Twenty Four Hours by Ariel Dawn

06/06/2014 09:47 pm
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Wow.  You made me feel sorry for Angel.  Not sure I got what happened with Illyria.  Guess she decided to move on, but not sure exactly why/how.

Blue

The reunification of Buffy and Spike was nice, but a bit too easy... after all, Buffy would have grieved for a whole year - there should be a little nod to that.

Sweet
04/01/2010 11:54 am
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VWalk
08/11/2006 07:07 am
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I just stumbled across this fic. I'm so glad I did. I really enjoyed it. Loved Buffy laying into Angel. I like that you made the human Angel just as selfish and arrogant as the Vampire Angel. The characterization was spot on for everyone.
I also like the little glimpse into the future of Angel's life; with Blue's words about him wasting this life like he did his first one.
Great job. Wonderful ending.
Thanks!

07/28/2006 01:15 am
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lol...i love that they're arresting angel....lol...how awesome is that! what a sweet little piece! love dawn's ultimatum to spike...such an excellent little fic :)
Thanks so much!

Opal
06/12/2006 07:48 am
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Gee...how the heck did I miss this delightful ficlet! (oh yeah ..work...) I loved this and I'm so thinking of taking up wulfie's suggestion of angel in a jail scene.
lol, go ahead!

05/21/2006 08:42 pm
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A bright smile passed over Buffy’s face. “Call the police, Dawn,” directed Buffy.

C'mon just a drabble maybe of Angel and his cellmate/soulmate, Bubba :P
I'll get right on that Wulfie...

05/10/2006 08:59 am
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Perfect ending! I love the Buffy that puts Angel in his place.
Glad you like!

04/29/2006 02:36 pm
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Lovely romantic ficlet.
Thanks!

04/28/2006 11:47 pm
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Oh yes, I am sooooo loving this:P can we get a scene of Angel in prison meeting the Italian Version of Bubba the over armoures cell mate :D
lol, maybe

04/27/2006 06:45 pm
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Great one shot ending/beginning. You did a fabulous job of finishing what Joss left undone. Thank you for sharing.
Thanks for reading

04/27/2006 03:20 am
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haha!! yeah!! go dawn call the police LOL
hehehe, I'm glad you like!

Lou
04/26/2006 11:25 pm
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The perfect pick-me-up.
GLad you like!

~*~Tasha~*~
04/26/2006 10:16 pm
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I loved the one shot, AD. This was a nice present for BTL. {grins}
Thanks, I think she liked it too

04/26/2006 09:21 pm
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Oh my so adorable. I am finally trying to catch up on some stories while waiting for my new software to get to me and snuck over here to review this one... it is wonderful! Simply wonderful! I really enjoyed the human Angel and calling the police, love Dawn's diminsion hoping and the wonderful sweetness of the story! Great story sweetie!
Thanks!

Nikkole
04/26/2006 08:46 pm
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LOL! Nice!! hehe, arrest the bastard!!
Thanks!

Robyn
04/26/2006 06:54 pm
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I really loved this, and the ending with Angel, perfect. I like how you wrapped up the fight, let us know what had happened to the survivors, got Buffy and Spike together, and still left things open. Though I would not be upset if you ever decided to add to this. :D
I'm glad you like! No plans on adding to it at present, but you never know!

kim
04/26/2006 06:51 pm
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Aww, poor Angel getting arrested...go find Nina, or Connor, or ANYwhere else!

And good for Spike, that he didn't just give in.
Thanks, I'm glad you liked!

Kat
04/26/2006 03:51 pm
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LOL the ending rocked. The rest was well written and intresting but the ending rocked
Thanks!