Welcome to The Hellmouth? by Schehrezade

01/10/2014 04:46 am
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I loved your Cordelia and I also liked that Xander and Spike were not constantly snarking at one another and on the road to being friends.  Great reading this one a second time.  

06/25/2012 10:53 am
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Great reading this one again - I enjoyed having the original gang have a good relationship with Spike.  Also, while I hate that Cordelia hard to go through the Angelus change, I like how you turned that horrible experience into this stronger fighter Cordy.

09/02/2011 02:49 am
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This was really unexpected.   I really enjoyed the early intro of Spike and the turn of events with Angelus and Cordy was interesting as was her development.  I'm a big fan of Cordy, so that was a nice addition.  I really liked this a lot.  I enjoyed the relationship with Spike and Xander as well as Spike and Giles, not to mention the Spuffy, of course.  I'd love to see a sequel if you've done one...  this is a universe worth revisiting.

Blue
http://www.tthfanfic.org/authors.php?no=12717&list=profile

08/26/2010 10:14 am
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enjoyed reading your work - I liked your Cordelia too - and I sure hope that you have a sequel.

Nice Work

Thanks :-)
04/22/2010 01:01 pm
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01/08/2008 01:06 am
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OH I loved it. Did you ever do the sequel

Esther
02/04/2007 10:52 pm
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Fantastic!! Loved that ender, sweetie, and can't wait until the sequel is up. Great fic!

Squid
01/21/2007 07:09 am
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Definitely more! This was great. Loved that Spike came and stopped the Buffy/Angel thing. Although I felt bad for Cordelia. Keep up the good work. There's a number of ways you could go with this story. Maybe a claim?

12/14/2006 04:18 pm
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Great story. I like season 1 fics with Spike in 'em, and this one was great.

Persefone
11/07/2006 02:29 pm
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Wow! What a story. You really managed to keep my interest the whole way. Thanks for an exelent fic.

05/14/2006 04:43 am
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awesome ending to an awesome story...quite impressive show, love thanx

~*~Tasha~*~
05/07/2006 12:20 am
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Very unique outlook and storyline for Season 1. Excellent written. Glad that we got an epilogue. {Smiles}

vladt
05/03/2006 05:26 am
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very entertaining tale. cordie was great and spike&buffy a joy to read. thanks for the fun read.
Thank You! I am thrilled to bits that you liked Cordy and Spike and Buffy in this fic - it was great fun writing it.

*hugs*

Oracleholly
05/03/2006 02:07 am
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Very cool maneuver with the fire! Excellent fic all around, Schez.
Thank you Sweets! I have to admit the fire was a sneaky plot device to get the action moving *g*

HUGS YOU!
XXXX

Lou
05/03/2006 12:51 am
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The ingenious spell made for a fitting climax. An excellent romp.
Heee was a good way to toast a few vamps and remove the Master from Buffy's path!

Ohh I love that word Romp! Heee

Thank You babes

XXX

05/03/2006 12:50 am
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great story - I really enjoyed it and found the concept bery intruiging - thank you for the ficcie!
Yay! thank you sweetie am thrilled you enjoyed the fic! Had a blast writing it *g*

05/03/2006 12:45 am
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Sequal????

And damn YOU have a WIP finished???

Bloody hell who would have thunk it
LOL! You are a bad pup! Just for that I am starting another four fics so I have loads of WIPs *g*

Sequal will appear eventually - have to get some Tempus written...

05/03/2006 12:44 am
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Eeee! Yay! But why couldn't angel and dru be dusted too *sighs*
Heeee - ahhhh but I had to have some baddies in reserve for the sequal once I get back to it *g*

SpaceLord
05/03/2006 12:08 am
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Great story. Loved it, it was good that you changed a lot of what heppened in this season more than just rewrite it with Spike in it.
*grins* Thank You! I have to admit I was itching to get more into Welcome and hence the new events and not just a re-write shoving Spike into the action!

Am chuffed to bits you enjoyed it

Thank You!

01/08/2008 12:34 am
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Oh I love it, and glad he didn't like his lips

05/14/2006 04:42 am
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lol...loved the buffy cuddling injured spike bit...very sweet...on to the end now

04/25/2006 03:54 am
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LOL, I sooooo love this fic. Update soon??

04/14/2006 05:30 am
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nice update! really enjoying this story!

Richard
04/01/2006 12:39 am
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Awww, you mean it's ending? I was hoping to see more Sarah Conno uh Cordelia.

vladt
03/31/2006 10:22 pm
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fantastic read. thanks for the fun.

nicola
03/31/2006 08:36 pm
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mmm i love it... spike is too cute! god and darla's death was funny... i can't wait for more. Update soon.

dihcar
03/31/2006 12:16 pm
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Ohh, poor Spike getting sucker hit by that pathetic minion.
I'm glad that he remembers how young Buffy is, the cradle robbing thing is angel's thing.
He likes them young and innocent.

seeya

Lou
03/31/2006 12:03 pm
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A big victorious fight and tired but happy consummations would do me!

~*~Tasha~*~
03/31/2006 08:22 am
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Sad to know that we are up to the final chapter, but I have enjoyed this fic from start to finish. I look forward to reading the rest when it is available. {huggles}

03/31/2006 07:13 am
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hehe, lovely chapter!

03/31/2006 03:18 am
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This is still a fun story. Can I ask what might be a stupid question? What is icenthgious water? I did look in a dictionary.

More story please.

03/31/2006 03:11 am
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"She might kick him in the balls – again.”

and that's bad how? rofl...great udpate! so excited to see the ending!!

03/31/2006 01:03 am
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As usual your chappie was perfect

01/07/2008 12:24 pm
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what an Idea of Spike changing the water to holy water. and The laughing at Angelus loved it.

05/14/2006 04:40 am
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lol...quite funny...more story now

Anon
03/23/2006 12:15 pm
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More more more! I want to know how the whole series goes with uber-Spike.

~*~Tasha~*~
03/23/2006 08:49 am
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I love how Spike left Giles spluttering. LOL. Those tow can really have a good comraderie if given the right circumstances. I loved this chapter, and I look forward to more updates when the muse strikes you.

Lou
02/21/2006 02:46 pm
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I can just see Spike being all knowledgeful and gorgeous

ilpopi
02/21/2006 08:33 am
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Good to see Buffy so enthusiastic and happy. Giles' ribs are sure to be sore the next morning.
Great chapter.

Oracleholly
02/21/2006 05:50 am
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Oh Schez --- I'm so enjoying this retelling of Season One. When Joyce dusted Darla, I about had a conniption fit. It was priceless. Love Love LOVE how you are writing Cordy!!! All Joan of Arcish (the hair) with all the attitude of a women in prison movie. (lol) Spuffiness is right on par and is at a good, natural pace. And bully for Giles for sneaking around and getting Joyce the self defense brochure.

02/21/2006 04:51 am
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whats the icenthgious water?? *pouts*

02/20/2006 11:40 pm
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Cordelia is too much in this AU? She's scarier than a brassed off Buffy. I hope they can get rid of Batface before Angelus comes back for revenge. More story please.

Max
02/20/2006 10:00 pm
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I can't wait to see what Spike has got planned.

02/20/2006 08:41 pm
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lol! I giggled a lot at Giles. Great chapter Shez. You keep them coming. I can't wait to find out if Cordy gets to beat on the grand poofter's flabby arse or not.

dihcar
02/20/2006 08:28 pm
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Good chapter, i love the little trio family of spike,buffy and cordelia.

02/20/2006 07:26 pm
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As usual, brilliant. Can't wait for more, please update soon.

02/20/2006 04:46 pm
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great update - I love the realationship between Buffy and Spike. Really wonderful!

02/20/2006 04:40 pm
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Great chapter.

01/07/2008 12:09 pm
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OH I wonder when Buffy and Spike will find out about Angelus be banished.

05/14/2006 04:39 am
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good result for angelus...quite happy with that one...love joyce and spike's meeting and darla's death was too hilarious thanx for this chappie

05/04/2006 02:23 pm
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Me like Joyce.

~*~Tasha~*~
03/23/2006 08:39 am
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Darla dusting herself was poetic justice if I ever heard it. Joyce kicking her arse was priceless! I loved this chapter. Giles being the one to get Joyce to join the clubs too was cool!

02/20/2006 07:09 pm
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lol...roflmao...I bow to the master/mistress umm...you!

Lou
02/13/2006 04:13 pm
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Way to go! It's too much to hope he comes back his usual mopey self. Missing him already.

02/12/2006 12:41 pm
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nice chappie! The story is captivating - I cant wait to read more and find out what happens! Fab sweetie!

02/12/2006 02:13 am
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I hereby relinquish my crown for Angel bashing to the true Master Schez. But hey I am still the Riley bashing king


Damn awesome ficcie

Max
02/12/2006 12:08 am
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I really like how you're punishing Angel/us - I hate that guy.

02/11/2006 08:33 pm
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Did Darla not know that it was Dru's fault Spike started helping the scoobs??

And loved the cow poop covered poofter! heehee

02/11/2006 07:32 pm
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Okay, had to come read it over hear to giggle again and start my day good and proper.

02/11/2006 07:27 pm
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Like I said on the tag, great chappy.

SpaceLord
02/11/2006 05:14 pm
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Just isn't Agnelus week now is it

Gotta love it.

02/11/2006 04:49 pm
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Love the fun vacation to Mexico via boxcar for Angelus. Who woulda thunk Joyce was a wanna be Bruce Lee? More story please.

Wiing goodness yay :-)
04/22/2010 01:12 am
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Writing goodness yay :-)
04/22/2010 01:12 am
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Wiring food was
04/22/2010 01:12 am
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01/07/2008 11:37 am
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Oh well atleast she didn't run out crying yet.
Wish Angelus and Darla were dusted.

05/14/2006 03:47 am
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but the prophecy can be changed!! good on cordy for getting some payback, but she needs to get them better than that...needing more story now

05/04/2006 02:08 pm
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funny chaper. lots of goods quips and whyaren't the a/d dust?

Niamh
05/03/2006 10:56 pm
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'Ewww, he was only stalking me cos I’m short and blonde, he was searching for a substitute for his sire.'

~*~Tasha~*~
03/23/2006 08:30 am
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It was hilarious to see what Cordy did to Angelus and Darla. Spike is right they will be peeved and out for vengeance, but it was nice to see. Great chapter.

02/20/2006 06:47 pm
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Brilliant, I can not tell you how happy I am for this update. I love this story!

02/02/2006 01:39 pm
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OMG such a fab fab fic I absolutly adore this story! I can't wait to find out what happens next!

01/28/2006 01:57 am
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I hope Cordelia gets to participate in dusting Angelus without having to be hospitalized or dead. Nice ending with death prophecy.

01/28/2006 01:42 am
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Hmmmm. So let's say Buffy drowns again. Didn't already drown once in this story. We could have Kendra and Faith running around slaying together. Can't wait to see where you go with all of this.

Lou
01/28/2006 12:10 am
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Fab action-packed chapter - and what about 'he loved the smell of vamp skin burning in the evening'...you rock!!!

01/27/2006 10:43 pm
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I really like this. I like how you got Spike to work with the White Hats in the first place. Very realistis.

01/27/2006 09:12 pm
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Damn good chappie is that enough commenty goodnerss

randi giles
01/27/2006 05:19 pm
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I love cordy this way...she is tottaly awesome..holy water ballons, and Spike specialls...I so wish they had done that in the show. Looking forward to the next chapter.

SpaceLord
01/27/2006 04:28 pm
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Hmm how exactly would they survive getting lit on fire? I mean from what I understand vampires are really easy to burn to death. Other than that I love this story and the hardcore Cordy she is fun

ilpopi
01/27/2006 04:13 pm
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Xander tickling Spike was kind of disturbing. Buffy and Cordy make a good team and I'm happy that Cordy considers Buffy and Spike as her friends. She also really has a knack of taunting Angelus. I doubt she could have burned him and Darla so easily if they weren't insane with rage at that point. I don't see how angering them could worsen the situation anymore like Spike fears. How much worse could it get for Cordy? Anything they do they would have done anyway.

01/11/2013 02:47 pm
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I'm definitely admiring Cordelia's resiience.   She did what she needed to without squealing all over the place.  There's nothing like a violent traumatic event to bring out a steely core. 

01/07/2008 03:14 am
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Oh I feel sorry for Cordy, she did not deserve him doing that to her parent

05/14/2006 03:40 am
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you know...i really believe that...angelus is going down...awesome awesome story...poor cordy, though....more story now

05/04/2006 01:52 pm
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i seem to have missed 6 updates. how i don't know but i'm catching up?

Niamh
05/03/2006 10:06 pm
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I would be afraid of a brassed off Cordy. . . .

Richard
03/31/2006 09:20 pm
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Ooooh, I like this Cordelia.

~*~Tasha~*~
03/23/2006 08:21 am
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Dang ... vicious and cruel. Excellent written.

02/02/2006 01:33 pm
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OMG - Cordy staked hr parents - that was brilliant! I especially loved the entire getting all thier money first part. Go cordy!

01/28/2006 01:31 am
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I love what you've done with Cordelia. You can see the strength that made her a champion, but also that she hasn't had the experiences to make her a truely good person yet. She still high school Cordelia, but also a strong warrior. I can't wait to see what happeens next.

vladt
01/19/2006 12:48 pm
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enjoy the story, angel true to form. love the new improved cordelia. thanks for the updates

01/19/2006 11:14 am
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wow great chapter, kinda skimmed the squeaky part...lol...very powerful visuals on all the chapters!

01/19/2006 05:47 am
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WOW! What a yarn you are spinning here! Darla and the triplets was pretty icky and I have to worry about Queen C and her new, even worse attitude. Nice to see Spike and Buffy together already. How many years before there can be Spuffy smut? More story please.

dihcar
01/19/2006 04:53 am
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very good chapter, dark but good. Now this (the triplets) is something i could believe that the sickest most disgusting fucking vampire(angelus) would do. As for Cordelia, well she's really hard now, i hope that she will build a trusting friendship with Spike or Buffy. Cus other whise she would become too bitter and hatefull at the world. seeya

01/19/2006 01:49 am
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Great story . Great twist on the origingal episodes. Please continue to write and update soon and often

jane
01/19/2006 01:38 am
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Wow Cordy has really toughened up, looks like Angels in for a big surprise. Looking forward to more.

Pin
01/19/2006 12:36 am
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Excellent chapter! I love how you've reinvented Cordelia. Thank you!

AthenaHahn
01/18/2006 11:51 pm
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Whoa... that's just... whoa.... Can I just bow down before you now? Please? Damn, Cordy's turned into a righteous bitch, ain't she? You are BEYOND good at writing this stuff!!! I wish I could write that good. *chuckles* Please update soon!! And would another chapter of Tempus be too much to ask? I'll beg; don't think I won't!

01/11/2013 02:16 pm
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Wow.   Good explanation for losing the soul.  I would not have thought so seeing as Angel did not have any feelings for an essential stranger.  

Good mix up of happenings.
04/22/2010 12:09 am
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01/07/2008 02:47 am
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I figured it was Cordy and Angel wonder where Angel is and of course he would lose it anything that gives him happiness should cause him to lose it.

05/14/2006 03:30 am
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i think it's totally believable, considering that buffy rejected him, that angel would turn his attentions to cordy and being with her would give him the "happy" he needed to lose his soul....more story now

Niamh
05/03/2006 07:43 pm
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Perfect happiness could have happened at any time, given his shallow nature. . . so yeah, I could see it happening; plus, he purposely didn't sleep with Cordy later on in LA

03/31/2006 01:04 pm
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they gonna send angel to hell? where's jenny calebdar when u need her?

02/02/2006 01:25 pm
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yes! I guessed right! Dances happily! I thought it was Angel/Cordy because it just seemed a bit to fast for how you were writing Buffy/Spike... I was really really hoping that was what it was and yipp!! Okay it is official! I adore this story!

01/28/2006 01:18 am
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OMG he cut her hair! Poor Cordy may never recover. And trust Angelus to know exactly how to hurt someone. I'm curious where this will go now so on to the next chapter.

jane
01/13/2006 01:04 am
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Excelent, super, fantastic, can't wait for more.

SpaceLord
01/12/2006 08:22 pm
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Didn't realise that Angelus was a trained hair stylist Great chapter, so is Angelus going to get his soul back? I mean this is AU from the series and I'm just curious, I mean if you keep it somewhat canon then Darla and the master would be around I think (don't remember season 1 very well).

01/12/2006 10:06 am
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Eeep!!

01/12/2006 06:55 am
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Wellllll I think he lost it cause Cortdy didn't laugh at his tiny shrivled pecker Great chappie

~*~Tasha~*~
01/12/2006 05:56 am
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Definitely loved the chapter and all the interactions with Willow, Xander, Spike and Buffy. I must say that I actually got a smile out of it being Cordy that received the butt end of Angelus' "you're a real pro" speech. Seemed well deserved for her to get it. Look forward to more

Lou
01/12/2006 05:47 am
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Spike and Buffy fun, so sweet and hot! And it's au revoir Eyore - just shows how depressed Angel must have been!

dihcar
01/12/2006 04:38 am
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nice chapter, was very nice and sweet between spike and buffy. Xander is becoming a mature guy, respect. As for cordelia, much rather it happend to her then buffy. Cus i believe that buffy was still emotionale damaged in season7, the betrayal of her supposed "first love" was too much for her. Cordelia on the other hand wasn't in love with angel and can hopefully grow as a person and woman from this situation. seeya

01/12/2006 03:39 am
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Great chap! I had to go back and reread the inserts when Cordy's name popped up. I thought Buffy was channeling Angel for some reason - a little slow here ;P

Esther
01/12/2006 02:14 am
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Hot damn, that was a great chapter!!! Loved the naughty Spuffy moments...oh mama, rumpled Spike in the morning...a dream come true. Woohoo on the Xander acceptance!! I like that he's let go of his jealousy and considers Spike a friend. Only wish it happened on the show. OMG!!! So, Cordy brought the evil outta Angel.....great twist!! And him shearing her hair....ooooh, can't wait to see what's next!!!

ComedyofErrors
01/11/2006 11:03 pm
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Very fun morning with Spike, Buffy, Xander and Willow. Poor Cordy. Bad enough having that one night stand turn bad without having a haircut from hell.

01/11/2006 10:59 pm
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Nice chappy. Sexy Spuffy. Poor Cordy. No one should wake up to a psychopath, no matter how bitchy they are.

01/11/2013 01:58 pm
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You have a way with words.   I'm guessing that's A/C at the end.  

Loving it :-)
04/21/2010 11:57 pm
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01/07/2008 02:30 am
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OH was that real or a dream.

05/14/2006 03:26 am
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very sexy, very well written...love this chapter

Niamh
05/03/2006 07:30 pm
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They were lyrical.

Oh gods, weren't they?

03/31/2006 12:52 pm
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spuffy with a side order of angel/cordy!yup this fic has it all

02/02/2006 01:20 pm
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fans self - where is a cold shower when you need it... that last section was HOT!

01/28/2006 01:01 am
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Hmmmm, so at first I thought that last bit was about Spike and Buffy, but it seemed too sudden, like there were several missing steps. I'm thinking maybe it's Angel and Cordy, which might mean we're in for some Angelus. Guess I'll just have to read the next chapter to see.

01/05/2006 12:51 am
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What?? That's it? NOOO! I want to read more about Cordy and Angel dammit!!! *sobs* You could always...send me more chapters? Pleeeeeeze? *begs*

~*~Tasha~*~
01/04/2006 10:40 am
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Such a sweet Spuffy build up. Oh my gosh ... was that Cordy and Angel getting all slutty and groiny at the end? Dang. She doesn't waste time. I wonder if that is enough to take the soul of him. I almost always like to see Angel and Cordy happy together, but not Angelus happy. Can't wait to see what you have for us next.

Lou
01/04/2006 07:30 am
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And there was me thinking Cordelia was all talk. Talk about a sight for sore eyes! Hilarious!

01/04/2006 07:10 am
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*snort* I wonder how long he lasts with Cordy till he puts her to sleep??? Hmmmm, maybe in the middle of sex??

01/04/2006 05:39 am
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Oooo, is he going to become Mr. Shiny Pants now?? LoL That's okay, cause the day will be saved by the Slayer and Spike! Hehe... but seriously when are Spike and Buffy going to get to the smutty happy, huh?

jane
01/04/2006 02:32 am
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Oh my god it's bloody them two isn't it, bleeding Angel and Cordy I just know it. You've got to update soon. please.

SpaceLord
01/04/2006 12:52 am
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Hmm is slut sex like that really going to give him a total happy? I mean I understand him being happy about it but total happy? Wouldn't that sort of include him being in love or with the chit?

01/04/2006 12:16 am
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Nice chappy

dihcar
01/03/2006 11:53 pm
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My god that cordelia is a slut, could she be any easier. Now she deserves to wake up next to angelus. Also whats the deal with angel thinke he could dust spike, he fought with the fledgling spike not the master vampire spike. seeya

Jeni
01/03/2006 10:58 pm
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Uh-oh I have a bad feeling about soul-boy! I love the spuffy build up-can't wait for the next update.

10/10/2008 02:50 am
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great chapter

01/07/2008 01:48 am
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Oh so Angel chose not to stick around, wound what would have happened if he did.

05/14/2006 01:38 am
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loved this update...i like your xander and hope he and spike can end up friends, that would be so awesome!! on to the next chapter

Niamh
05/03/2006 07:14 pm
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Nice bonding there over mutual dislike of the large foreheaded dour one. . . . is it possible to hate a character and not mind the actor? *goes off to muse*

03/31/2006 12:32 pm
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xander's crush on buffy gonna effect his *friendship* with spike?

02/02/2006 01:09 pm
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*giggles* Angel dislike - common in all worlds! hehe

01/28/2006 12:47 am
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I'm glad to see you have Xander and Spike on the road to friendship. It's also nice to see the old Buffy/Willow giggling about boys dynamic.

01/05/2006 12:32 am
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Love the Xander/Spike bonding! *heads to next chapter*

~*~Tasha~*~
12/26/2005 10:55 am
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Can't wait to see how things pan out with Spike and Xander. I wonder if he will freak out when he finds out about Spike's interest in Buffy, or if their "friendship" will be secure enough by then for Xander to accept it. Good character interactions all around!

Esther
12/26/2005 09:45 am
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Schez, by starting at the beginning, you've managed to do something I wished in the verse....a Spike and Xander friendship. Great chapter, and I can't wait for more!!!

vladt
12/25/2005 12:05 pm
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great update. this might be one of the few fics that i don't look forward to a well deserved xander pain/death scene. thanks

12/25/2005 02:07 am
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oh i LOVE this. From the first time I saw a story that had Xander being friends with Spike in their mutual angel-hatred, I've loved the dynamic. Great job with this fic! Can't wait for more!

12/24/2005 03:59 pm
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O totaly luven this fic! Grate writen. shall hold my breath tell next update. ;-} (if I could hold my breath that long)

Max
12/24/2005 11:41 am
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I can't wait to see what antics occur when Spike and Xander put their minds together to annoy Angel.

12/24/2005 10:47 am
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xander and spike friends?? *Does her imitation of the Guardian and points at you* blaspheeemer! LoL

Lou
12/24/2005 08:09 am
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Once upon a time there was a nice Xander - and this could be it. Fabulous Spike - how could a young Buffy resist?

Chealsea
12/24/2005 07:49 am
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I'm really enjoying reading this. More please!

12/24/2005 07:37 am
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Looking good! I always thought Xander and Spike would make great friends, if it wasn't for the whole mutual hatred thing. ROFL

12/24/2005 07:33 am
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great update, Schez, and love the by-play between Xander and Spike...much better that the show's...happy holidays, and can't wait for the next one...

jane
12/24/2005 07:06 am
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I love how ruthless Spike's prepared to be to win Buffy. Update soon.

01/09/2011 01:39 am
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Now that's chemistry! 

A world of goodness :-)
04/21/2010 03:08 pm
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10/10/2008 02:42 am
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Good, poor Angel(I don't like Angel/Buffy hate it but still so sad for him...not)

01/07/2008 01:27 am
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OH I hope she doesn't stake him as well.

05/14/2006 01:32 am
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aww...awesome update!!! love the sweet spuffiness already!!! these two are so fated... can't wait to see what happens next

05/14/2006 01:31 am
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yeah, cause that would so be of the bad...great update, hope the powers don't have anything too bad planned for our boy...on to more now

Niamh
05/03/2006 06:49 pm
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The bint was a pretty little thing and a bloody impressive fighter--rough around the edges and still needing training. But when she danced he was aching to join her and shake the gates of hell with their brawls. That was something an evil demon shouldn't crave, but he was slowly beginning to realise that there was more to life than a warm neck and the scent of fear as he drained it. And it was all her fault. Or he wished he could blame it all on her.

03/31/2006 12:07 pm
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so how is angel gonna react to spike kis buffy?

02/02/2006 01:05 pm
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ohhh me likey! i loed the line about the bestthing to happen to her mouth... sigh... if only i was that lucky! Awesome story!

01/05/2006 12:24 am
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bahaha! loved this chapter. I am finally catching up with this fic and damn I'm glad I waited because now I get to go to the NEXT chapter! wahoo! *rushes off*

~*~Tasha~*~
12/26/2005 10:48 am
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Okay, you've got me drooling over the chapter, and it was just kissing. {chuckles and fans self} Excellent work. Love the build up. Anya and Whistler are a funny pair. Love it! Heading to the next chapter. Got behind by one.

Esther
12/26/2005 09:34 am
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Boy howdy, what a kiss!!! Man, I'm just jealous of Buffy right now....sigh.....great chapter!!!!

vladt
12/24/2005 05:21 am
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love the story, great chapter. thanks

12/23/2005 06:09 pm
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Ah, they're so cute when they're impulse driven! I'm really enjoying the delicious irony in this ifc, and the mopey crapness that is Angel is really entertaining. Loving it!

Max
12/23/2005 12:32 pm
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Spike is so much better suited for Buffy than Angel anyway - can't wait to see where the kiss goes considering their already have naked.

12/23/2005 11:56 am
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Ooooo baby! More kissing and eventual smuttiness!! And ROFLMAO! at the impregnating Angel part. *laughs so hard she has an asthma attack and passes out*

12/23/2005 09:11 am
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oh i love this! more more more! squee!

12/23/2005 08:14 am
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lmao, the only way it could be better is if angel had, had to watch freakin awesome chappie./

12/23/2005 08:08 am
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Passionate kissing always of the good! FANTASTIC!

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Spike?  Definitely hooked.  No way around that.  And Buffy? Yeah, taste.."pretty" unlike the forehead. 

10/09/2008 10:05 pm
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Love da story so far man

01/07/2008 12:39 am
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Oh what a way to meet.

05/14/2006 12:25 am
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awwww....that was so sweet...love that...can't wait for them to *really* meet...as in both coherent and conscious sort of meet lol

Niamh
05/03/2006 05:20 pm
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‘Come on, gorgeous. Breathe for Spike, stop bloody scaring the fangs out of me.’

Love that line. . . wish I had written it.

03/31/2006 11:50 am
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yup they finally met and what a meeting it was!

02/02/2006 01:01 pm
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loved it!

01/28/2006 12:29 am
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Wow. Great chapter. First of all I love how you are writing Angel. You make fun of him, but also make us feel sorry for him. I also loved your explination of how Spike could give mouth to mouth. I don't think it was necessary, the whole vampires can't do CPR from Prophecy Girl was kind of dumb, but still I thought it was funny that Spike could save her because he smoked. And finally I like how Spike leaped into action wihtout thiking while Angel was left wishing he'd done what Spike had. On to the next chapter.

12/23/2005 11:07 am
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Pretty... I love! Damn fine chapter. I love the moon-eyed Angel. Love this fic!

SpaceLord
12/22/2005 05:56 pm
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Love the way Spike goes after the girl and leaves Angel huffing

Max
12/22/2005 02:19 pm
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Another great update - kudos on the CPR thing, anyone want to let me know how Angel "has no breath" but vampires can talk and exhale smoke. The entire act of speaking involves inhaling air into the lungs and exhaling and creating noise as air passes through the "voicebox." Since vampires don't take oxygen from the air, they technically have "more breath" (oxygen) when performing CPR. Angel's a dumbass. Basic logic and common sense drive me nuts when I watch TV.

12/22/2005 12:30 pm
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Excellent meeting! Ready for more.

~*~Tasha~*~
12/22/2005 10:05 am
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What a way to meet! So romantic actually. I know that probably doesn't sound right, but imagine waking up to Spike's beautiful face looking down on you? It would be romantic to me. Good explanation about him being able to give her mouth to mouth. I always thought it was kind of funny that Angel couldn't do that in Prophecy Girl. He can force air into and out of his lungs if he wanted to, even if he didn't have to breathe. Nice touch Look forward to more.

12/22/2005 09:48 am
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“Behind you! Oh bollocks…” - LMAO!! So adorable!

08/24/2010 09:14 am
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Really like your premise - Anya working with Whistler and forcing Spike to work  as Buffy's helper - alongside Angel.  This should be fun and Spuffylicious.  You have Spike and Anya just right - Angel too.

01/07/2008 12:28 am
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Oh I wonder how that pairing will work out.

05/13/2006 11:32 pm
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very interesting...spike and angel sharing space?? scary thought...for *both* of them...lol...it's all starting to fall into place now...can't wait til he meets buffy

Niamh
05/03/2006 05:12 pm
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“You are really tall and glowery looking aren’t you?”

God, I love Anya

05/03/2006 01:13 pm
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did I ever mention that I loved how you utilized Anyanka in this fic. Great *happy sigh*

03/31/2006 11:40 am
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ok so why does whistler want to redeem spike? loved the part about the cuddle.

Richard
03/31/2006 02:58 am
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Oh, this IS precious.

01/28/2006 12:20 am
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Ah so it wasn't Dru behind this at all. Good chapter, on to the next one.

~*~Tasha~*~
12/22/2005 09:58 am
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The cuddle line was truly a classic one to remember. Had me laughing. It is so Spike and Angel like in their banter. Whistler telling ANgel he has to mentor another demon on the path of redemption, and it is Spike? Ingenious. love it.

12/22/2005 08:59 am
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Oh NOOOES!!

ComedyofErrors
12/21/2005 11:18 pm
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Oh, man, that was funny! I love Spike's lines to Angel. And Angel wanting to walk off in a snit. Should have known it wasn't just Dru that that arranged this...great chapter.

Max
12/21/2005 01:11 pm
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I love how Spike screws with Angel - he's hilarious.

12/21/2005 06:56 am
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yay. me like!

12/21/2005 06:24 am
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Gramps, did you miss me? Come on, give us a cuddle I actually have tear rolling down my cheek...too funny! This fic rocks schez! Looking forward to the next update.

12/21/2005 06:14 am
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OMG Schez, you are soo brilliant! This chapter was awesome and so hilarious! I'm addicted now, must have more. Update soon!

01/09/2011 01:02 am
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Oooh, very promising premise!

Really interesting start.
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athena606
09/23/2008 11:05 pm
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ooh was Buffy checking Spikey out.

01/06/2008 05:15 pm
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OH that was interesting, wonder what he did to make Dru mad.

05/13/2006 11:27 pm
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very intriguing so far...can't wait to see where you take this, what exactly dru's wish was and how it fits in with whistler's plans...off to read more now

Niamh
05/03/2006 05:05 pm
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Not something you want to be thinking about, kid. She’ll chew you up and spit you out. You’re so out of her league, Whelp, you’re in the minors.’

Something Xander, never, ever really understood.

She is one dirty bitch; the things she did to Peaches with a strap-on and a whip would make tougher eyes than yours water

You know, just the vision of that alone is enough to keep me happy for days (added to the fact it was Julie Benz playing Darla. . . . ) Sweet image that.

03/31/2006 11:32 am
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Dru wished vengence on spike? or was it Whistler?

Richard
03/31/2006 02:38 am
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As entertaining as the premise promises to be, I have difficulty seeing Spike meekly submit to Anyanka's whims.

'cue

"Eternal misery? Don't make me laugh. You'd do well to remember Anyanka that there's only a finite amount of pain you can inflict upon me. Past a certain point, I WILL decide to end my own existence and yours right along with it."

02/02/2006 12:56 pm
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fab start to the story - can't wait to see what is going to happen and what kind of curse this is!

01/28/2006 12:14 am
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Hmmm. Very curious about what exactly Dru's wish was. On to the next chapter.

pfeifferpack
01/12/2006 07:20 am
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Oh this is delichious! Love every word and nuance of it so far! You know, I really can see Spike responding to acceptance and love even with no chip or soul and Angel is just Angelus lite IMHO...still a liar and manipulator where Buffy is concerned (On his own show he had the makings of a hero, but not on BtVS). Excellent, excellent story. Kathleen

Mandythemusician
12/24/2005 09:15 am
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Oh my God, I just can't get enough of this story. My least favorite seasons of Buffy were always the ones before Good Spike...and anytime Spuffy is written in that period it just doesn't ring true. Until this fic, that is. I think you inserted him PERFECTLY into this time period and I LOVE the resulting changes based on his early appearance on the scene. Can't wait for more!

Lou
12/24/2005 04:10 am
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What more can you ask for? Yummy hotness and the best double act since Eyore and Tigger. Brilliant.

~*~Tasha~*~
12/22/2005 09:54 am
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{quickly hurries to the next chapter} This is definitely an interesting twist on Season 1.

12/21/2005 06:38 am
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oooh very nice!! *runs to the next chapter!

idk5743228
12/20/2005 11:06 pm
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ooh, different slant. I'm loving the beginning. I look forward to the next chapter.

12/20/2005 04:57 pm
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LoL, loved the bit about what Darla did to Angelus and lmao! I want to know what's up! Hurry hurry!

12/20/2005 01:22 pm
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This seems like it could be a fun AU. Anyanka is so funny with her vengeance or justice spells.

Max
12/20/2005 01:00 pm
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I want to know what the hell Dru wished and what Spike did to get Anya on his back like that. - Her "creativity" scares me more than a little bit :/

Mandythemusician
12/20/2005 11:20 am
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mmmhhhhmmmm...promising...

12/20/2005 09:22 am
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Oh! This is fun! Can't wait for more.

ComedyofErrors
12/20/2005 08:35 am
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Oh, goody! I love this concept and eagerly await more.