still missing

I was delighted to find the last several chapters of this story on your personal website, as they are missing from the Bloodshedverse for some reason.  I enjoyed the sequel and the happy endings...  I enjoy the levity and the crazy escapades...  Thank you for the laughter.

Blue
http://www.tthfanfic.org/authors.php?no=12717&list=profile

btw: If you're still checking in here, I'm sure a lot of readers would love if you reposted chapters (26-30) on the bloodshedverse as they are missing for some reason.. 

fine tale. thank you.

great sequel - enjoyed both stories very much - nice second reading of both stories -

Started reading this story this morning.From chap 1 to chap 30.I liked so much I forgot to review every chappy.As Spike would say Bloody good story.However I did fined Graham and Dawn kind of odd.As the mother of a 16 year old all I can say is EWWWW...I'd have killed him!

Enjoying your story, but wondering why the last 5 chapters aren't showing.  The links bring you to a page with the story title and author then the chapter title and then the "talk to the author" review section.  No idea what's up with that, but would love to read the last bit of this story at some point.  Thanks!

loved it, thank you.

have a feeling nate will not help woods. loving your dawn more and more. very good read, thank you.

enjoying  how you are defining dawn and molly.  surprised by the chapter ending. very good read, thank you.

After chapter 25, the rest seem to have vanished.

Where are the missing chapters?  Love this series but I sure would love to read the ending. 

All chapters from chapter 26 appear to be missing...  Apparently they were posted at one time, since they have reviews...  Can you fix this? 

thanks

blue

AHHHHHHHHHH!

I believe part of this story went missing during the server failure of 2009. PLEASE!!! upload the last 5 chapters of Love, Keyness, and Impending marriage...

I loved Second Youth and would like to finish this soon.

sorry for taking so long to acknowledge updates to this fine tale. real life has a way of interferrinf with what one desires. good read, thank you.

Hi Ariel Dawn!  There's something wrong with the succeding chapters after this until the end.  The text do not appear...and I'm so frustrated because it left me hanging...maybe there was a tech glitch somewehere?  Hope to see this remedied soon as I'm putting this on my daily to do list...that's how Im addicted to your stories starting with Second Youth!  Thanks for sharing your creativity!

Great reading your work again - I love your vision of Buffy and her time travel Spuffy life.  Don't know if you still check your reviews - but just wanted to let you know that the links for the ending of the story do not work - I had to read last chapters over at your home FF site.   Hope that you will fix the links here at BSV.

Wonderful new chapter - very much enjoying the entire series -

I think eventually, Dawn will meld with her powers more and not need transfusions. Her teenage heart needs more of the TLC right now.

wonderful Dawn plus Scooby folk story - nice combination of all the series character - Hope you can bring us another update very soon -

to borrow buffy's notes to herself, "Good for Dawn. " very good read, thank you.

Hee hee hee, mmm cookies....ah, Dawn....wonder where she took him?

very good read, thank you. enjoyed the chapter ending. roflmao.

Just read from the beginning.  Good story!  Looking forward to the next update. 

Great chapter, lovely to see more of this great story.

Oh that was good.

Welcome back!  Love the update - you right such action-packed chapters.  This is a wonderful adventure.  Thanks!

Great new chapter.  Thanks for the update Ariel Dawn.

Hee.. I've been following this all around the internet :P Dark-solace, SR, here, and I love it every time I see an update!

Great chapter, although I am worried about Dawn and the bag and the smell...

Can't wait to see what's up next... though I guess I'll have to!

XXX

Uh-oh, what's with the bag Dawn took in?

Hope the rest of the plan goes alright....

Thanks for the update, I love this story! Hope to see more soon!

Nice season 8 reference.  I definitely your Amy more than the comics' version!  Thanks for the update!

another delightful read, thank you.

I love this story and have reread it about 4 times and realized I never left a review. Well here it is. I love this story. It makes me so happy and I wish wish wish there was another chapter soon. Pretty please???

They are OUT!! And Spike making Buffy go tell Giles and Anya. HA..

I am just so glad that the relationship between Spike/Buffy and Dawn is just an open dialogue. And they are there for each other. AWESOME story.

Great chapter.

So they are feel and Dawn is getting a tiny bit better.

Yay, a new chapter!!

Very funny.

GREAT 2 CHAPTERS!!!!!!! I just love this story! Great job! update sooN!

really enjoyed the chapter. hilarious read, thank you.

OH that was interesting the back of the house is not self cleaning, and did Xander not walk in and walk out of where GIles disappeared

Great chapter.

Can I have a self-cleaning house too?

Oh my goodness! Funny thing, in a bad sort of way.

oh I love the idea, Dawn creating a demention and the witches doing a self cleaning spell, can I have the spell, I could use it at home here.

More please.

wonderful chapter, thanks for the fun read. nice twist with the "...they never came out.”

Great chapter, hilarious. Looing forward to more.

Booby trapped the house, huh? Bastards!

So I wonder what they will do now. More please love it.

A twist! Can't wait to read more!

Jace

really enjoyed reading these two stories - spent last two nights reading - Nice to have a "happy Buffy face" for a change and I like how you using all the series characters. Like your treatment for a Dawn that is growing into a young woman instead of just the bratty sister. Please give us an update soon -

well done buffy. and they were worried about anya! very good read, thank you.

OH that is good, I just read all the chapters, more please.

Great chapter.

Well that was easy! Thought there'd at least be some tough questions!

Great Chapter! Dawnie is really growing up! you did wonderful! thanks!

and Buffy lets the cat out of the bag. AGH!!

I think they need to be giving Graham a forgetting spell now No way would I trust him with any type of information about Dawn. Though I still wonder if it's Buffy they're sensing.

nice job dawn. love buffy actually being concerned about dawn's reaction to doing the spell. whining xander is just so right. thanks for the fun read.

GO Dawn for getting Forrest. I just wish that Spike could take care of him for putting his family in danger. And Dawn is growing into a great adult for taking responsibilty about getting him to them. Just love it.

Great chapter.

Yay! More stuff...

he he he

you really do do a great job at the humor bit with your stories

I LOVED this chapter!

That sounds like a plan but won't thy have him implanted too? Buffy has changed this time line but that doesn't mean they she'll die now by vampires, anything can bring about her demise. Great chapter, thanks for sharing.

ohhhhhh great chapter! I just love this story can't wait for the next update!!!!

really enjoy dawn attempting to take charge. very good read, thank you.

Oh, boy....

Things to do, stories to tell (glad Cordy's not possessed)...

Man, put Cordy and Xander in the same room again, and they regress years!

Go Dawn, great plan!
Great chapter.

Glad to see the update....more soon, please.

So they're going all out to try and take the scoobies over. Boy they don't know just what they're getting themselves into. Can't wait to see Angel's face when she said that. Grandpa-in-law is to cute. Xander must have been beside himself staying in a demon dimension over night. Now to the next chapter. The only good thing about missing an update. Thanks Ariel, you know it's great.

Well, that ought to put Dawn off of dimension hopping for a little while. ;)

Very nice chapter.

Great chapter, loved Buffys comment to Angel "’Cause you are my future grandpa in law."

Whew! I was afraid you were serious about that kidnapping comment! And thanks for reminding me about Angel fighting naked that one time--all that therapy gone to waste! Still, that was funny. Great update!

*tears* Dawn! I hope she's okay...a bit of blood changing maybe.

Exhaustng - all that portaling.

very good read, thank you.

Yeah, that's a huge strain on her, without her powers growing.

Damn Initiative assholes!

Yep, really time for Angel to act like family. Cordy will keep him in line, if she's around.

Great Chapter! Can't wait for the next update! I knew Graham was up to no good!

graham is either denser than andrew or completely wrong. very good read, thank you.

I greatly enjoy scenes with Andrew, Dawn or Anya. They are sorely underused in general and it's nice to see them.

Nice chapter.

What's the matter with Graham? He's such a moron and good for Dawn for putting him in his place. Glad she's got Molly to help her through this. Really enjoying this Ariel, thanks.

Graham's got a lot of gall to ask Dawn for help. I'm glad she turned him down.

I have to say, Andrew does possess several key characteristics that the Watcher's Council looks for in candidates. Yay Dawnie for putting down Cardboard the 2nd! Military guys are up to no good. I have a feeling someone's about to get kidnapped. So glad you updated!!

Ah, the life of a teenage Key...

Molly's so sweet...

Great story! Seeing this posted prompted me to read it's prequel. Loved it! The "teeth" bit made me giggle in spite of myself, everytime!

Yay! you've updated and what an update it is! Graham did dump her, well good! She doesn't need him hanging around to muck thing's up. Excellent chapter, hope you can update soon, thanks.

very good read, thank you. feel sorry for dawn, concern for red and tara, and love anya trying to make the best of the inconvenience

Yayyyyy!:D:D:D I am sooo glad to have this story back! I missed your writing very very much.
This chapter was great. I loved how you described Dawn's interaction with Graham as well as Anya's reaction to the ban on teleportation. Can't wait to see more on that;-) Thanks for writing more:love

Just caught up with this -- great fun!

Damn, just when I was getting to like Cardboard the 2nd. And was that a hint of naughtiness to come between Giles and Anya? I hope so! Anyways, funny story, so glad you updated!

Poor Dawn got dumped....it so sucks.

update, update, update!!!
please!!!
can't wait to read more dawn and graham

This is awesome please more I want to finish and read about the wedding and all and to know why Graham is back . Thanks You are awesome.

I'm a little surprised that Buffy's so accepting of Graham. If he's there on business, it can't be good for Buffy or Spike.I Didn't remember Nate meeting Buffy in this time, only in her first life. Another fantastic chapter, sorry I missed this on your site,, RL's been busy. Thanks for the read.

I'm glad that Molly seems like she is going to be fine here. But right now, I must say I am more worried about the Nate situation more than anything. I like how you have started out with Wood, and i can't wait for more. :D

buffy should heed tara. every change can cause more changes. very good read, thank you

Yeah, I mean, he was an ally the first time, despite the Spike stuff. Robin's not a bad guy, really.

Poor little Molly has a lot to catch up on.

The others shouldn't let what they know of the previous future affect them. Free will is the key equation in life, and they should feel free to exercise it. Dawn can surely have children with anyone, and if Andrew is interested in another girl, then he should go with how he feels.

Great chapter :D

Once again, i have finished (what there is of) one of your stories in a single sitting. Very good stuff as always:)

Anywayzz... Nate? Again? I really hope that there wont be too much trouble in Casa Summers because of this. Buffy has a least some feeling for him, and I really hope that Spike wont pick up on it and exagerrate everything. Great job, and i cant wait for the next update!

so glad to see this chapter. And go Buffy for trying to take control over the situation. I really do just hope that Dawn doesn't get hurt.. And can't wiat for the interaction of Spike and Nate.

Graham, the Initiative and now Nate showing up! Lions and Tigers and Bears oh my! Hopefully Spike won't be to upset about him being there, after all "he" never met
Buffy. Another great chapter, so happy that you've updated this great fic. Thanks.

Nate? as in... Nate? Wasn't that one of Buffy's 'Husbands' ? or am I switching names again?

love this! keep the updates coming please?

thank you for a fun read. yes, i think buffy can say there are a few complications.

Geez...I should have seen ol' Nate coming back into the picture.

Buffy needs to get a shovel now,what with all the men Spike is going to be killing, graves need a'diggin'.

Oh you sneaky tease you! Bringing Nate on; this makes things interesting. Great update.

oh no! eck it's the ex...or late...or whatever husband, rofl, and i'm with Spike, still really have a bad feeling about Graham, sigh

great update!

loverly can we kill graham soon???

Oh, of course it would be one of her husbands!

Silly Buffy! Don't you know that when you change the past, the future will be different, too? Every decision has an off-shoot of a potential outcome, or outcomes.

The Dawn/Graham thing is squicky. He IS too old for her, just from Dawn's mental and emotional development alone. He's got to be at least 10 years older than her.

A sneakt Initative hanging around and Buffy's would have been ex showing up.Bad combo.

Oh my! I rolled on the floor laughing with this story - it was so freaking funny -- i enjoyed it immensely seriously! Andrew playing RPG games and Nate being the watcher - this was a great chappie sweetie!

OH MY GOSH! Dawn is making out with Graham!!! Oh my ... that's just ... oh my gosh. Spike is going to kill him!

oH MY GOSH!!!

Personally i absolutly loved this chapter! I love graham and a graham/dawn relationship here just rocks. I think this is a completly awesome story and the pairing is excellant. I am droooling here sweetie - just drooling!

dawn's hormones are going to get graham, if not killed, at least to the emergency room. if spike doesn't, buffy will. fun read thanks.

Wow, I would have thought that the at least Spike, would have ripped his head off. She's underage and he's at least 22. Color me shocked! Good read. Thanks for the update.

LOL!!

Well, that didn't take long...Graham's hot 'n heavy for a teenager.

Maybe some mood stabilizer meds for Willow??

great chapter. Things are getting really interesting.

okay, ewww, sorry, but the whole dawn and graham thing is just gross. i'm seriously not liking her in this. i can't believe she would do that right there where buffy was bound to catch them, and hello, jailbait, willow was right about that. the jerk doesn't even like spike. i just don't understand how she could be interested in someone like him. she hasn't been making very good choices in this story and there's probably only so much more i can take. hopefully buffy knocks some sense into her.

Pappa Spike is going to be really PISSED with Dawn and Graham now. And I just feel bad for Andrew. Love how Buffy is all concerned over her.

hee hee! poor Dawn and Andrew, trapped in a 'future relationship' kind of way, hope they figure it all out. lol

Great update. I'm worried about her running into Graham. I wonder what is up with that.

lmao. that was fun, thank you. graham is probably not fun.

I really hope Graham does not have any devious plan for Dawn. I hope she does get a chance to have a little fun and what in the world is Andrew thinking??? Great chapter.

lmao lmao lmao - i loved this chapter so funny! hands in bad places *giggles* and ohhh graham is in town - I love graham!

LMAO, pooor Dawnie

excellant update sweetie - this sotry keeps getting better and better!

Just got caught up on this ficcie, grest update. I can't wait to see what happens with Graham in the picture now.

fun read, thamks

Funny ... Dawn in protecto mode over Andrew. Too cute.

"Me too, Andrew. Now stop ogling spike's ass!" *slaps a. in the head*

Lol! loved it! I really like Anya and Buffy in your fics... nothing better then the witty comments they make ;-) ... okay so there are some things better *cough*spike's ass*cough* but not many *lol*

rofl, great update!! i love it that Andrew's in the mix...and staring at Spike's ass *dies*

And i just lurve Anya, so much fun!!

Good sniping!

that was a great chapter it made me laugh :)

giggles - well now ... I could debate on wether xander should.. ooops there i go again questions x's sexuality . ducks head! giggles

This is a great follow up. I hope it has updates soon.

LOL ... I still get a kick out of that episode. They were all so far off of themselves falling over that guy. LOL.

Excellent update. Love this story, AD.

very good read, but xander, come on. thanks for the read.

yikes great chapter

LOL, give Xander a mission he might be able to fulfil :P

LMAO i know i said it before but this was so cute!

My oh my ... bad Dawn. I so would not want ot mess with Buffy when she has so much more power than she used to. She knows so much. I'd be afraid of the pranks that I'd get in return. LOL. This was a funny chapter. Loved it. Anya is in big doo doo too.

Teeheehee!! Very funny pranking. Will we get more trickster stuff from the two incorrigible girls?

rofl!! great update! love the fighting between buffy and dawn... ohhh prank wars! rofl

oh wow LOL great fun and sillyness. lol i dont even know what else to say lol

lol, pooooor Dawnie :P

just what a great family they have. And I just love the relationship btween Anya and the Summer's camp. this chapter was just too cute for words.

it amazes me that this story continues to grow & grow, just loving it! :)

More,come one you know you want to keep updating this one.

And see here I thought it was Willow's presence back in Sunny-D away from the "nosy witches" that is what is making Dawn sick. But here's hoping this time it is not Willow's fault.

This chapter was quite excellant my dear. I loved the suspense on what is wrong with Dawn (and cannot wait to find out. This is an excellant story so far and I am looking forward to seeing where you take this. *bites nails* I hope dawn is okay!

Has somebody done a bad spell on Dawn? It's still about the blood here. Nice cliffie, BTW.

anya to the heart of the matter. very good update. thanks for the fine read.

Ohhh...I love it. Poor Dawn though. *wipes a tear* she's sick...

lol; You are da bomb, Next cahappie is when???

You know it is funny how much Spike did start to brood... hell, "Lover's Walk" was all brood. It's very ironic. I'm worried about Molly - getting bad vibes.

That's a way to get Spike to stop pouting ... tell him he is brooding. LOL He can't handle being told he does anything like Angel. That is not good if the Initiative is back. Very bad there. I loved this chapter.

ahhh! the ultimate insult...lol...great update!

Oh please please please, don't let him do anything so stupid as to get a soul. Spike isn't so emotionally distraught and self-hating that he would overlook the quite elementary facts that,

1) he would be a different person with the soul
2) Buffy loves HIM and not this other person

Additionally, even pure vampire Spike is capable of realizing that there are limits to love. Witness his giving up on Drusilla after the Chaos demon.

it is so easy to distract spike. fun read. thanks

i can't help but wonder if something is really wrong with willow...good chapter

Spike sure hates being told he's broody. LOL. Good chappy.

So the "teleporation" secret is out. Dawn took it better than I thought. And what is the initiative doing back here?? Great update.

i like the teleportation - so cool! What a great story - I can't wait to see where you are going with this, Happy sigh!

 

Ooooh Buffy can teleport. I love that Buffy & Anya got their shop on. I'm making time to catch up. So, you'll be getting reviews missy.

It is so cool that Buffy can teleport, AD. Guess living for a hundred years has its perks. {grins} Look forward to more of this one, always.

LOL, seeeeeee Buffy needs a spanking :P

fun read. after 100+ years what passes for logic, still, barely passes. thanks for the read

you know? that's actually very good advice! worrying about my music exams tomorrow so... I'm going shopping! ;-)love the update!

Wonderful. I can't wait to read more.

Jace

That was fun to read.... I should reread when not on whirl tilting medications -- hehe sorry, not trying to bable - I love shopping heheheheh - sigh you know you are seriosuly one of my all time favorite authors in the universe *giggles* I love your sense of humor and buffy writing - hey any teeth checking in this one... lol - sorry -- oh does she get to meet riley again ... i wanna read! Can someone hurt him> what anout the initative... hhehe more more more

I do like to shop when worried; it's a great method of both invigorating and relaxing oneself. Interesting reaction to Spike from Tara.

Still loving it! Reading on - really fast!

Poor Anya, Spike should spank Buffy :P

such a fab start - can we have more! And I still demand the title to being your biggest supporter - don't make me go live a review for every chapter you have every written (justin case I didmn't) I can do that - just ask kristina *giggles*

Nice way to handle the whole worm bit. It's much better without psycho Spike. Although that Blue shirt was the dish in that episode. {grins} Loved the update, and I am still very glad to see that you are working on this sequel. Maybe it will get me off my butt to start putting out the sequel I'm working on too.

Absolutely brilliant, I laughed my socks off.

most intresting chapter. I loved it. I would love to see more soon

Teeheehee! I always figured that stupid worm demon was a BIG mistake on Anya's part. The guy should have been turned into an actual earthworm or centipede or something else small. More story please.

poor buffy caught in the middle, and poor little dawnie, of all people to inherit her driving talent from it had to be buffy....rofl

I'm really enjoying this happy re-do. And this rocks: "...she said with a smile. “I protect what’s mine. They’d never find your body.”

OMG! I love it! Especially the ending:

“I protect what’s mine. They’d never find your body.”

I'm so happy you are keeping this story line alive! Now I'm off to read more!

Love this, but please, it’s black pudding, not blood pudding! No such animal.

Not that you know Buffy is using any gadgets I just always wanted to use that line :P

LMAO, go, go Gadget Buffy :P

I seriously object - I think I am the biggest supporter of second youth - *giggles* At least I am the nom queen for it... probably will end up being an evil nom queen for this one to - as soon as there are more chapters - waits impatiently - me love ficcy!

hehe, 'i protect whats mine. they'd never find your body.' classic!!

Still loving the story. I really love this new Buffy, and of course Spike's no slouch either. More soon?

bloody brilliant....more please

bloody brilliant....more please

what a fun read! excellent, thanks

Awesome sequel start, AD. This is so cool! I can't wait to see what happens next. What a great beginning.

I totally forgot about the first story!!!! I loved it!!! I also like this one already!!! keep it up!

Organised Buffy is a rare treat. This is fab!

Sequel, SQUEE! The casual, they'll never find your body, was nice.

Ha Ha hA!!! I loved the last line - what a hoot. thanks for that!

OMG! OMG! OMG! You did it!!! You started the sequel. I'm all squeeing with the squee! LOVE IT! LOVE it! really enjoyed Buffy 2.0's first meeting with Wood (well subsquent one) so much. Looking forward to more goodness.

I have to agree with the other reviewers. I love the 123 year old version of Buffy. Knows who she is, what(who) she wants and doesn't seem to be bothered by her old, pesky thoughts of "this is wrong and bad". I'm looking forward to more chapters of this story.

Excellent start. I love this Buffy she's funny, self assured and intelligent and she knows how to treat her man.

Delighted to see the new chapter - I love this story. Love the meeting with Wood and Buffy's warning. Nothing lioke getting everything out in the open early on. Looking forward to more - Thanks!