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All My Family by Spikeschilde Alilah 11/17/2011 06:04 pm 25 It looks like you haven't updated in a long time :o! I hope you finish your story one day :( I love it! Please please please more???!!!!!! Tnx. :-) 07/13/2010 05:19 pm 25 Messiah 05/30/2010 01:34 pm 25 I still come here to see if you update :( I like this story you haven't quit writing, have you?? Messiah 07/29/2009 02:12 pm 25 What's happened to you?? C'mon! More chappies!!! Uberbiter 06/11/2009 12:34 pm 25 That was iand incredible read. I especially liked Christian flirting with Dawn. Update soon :) rkm 05/09/2009 10:50 pm 25 i'm very new to this cite - AND I LOVED THIS! i love the familial bonds between all of them. and i LOVE how dawn has taken to her vampire almost family and they to her. Christian - chuckle! i can totally see Dawn becoming his childe and mate! I JUST WISH THIS STORY HAD CONTINUED ... sniff rkm 05/09/2009 10:49 pm 25 i'm very new to this cite - AND I LOVED THIS! i love the familial bonds between all of them. and i LOVE how dawn has taken to her vampire almost family and they to her. Christian - chuckle! i can totally see Dawn becoming his childe and mate! I JUST WISH THIS STORY HAD CONTINUED ... sniff Ok, so i absolutly love love love this story. I found it at Just Rewards and was so disheartened when i saw it wasn't finished. But I read it there months ago and just found these extra 3 chapters here :) And i really loved it. This story is so original and i'm praying that when ur done w/ uni or not busy that u'll be able to work more on this story cause it's amazing and a freaking love it like woah!!!!! sirc 12/04/2008 03:58 pm 25 Well done Shaklebee 11/07/2008 08:23 pm 25 Nice but short :( I like the whole Christian hitting on Dawn. I like the way smooth seduction works. They should def get together. As for Buffy/Simone. She should be stronger than that! She should fight her demon and just try as hard as possible to smack down that ass, Silas. Great story! Please update ASAP SVP :) Deb 11/05/2008 10:49 am 25 Glad to see a little recoup going on for each of them. Fascinating story...looking forward to updates! *bite me* 11/03/2008 04:21 am 25 yea!!! my mom is an RN, so yea for you. This story is great...so anyway I really hope Simone figures out her connection with Spike and finds the inner buffy....suspense times 10 *bite me* 11/03/2008 04:21 am 25 yea!!! my mom is an RN, so yea for you. This story is great...so anyway I really hope Simone figures out her connection with Spike and finds the inner buffy....suspense times 10 charmingkarla 11/01/2008 11:11 pm 25 I love this story, I hope you dont take long to update it. Poor Spike, he almost died, awwww, and Buffy, she is traped inside of her body but not in control. More please. IT 10/31/2008 06:10 pm 25 I am so glad you updated - I'm really enjoying this fic. Thanks for posting. More soon, please? lilashannah 10/31/2008 05:51 pm 25 Congraz!! All your hard work has paid off... I am so glad you up dated.I was going nuts for more.I can't wait for more!! I love the fire in Dawn and the fact that should is getting along with Dru.It sound like she sort of understands her.so come on finish your 2 assignments and get back to this story!!! you have a flare for writting.keep up the GREAT work. uncagedmuse 10/31/2008 03:48 pm 25 Definitely worth the wait! I'll be biting my nails, waiting for the next update. I have always loved this fic and it's wonderful to see you working on it again. Damn that was a good chapter! :-) 07/13/2010 05:10 pm 24 Please PLEASE update!! I love this!! and it's been soooo long... pretty_in_fangs 10/14/2008 06:40 pm 24 sweet... Cas 09/29/2008 03:21 am 24 Terrific! And I loved learning more of the backstory of Silas and Simone. 09/29/2008 01:34 am 24 I wasn't confused; i thought it was awesome & unexpected Deb 09/28/2008 10:51 am 24 Thanks for updating. Fascinating story. Look forward to seeing additional chapters. Oh, the plot thickens. I wonder what ever will happen O.* Buffy should be the one to kill Silas.. She should start killing more. She should do something besides get captured. But hey, your story ^^; (psst get it on with Dawn and that Chris guy.. I love the parts in stories with romantic and smooth courting *giggles*) sirc 09/26/2008 07:23 pm 24 Yay!!! :D You updated! Great chapter! jane 09/26/2008 03:23 pm 24 Great twist, can't wait to see how it plays out. Excellent. Thx. :-) 07/13/2010 05:01 pm 23 09/23/2008 03:01 am 23 Oh no!!!! More please!!! jane 09/20/2008 12:44 pm 23 Glad to see an update of this fic, been too long. Keep it coming. pretty_in_fangs 09/16/2008 06:14 am 23 EEP! An update! I'll have to have hurricane's knock out my internet more often if this is the sort ofpressie I find when it returns. Lovely to see a continuation of this story; I've always been mournful at the thought it might have been abandoned. Why do I have the feeling that Spike (and maybe Angel and Christian) will have Silas distracted long enough for Buffy to be able to truly end the attempted Mating? It was so great to see an update for this story. I had enjoyed the story and this chapter was fantastic, I found myself holding my breath hoping that Christian's plan would work. I am looking forward to reading the future updates. omg it's 23 next and nearly over:-(. Love it!!!!! 07/13/2010 04:54 pm 22 Messiah/Arielle 09/14/2008 05:51 pm 22 Fantastic story.. But very gloomy/scary/sad. The first two chapters I read, I had just left and didn't think I would come back to read it all lol The writing style you have makes it addictive and fascinating. I do hope that Dawn and this Christian guy get together and there is much seduction and smoochies ^^ and I forgot if Christian was actually in Buffy/Angel. Was he the psycho murderer in Angel that reminded me of Jonny Lee Miller? Or was he the guy that got his heart taken out so he couldn't be dusted? melissa 05/21/2008 08:23 pm 22 i started to read this along time ago and i just found it again all i can say is WOW is this ever good and i hope you update soon Tate 03/10/2008 05:28 am 22 Hey! Wah! I'm in love with this story. And this is it?!? Is there going to be more?!? Because this is one of the best ideas I've come across in a while, and I'd be very sad to let it go incomplete. If you do write more, or if there is more on another site, could you email me and let me know? My address is fireymystress@gmail.com. Thanks! Tate VICTORIA 03/21/2007 08:51 am 22 Such an original and gripping story! Loved every chapter. Please update? Priscilla 02/27/2007 11:57 pm 22 Updates? You know I love 'emmmmm DAWN 02/12/2007 10:00 pm 22 PLYZ WRITE SOME MRE!!!!!!! Fia 01/27/2007 04:01 am 22 I'm so engrossed in this fic! Can't wait to see how it pans out, what a fantastic angle; the family of vampires and the new society you have created. I am so thrilled at such a great story-I've been up for hours reading this story, frustrated because I can't seem to tear myself away for anything! Hope it leads to spike and buffy being together, a new power couple in the clan. Thank you for such a great fic, I'm eagerly awaiting the next! sammini 12/14/2006 05:18 am 22 More please!!! you're a great writer- im on the edge of my seat!! sirc 10/13/2006 04:47 pm 22 Loved it :D just sue 10/13/2006 10:02 am 22 Loved it! Now need to see what happens next. And please let Riley be dust very soon! Thanks ever so and looking forward to more. Damn, Giles is dead? Hate that this happened but they can't get Buffy. Poor Tara's hurt once again as well. Really creepy that Christian wants to turn Dawn. as if she wants to tbe a vampire! Great chapter, thanks for updating this interesting new fic. spikesmrs 10/13/2006 01:26 am 22 at just after midnight this is a good way to make me cry if i hadn't got up in pain anyway... well what can i say i hope to god they kill that bastard riley finn i hate him and silas too... go spike stake anyone you need too, to save your girl...can't wait of the next installment i hope we don't have to wait too long now... Lynda 10/12/2006 11:16 pm 22 I am on the edge of my seat and I am nervous. I really love this action in your fic. margaret 10/12/2006 09:09 pm 22 thanks for the great chapter! loved it pretty_in_fangs 10/12/2006 02:21 pm 22 Oh my God. Giles. Wow, that took my by surprise. It was so sudden. I can't wait to see this show-down though. I hope they're in time. Melissa 10/12/2006 06:33 am 22 I love it Silas needs to go. He is a plague on the hapiness of Spuffy. But you truly have the talent thank you so much for the Novella. :) Wanna Slay Librarian 10/12/2006 06:23 am 22 Ah! This is great! The suspense is building and I can't wait for the next chapter! The word no just keeps repeating in my head. I can't believe that Giles is gone and poor Buffy and the guilt she is feeling, I really hope that both Riley and Silas pays for this. Thank you so much for the update, I can't wait to find out how this all plays out. hehe, can't wait to see Dawn put the smackdown on Christian... and hopefully over the dust of Riley Pretty pretty please, it's too good to not finish. 07/13/2010 04:45 pm 21 pretty_in_fangs 10/06/2006 02:23 pm 21 How did I know Giles was going to utter those words? I am so glad to see an update. This is a gem of a story. sirc 10/05/2006 04:49 pm 21 I can't help but think that with Riley there comes some sort of trouble. Maybe it's just my over-active imagination :P Still loving it, btw :D Robyn 10/05/2006 01:33 pm 21 Christian was a surprise and Riley has me worried. Thanks so much for the update, I really enjoyed it. Ack! He invited Riley in! No no no! Bad Giles! Wow! that was a total surprise. Christian as an allie, I can understand his reasoning but it's still a surprise. What's Riley doing out of rehab. Thanks for clearing that up about where Dawn's been. Another great chapter. Great read, looking forward to more updates. just sue 10/05/2006 09:31 am 21 Lovely to see another chappie. I have that bad feeling about Riley - but that's nothing new! Looking forward to more when it comes. Thanks ever so. Stephanie 10/05/2006 02:51 am 21 Very interesting plot line. I've been doing alot of reading on this site and I have to say this is a new one to me. I wasn't sure if I was going to like it when I started reading it, just based on the summary. But all I have to say now is...More please! Lynda 10/04/2006 07:57 pm 21 It is always a pleasure to see a new chapter. This story is original and new. I really love it. :-) 07/13/2010 04:38 pm 20 Melissa 09/28/2006 07:58 am 20 Please bring it on, your story is awesome. Thanks so much for updating it. I can't wait to read more. Robyn 09/13/2006 05:16 am 20 I love the concern and responsibility Buffy shows for Dawn and the assurance from Spike that Dawn is now family and will be taken care of. Thanks for the update, I enjoyed it. Sirc 08/31/2006 05:19 pm 20 Things get more and more intriguing. I'm glad to see you have found the time to write, again. I really like this story. eeeeep.. yay love it.. cant wait for the next chapter.. :D Love the story!!! PLease update very soon!!! Well that was a bust, guess we've got to wait till the next update to see if Buffy's her ancestor. Hope the minons get caught. Enjoying this alot, thanks for the read. I hope those minions at the end get caught and dusted *nods* Lynda 08/25/2006 04:11 am 20 It's been so long and I have been waiting. Please continue, I love these nice Angel and Darla. I want to know when will Spike and Buffy be alowed to mate and how she will be permitted to stay with her family. This is a great story - so original; I love it! I can't wait for more - you're moving it along brilliantly, and despite there being lots of OC I'm actually keeping track of them all (my brain is so proud :P) Thank you :D I very much enjoyed the update! I love this fic. Thank you for sharing. So very good. 07/13/2010 04:31 pm 19 Stella 08/21/2006 04:01 am 19 Just discovered this story. OMG!! What an ingenius and interesting story idea. I love it! You do such an amazing job with the characters and their emotions that I feel like I am experiencing everything with the characters. I can't wait to read more. :) Robyn 08/11/2006 02:57 pm 19 I feel so bad for Spike and Buffy; I am looking forward to a time (hopefully) when things will be much easier for them. Thanks for the update, I enjoyed it. claddagh 08/07/2006 02:52 pm 19 Welcome back, great update. I was a little suprised by Angel's anger over Buffy and Spike's being together, then you explained it nicely. Well done. More soon? Yay for the new chapter!! I hope the ever present RL gives you a break and you can give us more story! I'm really enjoying this and hopefully you can update again soon. RL can really suck sometimes. Hope things stay free and clear for awhile. Thanks for the read. So happy to see an update of this! I really enjoyed the chapter - liked that Buffy's vision was discussed. Spike asking to be mated was very sweet. Looking forward to more. Priscilla 08/06/2006 06:58 am 19 The love of my fan fiction life has been updated. I can continue with my life in peace now. I loved it. Didn't Buffy have dreams about Silas and Simone too? *pouts and glares at Angelus* wanker Yay! Just gorgeous. If I beg will u finish it? :- 07/13/2010 04:25 pm 18 How sweet, she needed him to ask her to marry her. With her mated, that would hold off any other claim. Wonderful chapter. Priscilla 08/02/2006 08:44 am 18 Are you still there? Sara M. 03/28/2006 11:45 pm 18 YAY!! Wow! What a sweet chapter! The love scene was well written and very hot! LOL But more importantly (I think) was how well you expressed their feelings for each other. And Buffy's said yes! So now all Spike needs is higher up approval and he and Buffy can mate. *sigh* McChick 03/26/2006 11:01 pm 18 I loved that chapter! Can never get too much Spuffyness!! I was so happy Spike asked Buffy to mate with him, and I can't wait to see what you have planned for future chapters!! -Ashley- just sue 03/26/2006 09:54 pm 18 Yummy! I don't think I'd say No to a proposal put like that! Some interesting thoughts raised by Buffy about leaving the clan and her concerns. Really looking forward to the next update. Thank ever so. Thank you for a fabulous update. I love the communication and connection that Buffy and Spike have, and her excitement over him asking her to ‘marry’ him and his nervousness when he realizes that in human terms that’s what he did. And I love how they both admitted their feelings for each other and that she said yes. I’m looking forward to the next update. :) rayan 03/26/2006 06:24 pm 18 that SOOO cute...love the update....keep it up ComedyofErrors 03/26/2006 05:14 pm 18 A wonderful, tender chapter. I love the interaction between your Spike and Buffy: loving, playful, and understanding. Great work. Awww...that was so sweet! I'm so happy Spike finally asked her. Great chapter hun! Hope to see more soon! I missed some new chapters until tonight. Thank you so much for the updates and please don't be pissed because I didn't tell you how great this story is. I hope the clan lets Spike and Buffy mate. Wouldn't that provide more protection for her than just her siring scars? I loved her escape; it was a total surprise. More story please. Very hot and perfect chp! Love it as usual. :-) 07/13/2010 04:17 pm 17 :-) 07/13/2010 04:17 pm 17 Yup Spuffy lovin, soon I hope? Great exciting chapter. Wonderful chapter. The reunion between Buffy and Spike was well written, as was Spike's jealousy at seeing Buffy fling herself into Angel's arms when they got to Giles' place. Excellent! ComedyofErrors 03/21/2006 11:04 pm 17 I feel bad for Riley. He did his best for her. Very tender reunions both with Spike and with Angelus. Wonderful chapter. Sara M. 03/21/2006 09:52 pm 17 This is going to be so long isn't it?! I can't wait to see how it all turns out! Thank you for sharing. YAY!!! *overly zealous cheering!* I'm so glad he got to her in time. I was worried he wouldn't make it. And in a way, I do kind of feel sorry for Riley. At least he wasn't a jerk. Spike just needs to step up already and talk to Buffy about the mating thing. Great stuff sweetie, hope to see more soon! rayan 03/21/2006 08:29 pm 17 i love this story....i didnt notice it until i saw the update.....i couldnt stop reading.....really i mean it...bloody magnificent...*lol*...anyway update sooooon ok? pinkie swear?....ok good...*giggles* Priscilla 03/21/2006 07:46 pm 17 Well that was just the cutest thing I've read in a long while.. yay! Lol, you've made me very happy; keep it up please! I'm so excited I can't wait to read the next chapter. Thianna 03/21/2006 02:19 pm 17 another great chapter. great reuninon! I love Buffy's and Spike's interaction in this chapter. Thanks for the great update. Another mighty fine chapter that sees Buffy safe with her clan, and Spike, once more. Loving the way Spike's mind is working here and will be eagerly waiting for more. Thanks ever so. :-) 07/13/2010 04:10 pm 16 To be reunited at last. Just love it. Great chapter thanks. You didn't say anything about Dawn and her getting home? Is she still at the mansion? Wow! What a great chapter! Buffy's escape was great - and her thinking to go to Riley's place was not something I had suspected. And a beautiful end to the chapter with Spike rushing off to save his girl. *sigh* Wonderful. Priscilla 03/21/2006 12:02 am 16 You know, I honestly can't believe that I read this chapter, or this story much less, without reviewing! Honestly, I was checking to see if you updated, then I checked the reviews, and to my surprise.. I didn't leave one! So sorry for that. Honestly, I started reading this when you first started it, and I've been loving it ever since! Please, please, PLEASE update soon! LOL, no excuses missy :P this is gfreakin excellent ficcie. But keep your school work up :D LOL, no excuses missy :P this is gfreakin excellent ficcie. But keep your school work up :D Weaver 03/10/2006 02:20 pm 16 Cool - more please just sue 03/10/2006 12:35 pm 16 Delicious! Yay to Buffy for the bright thinking and I going to Riley for help is a great move. Spike to the rescue - hopefully - makes for great anticipation for the next chapter. Doesn't matter how long it takes, sweetie, I'll be waiting to eagerly read. Thanks ever so. romero 03/10/2006 08:29 am 16 Good for Buffy escaping. I can't wait to read more. grand story so far. cant wait forto be able to update agian. Need any help on the school work? lol j.k. I'ed love to help, but... anyway I'll be looken for the update. :D Aww yayness! I'm so happy that Buffy got out and now Spike's going to her. *much cheering* I just hope Riley doesn't try something before Spike gets there. Great chapter as always. Hope to see more soon! ComedyofErrors 03/10/2006 03:11 am 16 Don't worry about delays. It just makes the chapters that much sweeter. Not that this isn't a gem on it's own. Great escape work from Buffy and thoughts on her demon. I love that Riley got to do something to help her out. Spikes Slayer2 03/10/2006 02:43 am 16 awww this is awesome!! love the new chappy :) Robyn 03/10/2006 02:31 am 16 This is a really great story, with a lot a intrigue and a very interesting concept. I'm looking forward to the next update. McChick 03/10/2006 02:19 am 16 Yay Buffy got out! Im so happy that Spike is coming to get her back with the family! Although I know the battle is just aboutt o begin... keep up the great work! -Ashley- I love how she escaped! Kicking some minion butt of the good. Spike is so in love with her. I can't wait for the next chp. Good chapter Fantastic. Thx. :-) 07/13/2010 03:55 pm 15 Silas groped Buffy I'm thinking, you did't answer any of your reviews, but know one asked the question anyway, so I'm taking a stab in the dark here. Good for Buffy the girls got spunk. Thanks for the read. Again with the wow. Buffy’s escape was fantastic – very well written. I was wondering when the powerful Buffy we know was going to make an appearance. I just hope she manages to get away. And then research party with Giles, how interesting! So Buffy is possible Simone reincarnated. Very cool. Chrissy 03/08/2006 05:06 am 15 the story is addicting. and these plot twists are amazing. how do you think of this stuff? please continue the story-- and update fast great update!!! just sue 03/05/2006 11:21 am 15 Brills! Especially liked the hypothesis on vampire souls. Neat. Now I wanna see Buffy out of there and back with her clan. Thanks ever so and looking forward to more. McChick 03/05/2006 04:53 am 15 Great chapter!! Everything is making more sense now as to why they captured Buffy. Oh and props to her for her little attack and escape plan! Cant wait to see what you have in store for the next chapter!! -Ashley- Excellent chp! I love the stuff with Simone and Silas and Buffy possibly having Simone's soul! romero 03/05/2006 03:23 am 15 I like Giles theory on souls. Thanks for the update. Oh wow, it just keeps getting deeper and deeper. I really don't know where you come up with this stuff but it's just amazing. Hope to see more soon! Good theory about souls and humans and demons. Will Buffy be able to get out of wherever she is or hide out long enough to be rescued? More story please. ComedyofErrors 03/05/2006 02:32 am 15 I really like your plot points. Very logical progression between scenes. Buffy's escape and Giles's theories are wonderful. Good chappy. I like sneaky Buffy. Priscilla 03/05/2006 12:17 am 15 Ahh, I love it when Buffy takes things into her own hands. You go girllll! And I really love it when Spike does that whole growly-possesive thing :-) 07/13/2010 03:46 pm 14 Simone's Sire is the head of the clan? how interesting. Who was groping Buffy? Silas? or Christian? Guess I'll check reviews to see if someone asked that question too. Really enjoying this. OMG, SILAS is the head of the other clan? Wow… the plot is really thickening. Great chapter! I feel bad for Buffy and am so glad that Giles is going to help them out. Can't wait to see what's going to happen next. romero 02/19/2006 03:37 am 14 Thanks for the great update. Absolutely fantastic chap! I can't wait to see what you do next. Convoluted history and family here. Will Spike and Angelus be able to get to Buffy before the second turning? More story please. ComedyofErrors 02/18/2006 05:47 pm 14 Nice way to bring Giles back in. It seems that in every universe he's the go to guy for research. I'm really getting worried about poor Buffy. Great chapter. Spikes Slayer2 02/18/2006 11:57 am 14 *gasp* oh my.. your story is amazing, i cant wait to read more.. poor buffy.. just sue 02/18/2006 09:15 am 14 Loved to see another chapter of this. Glad that Giles is helping out but I'm still very worried for Buffy. Hoping to see more sooon. Thanks ever so. :-) 07/13/2010 03:39 pm 13 Great chapter, going to continue to read. BFN. Poor Buffy! She’s so scared. And Spike and Angelus working together – I found that wonderful. please please update... i love tis story... can't get enough of it =D I enjoyed this chapter. Though it had not much action but it was a great linking piece. I cannot wait to read further ComedyofErrors 02/06/2006 03:03 am 13 Oh, I can't wait to see what Angelus will unleash on the other clan. Excellent chapter. I like the fact that Spike got punched on the way in and hugged afterward. A very vampiric idea. just sue 02/05/2006 09:29 am 13 Absolutely adore this fic and always glad to see more of it. I'd been hoping they would have got Buffy back before this stage - will have to settle in for Angelus's mental torment now! More soon please. MORE MORE! Please? Pretty please? Not above begging. McChick 02/05/2006 04:52 am 13 Oh man, great chapter! ha ha ha I tell ya the bad guys always have their women dress iam happy that Spike is so determined to get Buffy back! Im scared of this Second Turning that may take place! Keep up the great work! -Ashley- Ohh! Who's taken Buffy, and who is she about to meet? I'm all anxious to see. Great chapter! :-) 07/13/2010 03:31 pm 12 Spike to the rescue. Glad Dawn's ok, now to find Buffy. very suspenceful and exciting chapter. Thanks for the read. Awwww… Spike was so sweet with Dawn! You can tell he is panicking about Buffy’s safety but he wouldn’t abandon Dawn. The meeting between the clans was amazing! I can’t believe how intense it was. *runs off to next chapter* ~*~Tasha~*~ 02/02/2006 06:30 am 12 Ooooohhhhh they are soooooo dead. Spike is very possessive about who he feels is his and those he cares about. He is going to tear them up. I hope the Master and the rest of the Aurelians tear up the other idiots too. I hope they can't do the second turning ... that something goes against them and for Buffy. Can't wait to see more. Jace Nox 01/29/2006 08:22 pm 12 Awesome! 'nuff said. Keep up the good work. Nox love the updates. i'm anxious to see what's gonna happen between the two clans. and i can't wait to see the developement of buffy and spike!! ComedyofErrors 01/27/2006 03:38 pm 12 Eagerly anticipate the next chapter. Spike's unorthodox behavior seems to be Buffy's only chance. Good update. I just love this and can't wait for more! *growls at nasty Ancient* MORE! I'm biting all my nails off! I love this fic so! Pweaze more as soon as you can. *begs on knees* Oracleholly 01/27/2006 07:15 am 12 GGRRRR and you left it like that!!! You're as evil as that Ancient guy. I want more soon. I'm hooked gaillee 01/27/2006 03:05 am 12 Superb chapter! You sure are building tension here. Hope you can update soon, 'cause I really need to know what's happening. Omg, they took Buffy! Oh boy, are they in for it. If there's one thing Spike is, that's possessive. I sooo love this story. Update soon! :-) 07/13/2010 03:24 pm 11 Hope Dawn's alright and they find them ok. Great chapter. Need to keep reading. Oh, oh! What happened to Buffy and Dawn! What an evil thing to do! I am SOOO glad I only started reading this now when there’s more chapters waiting for me – otherwise this cliffhanger would have had me chomping at the bit for more! Interested to find out more about this ancient. And Yay! Spike wants to make Buffy his mate. Another excellent chapter. Oracleholly 01/27/2006 07:11 am 11 could it be... Sirus??? ~*~Tasha~*~ 01/18/2006 02:56 pm 11 Love the story ... scared for Buffy and Dawn ... really worried about this whole meeting. I don't like the thought of Buffy being taken away from Spike. I hope you are able to update soon. I adore this story! But you are an evil minx for leaving Buffy and Dawn in such an uncomfy place. Now I'm gonna be all worried about them! Damn! And an Ancient - wow. So looking forward to more, and more. Thanks ever so. bluebird 01/17/2006 12:36 pm 11 love your story more please soon! This is really good. Love the background and history you're adding in. It's soo interesting. Update soon! Bloody unreal. :-) 07/13/2010 03:17 pm 10 Crap Stupid Joyce, she won't see her own daughter but she'd invite the vampire in. Going to the next chapter. Very exciting chapter. Oh no! They can’t take Buffy away from the Aurelians! Gah! Thank god Dawn was there to get Buffy. Poor Joyce. Oracleholly 01/27/2006 07:08 am 10 Excitement!!! I hate Christian!! Boo hiss rayning_stars 01/10/2006 11:58 am 10 (whoops, put this in the wrong spot before)
Yay update! ::passes out::
(I've been reading the whole time just to let you know. I don't usually comment.) ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC UPDATE! More as soon as you can please. bluebird 01/09/2006 11:29 am 10 I love this story! Please don't leave us hanging to long for the next chapter! Thanks! Yay, go Dawn!! ~*~Tasha~*~ 01/09/2006 09:40 am 10 Bouncing around here and eager for more. {grins} Now we know why Joyce was the way she was about Buffy's turning. Christian being the one that had something to do with Penn's mate's death ... very interesting. Spike wanting Buffy as his mate YIPPEE!! Look forward to more. just sue 01/09/2006 08:04 am 10 OMG! Luscious stuff! Spike wanting to mate with her and the nasties trying to get her. Joyce is such a useless mom in this - unusual but very effective. Am so hoping for more - soon. Thank you so much. ComedyofErrors 01/09/2006 08:03 am 10 Great chapter. Good reasons for Joyce to be so suspicious and wary of vampires then; and yet not wary enough. *stakes Christian* I am fascinated to see what his family wants with Buffy. :-) 07/13/2010 03:03 pm 9 Oh yeah, Spuffy kissage. Nope Christian doesn't have a chance. Lovin' it! Thanks for the fun read. YAY, a kiss! *sigh* This was a great chapter. I’m really enjoying this fic. Well done! Oracleholly 01/27/2006 07:02 am 9 I give Buffy an "A" for effort in the research -- perhaps she needs Giles. Love the kiss at the end of this chap. ComedyofErrors 12/27/2005 08:46 am 9 Lovely update. Certainly makes sense that Riley play the addict.
I enjoyed the encounter with Christian: very tense. And the library scene was welcome! She's right, Christian didn't stand a chance. Now what happens? Do they go back to Spike's room or Buffy's room or get it on right there in the stacks? What does Christian actually want? Good story; thanks for the latest chapter. ~*~Tasha~*~ 12/27/2005 03:16 am 9 Loved the chapter update. Great scene with Riley. Also a great scene with this Christian. I loved the end with Buffy telling Spike that Christian doesn't have a chance. {Grins} Always love Spuffy loving. Such a sweet kiss that said so much. Look forward to more. sue 12/26/2005 05:00 pm 9 Great to see another chappie of this fic. Fancy Riley getting in bother for having an addiction - from the vamps! Will be most interested to see what Buffy's research turns up. Looking forward to more - soon? Thanks. :-) 07/13/2010 02:54 pm 8 Really great chapter. Riley's a donor and Buffy's got an audience. Got to read another chapter. Thanks. Riley is a donor?! ROFL! Too funny, and very appropriate. I LOVE how protective Spike is being of Buffy and how much she herself is obviously affecting him. Excellent chapter. Oracleholly 01/27/2006 06:55 am 8 This is so good!!! I love how you are bringing in all these different elements, eg. Riley's biting fetish. And the way you are doing it is not out of character, as far as I can tell, for anyone so far. Angelus/Darla - some might say that Angelus is so calm - but in your reality, he was never souled. Spike always said that the Angelus that came back after the resouling wasn't the same. Yes, he was a sadistic bastard, but not insane. Aww, what a cliffy. Loved the chapter! Furvus 12/02/2005 06:14 am 8 Loving this story even more with every chapter. I liked how you had Riley in there not at a vampire but as a 'donor' which is another clever and original idea! Buffy and Spike's demons seem to be attracted to each other, eh? Can't wait for the next update and have fun with your vacation! Awesome job!! ~*~Tasha~*~ 11/28/2005 12:47 pm 8 Excellent interaction. Nice tie in with Riley there. How she comes to grips with it because he is so willing, etc ... very good. Look forward to the next chapter. WOW! A feeding club with the elders! Why are they bringing her? Do they feel something about her power that interests them? More story when you can please. SpaceLord 11/28/2005 08:35 am 8 Well Riley is always a vamp chew toy :) ComedyofErrors 11/28/2005 08:34 am 8 Wonderful insertion of Riley here.
A great chapter in every respect.
Have a nice trip. Way cool. :-) 07/13/2010 02:41 pm 7 A feeding club? This should be good. Guess Darla and Angelus have figured out about them already. Love the chapter, exciting and new. A feeding club? OMG! *runs to next chapter* Oracleholly 01/27/2006 06:45 am 7 Loving the Spike/Buffy interactions. First you made me like Penn... now look what you did, you made me love Dawn. Go Dawn for bucking Joyce. Oh yay! Update-ness. I soo love this story. But I bet you already knew that. This story is really intriguing. I can't wait for more. sue 11/19/2005 05:16 pm 7 Wonderful stuff. Joyce's attitude, Spike's hand on her thigh, feeding club. Want to know more as soon as possible. Thanks and update soon please. SpaceLord 11/19/2005 03:54 pm 7 Hmm this is certanly interesting, can't wait to read more. ~*~Tasha~*~ 11/19/2005 12:08 pm 7 Awesome chapter. Feeding club, you say? Sounds interesting. I love how Spike is the one she went to when she needed comfort. I hope that Angelus doesn't take except to it. I think it is cute that Angelus and Darla both noticed the little exchanges between Buffy and Spike even if Buffy and Spike don't realize them themselves yet. Look forward to the next chapter with baited breath. ComedyofErrors 11/19/2005 10:08 am 7 Interesting angle on Joyce. She was indeed intolerant of the idea of her daughter as the slayer in canon, so it makes sense. I'm glad that Dawn at least is okay with it.
I love the little hints that Darla and Angelus are aware of the attraction between Spike and Buffy. I do hope they'll be supportive.
A feeding club. Hmm. Shouldn't type quick. That was thx! :-) 07/13/2010 12:09 pm 6 Damn you're good at this nthx. :-) 07/13/2010 12:08 pm 6 Dru's mated to Angelus? That's good since Spike has seemed to taken a fancy to her. Which for us mean Spuffy goodness in the future. Exciting chapter. Thanks for the read. Very nice chapter! It was great that we got to find out more about Simone. I’m interested to find out how this is all linked to Buffy and what exactly happened to her that night. Spike’s concern for Buffy is so sweet, and Angelus noticed it as well. Oracleholly 01/27/2006 06:37 am 6 Very cool. ComedyofErrors 11/17/2005 02:39 am 6 Wonderful chapter. I love the concern that Angelus, Darla, and Spike are showing for one of their own. I'm also glad that Angelus isn't brutal to his childer in this fic. Great work. I love this story. You're writing is just fab. I look forward to the next chapter! ~*~Tasha~*~ 11/16/2005 01:28 pm 6 Excellent update. This is one story that I look for updates on big time. You have me hooked as to where you will go next with it. Love your story so far. Very different, really good read. Thx. :-) 07/13/2010 11:41 am 5 That was intense. Civilized Vampires? What do ya know! This is so different and quite interesting. can't wait to see where this goes. Thanks for the wonderful chapter. Okay, so that was really intense! The ritual was really well described and I could picture it in my mind perfectly so kudos to your writing. The scene itself was incredible. I almost felt bad for Penn! And now Angelus is her sire. Well, I hope Buffy will be okay in her new life, or un-life as it were! Oracleholly 01/27/2006 06:28 am 5 Such creative detail in this ritual; however, I wish Angelus wasn't her new Sire. I feel for Penn... which considering his character on Angel - I never really liked him. See what you did, you made me like Penn -- just a little bit. Grrr ~*~Tasha~*~ 11/11/2005 05:55 pm 5 NO NO NO NO NO ooooooo ... I was so hoping that Spike would get to be her Sire. {Sighs} Of course the story is amazing, and the imagery is wonderful. I just really didn't want her in Angelus' care. {frowns} I LOVED IT!! The ritual was so awesome and captivating. You are such a great writer. I want more now. I really wanna see what happens next. Sara M. 11/10/2005 11:02 am 5 WOW! Each chap gets more and more wow! Did I say wow? The ritual you could almost feel her pain. Keep it up! Can't wait to see what you do next. Oh I am absolutely in love with this fic. Just started it today and so glad I did. Will be sittng on the edge of my seat waiting for more. SpaceLord 11/09/2005 04:35 pm 5 This story is great so far, so diffrent and interesting. ComedyofErrors 11/09/2005 09:24 am 5 I love cultural rituals. So expressive of the cultures themselves. Here we have blood, family, and bondage. Gotta love vamps.
I'm interested to see how Angelus behaves in this. How far do his Sire's rights extend, and what is Spike's role? :-) 07/13/2010 10:58 am 4 Oh no not Angelus, he's going to be her sire! Yuck. Really like the story, Thanks for the read. Very nice chapter. I liked Spike’s attempts to calm Buffy’s nerves, the joking around about Angelus, and the mini history lesson at the end about the painting. I’m sure more of that will be explained soon! Oracleholly 01/27/2006 06:21 am 4 I smell the hint of foreshadowing with that picture. Perhaps Simone was a Slayer??? and Buffy, this Buffy, was a potential one - not called. ComedyofErrors 11/08/2005 05:20 am 4 This is a fabulous story. I can't say that often enough. The richness of this new world you've created is striking; a wonderful draw. And the backstory for Penn is touching. I can't wait to see the next chapter! OMG! Will she have to bear Angelus as her sire? Is she related to Simone in human terms? More story please. Loved it! I am so eager to read about the whole back story, and how Buffy's going to fit into the clan. Great work! I love this story!! This is very unique and you are doing an incredible job of making it seem possible. lilo 11/07/2005 02:43 pm 4 Ugh I'm really upset at myself, I could have sworn I had left you reviews on the earlier chapter but apparently I hadn't and I've just written one but I pressed the back button and lost it! Anyways, I'm really intrigued by this story- I think it's bold, daring and refreshingly orginal. I can't wait to see where you go with it, you've got some good stuff here! =) I like the way you're characterizing, and especially Penn- even though I understand he's what brought our two lovers together, I still dont like him for what he did- but you made his persona seem likeable to the point I could very well sympathize. I can't wait to see what you come up with next, and how this story unfolds. You can gurantee I'll be here reviewing throug the end (no more little mishaps) and thanks for the update! SpaceLord 11/07/2005 08:55 am 4 Nice chapter, like this AU you've made. Really interesting. Cool :-) 07/13/2010 09:44 am 3 Aw, don't make me feel sad for Penn, he did kill six girls, I'll forgive you for bringing Spike in so soon. Very good chapter, thanks. Wow, GO Buffy! This chapter was quite intense, feeling her demon take control and protect itself for the first time. Beautifully written. The Master chuckling at her growl when she first saw Penn was great! And then to top it off with Spike being in her hotel room to take her back, well it was great. Oracleholly 01/27/2006 06:16 am 3 I just love Spike. :D that is all Sara M. 11/04/2005 11:13 am 3 Explain Penn actions, also the master when Buffy growled at Penn… nice. You doing a wonderful job. I like how your keeping us on our toes! So Spike’s taking Buffy back. That tells us nothing...lol. Can’t wait to see how her family’s going to feel, think dear old dad will make an appearance? Keep it up! Good for Buffy. I knew she passed the test when she attacked the cross and the stake. I hope she can get over herself enough to make friends and learn to get along with her demon. More story please. kimbyann 11/04/2005 01:25 am 3 I'm really loving this story! You had me hooked from the first chapter, and I'm really anxious to see how this continues! SpaceLord 11/04/2005 12:00 am 3 Well this is a great story so far, can't wait for more. Gawd, I woulda had a heart attacked and passed out on the carpet. rofl :-) 07/13/2010 09:23 am 2 Penn? eewww! He turned four other's and there only getting around to him now? Interesting chapter, very good, thanks for the read. So Buffy has been invited to join the Aurelian familial line. Cool, yet creepy at the same time. I wonder who of the line will be present and how they will treat her. Only chapter two and I’m already enjoying this fic immensely, well done! Oracleholly 01/27/2006 06:09 am 2 Giles is still so Giles - but it's weird having him work in a field to help newly turned vamps, instead of the Council. ~*~Tasha~*~ 11/03/2005 04:20 pm 2 I already enjoy the world you have set up and created here for this story. I look forward to reading more. The first two chapters have certainly caught my interest. {Smiles} Another great story from you. Really liking this one. Can't wait to see what happens. Update soon! This is so interesting! I'm looking forward to more of this story. Sara M. 11/01/2005 09:41 am 2 You’ve created your own world. I love it! More please! Very Anita Blake-ish, but different from that world too even :-) 07/13/2010 08:29 am 1 Excellent story, SC Unique story, interesting concept. Looking forward to reading it. Thanks. Wow. Powerful first chapter. I’m really intrigued by the plot you’ve got going here and I can’t wait to see how everything unravels. I feel so sorry for Buffy. Oracleholly 01/27/2006 06:04 am 1 Pet - I found this and realize - yep not read this one yet. After reading the background for some bizarre reason I heard the classic Law & Order dunk dunk sound. You could almost end that with "and these are their stories." lol Very cool premise. Off to read more. rayning_stars 01/10/2006 11:57 am 1 Yay update! ::passes out::
(I've been reading the whole time just to let you know. I don't usually comment.) This looks like it's gonna be a fantastic story. Will there be a lot of B/A in it? Eek! No B/A, strictly a childe/sire thing going on with those two. Nothing more *shudders at thought of B/A* :) That settled, I'm gald you are enjoying the fic so far :) sue 11/09/2005 04:50 pm 1 Love the way you're describing vampire rituals and Buffy's reaction to them. Am totally engrossed in this fic and looking forward to seeing where you take it next. Thanks for the super read. Cool story, very original. I'm really interested in seeing what happens next. Will Buffy get to talk to her family? ComedyofErrors 10/31/2005 09:50 pm 1 Ooo, ahh. Very promising beginning! I love the way you're fitting regular characters into this new world. Sara M. 10/31/2005 12:28 pm 1 Ooooo, different! Can't wait to see what happens next. Ohh! I'm glad you posted this here! I was wondering why you didn't. Love this story. Weird AU. Are there no slayers here? Who turned her and will Spike take over as her Sire? | |||
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