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Take Another Little Piece Of My Heart by spikes_wish
Damn I want more! Thx :-)
07/23/2010 09:51 am
The Fray
This was just getting interesting< I need more. Please update soon, like now.
wow, that was incredibly intense...loved this update, love how buffy put aside all the drama between them and just did what had to be done, can't wait to see his reaction when she saves his life.. :) excellent writing, looking forward to more :)
awwwww thank you bub! Glad to see you're still following this story :D. I know i've been kinda MIA at the moment, but hopefully I'll be back into the swing of things soon. Anyway, hopefully I will be able to update by next wednesday, if i manage to find a new beta. (My last one was my room mate, now she's moved back home.). So fingers crossed!
TwilightChild
01/25/2007 06:08 am
The Fray
Powerful story, and flows pretty well. I love it so far, can't wait to see where it goes.
Thank you! Hopefully i will have more by wednesday (fingers crossed). Unfortunately my room mate was my previous beta, and she's just moved out, so it may be a little later than that while i find a new one. Again thanks!
:-)
07/23/2010 09:12 am
My World Changes With This Simple Thing
Kimberly Adams
09/27/2006 06:19 am
My World Changes With This Simple Thing
Just finished this and hope you will update soon! I loved the emotions felt by Spuffy and look forward to more! I don't read as much fanfiction as I used to due to lack of time but I am always faithful to review each new chpater as it comes up. Send me more.=!@!
Robyn
07/31/2006 08:16 am
My World Changes With This Simple Thing
Dawn getting visions, it's a very interesting development and I love how she convinced Buffy to go to L.A. I really enjoyed the update, thank you.
DeanSamWinchesterfan
07/22/2006 03:34 pm
My World Changes With This Simple Thing
Good chapter.Update soon.Poor Dawnie,with the visions.I've always had this idea that Angel had a nickname for her like Spike died,only his is Dawnie-girl.
Thankyou. Hmmm...I like that. Dawnie girl....and you know Spike would be all jealous...
(ponders)
Anyway, hopefully should have spike in chappie 5, fingers crossed!
spikes_wish
xxx
(ponders)
Anyway, hopefully should have spike in chappie 5, fingers crossed!
spikes_wish
xxx
that was a great chapter...personally, i love andrew :) i would love to see him and dawn get together...glad buffy is going to help them, cant wait to see her reunited with spike ;)
Thankyou- there should *hopefully* be spike in the next chapter, but I'll have to wait and see ;).
Gay Immortal, HE HE! Great chapter.I Was LMAO.
Robyn
07/02/2006 02:15 pm
To Much To Deal With
I completely understand Buffy not contacting Spike, from what she has seen and heard he has moved on and with her issues it would be easier for her not to be told by him, as she was by Angel, to stay out of his life. When she found out that Andrew had seen him I would think that along with telling her that Spike said he would call he also told her that Spike asked that Andrew not tell Buffy that he was back. Buffy recognizes that she had a very abusive relationship with Spike, and although they were in a much better place and she had told him how she really felt about him before he died, he didn’t seem to believe her. Even if it is subconscious, she might feel that he thinks he is better off not being around her, and that coupled with her fear of rejection and her not wanting it to be confirmed that he doesn’t believe that she loves him is why it makes sense that she would want him to contact her. I’m not saying it’s a smart move on her part or where you were going with this, but it makes sense to me and is what I read into this. I really enjoyed the update and that it allowed me to think about why Buffy would react a certain way given the parameters that you set up. Also I love the name you chose for the Immortal and how well its meaning fits.
Thankyou, that was exactly what I was going for! Yay, I'm glad someone got that :).I think Buffy would have seen it as the ultimate rejection- one of her biggest fears because every man in her life seems to leave(in my opinion anyhu). And she also has a lot of pride, which is probably the main reason she couldn't face him- being rejectewd face to face would've been worse. At least by not seeing him she could hang onto something. Yeh, I spent ages looking through baby names to find an Italian name that would fit him- The Immortal is a bit of a mouthful lol.
Cool name pickage, for The Immortal. :) Looking forward to the next chappie.
dante is a very appropriate name...and now that she's told andrew she's probably given the boy ideas...lol...excellent chapter, can't wait for her to see spike again! :)
Tonia
06/29/2006 05:36 am
To Much To Deal With
I am so not liking Buffy in this story. Spike always made the first move. It is more than past time Buffy got off her ass and reached out first. (stupid cow)
I do like the story though. ;)
I do like the story though. ;)
Robyn
06/20/2006 01:33 pm
Trying To Move On
Very nice, I like how you did the transition from England to Rome and the reason for Buffy going there.
Good job. Can't wait to see what else you have in store for us, in the future chapters.
vladt
06/18/2006 09:10 pm
Trying To Move On
good read, thanks
We need Spike!
nice explanation of back story...very good so far, very much enjoying this :)
Great start. :-)
07/23/2010 01:13 am
Tissues and Tears
Very Tear jerky. Excellent stuff, I'm very intrigued now. Will read on.
Thank you :)
Oh wow. That was gut wrenchingly beautiful. You made me really feel this chapter. Thanks for the wonderful read.
Life with Spike is really complicated when you put it all down at once. No wonder Buffy's been confused. This was really sweet.
Robyn
06/17/2006 10:57 am
Tissues and Tears
You managed to convey Buffy's pain and grief very clearly. I loved how Dawn and Willow came in and offered her what comfort they could.
thankyou. I actually got the idea for Dawn and Willow from an episode of Charmed, when Phoebe had to kill her bf, and her sisters comfort her on the bed. I'm glad you liked it!
vladt
06/16/2006 03:54 am
Tissues and Tears
sad, beautifully written chapter, thanks.
DeanSamWinchesterfan
06/15/2006 12:57 pm
Tissues and Tears
Good story.Update soon.
Tonia
06/15/2006 05:21 am
Tissues and Tears
That was so sad!
Wonderful start. I can't wait to see where this goes.
Wonderful start. I can't wait to see where this goes.
Typerbabe57
06/15/2006 03:51 am
Tissues and Tears
Oh wow, this is sooo good! Really, really sad right now, but it'll get better, right? Please continue!
Yeh it will get better....eventually. But will be more angsty than sad, like @ the mo!
Great start - very heartwrenching. I can't wait to see what you have in store for the future. Sending you an e mail too.
Thank you, nxt update should be up in the next few days (fingers crossed). I've got the first few chapters written, so should have two more up nxt week.
wow...incredible, heart-wrenching chapter...brought me to tears...beautifully written summation of buffy's feelings and their history; very well done :)
Thankyou! This is my fidt canon- spuffy fic I've posted, and I wasn't sure if it was going to be sad enough. I really wanted to convey Buffy's pain, but I wasn't sure If I'd got it through, so I'm glad that did come through! Also want to say I'm a big fan of your work- I'm loving Trusting You @ the moment :)
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