have some element of control. 07/17/2012 02:41 am Chapter Twelve
Oh man - I was hoping for a cat fight there. :)
07/06/2012 02:46 am Chapter Eleven Hah how much longer can B keep her naughty secret? Inquiring minds want to know. :) Not much longer! This sexual house of cards are going to come tumbling down soon!!! 07/05/2012 11:06 pm Chapter Eleven
neat - how long before they notice the difference when Spike is about? Great read.
It might take them a bit, since all the times Angel was there, Spike was there as well. Of course everyone is going to think it's Angel. Angel was the Marsha Brady of Buffyverse for so long. Angel, Angel, Angel!!! 07/05/2012 10:53 pm Chapter Ten Thanks ever so, mazza!! 07/03/2012 03:41 am Chapter Ten Loved the Angelus flashback. I really enjoyed writing the flashback. I don't think Joss showed a lot of Angelus' past misdeeds. (my opinion it was due to the higher ups not his lack of wanting to go there). 07/03/2012 03:30 am Chapter Nine
Loving the Spike and Angel squabbling and it's just too cruel for Angel to have that much power over Spike.
It is cruel, but, even though vampires are relatively uncaring about rules and the like, especially our Spike, he still isn't stupid enough risk getting staked for his insolance. 06/26/2012 11:28 pm Chapter Nine
First Spike tied to a chair and now in chains - how shall I get any sleep! Thanks for the update, looking forward to next chapters to see how this situation is resolved. Good read keep it coming.
LOL!!!! Sorry to keep you up, but what a reason not to sleep!!!! 07/03/2012 03:17 am Chapter Eight Well, you could’ve ridden in the ashtray -LOL I loved this line. I can totally see Angel saying this. 06/03/2012 11:11 pm Chapter Eight
catching up on my reading - still enjoying this fic, I love banter between Spike and Angel, there is just such a spark there that you caught beautifully. Pictures of Spike tied to a chair may now be the start of dreams tonight!
I hope Spike makes a big cameo in your dreams tonight, sweetie! I'm so glad you're still enjoying! 07/03/2012 03:09 am Chapter Seven Good Spikeness. Thanks, Spikez_tart! I aim to please! 05/10/2012 03:04 am Chapter Seven Good Spike but he really needs to bite somebody. i can tell. :) Mmmm...now that's a thought! LOL! 07/03/2012 03:02 am Chapter Six LOL at Spike I so love writing Spike!!! I'm glad you're enjoying! Em_wishes 05/04/2012 08:20 am Chapter Six Yay, great Spike entrance - was momentarily concerned by Buffy seeming to express " lustiness" for Angel but I am now reassured that all is right with the word once more ;-). really love th build up so far :-) Thanks ever so, Em_wishes. That was my intention of giving the reader the belief the lusties were from Angel! *insert evil laugh here* Love to read whatcha think of the next chapter! 04/28/2012 02:05 pm Chapter Six When you mentioned Yosemite Sam, the vision of him jumping up and down in anger gave me a smile. Loved the unexpected bit at the end..only Spike can cause Angel to move like that.
Why thanks, Joyce. I started picturing Buffy getting all pissy and stamping her feet, then all the sudden my favorite gunslinging, foul-mouth, pint-sized rabbit chaser popped in my head.
Yeah, Angel and Spike have a strained relationship, on the best of days. I'm loving writing the dialog between the two!
07/03/2012 02:57 am Chapter Five Poor Spike better figure this out quick or he might do himself an injury. :) LOL!!! Yeah, injuring one's self that way is not of the good! Or maybe it is! 04/24/2012 03:08 am Chapter Five
Please let Spike kill Angel this time. Nicely written chapter. :)
hehe! Thanks for reviewing, spikez_tart! 04/22/2012 11:16 pm Chapter Five
Spike sure had himself some night! When they come face to face I'm sure fireworks will be involved, (didn't mean the double entendre in that sentence, honest). Hope you had a happy birthday!
Thanks so much for the birthday wishes, mazza! Yeah, Spike was a busy guy! 04/20/2012 01:27 am Chapter Five OK, really wondering what Suzanned invoked in that spell. Things are getting reallyt hot! Yeah, things are just starting heating up! More will be coming soon (no pun intended!) 04/20/2012 01:17 am Chapter Four
You have a remarkable gift for Buffyisms.."turtle suit" , "eaten enough shoe for one day". and misinterpreting the use of "plagued". Brilliant!
*blushing* I appreciate your lovely review! 04/15/2012 06:51 pm Chapter Four
Don't forget that Spike called Buffy "Nancy Drew" in S4, too. Good chapter.
I totally didn't remember him calling her that! I'm glad you reminded me and for enjoying the chapter, spikez_tart! 04/11/2012 11:28 pm Chapter Four
great chapter - hot dream makes me get a bit daydreamy myself! The conversation between Buffy and Giles sounded just like them.
Thanks, mazza! I try really hard to get the characterizations down, and I'm glad I didn't disappoint! 07/03/2012 02:48 am Chapter Three No puppy dog eyes! I liked peevish Angel and slutty Buffy and snoopy Spike. I really enjoyed writing this chapter. I love Buffy standing up to Angel, telling him what's what! I always wished that happened a lot sooner in the show than it did 07/02/2012 04:32 am Chapter Three ;) 04/20/2012 01:04 am Chapter Three Hilarious description of Xander's dancing.."stomp out a fire with his shoes and swat away a swarm of bees.."! I'm really loving predator Spike in this chapter. Why thank you! While I was writing this, I was totally picturing Xander flopping around in his typical goofy style and that's what I came up with.
Yeah, I'm still loving writing predator Spike! (a little carry over from Two Sides!) 04/15/2012 06:45 pm Chapter Three
Lots of good Spikeness and loved Buffy telling off the Big Forehead.
Yeah, I had fun having Buffy tell Angel where to go and how to get there. She didn't do it as much as I would've liked in the show. So here was my chance to add to the list! 04/09/2012 05:56 pm Chapter Three
oh I really loved this - description of Spike in teeny motel towel almost made me stop right there, then more fantastic musings from our favourite vamp about peaches - brilliant. Did I mention I really like this?
Yeah, Spike in a towel is...wait, what was I saying? Anyway, I'm so glad you are liking my story mazza! Big huggers Jane 04/07/2012 12:16 pm Chapter Three
Can never get enough Angel bashing, love it.
Me either, Jane! More Angel bashing to come! 04/07/2012 01:22 am Chapter Three
Wow another update! I really liked this chapter, but now I want to hit Angel; he's such a controlling bastard...
Loved the scene with Spike spying them from the roof...It reminded me of that scene when Spike goes to LA after "the harsh light of day" to get the gem of Amara back and starst mocking Angel from a roof....you know wich one, right? It was one of the funniest scenes on a TV show ever.
I can't wait to find out what happens next. Please update soon!
Hugs,
Adriana.
Of course I remember that episode! Totally one of my favorites on Angel! This was kinda a homage to that scene. I'm glad you likey! 07/02/2012 04:25 am Chapter Two
Why doesn't she just stake Angel and make everyone happy?
I agree, but where's the fun in that, when I can torture him so? 04/15/2012 06:38 pm Chapter Two
oh boy Angel the buzz kill. Hope Spike skewers him with one of giles' quarterstaffs. :)
LOL! Angel is a buzz kill. I'll let you know in this story, Angel and Spike's relationship with be tumultuous at best! (I can't wait!) 04/06/2012 03:40 am Chapter Two Really loving your use of adjectives! The magnetic spell is doing a number. TY, Joyce! Oh, this spell is far from doing a number!!! 04/06/2012 12:21 am Chapter Two
Interesting take on this episode, loved your description of Buffy in black/crimson - just Spikes colours in those days (wish he had worn that red shirt more!) - anyway really intrigued with where you will take us, so more soon?
TY, mazza! Yeah, the black and red was done on purpose of course! I will be taking you there very soon my dear. Does today work for you? 04/03/2012 08:56 pm Chapter Two
Loved it!
Buffy's attitude had me grinding my teeth, she's is just sooo stupid sometimes; Angel gives her his kicked-puppy look and she does whatever he wants.
I guess Spike is the one following them so I can't wait to read next chapter.
I hope you update soon.
Hugs,
Adriana.
Thanks sweetie! More will be coming soon! 04/15/2012 06:33 pm Chapter One
Great start BBE. :) I kind of like Spike using an old fashioned Spanish expression. He might have learned Spanish in Spain instead of Mexico.
Thanks, Spikez_tart! I used an old fashioned Spanish expression since in Season 5 of Angel, when Illyira threw Spike out of the training room he called her a "filthy harlot!" so I decided to keep the Spanish word for harlot in there. I thought it fit, Spike is over 100 years old after all! Em 03/29/2012 06:48 pm Chapter One I am really looking forward to reading this! Characterization so far is very credible and the synopsis sounds dad interesting! *blushing* I hope I don't disappoint, Em! I'm so glad you're on board! More will be posted on Wednesday. 03/28/2012 01:08 am Chapter One Enjoyable start! Welcome back, Joyce! I'm glad you like. More will be posted on Wednesday 03/26/2012 01:09 pm Chapter One
love your story! I thik it's the first time someone writes a fic starting from that point in "lover's walk". I can't wait for the next chapter!
BTW I'm spanish, so I couldn't help but notice your spanish translations. I know you used an online translator so it's not your fault, but some things just sound weird.
For example, "mujerzuela" is a really old fashioned word that means "harlot" or something along those lines; if you wanted to say "slut" it's better that you use "zorra" o "puta" instead.
If you want to leave it just like it is, that's allright; but if you want I'll gladly translate them for you. Just send me a message or an email and I'll do it.
Anyway, great story. I'm looking forward to next chapter.
Adriana.
Thanks so much, sweetie. And a big thanks for translating for me! (on-line translators stink!) I appreciate your help! Big huggers! Muse 03/26/2012 11:55 am Chapter One Interesting story,I really like to know whats happening next :-) Thank you, Muse. More will be posted on Wednesday. Love to know whatcha think! |
