Future Childe by Ariel Dawn

04/15/2014 05:06 am
Reunion         
i find buffy very out of character in this though the idea is interesting.

Annie
01/11/2013 05:39 pm
Reunion         
Great read!  Thanks!

Omg so excellent. Thanks!!!!!
03/31/2010 12:40 pm
Reunion         
 

Cate
06/30/2008 11:17 am
Reunion         
I loved it. It was so gorgous. The sequel was awesome as well. Well Done! You should be proud you are a very talented writer.
Aww, thanks!

Jags
05/15/2007 09:29 pm
Reunion         
Oh bugger you evil vixen you. Beautiful.
Wow, thanks, I don't think I've been called an evil vixen recently

09/16/2006 09:54 pm
Reunion         
wow...intense...poignant and heart-breaking and very well done...on to the sequel now
Thanks!

02/19/2006 05:47 pm
Reunion         
ahhhhhh freaking amazing ending! I love this story and yes I know I read it before but I forgot how much I enjoyed it! Hppy sigh!
Thanks!

10/23/2005 03:11 am
Reunion         
What a great story. I'm off to find Present Childe.
Thanks!

09/23/2005 07:34 pm
Reunion         
I really liked this story. I know I didn't leave feedback on every chapter, but I had read the full length on the old version of BSV.
Thanks for the review Tami

chocolate-lover
12/24/2006 06:47 am
Not the same without him         
I really love this story. I've stayed up for 3 hours (it's 1) to read it.Write more, it's seriously the best spuffy/claim-y/turning story I've ever read!!!!
Wow, thanks, I'm glad you like it!

09/16/2006 09:51 pm
Not the same without him         
if he chooses to change to be with her, it's so much better than her forcing him to change...can't wait to see what happens next
Thanks for the review!

02/19/2006 05:46 pm
Not the same without him         
ohhhh great update
Thanks!

09/16/2006 09:46 pm
Friends         
lol...like the different name-calling sequence...and it's funny, i'd forgotten about the beginning of willow's magic use, but you could see the faint hints of what was to come even then, couldn't you? more please, and bring spike back!!
I liked writing the name calling bit! And Yes, Spike will come back.

02/19/2006 05:43 pm
Friends         
giggles love the scene with willow in the end - happy sigh!
Thanks!

09/16/2006 09:40 pm
My Summer as a Pet         
wow....that was upsetting....poor buffy...poor spike...how confusing for both of them, i can totally understand how she must feel...get them back together, though, please!
Oh don't worry! I will!

02/19/2006 05:41 pm
My Summer as a Pet         
nice dream - love this story!
thanks!

09/16/2006 09:21 pm
The Lady’s with Me         
that was a better twist on the episode, i like it...now buffy will at least have the support she needs to get through the trauma of what she had to do to angel...
Yep, that she will!

02/19/2006 05:37 pm
The Lady’s with Me         
ahhh the chapter was so sweet --- hehe got dru got buffy what more does he need hehe
Glad you like

09/16/2006 09:04 pm
The Deal         
oh *this* should go over well!!! *rolls eyes*
lol, thanks for the review!

02/19/2006 05:34 pm
The Deal         
excellant chapter!
Thanks

09/16/2006 06:02 pm
Meaningful conversations at the beach         
he needs to tell her what he just did...that could be a bad situation if she finds out some other way...great chapter love
Thanks!

02/19/2006 05:31 pm
Meaningful conversations at the beach         
Awesome chappue... I love the claioming nice and sexy!
Thanks

09/16/2006 05:59 pm
Haunting you         
that was a very realistic, understandable reaction on spike's part, though i feel bad for buffy...she did think he was dead...but then, it was a stupid thing to do anyway...great chapter
Thanks!

02/19/2006 05:29 pm
Haunting you         
NOOOOOO....... Like Spike can't understand meaningless sex
Wah!
Well if your girlfriend had sex with Angel how would you feel?

jl1980
09/16/2006 05:44 pm
Tea with Grandmummy         
so...did it help him when he bit her? apparently not much if he's still in the wheelchair poor spikey...great chapter
Thanks!

02/19/2006 05:24 pm
Tea with Grandmummy         
wonderful wonderful wonderful ! Finally Dru was wonderfully sweet and told Buffy that he was alive. Happy happy sigh!
Glad you like

MarzBar
09/22/2005 04:34 am
Tea with Grandmummy         
Good story; lots of smut and angst. Are you writing Present Childe?
Thanks! and yep!

Mera
09/22/2005 04:33 am
Tea with Grandmummy         
Great story can't wait to read the sequel.
Thanks!

3988Akasha
09/22/2005 04:33 am
Tea with Grandmummy         
The sequel can't come soon enough. I love the story. It had the right amount of angst and love and a bittersweet ending. Yay for you and you're amazing writing. You have some of the best smut I've ever read. Keep it up.
Thanks!

CEWCEW
09/22/2005 04:32 am
Tea with Grandmummy         
So good, good, good! Sequel, Sequel, please, please, please! Luv you forever I will, I will!
lol, ok ok

Aisling
09/22/2005 04:32 am
Tea with Grandmummy         
j'adore le fiction!! sequal soon LOL
thanks!

09/14/2006 06:32 am
Friends Tell         
i'm starting to wonder just what that letter says myself ...
Thanks for reading!

02/19/2006 05:20 pm
Friends Tell         
poor buffy - I can;t believe no one has bothered to tell her that spike is alive... I wonder if we can skin angel alive?
oooh I like that idea

Burnz
09/22/2005 04:31 am
Friends Tell         
That a girl! Yay a vamp Buffy! I'm glad you didn't make Spike wimp out. I really enjoyed your fic.
Thanks!

Elizabeth
09/22/2005 04:31 am
Friends Tell         
Well...I have noticed that I haven't actually review thus far, but wow, I've followed this story beginning to end and I LOVE it. It has the perfect amount of angst and drama and everything. I cannot wait to read the sequel, it's going to be great. Liz
Thanks!

pxt3000
09/22/2005 04:30 am
Friends Tell         
SEQUEL!? yess! luv it!
Thanks!

Brittany
09/22/2005 04:30 am
Friends Tell         
Awwww this is like one of my all time favorite storys!!!!!!!!! cant WAITE for the sequel!!!!
Thanks!

Rhonda
09/22/2005 04:30 am
Friends Tell         
WOW what a way to end this great story. Can't wait for your sequel.
Thanks!

11/20/2009 12:07 pm
Big Mistake         

11/20/2009 12:07 pm
Big Mistake         

09/14/2006 06:29 am
Big Mistake         
lol...i love the changes you made to that one...think it's ironic that this time around, she used *angel* to make her feel because she missed *spike*...can't wait to see what happens next
Thanks for reading!

02/19/2006 05:16 pm
Big Mistake         
LMAO - Wow I loved that chapter - I know Spike will throw a fit but damn that was funny - Angel trying to play mind games with her but she has had greatsex so knows she was the one who was dissapointed! I loved it!
Ya I liked writing that part!

DK
09/22/2005 04:29 am
Big Mistake         
Excellent story, thank you for such a quiet and meaningful ending. Looking forward to the sequel.
Thanks!

redwulf50
09/22/2005 04:29 am
Big Mistake         
excellent fic
Thanks!

Lynda
09/22/2005 04:28 am
Big Mistake         
Now I am confused. First she wanted to be a vampire and be with Spike--who is a master vampire. Now she doesn't and she is all alone. Poor Buffy, poor Spike.(Dru left so fast. Thank God).
I think Buffy's confused too...

Brittany
09/22/2005 04:28 am
Big Mistake         
AWWWWW *tear* they got to get back together!!!!!!!!!!
Yay!

Aisling
09/22/2005 04:27 am
Big Mistake         
Ohhh Poor Spike and Buffy... stop killing for her then damn it! more soon huni i luved the update... :'(
Thanks

09/14/2006 06:24 am
Grieving         
i hope she finds him soon...i wonder how you're going to bring angelus out...and i hope she gets spike away from him first, because that could be bad...
Well you'll have to keep reading, it won't be pretty

02/19/2006 05:11 pm
Grieving         
poor buffy - I hope she finds out the truth soon - she is so hurt by Spike's "death" - great ficcie!
Thanks!

Aisling
09/22/2005 04:27 am
Grieving         
nice updates huni.. more soon cant wait to see what the 3 of them get up to cya xx
Thanks

Lyns
09/22/2005 04:26 am
Grieving         
Ok, my last review probably makes no sense! The page didn't load fully so that was a review for up to chapter... 12... i think. Anyways, off to read the rest! lol
lol

Lyns
09/22/2005 04:26 am
Grieving         
Aww, poor buffy!! Love this story, just read all of ti in one go, can't wait till the next update
Thanks!

3988Akasha
09/22/2005 04:25 am
Grieving         
Awesome re-write of Becomming! I love how Spike saves Buffy! Can't wait to see where Spike takes Dru and Buffy, and when he decides to turn her. Update Soon!
Thanks!

~*~Tasha~*~
09/22/2005 04:25 am
Grieving         
Nice different way to end Becoming. Joyce really went even freakier in this one. Nice writing. Since I see a TBC, I'm glad to see that we are going to keep going with this story. I look forward to seeing where you take them and what happens when Dru wakes, up, etc. Look forward to more.
Thanks

09/14/2006 06:21 am
You’re who?         
oh no...poor buffy's gonna be devastated...and poor spike...that could not have gone worse...
Thanks for reading!

02/19/2006 05:08 pm
You’re who?         
that was so horrible (what Kendra did) Can I kill her - just a little bit - *sniff* so sad ... I hope she discovers he is alive soon!
lol, kill her a little bit? Is that even possible?

joyful_dayz
09/22/2005 04:24 am
You’re who?         
great chap! I can so see Spike getting mad because Buffy shagged Angel, but I'm wondering why Buffy didn't call him on not telling her he was still undusty. I can't wait to see where you go from here.
Thanks!

Aisling
09/22/2005 04:23 am
You’re who?         
more soon cya x
Thanks

Burnz
09/22/2005 04:22 am
You’re who?         
Dang! Our boy is being quite the prat isn't he? Hopefully he will shake it off and get some sense. Good chapter.
Thanks

Stephanie
09/22/2005 04:22 am
You’re who?         
great story - can;t belive that spike is being so strange! How mean of him! Loved the update and cannot wait for more. Post soon! This story is fab!
Thanks!

Tasha
09/22/2005 04:21 am
You’re who?         
You can't leave it there. I can't believe Spike acted like that, she was grieving. Oh well, it will all end well right?...Right?
Absolutely

09/14/2006 06:18 am
So what is the relationship beverage of choice then?         
lol...love her gleeful attitude about it all...wonder what's gonna happen next
Thanks for reading!

02/19/2006 05:04 pm
So what is the relationship beverage of choice then?         
lol i love the last line in this chapter so much fun *giggles* poor Buffy she is Spike's dirty little secret wha a strange role reversal! I really enjoy this ficcie!
Thanks!

~*~Tasha~*~
09/22/2005 04:16 am
So what is the relationship beverage of choice then?         
Oh noooooo! Don't leave Spike! Buffy thought he was dead, and she .... oh man this sucks. I read this here first, instead of SR. So, I'm reviewing here. I hope Spike and Buffy get things straight soon. She thought he was dead. Even then she didn't have sex with Angel because she loved him. Please forgive her Spike. Please understand. She isn't like Dru. She loves you, and only you. Look forward to another update, hopefully soon.
So Glad you like!

Superstes Diligo
09/22/2005 04:16 am
So what is the relationship beverage of choice then?         
sorry forgot to say something i wanted to say...: Love the Buffy/Dru interaction! it's sweet!
Awww, thanks!

Superstes Diligo
09/22/2005 04:15 am
So what is the relationship beverage of choice then?         
Aww! look at what you did! you made me all weepy! *AGAIN* still loving the story though... keep it up!
Thanks!

Aisling
09/22/2005 04:13 am
So what is the relationship beverage of choice then?         
oooh more! angelus is a jerk! she does not lov you.. move on!! in ur face more soon cya xxx
lol, great review!

Stephanie
09/22/2005 04:13 am
So what is the relationship beverage of choice then?         
WOW!!! That was a really good story. I cannot wait for more. I love how you handled the whole Angel/Buffy scene - I know it must have been traumatic to write but you did a very good job. I love Buffy telling Angel how bad he was it was priceless. I think you have a great portrayal of Dru as well. very fab story!
Thanks so much!

09/14/2006 06:13 am
Everyone Lies         
i love the revisions you're making on these chapters...excellent one here, pet
Thanks again!

02/19/2006 04:59 pm
Everyone Lies         
LOL - Buffy is so funny... Angel is an ass... sigh is it to late to start beggging for Angel dustage> LOL - greact ficcie sweetie!
Angel dustage is not in the cards for this fic, sadly. Sorry

3988Akasha
09/22/2005 04:12 am
Everyone Lies         
Awesome updates! I understand the Angel thing...does Spike know...about the sex? That will be so exciting to see what happens. I am still lovin' this story!
So glad you like!

Superstes Diligo
09/22/2005 04:12 am
Everyone Lies         
Great new chapters! u're awesome!
Thanks

Tasha
09/22/2005 04:11 am
Everyone Lies         
Great new chapter, I love this story. Sad though, I can't wait for more. Gimme, gimme, gimme.
Glad you like!

Aisling
09/22/2005 04:10 am
Everyone Lies         
oooh... more soon cant wait huni!
Thanks

3988Akasha
09/22/2005 04:10 am
Everyone Lies         
Another great chapter! I totally love this story. Yay for making Angel not a complete idiot!
Thanks!

09/14/2006 06:03 am
Secrets and Lies         
i liked the rewrite of that chapter very much, excellent job, pet
Thanks!

02/19/2006 04:53 pm
Secrets and Lies         
happy sigh - want a sweet chaptr - cant wait to read everyone's reactions to the thrall!
Thanks Steph!

Burnz
09/22/2005 04:09 am
Secrets and Lies         
The longing and the grief...will our heroine ever be united with her love??? Is Angel holding out on our girl with regard to her past beau? Ah the questions. I anxiously await your next update
glad you like

Linda
09/22/2005 04:08 am
Secrets and Lies         
Neat chapter.. luv it!
Thanks

Aisling
09/22/2005 04:08 am
Secrets and Lies         
luv it huni!! bad Kendra, i was hoping no one wud hit Spike with that thingy. LOL more soon xxx
lol, yep Poor Spike's doomed to repeated wheelchair time

Burnz
09/22/2005 04:07 am
Secrets and Lies         
Nice job of weaving in the episodes and giving them a new twist!
Thanks!

redwulf50
09/22/2005 04:07 am
Secrets and Lies         
greta chappie
Thanks Wulfie!

09/14/2006 05:55 am
Never try to eat your lover’s friends         
okay...who's watching them? i wonder if buffy's gonna feel differently later about the whole turning thing...loved this chpater, pet
Thanks!

02/19/2006 04:47 pm
Never try to eat your lover’s friends         
Wonderful story - I wonder who is watching *grin* does that make it performance art?
lol, performance art? lol

Tasha
09/22/2005 04:06 am
Never try to eat your lover’s friends         
Great new chapter, can't wait for Buffy's turn. Naughty Dru!!
Thanks Tasha!

3988Akasha
09/22/2005 04:06 am
Never try to eat your lover’s friends         
Great chapter. I love how Dru is playing with Buffy it is so cute (in a wierd vamp way)!
Glad you like!

Aisling
09/22/2005 04:05 am
Never try to eat your lover’s friends         
LOL poor Buffy, 7 to 7-oh-5 am is now occupied... more soon huni xx
Thanks for the review!

redwulf50
09/22/2005 04:04 am
Never try to eat your lover’s friends         
Damn, can we just stake Angel now and get it freakin over with???
LOL, oh Wulfie...

Superstes Diligo
09/22/2005 04:04 am
Never try to eat your lover’s friends         
Love this chap! Don't like the thral thing much though... But i just know it'll go on as a fantastic story
Thanks!

09/14/2006 05:49 am
Pretending School’s Hard         
okay this is all a bit unsettling...i find myself wondering how they're both going to change along the way...
The trouble is, are they going to change at all?

02/19/2006 04:44 pm
Pretending School’s Hard         
I absolutly adore this chapter - excellant - the dream was fantastic - lol
Thanks!

Tasha
09/22/2005 04:03 am
Pretending School’s Hard         
Great new chapter, can't wait for some more Spuffy loving.
Thanks Tasha!

3988Akasha
09/22/2005 04:02 am
Pretending School’s Hard         
This is so great. I love this story. It is a fresh idea. I can't wait to see if Spike really turns Buffy! Maybe Buffy really is under a thrall....maybe not. So exciting.
Thanks for the review! Glad you like!

romero
09/22/2005 04:02 am
Pretending School’s Hard         
This is a great story and I'm looking forward to more. Thanks
Thank you!

Kattie
09/22/2005 04:01 am
Pretending School’s Hard         
Amazing.. i luv it.
Thanks

Milva
09/22/2005 04:00 am
Pretending School’s Hard         
I realy enjoyed reading your fic.Hope you update soon-like every day?!
lol, thanks

09/14/2006 05:39 am
Making up your mind         
whoa...that was a bit...intense...wonder what's gonna happen next...a bit squicked by the underage bit...but reading on...
Thanks for reading! Despite the squickedness.

02/19/2006 04:24 pm
Making up your mind         
What a wonderful first chapter of this story. I love how he found a pre-slayer Buffy but wants to allow her to grow up a bit before he turns her... Happy sigh...
Thanks Steph!

Tasha
09/22/2005 03:59 am
Making up your mind         
Wow, this is a fantastic piece of fiction. I've just read if from beginning to what you have so far. I can't wait for a new installment, I hope you update this regularly from now on. Keep up the great work.
thanks

lilmamaday
09/22/2005 03:56 am
Making up your mind         
I am so glad to see your story here at the Bloodshedverse! I have been following it at SR and I love it! Please update soon!
Thanks!

Superstes Diligo
09/22/2005 03:53 am
Making up your mind         
don't mind the long chapters! love the story! keep it up!
Thanks!

redwulf50
09/22/2005 03:50 am
Making up your mind         
damn good chappie, I realy enjoyed this fic
Thanks wulfie

Aisling
09/22/2005 03:49 am
Making up your mind         
LUV IT!!
Thanks!