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Not Quite Working for a Living by anaunthe ooooh, sexy...very good chapter...are you going to continue this, love, because i really wanna know what happens next!!! please write more...please? sirc 03/03/2007 06:21 pm Three I finally got a few hours free and decided to get started on reading the archives again. Great chapter :) You know, I've kinda let this one slide - I guess I should finish it. Thanks for leaving the review. Lou 01/04/2007 04:02 pm Three God the things Spike gets himself into -- stripping with Harmony was never one I'd imagined! Funneeee! lol.. imagine spike as a stripper?... mmmmm lol See, that's what I'm talking about, now to get Buffy there at some point. Would love for her to finally dust Harmony, yeah I know, not like the "littlest vamp" is a threat. Knowing how well you can describe a stage scene, hope it doesn't go that far with this one, if you do though, I'll deal. Spike better ask for a raise! Love it, Cas. Thanks! Oooo, make Spike take off his clothes too. Need nekkid Spike. Poor Spike. He just cannot be free of Harmony in whatever she decides to do! Sounds like a deliberate act. Waiting to see how far this goes onstage. Hee hee! harmony really wasn't as dumb as she seemed, i think...she was very ditzy (which is not the same thing as dumb) and insecure and annoying, but not really dumb, i think...great chapter, looking forward to more :) Thanks for glossing over the sex part's, still hate for him to be with someone else that wasn't Buffy. Liked the when he described his girlfriend, it was Buffy he was describing. She's really getting under his skin. Now to go to the sequel and start reading it. Hope you can update this soon after you get back from vacation. Happy New Year sweetie. I guess just hang together in the same universe more than depending on one another. I like the other one better - and the third will be the best for all Spuffy lovers. Shoulda probably just abandoned this one - but it does have the potential to be funny - Harmony is such a dolt. Lou 12/30/2006 01:18 am Two A tad heavy on the Harmony! Yeah, I agree - that's probably how Spike feels too LOL! But as I said earlier, its a fine line, because, well, she is there - and not leaving just yet. sirc 12/27/2006 06:36 pm Two Great chapter :) Thanks sweetie I think I'd have to smack Harmony, too. She is just soooo stupid. Are you going to let Buffy get in some dirty dancing? Please please please? You know, the more I write this, the more I want to get more Buffy in to it, although it wasn't in the orginal gameplan. I guess I just can't stand Harmony either. Isn't this a fine kettle of fish he's got himself into. Great idea, Spike working and in a strip club, won't find the slayer coming in there, Xander yes but Buffy no. Love this in canon when he start's to realize that he's in love with her, so this is going to be good. Great job, Cas. Seemed like a spot in the canon with a lot of wholes in it. Hope it lives up to your expecations - its a fine line to walk- living with Harmony but thinking about Buffy. Oh, this is just not right, to make Spike work. Interesting start. I'm imagining Spike, Thursdays and Buffy and the girls coming in for a bacherlorette party. Well, it't not entirely that he needs to work - more like that he finds it convenient. And, hate to disappoint, but I couln't quite get Spike up on that stage as a Chippendale dancer - it just seemed too OOC, but he does get on stage. See if you like how it progresses. Good start. I love reading thoughts to those looks that Spike gives Harmony. Thanks. You really do have to wonder just what he was thinking to take up with Harmony of all creatures, and not just once, but twice! oh - this is too funny! Thanks - needed the giggle! Glad you saw the humor, not everyone does. Lou 12/18/2006 10:06 am One I'm not surprised he's not a happy chap! No, not happy at all. Having someone sounds better than being alone - but sometimes it isn't. hmmm...i reviewed this chappie under its other title on this site...is this the one you're going to be updating? because if so i'll add it to my faves and take the other one off :) Hey DoS. I think the titles are the same, but I accidentally deleted the old posting. So, yeah, this is the one I will be updating as the other is gone. | |||
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