i find buffy very out of character in this though the idea is interesting.

Great read!  Thanks!

 

I loved it. It was so gorgous. The sequel was awesome as well. Well Done! You should be proud you are a very talented writer.

Oh bugger you evil vixen you. Beautiful.

wow...intense...poignant and heart-breaking and very well done...on to the sequel now :)

ahhhhhh freaking amazing ending! I love this story and yes I know I read it before but I forgot how much I enjoyed it! Hppy sigh!

What a great story. I'm off to find Present Childe.

I really liked this story. I know I didn't leave feedback on every chapter, but I had read the full length on the old version of BSV. :)

I really love this story. I've stayed up for 3 hours (it's 1) to read it.Write more, it's seriously the best spuffy/claim-y/turning story I've ever read!!!!

if he chooses to change to be with her, it's so much better than her forcing him to change...can't wait to see what happens next :)

ohhhh great update

lol...like the different name-calling sequence...and it's funny, i'd forgotten about the beginning of willow's magic use, but you could see the faint hints of what was to come even then, couldn't you? more please, and bring spike back!!

giggles love the scene with willow in the end - happy sigh!

wow....that was upsetting....poor buffy...poor spike...how confusing for both of them, i can totally understand how she must feel...get them back together, though, please!

nice dream - love this story!

that was a better twist on the episode, i like it...now buffy will at least have the support she needs to get through the trauma of what she had to do to angel...

ahhh the chapter was so sweet --- hehe got dru got buffy what more does he need hehe

oh *this* should go over well!!! *rolls eyes*

excellant chapter!

he needs to tell her what he just did...that could be a bad situation if she finds out some other way...great chapter love :)

Awesome chappue... I love the claioming nice and sexy!

that was a very realistic, understandable reaction on spike's part, though i feel bad for buffy...she did think he was dead...but then, it was a stupid thing to do anyway...great chapter :)

NOOOOOO....... Like Spike can't understand meaningless sex
Wah!

so...did it help him when he bit her? apparently not much if he's still in the wheelchair :( poor spikey...great chapter :)

wonderful wonderful wonderful ! Finally Dru was wonderfully sweet and told Buffy that he was alive. Happy happy sigh!

Good story; lots of smut and angst. Are you writing Present Childe?

Great story can't wait to read the sequel.

The sequel can't come soon enough. I love the story. It had the right amount of angst and love and a bittersweet ending. Yay for you and you're amazing writing. You have some of the best smut I've ever read. Keep it up.

So good, good, good! Sequel, Sequel, please, please, please! Luv you forever I will, I will!

j'adore le fiction!! :D sequal soon LOL :D

i'm starting to wonder just what that letter says myself ... :)

poor buffy - I can;t believe no one has bothered to tell her that spike is alive... I wonder if we can skin angel alive?

That a girl! Yay a vamp Buffy! I'm glad you didn't make Spike wimp out. I really enjoyed your fic. :)

Well...I have noticed that I haven't actually review thus far, but wow, I've followed this story beginning to end and I LOVE it. It has the perfect amount of angst and drama and everything. I cannot wait to read the sequel, it's going to be great. Liz

SEQUEL!? yess! luv it!

Awwww this is like one of my all time favorite storys!!!!!!!!! cant WAITE for the sequel!!!!

WOW what a way to end this great story. Can't wait for your sequel.

lol...i love the changes you made to that one...think it's ironic that this time around, she used *angel* to make her feel because she missed *spike*...can't wait to see what happens next :)

LMAO - Wow I loved that chapter - I know Spike will throw a fit but damn that was funny - Angel trying to play mind games with her but she has had greatsex so knows she was the one who was dissapointed! I loved it!

Excellent story, thank you for such a quiet and meaningful ending. Looking forward to the sequel.

excellent fic

Now I am confused. First she wanted to be a vampire and be with Spike--who is a master vampire. Now she doesn't and she is all alone. Poor Buffy, poor Spike.(Dru left so fast. Thank God).

AWWWWW *tear* they got to get back together!!!!!!!!!!

Ohhh :( Poor Spike and Buffy... stop killing for her then damn it! :( more soon huni i luved the update... :'(

i hope she finds him soon...i wonder how you're going to bring angelus out...and i hope she gets spike away from him first, because that could be bad...

poor buffy - I hope she finds out the truth soon - she is so hurt by Spike's "death" - great ficcie!

nice updates huni.. more soon cant wait to see what the 3 of them get up to :D cya xx

Ok, my last review probably makes no sense! The page didn't load fully so that was a review for up to chapter... 12... i think. Anyways, off to read the rest! lol

Aww, poor buffy!! Love this story, just read all of ti in one go, can't wait till the next update :)

Awesome re-write of Becomming! I love how Spike saves Buffy! Can't wait to see where Spike takes Dru and Buffy, and when he decides to turn her. Update Soon!

Nice different way to end Becoming. Joyce really went even freakier in this one. Nice writing. Since I see a TBC, I'm glad to see that we are going to keep going with this story. I look forward to seeing where you take them and what happens when Dru wakes, up, etc. Look forward to more.

oh no...poor buffy's gonna be devastated...and poor spike...that could not have gone worse...

that was so horrible (what Kendra did) Can I kill her - just a little bit - *sniff* so sad ... I hope she discovers he is alive soon!

great chap! I can so see Spike getting mad because Buffy shagged Angel, but I'm wondering why Buffy didn't call him on not telling her he was still undusty. I can't wait to see where you go from here. :)

more soon :D cya x

Dang! Our boy is being quite the prat isn't he? Hopefully he will shake it off and get some sense. Good chapter. :)

great story - can;t belive that spike is being so strange! How mean of him! Loved the update and cannot wait for more. Post soon! This story is fab!

You can't leave it there. I can't believe Spike acted like that, she was grieving. Oh well, it will all end well right?...Right?

lol...love her gleeful attitude about it all...wonder what's gonna happen next ;)

lol i love the last line in this chapter so much fun *giggles* poor Buffy she is Spike's dirty little secret wha a strange role reversal! I really enjoy this ficcie!

Oh noooooo! Don't leave Spike! Buffy thought he was dead, and she .... oh man this sucks. I read this here first, instead of SR. So, I'm reviewing here. I hope Spike and Buffy get things straight soon. She thought he was dead. Even then she didn't have sex with Angel because she loved him. Please forgive her Spike. Please understand. She isn't like Dru. She loves you, and only you. Look forward to another update, hopefully soon.

sorry forgot to say something i wanted to say...: Love the Buffy/Dru interaction! it's sweet!

Aww! look at what you did! you made me all weepy! *AGAIN* still loving the story though... keep it up!

oooh more! angelus is a jerk! she does not lov you.. move on!! in ur face more soon cya xxx

WOW!!! That was a really good story. I cannot wait for more. I love how you handled the whole Angel/Buffy scene - I know it must have been traumatic to write but you did a very good job. I love Buffy telling Angel how bad he was it was priceless. I think you have a great portrayal of Dru as well. very fab story!

i love the revisions you're making on these chapters...excellent one here, pet :)

LOL - Buffy is so funny... Angel is an ass... sigh is it to late to start beggging for Angel dustage> LOL - greact ficcie sweetie!

Awesome updates! I understand the Angel thing...does Spike know...about the sex? That will be so exciting to see what happens. I am still lovin' this story!

Great new chapters! u're awesome!

Great new chapter, I love this story. Sad though, I can't wait for more. Gimme, gimme, gimme.

oooh... more soon :D :D cant wait huni!

Another great chapter! I totally love this story. Yay for making Angel not a complete idiot!

i liked the rewrite of that chapter very much, excellent job, pet :)

happy sigh - want a sweet chaptr - cant wait to read everyone's reactions to the thrall!

The longing and the grief...will our heroine ever be united with her love??? Is Angel holding out on our girl with regard to her past beau? Ah the questions. I anxiously await your next update

Neat chapter.. :D luv it!

luv it huni!! bad Kendra, i was hoping no one wud hit Spike with that thingy. LOL more soon xxx

Nice job of weaving in the episodes and giving them a new twist!

greta chappie

okay...who's watching them? i wonder if buffy's gonna feel differently later about the whole turning thing...loved this chpater, pet :)

Wonderful story - I wonder who is watching *grin* does that make it performance art?

Great new chapter, can't wait for Buffy's turn. Naughty Dru!!

Great chapter. I love how Dru is playing with Buffy it is so cute (in a wierd vamp way)!

LOL poor Buffy, 7 to 7-oh-5 am is now occupied... :P more soon huni xx

Damn, can we just stake Angel now and get it freakin over with???

Love this chap! Don't like the thral thing much though... But i just know it'll go on as a fantastic story

okay this is all a bit unsettling...i find myself wondering how they're both going to change along the way...

I absolutly adore this chapter - excellant - the dream was fantastic - lol

Great new chapter, can't wait for some more Spuffy loving.

This is so great. I love this story. It is a fresh idea. I can't wait to see if Spike really turns Buffy! Maybe Buffy really is under a thrall....maybe not. So exciting.

This is a great story and I'm looking forward to more. Thanks

Amazing.. i luv it.

I realy enjoyed reading your fic.Hope you update soon-like every day?!

whoa...that was a bit...intense...wonder what's gonna happen next...a bit squicked by the underage bit...but reading on...

What a wonderful first chapter of this story. I love how he found a pre-slayer Buffy but wants to allow her to grow up a bit before he turns her... Happy sigh...

Wow, this is a fantastic piece of fiction. I've just read if from beginning to what you have so far. I can't wait for a new installment, I hope you update this regularly from now on. Keep up the great work.

I am so glad to see your story here at the Bloodshedverse! I have been following it at SR and I love it! Please update soon!

don't mind the long chapters! love the story! keep it up!

damn good chappie, I realy enjoyed this fic :P

LUV IT!!