Last Orders by SpikesDeb

04/14/2013 03:59 am
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Lovely story, a bit of anticipation that had me worried for a bit.. and great ending.

Blue.

Bloody excellent :-)
04/24/2010 04:08 am
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ohgodspike
11/12/2008 09:37 pm
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I love this story!  You beautifuly captured all the Scoobs and Spike and Buffy too!  Thanks so much for sharing your talent with us.

darklover
10/02/2008 07:09 am
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This was a wonderful story. I really enjoyed reading it.
Thank you darklover.  Last Orders was inspired by the wonderful banner made by Vampkiss and I just let my imagination run riot.  I was pleased with the way it turned out, so thank you for letting me know you enjoyed it.

spuffy chick
06/04/2008 08:20 am
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loved it!!!!

pearlseed
03/27/2008 08:02 am
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“Oh. It's Mr-Twelve-Times-a-Night. Doesn't that thing have an off switch?” Xander asked, sarcastically.

Now that's a funny funny line--so beautifully guy. 

Miz Spikesdeb, God love ya darlin'--it's almost 2 a.m., I discovered my destroyed hot water heater about 1/2 hour ago, realization that Wild Turkey 101 is my only hope and I'm still happy as a clam.  Great little bit of a story--great voices for the beloveds!!  Geez louise, next time, just lock 'em in a room, preferably soundproofed and come back to see if there's anyone alive.  In Texas, we say, one's dead, one's in jail!!  My goodness gracious, what a wonderful little bit, Slayer's too funny getting drunk--she's useless brooding and Spike, yes all soul-ful is cool, but don't ya just adore snarky outrageous man Spike!!  You wrote a great bit of a story, love Dawn, love Xander's man woman and Giles, bastard finally putting up.  Thanks for helping me get through today with a major mess on my back porch, a major mess at work since I can't be there and renewing my joy that some folks can weave words into the most incredible story about folks I haven't even met yet.  Thanks darlin' it's a good thing you've done here.

Wow.  I don't know what to say.  I can start with an apology for the late reply, and I hope the mess on your back porch and the mess at work is fixed.  I'm completely stunned by your kind words for this story.  It wasn't supposed to be as long as it turned out, but you obviously liked it and I'm so grateful to you for letting me know.  The 'great voices' comment has made my day, it truly has.  I strive to get the characters right, and when somebody lets me know that it's worked, I'm beyond pleased.  Thank you so very, very much.  Truly, you've made me very happy.  Can't stop smiling.  Thanks again.  :)

sister cuervo
10/01/2007 03:01 am
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Perfectly romantic and gave me chills in Ch.7, especially. Wonderfully well-written with a deft hand at dialogue.
Wow - chills. Thank you so much! I'm delighted you liked the dialogue; it's my favourite part of writing to be honest. I love trying out the words in the characters' mouths. Thank you.

09/12/2007 03:38 am
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The end. *sigh* As it happens, all good things muct come to an end, and this tale has. I really did enjoy thins (are you sick of me saying that?) But I did. Thank you for sharing it with us!!!
Yes, all good things. :) Thanks so much, and I'm not sick at all - I'm delighted you've enjoyed and very grateful that you've let me know.

09/12/2007 01:21 am
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sweet wrap up to your tale. thanks for the fun read.
Thank you :) I was so happy to give them a nice, normal breakfast.

09/11/2007 04:16 am
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Great epilogue. The perfect mix of romance, sweetness and comedy. Excellent read, thank you!
Aww, thank you. The challenge asked for an angsty reunion, dramedy and a happy Spuffy ending. I hope I gave you that. Thanks for sticking with me.

Alien
09/10/2007 07:34 pm
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I love this it's realy good
Thank you so much. I'm very grateful for your comments and glad you enjoyed.

09/10/2007 10:35 am
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It is a great story, I loved reading it.
Thank you so much, and I very much appreciate your constant feedback. Thank you.

Kimmy Adams
09/10/2007 05:33 am
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Wonderful ending, Deb and I can't wait for your next story! I will now start checking out all your other tales as well but just love this little pleasure cruise you gave your fans.

The snark between Spike and Xander was hilarious and at the same time, reassuring that all was normal in scooby land.

Send more like this our way, will ya?
Kim
Hey Kim, thanks so much for your wonderful review. I'm blushing to the roots of my hair! I'm writing constantly so you can expect more and I'd be delighted to see you around. :) Thanks!

09/10/2007 03:38 am
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Great story, thanks for the happy ending!
I'm so happy you enjoyed, and I always give you a happy Spuffy ending - I'm an addict! Thank you :)

09/12/2007 03:29 am
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“Lie down, vampire, and shut up. Slayer's about to show you what stamina is.”

I love that line. Great update. There would be more to my review but I'm tired. Been up for a looooooong time. On to the next chappie! Still greatly enjoying this!!!!
Thank you :) I could hear her saying that in my head, so I'm so pleased you liked it. Hope you had a good rest!

09/12/2007 01:15 am
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dialogue and still neither ran. wonderful reunion scene. very good read, thank you.
I'm so happy you liked the reunion scene. I tried to make it realistic, with snark and them being stubborn and all. Thanks so much for reading and your lovely reviews.

09/11/2007 04:13 am
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If there ever was any doubt that Spike loves Buffy, they're gone now. To kiss her like that right after she puked her guts out... well let's just say, it takes a man in love lol Dawn has good reasons to be proud of herself for bringing those two together. They're so pig headed! Excellent reunion scene. And the talk they had was great too. Love how open and honest they were to each other. It was about time too lol.
Well, he's love's bitch, so even if the bitch smells and tastes of puke, he's hooked. And Dawn is my total heroine. I love her. I'm so happy you enjoyed, and thanks for telling me so eloquently :)

09/10/2007 10:31 am
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Great chapter.
Thank you :)

09/11/2007 04:06 am
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I cheated a little. Read in someone else's review that this story was finished on another website so I went looking for it and read the whole thing. But since I didn't leave you reviews on the other site, I figured it's only fair to leave you some here.

lol Giles all flustered because of drunk Buffy and then being used by the others for booze was just priceless! Buffy's got an amazingly good boss to let her drink like that on the job :) Drunk Buffy is sooo funny. God, she was such a mess, I loved it. And poor Xander. What is it with him and women? He really should consider becoming gay.
*grins* Very enterprising :) I think Giles is easily manipulated by his girls, and he's such a sweet chump. And Geno is TERRIFIED of Buffy, so it's more a case of him hiding his head. I love drunk Buffy, she keeps creeping into my stories with amazing regularity. And Xander should definitely dance with a different partner. Thanks so much for your detailed feedback, much appreciated.

09/10/2007 06:55 am
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very good read, thank you. loved the chapter ending.
Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it. I had such fun writing this story! I'm glad people have enjoyed reading it.

Kim Adams
09/09/2007 08:53 am
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ROFL! Buffy, alcohol, and toilets, perfect ending! I loved this chapter and poor Xander and his demon attraction...lol, but it is only fitting, maybe he will find a woman he can love and treat better than Anya, whadaya think?

I loved the sneaky reference to Rocky Horror you did...you are so bad...

Can't wait for the next chapter!
Kim
Glad you liked it - I loved this chapter when I was writing it. And Xander needs the love of a good woman, sure enough. I couldn't help the Rocky Horror - they were singing in my head, so I had to let them. Next chapter now up!

09/09/2007 07:42 am
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Ok, it was worth the wait. I really enjoyed this chapter, and Spike causing small evils, ROFL! I knew something had to be wrong with that chick Xander was talking to, and when he fell off the stole, I was thinking he's a man. Enjoyed the fight scene too, and the ending... classic. Can't wait for more!!!
Thank you so much :) I'm glad you liked it - I've just put up chapter 7 so I hope you still enjoy.

09/09/2007 02:03 am
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Excellent, an update - and they've seen each other - yay! Is "Brad and Janet" a little nod to Rocky Horror, or just a happy coincidence? Love sneaky little references like that ... VW.
Hee! Yes, you caught me out in my little nod, most definitely a RH reference. I'm an addict, I admit it. Thanks for reading :)

09/08/2007 05:49 am
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if only dawn could take for both spike and buffy, the anger and stubbornness would not get in the way. very good read, thank you. you have the voices of dawn, spike and buffy nailed.
Yes, Dawnie talks the best sense. Maybe she'll wear off on them.

And wow...thanks for your comments on voices. To hear I have the voices right is the best compliment I could ever have.

Thanks so much for reading and the next chapter is going up very soon.

09/06/2007 09:05 pm
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Great chapter.
Thank you. Hope you enjoy the rest.

Kimberly Adams
09/06/2007 10:13 am
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Now I wanna slap both of them! Talk about the stupidity of pride but I understand Spike not wanting to be kicked in the head anymore. I do look forward to seeing Drunk Buffy again so that should be rather hilarious...and sad.

Hope they both get a clue and kiss each other senseless in the next chapter and I will be eagerly awaiting it!
Great story Deb!
Yes, stubborn as anything, both of them. Drunk Buffy is a delight, so hope you like. Next chapter is going up very soon - hope you like...*bites nails*

Thanks!

Isabel
09/06/2007 09:37 am
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lol maybe alcohol is a good thing in this situation. It makes me happy that they're all trying to get them together, even Giles. Great chapter, great story. Can't wait for the next update!
I think in face of the evidence before their eyes - of a slowly-sinking Buffy and a seemingly ardent Spike - the Scoobies and Giles would have to admit defeat and make things happen. And alcohol is probably a good thing, you're right ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing - next chapter going up very soon.

kim
09/06/2007 04:29 am
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Yeah, no food all day, and then a lot of booze? Slayer's going night-night.

I don't blame Spike for wanting to be the chased this time, even though it's getting in the way.
*giggles* She's definitely going to be a leeeeetle big groggy at least. ;)

And Spike needs to know he's loved and wanted, not just tolerated. Don't we all? Thanks for reading and reviewing :)

09/06/2007 03:27 am
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Ok, ugh, Spike! You bone-head. Staying in the house refusing to go to Buffy. But what can we expect? lol I liked how Willow told him that she missed him. I think even in canon if the show went on, they all would have missed Spike.

Buffy and Giles both drunk, not good. But would she get drunk so soon? I can't remember back to Beer Bad and how long it took her to get drunk.

Well, I'm sad, now I have to wait till the weekened for another update, lol. But it's worth the wait!!!
He can be a stubborn vamp, just like the Slayer. They need their heads knocked together. I'd like to think that the Scoobies would get a brain cell eventually, and Willow would be able to persuade them all to see the good in Spike - in my world anyway.

Buffy was drinking beer in Beer Bad, and she's drinking shots in this, so yes - I think she would get drunk very quickly due to the high alcohol content, and no food! Glad you're enjoying, and next chapter is going up very soon.

09/06/2007 02:46 am
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Thanks for the update, looking forward to Saturday.
Thank you, glad you're enjoying. Next chapter going up in a short while :)

09/06/2007 02:40 am
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Good for Spike. He shouldn't stick around to be her punching bag. And *drunk* Buffy - should be funny. Looking forward to the next installment.
He needs to have an equal, not a master. I think they are equals, if they can just realise it. Drunk Buffy is just a gigglefest to write. Thanks for reading, and hope you enjoy the rest.

09/08/2007 05:31 am
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didn't take her long to revert to the tried and true. very good read, thank you.
Yes, she's a bugger for being predictable, our Buffy. But I hope you like the rest...

Thanks!

Isabel
09/06/2007 09:22 am
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He let her believe he was dead for a year, let her cry herself to sleep every night for a year, and he doesn't think she has a right to be mad? Stupid vampire! I would kick his ass myself if I could. Thank God Dawn is convincing. I hope they can work it out.
Well, he's been through a lot himself and for some reason he convinced himself her declaration of love as all just a sap at the end. Yes, you're right - stupid vampire! Go Dawnie - she's my heroine right enough. Hope you enjoy the rest.

09/06/2007 02:37 am
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So, in time honoured Buffy fashion, instead of running towards him, she ran away. Sigh. So true.
Yes, if only she saw things the way we see things. I suppose she would if she wasn't so close to it all. Mind you, I'd quite like to swap places with her. Thanks!

09/05/2007 05:37 pm
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Great chapter. Buffy reacted just like anticipated. Looking forward to more.
Yes, she's predictable, isn't she? Glad you're enjoying - next chapter is now up :) Thanks!

Kim Adams
09/05/2007 06:57 am
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I love this story Spikesdeb and wanna kick Buffy right about now!!

It is not all about her anymore and she deserves nothing less than really having to beg for any Spike attention. I love the girl but she really has some issues and needs to grow up.

I love Dawnie and her mug really made me laugh. And I love that Xander is on the Spike Bandwagon now. I like him and want to see friendship there. Thanks for that!
I can't wait for more and so glad you are updating so quickly.

Wonderful story!
Hey Kim - thanks for your wonderful feedback! Buffy does annoy, but she's got issues, and hopefully you'll see how she resolves them. Next chapter is now up.

Dawnie is a delight, I've always thought so - and I have my own novelty mug so I guess that's why they got one too. And I'm all about Xander/Spike bonding; I want everybody to play nice, but maybe it's because I'm a sap :) Next update after the one I've put up tonight will be Saturday. Take care :) Deb

09/05/2007 05:00 am
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figures they'd get into a fight. i saw that one coming a mile away, lol. ugh, buffy, you bone head. why does she always have to make it about her? didn't she grow up at all? can't wait for more! have i mentioned just how much i'm enjoying this?
Yeah, she's kinda predictable, huh? *grins* Hopefully you'll see a different Buffy...if you read on ;-) So happy you're enjoying and thanks for saying so - next chapter is now up :)

kim
09/05/2007 03:59 am
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Typical Buffy - can't understand that Spike needed some things for himself, too, and just wants him "to love her". Doesn't get the begging for forgiveness, so of course, she runs. Your relationships fall apart, Buffy, because you can't commit, and that doesn't just mean sticking to one guy...
*sigh* Yeah; she has issues - but I want her to work through them. Maybe Spike feeling good about himself will help her to look at him that way and thereby value their relationship more. That's my theory anyway. Thanks for reading and reviewing - next chapter is now up ;)

09/05/2007 03:11 am
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Great chapter, thanks for the regular updating. Looking forward to a less stubborn Buffy soon.
Thanks for reading, and I've posted another chapter tonight. There'll be a break until Saturday then. Yes - stubborn Buffy makes you want to shake her, doesn't she? But don't worry...*grins*

09/05/2007 03:09 am
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Poor Xander and SPike - doomed to be roommates. LOL
Hee! I didn't even think of that - but yeah, bad karma or what? Mind you, I wouldn't turn down a room share with Spike :) Thanks for reading!

09/08/2007 05:07 am
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fun read, thank you. love you take on dawn.
Thank you, glad you're enjoying the story and Dawn in particular. I love writing her.

Isabel
09/06/2007 09:06 am
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Power point presentation? That would have been funny as hell. Love Willow and her map with the "you are here" notes on it. Dawn kept blood in the fridge for Spike even though she thought he was dead? That was so sweet it made me shed a tear or two. Love Dawnie.
Not sure showing up at Buffy's work is the best of ideas. Either she'll pass out, or kick his ass, or start crying in public. She won't like that.
I adore Willow being 'over-prepared'. That bit on the show where she gave the guy her notes and delivered a long speech about what not to do with her book - priceless! And I figure Dawnie will take a hell of a lot of convincing to give up on those she loves. Hope you enjoy the rest, and thanks.

09/06/2007 02:34 am
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They stowed him in the attic all day? Like luggage! They'll never learn ...
*giggles* Yeah, but then it might explain Mr Marsters' ever youthful good looks. Maybe the portrait of Dorian Gray was up there...

Thanks!

09/05/2007 03:01 am
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Oh yes - there must be a power point presentation. LOL.
*giggles* Yeah, power up that baby and let those slides rip!! Thanks :)

09/04/2007 06:56 am
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Oh, lovely chapter. You had me giggling like crazy. I liked the novelty mugs too. I want to read what Spike's says, lol.

So now comes the meeting I'm guessing. Can't wait.
Glad I got giggles *grins* Don't know where the mugs came from - I don't know how my mind works sometimes. Thanks for reading and I'm glad you're enjoying. Next chapter going up very soon :)

09/04/2007 06:49 am
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"Softly, softly, you say, Red? Well, you all dragged me here when that was my exact plan so you know what I say? Bugger that."

LOVE THIS QUOTE

And how sweet is Dawn? LOLOLOL at the mug, too - Do I fit your lock? - bwahahaha
*blushes* Thank you. It sounded 'Spike-like' in my head, so I'm glad you enjoyed. And I LOVE Dawn - you'll never find Dawn bashing in any of my fics. And the mug - don't know where that all came from, just wanted it to seem homey. Thanks for reading and reviewing, more very soon.

09/04/2007 06:35 am
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I can't wait to see Buffys' face when Spike shows up. Great chapter.
*giggles* I know, she's going to FREAK!! Thanks so much, I'm glad you're enjoying. More going up very soon.

Cas
09/04/2007 04:10 am
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Of course. Exactly as it should be.
Thank you so much. I'm glad you think so. More coming very soon.

09/08/2007 04:56 am
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beautiful job with dawn. very good read, thank you.
Thank you for saying so. I love Dawn to bits. Hope you enjoy the rest.

Isabel
09/06/2007 08:48 am
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Go Dawnie!! She's awesome. She slapped Giles? Excellent. He had it coming.
Spending a lot of time in England, the Big Brother comment really cracked me up. The Brits are OBSESSED with that show lol. Really can't blame a guy for chosing a snog with the Slayer over that :)
I love Dawnie, bordering on obsession, so have to have her in this one. I think that post-Chosen, she'd be all grown up and in charge and she wouldn't stand for any nonsense. She's my heroine. :) *giggles* We are a bit Big Brother obsessed, aren't we? Except me...apparently. That's how that one got in there;) Thanks for your lovely review.

09/06/2007 02:31 am
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Giles had Spike tucked away in Bath! Now that's evil. And I'm glad to see that Mr. Fett survived the collapse of the Hellmouth.
Yes - Giles has been a very bad boy, but he meant well. And Mr Fett had to survive really :) Thanks for reading and reviewing.

kim
09/04/2007 06:36 am
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Circle of the Black Thorn, Giles..

Yay, they convinced Spike. Buffy's gonna kick Giles' ass when she finds out his involvement in this.
Yes, I'm cramming everything in here :) Giles means well, but I swear, he's deluded sometimes. Thanks for reading, and hope you enjoy the rest.

09/04/2007 06:22 am
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Great chapter. I wonder what Buffy will say?
Thank you. Well, you can bet whatever she says, it won't be all sweetness and light. :) Hope you enjoy the rest.

09/03/2007 08:10 am
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Great meeting. I like how Dawn lost it and gave Spike a piece of her mind. Poor vamp, he's all twisted, with Buffy and the loss of Angel. I feel sad too. Angel's gone. Can't wait for more.
Thank you so much! And yes, Spike's all cut up inside. I felt sad that Angel's gone too, *sigh*. More coming very soon, thanks!

09/02/2007 06:52 pm
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stalking over to Giles and slapping him hard across the face. “How could you? - You go, Dawn. Smack him again. Giles betrays Buffy once again.
I love protective Dawnie *hugs her tight*. And Giles means well, but loses the plot again. Thanks for reading and reviewing, much appreciated.

Amber
09/11/2007 10:53 am
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I LOVED this story!!!!! It was Awesome!!!!! You nailed ALL of the characters, especially Buffy and Spike!!!!! Along with their very complicated relationship!!!! Your a Wonderful writer, and again Awesome job!!!! And I hope to see more of your work in the future! :)
Take Care,
Amber :)
Awww, now I'm blushing Amber :) Thanks so much for your kind words. I'm delighted you enjoyed, and I'm writing away so I hope you dip into my musings again. Take care. Deb xx

09/08/2007 04:48 am
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could program the the spikebot to bite idiot watchers for fun. very good start, thank you.
Now that's a great idea! Thanks for reading and reviewing :)

Isabel
09/06/2007 08:27 am
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So basically, Giles saw Buffy in THAT state every day, knowing for a month that Spike was back, and didn't feel like ending her torment?? God, someone shake some sense into that man. I hope she gets so pissed when she finds out, that she throw stuff at him. He deserves worse, but since I know Spike is the one who didn't want her to know he was back, I'll play nice. Poor Buffy!
Love the story so far. Can't wait to read the next chapter
Hi there. Thanks :) Giles means well, honestly...he's just destined to always do the wrong thing for the right reason. Still, I hope I can fix it for you. Thanks for reading, hope you enjoy the rest.

09/06/2007 02:27 am
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A Spikebot ... now that's a brilliant idea. Where can I buy mine? *Grins* Curious to see where this goes. I like your grown-up Dawn and your mourning Buffy. Both make sense, and make for a good story.
Hee! Yes, I wish I had the plans to that Spikebot...I'd be a trillionaire right about now. Glad you're enjoying and thanks for reviewing. Dawn and I have this thing where if she's good and doesn't whine, I'm good to her, and it seems to work. And Buffy would mourn, I just know it. Thanks again, hope you enjoy the rest.

09/03/2007 07:50 am
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really great start!
Thank you, glad you're enjoying :)

09/02/2007 06:41 pm
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Poor Buffy, nobody wants to put up with her or the Ramones. Can I have a Spikebot?
*giggles* Yep, I think everybody deserves a Spikebot, maybe two :)

Thanks!

09/01/2007 11:51 am
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I'm thinking Dawn is gonna be pissed at Giles. Wonder what they'll do?
Yep, she's not happy. I wouldn't want to be in Giles' shoes. Next chapter going up now, thanks for reading :)

09/01/2007 06:06 am
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Veru evil to finish the chapter like that. I like this so far, and if Willow does work out how to make a Spikebot (hand up) can I have one too? Looking foward to reading more.
*grins* Yep, evil me. But I'm putting the next chapter up now. If we could all have a Spikebot I'm sure the world would be a happier place :) Thanks hun.

kim
09/01/2007 04:59 am
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Yeah, Giles....you can't let Buffy carry on like that, for a year, when Spike's still alive. It's cruel.
Yep, bad Giles. Naughty. But he means well - don't they always? Thanks for reading - and the next chapter is going up now. :)