Heart Don't Lie by NautiBitz

07/01/2014 08:33 pm
Epilogue: Second Chances         
It was fun to read this again after so many years. 

Thanks,

Blue

Thanks. :-)
06/11/2010 03:11 am
Epilogue: Second Chances         
 

kw
07/02/2008 06:04 am
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wow a buffy world without vampires that will be different look foward to reading the sequel

Lea
02/04/2008 06:32 pm
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Oooh! Loved it, loved it, loved it! :D
Best story I've read in a while :)
I have always started to read this but never had the time to finish it. Thank goodness I finally did! :D
You got me teary with Spike standing out in the sun saying it was a beautiful day.
What can I say, off to read the sequel, this was beautiful *squeal* :)
And yeah, nobody really likes Dawn. I blame the whining.

Ashley
12/03/2007 10:23 pm
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Great, great story.

11/07/2007 05:46 am
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I finally got the chance to catch up with this fic.

Such fun! Thank you for an enjoyable ride, I look forward to the sequel.

sister cuervo
11/06/2007 02:25 am
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Woo Hoo! I love this story to bits. I love that Mary Tofts got a mention, especially. You're the best, Nauti!

Roby
11/04/2007 04:33 am
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Truly, madly, deeply loved it. And the idea you're working on a sequel has me tickled pink! :-)

11/03/2007 11:14 pm
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Aww, this really was a great fic! I'm so happy I took my time reading it - it was totally worth it.

Nikkole
11/03/2007 10:42 pm
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That was AWESOME woman!! You are the best! I loved this story from beginning to end....and I can't wait for the sequel!

11/01/2007 10:57 pm
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enjoyed the romp, thank you.

Ella
11/01/2007 10:40 am
Epilogue: Second Chances         
This fic was FRIGGIN awesome im so glad u finsihed and if a sequal is on the way may it be filled with copious amounts of spuffy love lol>>

11/01/2007 10:01 am
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I love this wonderful funny sexy story.Yay for sequels. Yay Clem!

Veronica
11/01/2007 06:45 am
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You are so funny. At It Like Rabbits, huh? yeah that would describe those two to a T! I like the way you write a happier version of Buffy and Spike, very cute.

yay for the sequel! :)

Mr. Chaos
11/01/2007 04:43 am
Epilogue: Second Chances         
Wonderful ending...would have liked to see more with the council...but as you said, sequels.

The lack of Dawn worry mainly comes from the fact she isn'ta demon.She was a mystical key. I merely figured she would appear later on. Glory is still around (as she is from another dimension, and you said those demons were still around)
I'm glad you enjoyed the ending.

Glory and Dawn aren't (and won't be) in this 'verse. I have no interest in making things any more complicated than I've already made them! (And fyi, nothing more will be mentioned about the council either.)

kim
11/01/2007 12:34 am
Epilogue: Second Chances         
WHERE'S DAWN?!?!

Had to say it now!:D

Whoo! Babies really close together! And isn't Spike the Fertile Myrtle! Good thing Buffy has a Slayer body that snaps back.

10/31/2007 11:53 pm
Epilogue: Second Chances         
Well, we already have two babies with Chance and the new bun that's a-coming. Who needs another whiner? And her existence would throw this verse off it's kilter. I'm wondering how Dru will feel about being a grandmum ;)

10/31/2007 10:31 pm
Epilogue: Second Chances         
Oh yes....sequels are of the good. Want to see Chance's sib among other things.

Love this, love how in love they are and how hot they are for each other even now that there are changes. Love the hint of Lydia like interest from the Council (and Buffy's jealousy). Love the title of this chapter too BTW. Excellent, hon, as always.

Kathleen

jane
10/31/2007 10:25 pm
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That was absolutely brilliant. Sizzling repartee and great plot.Loved it.

12/22/2008 09:08 am
Harts Content         
It was a pleasure reading this once again - it's a wonderful Buffyverse-Spuffy story -

11/01/2007 10:51 pm
Harts Content         
i see i missed dru one chapter too soon. very good read, thank you.

10/31/2007 04:17 pm
Harts Content         
OH this was a completely delightful chapter. Too many gems to quote lest I'd just be copying the whole thing!

Love the reason for Anya fearing rabbits...makes perfect sense.

Lo the banter between them all. Love Giles reading from one of his special books to the baby.

Hope Clem somehow escaped the cleansing.

Kathleen
I'm glad you enjoyed it. One more to go, then comes the sequel.

As for Clem, he's too nice to be one of Lamashtu's. He totally made the cut. :)

jane
10/31/2007 08:59 am
Harts Content         
Yay thought this fic was finished, glad there's more. Hope Spikes redevelopment plans work out. Feel a bit sorry for Dru. Looking forward to more.
All shall be answered in the sequel...

I'm glad you liked! And there's one last chapter to go here. :)

Mr. Chaos
10/31/2007 04:58 am
Harts Content         
Unless something surprising happens, Dru is dust. Hope Clem is one of the demons saved...and I still thing smart, evil little Chance has another trick up her cute footsie pj sleeves.
Hee, you're definitely right about Chance. And Clem (although he never shows in this story, I still love him enough to spare him). As for Dru... *whistles innocently*

Stay tuned for the sequel, Mr. Chaos!

Kawaki
10/31/2007 04:22 am
Harts Content         
Is there a reason that Angel and Drusilla survived?
If you're asking *how* they survived, Angel was protected by the ritual (as pointed out by Sanvi). Drusilla has less of a clear-cut explanation: she was in an airtight container at the time, but there is more to it than that.

If you're asking if I'm keeping them around for a reason, the answer is yes. Stay tuned for the sequel. :)

Veronica
10/30/2007 10:00 pm
Harts Content         
Just when I thought everything was safe, you do this! Wow, I LOVE this story! Is Drusilla going to play mother to a new vampire race?
Muahahaha. No comment.

(Pssst sequel!)

:-)
06/11/2010 02:55 am
Light of Day         
 

11/01/2007 10:43 pm
Light of Day         
you have miss dru. very good chapter, thank you.

kim
10/30/2007 01:34 am
Light of Day         
Every occasion calls for a shagathon, eh? That's our heroes...
But of course! Hee.

10/29/2007 11:23 pm
Light of Day         
Glad there was a nod to the genuine history of love and sacrifice with Dru.

Tee hee on the new parent sexlessness.

They keep breaking hotels there won't be any place for them LOL.

Kathleen
Somehow I think they'll keep finding new places. ;)

Thanks for the review.

jane
10/29/2007 11:20 pm
Light of Day         
Ah a sweet, poignant ending. Lovely.
Thanks, jane.

randi giles
11/29/2007 03:38 am
Open Hearts         
I thank you for the curse of Abba playing over and over again in my head....da da da da da...ba ba bam bam ba...awsomeness...but i want more Oz(I'm greedy i cant help it)

11/05/2007 05:59 am
Open Hearts         
Is it wrong that when Giles threw the dagger, I really wanted him and Spike to do the "You threw a *knife* at my *head*!" bit from the movie? :) Yeah. Moving on...

Anyway, exciting climactic chapter. I'll even forgive you for the ABBA song. :)

11/01/2007 10:35 pm
Open Hearts         

delightful read, thank you.

jane
10/29/2007 11:11 pm
Open Hearts         
Fantastic climax. Didn't expect Spike to keep his heart beat, but it does solve a few problems. Loved it
And it could cause a couple more...

Thanks. :)

Nikkole
10/29/2007 10:14 pm
Open Hearts         
I really, REALLY liked this chapter! You described the fight so well, I could see it! I can't wait for more!!
Thanks, Nikkole, I'm glad that worked for you!

10/29/2007 04:23 pm
Open Hearts         
Wonderful climax (yeah....I DID SO mean it that way). Love you choosing to name the baby Chance (Amber would be pleased and honored).

Love the doublend triple crosses and Spike as a super male Slayer (with nothing left to kill *G*) is a hoot.

Kathleen
Hee, thanks Kathleen.

10/29/2007 05:36 am
Open Hearts         
Love it the original was very good but I so Love the new stuff you have added.
Oh, thanks, Diesa, I'm glad!

kim
10/29/2007 03:52 am
Open Hearts         
Well, babies do try.... :D

Great end battle.
Thanks, Kim! Yeah, she won't succeed for long. ;)

Mr. Chaos
10/29/2007 03:48 am
Open Hearts         
Wait...did you just kill Clem? With all the demons...

CLLLLLEEEEEEMMMMMMMMMMM!!!!!!
LOL. And no -- in my mind, Clem always made the cut. That was actually why I described the dead and gone as "her dark children". He's not evil enough to be related to her. :)

10/29/2007 12:39 am
Open Hearts         
First of all Abba - that is Tooo scary. Second - how did the Big Bad get stuck with Diaper Duty. Willow better get to work on that diaper genie. Loved the story.
He asked for it! Thanks for the review, ST.

Nikkole
10/28/2007 04:54 pm
Going Down         
Nice chapter! Faith having the last line here was perfect, lol! I can't wait for the next update..
Thanks, Nikkole!

10/28/2007 05:15 am
Going Down         
faith came around. very good read.

jane
10/27/2007 11:33 pm
Going Down         
What a ride, don't know if I'm on my head or my heels. This plot continues to twist and turn, I can't wait to see what happens next. loved it.
Thanks jane, I'm glad you're enjoying it.

10/27/2007 06:15 pm
Going Down         
So much action, so much going on! I'm going to have to re-read, to make sure I have everything straight. Throwing Faith into the mix was pure genius.
Thanks Luna, I hope all the plot didn't lose you, I know it's a lot to follow.

And yeah, I couldn't let Faith keep sleeping, not when she was right there in the hospital, you know? Not to mention she was the perfect wrench. >:D

Veronica
10/27/2007 12:30 am
Going Down         
Wow. Awesome fight scene between Faith and Buffy! Not to mention the witty dialogue between Spike and Lamashtu. My favorite line:

"I could make you come in an instant."

"Yeah well, so can most birds with a firm grip. Doesn't make you Jesus."

that made me laugh out loud! love love LOVE the way you write. Can't wait for more!
Haha, well you can thank Tori Amos for the Jesus bit, but I'm glad you're loving the story.

Thanks for the enthusiastic review, Veronica.

10/26/2007 11:58 pm
Going Down         
Okay Faith is on board (I kinda figured she would on once she got that out of her system). Now time to go save baby and daddy.

Love your voices but this from Xander was so letter perfect it SHOULD be canon: "Heading for the woods like an evil gazelle" EXCELLENT.

Lots of actiony goodness here as well as mythology. Really good job. You took the original cute bunnies fuck and mystical baby happens (an excellent story in and of itself) and made an epic that goes beyond just fluff or porn. Good job Nauti!!!

Kathleen
Aw, you're too sweet, Kathleen. Thanks for the rave. :)

kim
10/26/2007 10:56 pm
Going Down         
Tense!!

10/28/2007 05:01 am
Pitter Patter         
very good read and a nomination for cliffie of the year.
Oh, thanks!

jane
10/27/2007 08:23 pm
Pitter Patter         
Fantastic can't wait to read the next chapter.
Thanks, jane!

10/26/2007 10:55 pm
Pitter Patter         
Oh now THAT is an intense birth scene LOL. No simple "I'm gonna kill him" thoughts and screams of pain for the Slayer ... nope .... shifting entities and baby-napping demon gods abound.

Well the three are together now (yay, Oz IS one of them!!) ... can't wait to see how this plays out.

Um....since I like Abba, am I demonic???

Kathleen
No, you're not demonic, you've just fallen prey to their evil Nordic wiles.

I'm kidding, of course. No shame in music-lovin', it's all for the good. :D

Nikkole
10/26/2007 03:23 pm
Pitter Patter         
You have to stop doing this to us!! I really liked this chapter, I am glad that Willow found that paper under the chair. I can't wait for you to update again!
I have to stop and yet... I can't! :D

Thanks for the review.

kim
10/26/2007 10:59 am
Pitter Patter         
Well, well...

You do love the suspense, huh? :)
I do. I can't lie to you. ;)

Veronica
10/26/2007 06:57 am
Pitter Patter         
you. are. killing. me.

let's hope that Willow knows some Abba.

wonderful update, btw! :)
LOL. And, sorry. :)

:-)
06/10/2010 03:17 pm
Labor Pains         
 

10/26/2007 04:21 am
Labor Pains         
excellent update, thank you. regarding the author's note (previous chapter) much more evil.
Muahahaha.

10/25/2007 01:22 am
Labor Pains         
Oh, you totally went there. Which why you're made of awesome. That, and, you know, all the other good stuff you write. :)
You're awesomer for all the nice stuff you say. :)

Nikkole
10/24/2007 06:55 pm
Labor Pains         
OMG WOMAN!! You are the queen of cliffies I swear! I hope you update REALLY soon!
Haha, sorry, but cliffies are so much fun to write!

Veronica
10/24/2007 10:11 am
Labor Pains         
Wow. You REALLY went there! Thanks for the fantastic update!!
Thanks for the review!

jane
10/24/2007 08:58 am
Labor Pains         
Oh my god,that was so good. I can't wait for more. Absolurtely fantastic update.
Thanks, Jane!

Mr. Chaos
10/24/2007 05:42 am
Labor Pains         
I have enjoyed this story very much, though for a while I was pissed you went the way of Kick-The-Spike that so many writers turn to when they need drama. YOu handled it quick and cunning, though,with Joyce there to deliever what needed to besaid.

That said, I have a theory: Spike is the only onethat can use the amulet, because only he loves purely. Buffy hasn't, Angel hasn't...no one but Spike.

But wait...the vision!

Ah, but if you wanted to get someone to use the amulet when they would never use it, fearing itwould kill them...what would youdo?

Maybe give them a vision of their love in their rival's arms, claim their baby isn't theirs, so they have a death wish?
Yeah, I hate when writers do that! Er... eheh. Anyway, I'm glad it didn't turn you off entirely. I can't keep anyone mad at Spike for long.

And... you were right! About everything! And now I'm wondering if it was all too obvious... Next time I'll ask *you* to beta! :D

10/24/2007 04:19 am
Labor Pains         
He's like a... a virus. A flesh eating, biohazardous virus that gets into your system and never goes away, like rabies or ebola or that thing that's killing all the birds - LMAO. Buffy needs to knock him in the head.
Hee. Thanks for the review.

10/24/2007 02:06 am
Labor Pains         
You sure did!

So Spike's human at least for now. Glad Angel and Oz are on the way (I cannot believe I just said I was glad Angel is on his way to Spike!!!).

Loved the conversation between Angel and Buffy BTW....the quip about seeing her when he's human was a hoot.

Very tense with everything happening to all of them now. Great sequence with Spike and the visions.

LOVED Joyce not only having a clue but sharing with lost-and-dazed-in-labor!

"She'd forgiven Angel his past transgressions; why was Spike, a vampire capable of being a near-model citizen without a soul, judged on a harsher scale?" Ahhhh yes, my question exactly all through the show! Spike was ALWAYS judged on a human standard not vampire and Angel was treated like two seperate entities with all non souled actions written off completely. Great time to point that out.

Lovin' this.

Kathleen
Yeah, the subject of Spike's villainy (or lack thereof) was handled really unevenly on the show (probably because they liked him so much as a character, and had to keep him around somehow). He's a three-dimensional love interest - no wait, he's just plain evil because he has no soul! Make up your minds, people!

Thanks again for another thoughtful review, Kathleen. :)

10/24/2007 01:58 am
Labor Pains         
OMG - You did go there! This is so much more than just a "baby fic". LOL *peers around for next chapter*
I'm glad you think so!

02/09/2008 12:10 pm
Who's Your Daddy?         
You bloody fucking not be as evil as you seem!

10/26/2007 04:05 am
Who's Your Daddy?         
reserve opinion on author's note. very good read, thank you.

10/25/2007 01:07 am
Who's Your Daddy?         
Mmmm, good stuff. You bring the funny so well, but the last couple chapters show that you can do serious drama, too. Love seeing this all unfold with such intensity.

10/25/2007 01:06 am
Who's Your Daddy?         
Mmmm, good stuff. You bring the funny so well, but the last couple chapters show that you can do serious drama, too. Love seeing this all unfold with such intensity.
Thanks, Eowyn. :)

jane
10/22/2007 07:36 pm
Who's Your Daddy?         
Bloody hell that was a shocker, you've got me hanging by my fingernails now. I'd almost forgotten about Riley, started thing of him as almost benign. I haven't got a clue what's going to happen next. But I can't wait to find out. Brilliant chappie.

Nikkole
10/22/2007 03:14 am
Who's Your Daddy?         
I have been following this story for a long time, waiting for an update, I can't wait to see what comes up next!

10/22/2007 01:21 am
Who's Your Daddy?         
Better not be....*glares fiercely*
*runs quickly*

10/22/2007 01:07 am
Who's Your Daddy?         
Oh yes you are...you are evil, evil, evil and you love it!

Really a heart wrenching chapter...wow Nauti did serious angst!!!!! An did it well, I might add.

Really looking forward to the next part. I Know you won't kill our Spikey so I'm not biting my nails. I can't see the happily ever afters with Angel either so I'm trusting you, sweetie.

Kathleen
Yes, trust me! And I'm thrilled that the angst worked for you; I really worried over that bit.

10/22/2007 12:53 am
Who's Your Daddy?         
"What, I'm just asking!"

"Thank you very much!" Spike made a gesture at Buffy. "You hear that? I resisted!"

LMAO - you know you are in a lot of trouble for this chapter. You better get writing.
Hee.

10/21/2007 11:51 pm
Who's Your Daddy?         
I *know* you're not as evil as you seem...you haven't led us astray yet, but still...

Next chapter = getting rid of Angel and having everything be ok, right? Right?

You're very creative with the evil demons you've created; always a pleasure to read.
Thanks for the compliment!

As for all your wishes coming true in the next chapter? Not so much.

:D

:-)
06/10/2010 02:49 pm
A Chance In Sunnyhell         
 

10/26/2007 03:51 am
A Chance In Sunnyhell         
they never did utilize anya's long experience properly. very good read, thank you.

jane
10/22/2007 06:57 pm
A Chance In Sunnyhell         
Really nifty solution. Buffy does have her moments.Great update.

10/21/2007 06:45 pm
A Chance In Sunnyhell         
"She's uh... running a parts check on Spike. But we're hoping it's an express service, like Jiffy Lube." - LMAO - this whole chapter is way funny. Not so sure how pure Buffy is at this moment.
LOL. Thanks.

10/20/2007 11:58 pm
A Chance In Sunnyhell         
OOoooo now they're on to something. Love Anya being answer girl...after 1100 years she had to be full of lots of answers had they but asked.

Kathleen
Yep, Anya's always good for the demon knowledge. :)

veronica
10/20/2007 11:14 pm
A Chance In Sunnyhell         
i'm dying here! seriously. need to know what happens next!!
Next part is up! But you're probably not going to be happy with it...

10/26/2007 03:30 am
Fuzzy Details         
hilarious chapter, thank you.

veronica
10/20/2007 10:59 pm
Fuzzy Details         
oh. crap.

10/20/2007 06:51 pm
Fuzzy Details         
Slightly homoerotic...tee hee, that subtle slash undertone of Spangel. That shook them up!

Love Spike trying to get Angel to flash a bit of fang at Riley....wicked boy *G*.

Not good to have the police get involved. Neighbors can be a pain in the neck....or is that Spike?

Kathleen
They're so gay for each other. Gotta love that about them.

jane
10/20/2007 01:57 pm
Fuzzy Details         
Ah poor Spike I so hope Buffy comes 'round soon and he gets to rub the Suffy loving in Angels giant forehead.
Trust Sunydale police to turn up in force for a minor transcretion. Get out and find some real crime, losers.
Hee hee.

:-)
06/10/2010 02:02 pm
Big Babies         
 

10/26/2007 03:17 am
Big Babies         
i hope spike just leaves angel there fighting. angel always was an ass. very good read, thank you.

jane
10/20/2007 01:34 pm
Big Babies         
Really exciting chapter, loved it.
Hissed loudly during Angel's anti Spike rant. Why does he always think it's all about him. Giggled at the banter in the car on the way to the hospital. Great update.


10/20/2007 08:44 am
Big Babies         
I've hunted with him. I've seen what he's capable of.

That line amuses me, since he learned most of that torture business from Angel anyway. Come on, Buffy--use your brain! (and yeah, kind of a silly way to end that review, considering I know how it ends...mostly ;)

10/19/2007 02:12 am
Big Babies         
God Angel pisses me off. Who made Spike the monster? Angel! He just had to say something to sully Spike in Buffy's mind. Grrrrr arghhhhh.

Okay, they are safe in your hands, I know it. Tell on oh storyteller.

Kathleen

10/26/2007 01:08 am
Slaying For Two         
angel. i'm sure spike will be so thrilled. very good read, thank you.

10/18/2007 08:40 pm
Slaying For Two         
Oh perfect! Angel....just the right person to mix in. (meant sarcastically at first). Actually he is since the baby needs three not human's to protect it. Assuming Buffy registers as human in spite of being a Slayer I wonder if Oz will be the third....hum....going to have to wait to see.

Glad Buffy had sense enough to "get it" about Tara in spite of calling Oz friend. I loved Oz too but Tara and Willow just were so sweet together. Then again I thought .... hum... threesome! Then they killed Tara (^&*^&%^^) and I kinda wanted Oz back for Willow instead of Kennedy because she didn't seem to really care about our Willow and then.......

Think I've got any emotional investment in any of these characters? LOL. I like my couples to LOVE! That's why I enjoy your stories, you get the love thing in. Nothing like love and passion for really hot story (or life).

Kathleen

veronica
10/18/2007 10:25 am
Slaying For Two         
I swear you keep throwing these curve balls at me! I should've known....

10/18/2007 06:06 am
Slaying For Two         
I really wish that I could reread it at this time...but with my full student status and insane teachers who think I have no life outside of school, that just isn't possible. Could you please let me know which chapters have major changes in them though? I could read small chunks ;) School work be damned...

10/18/2007 03:55 am
Slaying For Two         
Meh! Just had to leave us with that cliffhanger, eh?? This story is sooo bloody brilliant! I love it!! :D
Not to worry, I won't be leaving you there for long. I'm glad you're enjoying it. :D

10/18/2007 03:46 am
Slaying For Two         
Oh no, not Angel! Just when they were bickering so nicely. Loved the Spike busting up Buffy's date.
Ha. If it's bickering you like, that's nowhere near the end of it.

fyreburned
10/18/2007 03:40 am
Slaying For Two         
KNEW he had to be the Third Warrior...
Usually I hold Riley in great disdain; however, I'm wondering if you will write characterize him as a better person.
And, hey, gotta love those babyfics--- anything with Spike as a Buffy-lovin' proud papa to be, all Sweet 'N Cuddly... just warms the cockles of yer heart.
Then, there's poor old Rupes... fella can't get a girl, or at least keep one (alive, that is...) not to mention, keep a regular lay around!
A Fascinating read...I know I've read bunches on your site...don't know how I missed this one?
Am waiting anxiously til the next chappie...
~~K.~~
~~fyreburned~~
fyreburned@yahoo.com
Hey K.! I never posted this complete on my site - that could be why you missed it. I've been posting roughs on an LJ community for the past year or so. (But I beg you not to go there to read the rest - still revising as I post here!)

The warriors may still surprise you. And I actually like Riley, so I don't bash him (or anyone, for that matter) in my fic. He does have a key role in this later on, and not a very pleasant one. Poor guy. Speaking of poor guys, I will tell you one thing: By the end of this series, Giles WILL get laid!

I'm working on getting the next chappie up by tomorrow. Thanks for the review. :D



10/18/2007 03:26 am
Slaying For Two         
Ooops?
Indeed.

10/18/2007 02:23 am
Slaying For Two         
I loved this story when I first read it years ago and it seeems even better this time around
Heh, well, I'm glad you think so -- it's been revised a million times since then. In fact, this chapter might even be new to you (I posted it rough on my LJ two years ago, but never on my site.) From here on in, everything should be new for you. Enjoy!

10/26/2007 12:54 am
Pre-Natal Attraction         
spike's right, again, and no one listens. very good read, thank you.

10/18/2007 02:45 am
Pre-Natal Attraction         
Buffy and SPike just could not be more disturbing. They need a good argument. Rubs hands together - now for some wicked Evil.
They're not disturbing, they're in love! Sheesh. ;)

jane
10/17/2007 09:16 pm
Pre-Natal Attraction         
Well I didn't see that coming. Poor Giles he never has any luck with women. She seemed such a nice girl as well. Brilliant, can't wait dfor more.
He may get a little something yet... ;)

veronica
10/17/2007 01:29 am
Pre-Natal Attraction         
i'm loving the banter between Spike and Buffy. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Thanks veronica!

10/17/2007 12:09 am
Pre-Natal Attraction         
I'll say it again - funniest Spuffy banter, ever! This fic is just so intriguing and mysterious...poor Sanvi!
Thanks Luna! I'm really glad you're enjoying the ride.

10/16/2007 11:14 pm
Pre-Natal Attraction         
Oh dear, I was afraid of just this! Poor Giles, looses another chane for a shag....off for a cup o tea then.

"saw herself for the first time through the eyes of love" Yup, he's got it bad..you can always tell when they still want you no matter how you look.

I really am enjoying the emotional undertones of this one. You can get a sense of genuine love and caring in the way they behave toward each other...no merely lust and desire (not that there's a damned thing wrong with lust and desire mind you).

Kathleen
Giles may have a chance yet...

And thanks, again.

jane
10/17/2007 08:04 pm
Hot Cross Bunnies         
I hope our baddie isn't as formidable as she seems. Shades of Glory maybe. Excellent update.

10/16/2007 10:56 pm
Hot Cross Bunnies         
Oooo bad feeling about the new body.

Love Buffy not putting up with either Xander or Spike.

"I, on the other hand," he spoke over him as he sauntered out of the kitchen, "choose not to hurt anyone anymore. Which one earns a cookie, hm?" Yup, exactly the way I see Spike and Anya (or Angel for that matter).

Kathleen

:-)
06/10/2010 01:04 pm
Craving and Caving         
 

10/24/2007 11:40 pm
Craving and Caving         
"Look, it's not that I don't fancy a little acute schizophrenia in my women every now and then, I do,"

Ha ha HA! I'd forgotten about Spike's late-night visitor, though I definitely remembered the erection-that-wouldn't-end. It's kind of remarkable how a story about bunny sex got so darn plotty! It's a good balance, though, of the plot and the smut and the funny.
Thanks. The plotting of this was in reaction to someone asking me if I would ever write something with a plot. Damn her all to hell. ;D

10/20/2007 04:28 am
Craving and Caving         
delightful read, thank you.

jane
10/17/2007 07:32 pm
Craving and Caving         
Great chapter, particulary loved the Spike and Joyce bonding.
Thanks, I like them bonding too.

10/16/2007 02:04 am
Craving and Caving         
YAY Joyce and the drapes of the inevitable! Poor Spike with the mystical cock ring of pain. Yay you turning out great story along with hot sex.

Kathleen
LOL mystical cock ring of pain!

Thanks Kath.

:-)
06/10/2010 11:08 am
Expecting The Unexpected         
 

12/10/2007 09:53 pm
Expecting The Unexpected         
Adding to what Pfeifferpack said about William's education, let us not forget he also could read Latin with ease, knew a bit of Italian...but couldn't speak German. Spike probably knows tons of language--human and demon ;) Meh, he's an egg head--just a sexy one.

11/28/2007 03:56 am
Expecting The Unexpected         
Hilarious chapter!

10/24/2007 07:44 pm
Expecting The Unexpected         
Ooh! This is the chapter! See, the first time I read this fic, I loved this exchange:

"Sun goes down, Spike comes up."

"Clothes come off." He sat on the bed, raised her shirt and kissed the small of her peach-soft back. "Spike goes down."

"Not tonight, Spike doesn't."

He raised his head and ventured, "Buffy goes down?"

Then, when you started working on it again, I reread, and this was the one bit I remembered the best. And it still makes me giggle the third time through. It's that hopeful "Buffy goes down?" that kills me every time.

10/24/2007 07:42 pm
Expecting The Unexpected         
Ooh! This is the chapter! See, the first time I read this fic, I loved this exchange:

"Sun goes down, Spike comes up."

"Clothes come off." He sat on the bed, raised her shirt and kissed the small of her peach-soft back. "Spike goes down."

"Not tonight, Spike doesn't."

He raised his head and ventured, "Buffy goes down?"

Then, when you started working on it again, I reread, and this was the one bit I remembered the best. And it still makes me giggle the third time through. It's that hopeful "Buffy goes down?" that kills me every time.
Hee. Can't say he doesn't try...

I'm flattered that that little exchange stuck with you. :)

10/16/2007 01:45 am
Expecting The Unexpected         
You know I don't think its that much of a character stretch. William obviously had some education coming from (at least) middle class. At that time in history French would have been part of his training. My guess is that if he spoke Fyral he remembered French.

Love the bonding and love Joyce and Giles coming around. In spite of the threat the happy family gives me a big smile.

Kathleen
You know, I never thought of that! What a fabulous justification, I'm totally using that from now on.

Thanks for all your lovely reviews. :)

Awww :-)
06/10/2010 10:12 am
Maternal Instincts         
 

10/19/2007 10:21 pm
Maternal Instincts         
very good read with a sweet chapter ending. thank you.

jane
10/15/2007 08:24 am
Maternal Instincts         
Excellent update, I'm glad they've finally got someone on their side. I loved the indeterminate evil bit, this fic is funny.
Heh, thanks jane.

10/15/2007 12:06 am
Maternal Instincts         
"Joyce sighed, accepting the fact that she was welcoming into her home her pregnant slayer of a daughter and the vampire of indeterminate evil who'd knocked her up in the first place. Magically. No one said parenting was easy, but there were no support groups for this. "Do you need any help with packing?"

For some reason this just tickles the hell out of me. In a way it's almost like the reaction from a non fan to the whole show in general....put it into words and it just sounds.....weird.... but in context when you "get it" it's only natural and right, just like Spike and Buffy together.

Lovin this.

Kathleen
Aw, thanks.

10/14/2007 11:15 pm
Maternal Instincts         
:D Love it...and love how often you're doing the updates!! I'm never disappointed! Poor Joyce...hope she doesn't have to clean up Spuffy goo in the kitchen.
Haha, eeeewww, Spuffy goo.

:-)
06/10/2010 09:43 am
Good Cryptkeeping         
 

:-)
06/10/2010 09:18 am
Good Cryptkeeping         
 

10/31/2007 11:38 pm
Good Cryptkeeping         
Good chapter! My only complaint IMHO is the use of "baby daddy"...an unfortunate term used by low lifes. Guess I'm old fashioned that way.
Wow, I'm sorry the term is that offensive to you...

However, Buffy uses it jokingly here in reference to guests on Jerry Springer et al. Hence the earlier "Chicks going Springer on you" comment.

10/14/2007 11:00 pm
Good Cryptkeeping         
Love the banter between them in this chapter (was that added or did I miss it before, I admit it's been a long while since I read it the first time but I don't remember). Really nice give and take couply stuff. Sweet!

I can see her point about the crypt for the baby. Spike needs to reenter the human world if he's going to be a daddy...no way around it.

Kathleen
That was all there before, I think. I'm glad you're enjoying it!

jane
10/14/2007 12:23 pm
Good Cryptkeeping         
Another stupendous chapter. Loved it.
Thanks!

10/24/2007 06:36 am
Cryptic Massages         
"Mexicans give me heartburn."

"You mean Mexican. Mexican gives you heartburn."

Hee! Awesome! This fic is just chock full of the kind of writing that makes me think, "I wish I'd come up with that!"
Aw, thanks! That's politically-incorrect Spike for you.

10/15/2007 05:02 am
Cryptic Massages         
"Oh yeah."

10/15/2007 03:02 am
Cryptic Massages         
Wicked SPike Sexgod come to my house.
I'll send him right over as soon as he's done with me.

10/13/2007 04:54 pm
Cryptic Massages         
I love this story SO much! I'm even drawing out the fun by not rushing over to your site to read the ending...

You're very good with writing the banter...reading your dialogue is pure pleasure.
I'm glad you're not rushing, since I'm revising everything as I post here. So you'll get the full complete completeness, rather than the roughs that are up at my site now.

And thanks for the kind words.

10/13/2007 02:48 pm
Cryptic Massages         
Loved the argument with the unfortunate vampire in the middle. And the art work in the restaurant. :)

jane
10/13/2007 12:59 pm
Cryptic Massages         
Super chapter. I love how Buffy and Spike have struck out on there own. Was worried for a moment when they had their little spat. Glad to see they can work things out, without falling out. Stuff the Scoobies, they're control freaks. Can't wait for more.

10/13/2007 07:10 am
Cryptic Massages         
OMG I love the banner first off. Spike and Buffy make such cute bunnies!!! XD
Oh, and I could totally see Anya saying-
"Possibly Spike," Anya stated the obvious, "unless she's on top."

Too too much!

Wait...no...not enough! More, please! :D
Hee hee, yay, bunny banner! I'm glad you like it -- I toiled on that one for a while today. :D

That's our Anya -- focusing on the important things in life.

Thanks for the review, always appreciated!

jane
10/13/2007 12:41 pm
All Or Nothing         
Absolutely loved that chappie. After Buffy's reprimand to Willow about magic, you'd think she'd stop throwing spells around.

10/12/2007 04:41 am
All Or Nothing         
and they were doing so well, then the last section. evil. not the section, the author. very good read, thank you.

10/11/2007 07:51 pm
All Or Nothing         
How lovely it would have been if Buffy HAD known what was real on the show. Hence the need for fic like this one...catharsis! Excellent.

Glad you are reposting here because I followed this one as you wrote it and it's been a while so I am getting a refresher!

Kathleen

10/11/2007 03:10 am
All Or Nothing         
Hee! in the midst of all the lovey-dovey stuff and Scooby-dissing, I'd almost forgotten that there were bad guys about!
Yeah, you don't really have to worry about them yet. I know I didn't. ;)

vellum
05/14/2010 08:55 pm
Of Undead Bondage         
he wanted to raise the baby in the crypt... how was that going to work when it got older. "Oh where does the school bus drop you off?" "Restfield Cemetary!"

10/15/2007 02:47 am
Of Undead Bondage         
Anya is such a great character - she can say absolutely anything.
Okay who bonded them together? The mystery builds.
Anya, go-to girl for guileless honesty. There should be one of her in every group of friends.

10/12/2007 04:26 am
Of Undead Bondage         
love spike reactions: to buffy asking him to submit to the spell, to the bonding spell and to giles (the ass) not wanting to remove the spell. like to think they both still believe.

10/24/2007 06:20 am
Split Decision         
Aww, this chapter gets to me, the way Spike gets upset about her not wanting to keep the baby, and then the scare... And on a completely different note:

"And although the jury's still out on this, I'm pretty sure Hank's one hundred percent human!"

Ha! teeheehee! I wouldn't be so sure...

Hee! Thanks for quoting stuff, it gives me happies.

10/20/2007 10:25 pm
Split Decision         
Hmm, neckties... LOL

10/15/2007 02:08 am
Split Decision         
Okay - not at all believing that Joyce fell for that dumb shrimp routine. "I thought you said, 'tie me up.'" Oh yeah. LOL
Hey, Buffy had to hit Joyce over the head with the "I'm a Slayer" stick before she finally caught on. The woman is prone to denial.

jane
10/13/2007 11:41 am
Split Decision         
Aw poor Joyce, I'm sure she'll come 'round once baby comes a long
Loved it

10/08/2007 11:31 pm
Split Decision         
"With a devious grin...." glad to see buffy enjoying some part of this. fun read, thank you.
Well come on, how can she not enjoy the sex?

10/15/2007 01:57 am
Quickening         
LOL at Spike.

jane
10/13/2007 10:50 am
Quickening         
Loved the it's not a rodent quip. You've gotta laugh.
Heh, thanks.

10/08/2007 11:15 pm
Quickening         
paying way more attention to spike/buffy than the plot line. joyce asking here to pickup the panties, is beautiful. fun read, thank you.
Oh, you don't have to pay attention the plot line. God knows I didn't. ;)

Glad you liked.

:-)
06/09/2010 07:03 pm
A Demon In The Sack         
 

10/26/2007 08:52 pm
A Demon In The Sack         
Ooo, the baddie appears. Wonder what he wants.

10/24/2007 06:08 am
A Demon In The Sack         
I think the thing that distinguishes your writing for me is the way you manage to make it incredibly funny and incredibly sexy and incredibly in character, all at the same time. I'd quote all my favorite lines, but there's too many of them!

10/24/2007 06:07 am
A Demon In The Sack         
I think the thing that distinguishes your writing for me is the way you manage to make it incredibly funny and incredibly sexy and incredibly in character, all at the same time. I'd quote all my favorite lines, but there's too many of them!
Aw, you're too kind Eowyn. Thanks for the review. :)

10/15/2007 01:49 am
A Demon In The Sack         
Spike and Buffy are too too funny. Love seeing Oz pop in. we don't see nearly enough of him.
I agree, Oz is underused in Spuffy fic. I let him shine a little in this one, later on.

jane
10/13/2007 10:48 am
A Demon In The Sack         
This fic is great fun. Really enjoying it
I'm glad!

10/04/2007 05:54 am
A Demon In The Sack         
Am really enjoying this. There's a lovely balance of funny, snarky, sexy and ominous! *sneaks off to your LJ to read more*
No, don't! Eh, it's too late, isn't it? I still need to revise all that LJ stuff... It gets better, I swear...!

In any case, thanks for the review, jbj. I really appreciate it.

10/03/2007 08:50 am
A Demon In The Sack         
Read this on your LJ already- still adore it. Oh, and that Tofts lady inserted those dead rabbits up her vagina. So terribly disgusting...
Yes, haha, tactfully put. ;D

Although Anya has a different perspective about that event, of course, as we find out later.

BTW, I'm revising much of what was on the LJ (that was technically rough draft), so some of this might go a little differently. That is if you have any interest in a re-read.

:-)
06/09/2010 06:53 pm
A Bunny In The Oven         
 

kimazon
10/24/2007 07:55 pm
A Bunny In The Oven         
How is it I've never read this? I've read all the other nauti fic I'm sure!

It's fantastic so far!!! Loving it!

kimazon
10/24/2007 07:55 pm
A Bunny In The Oven         
How is it I've never read this? I've read all the other nauti fic I'm sure!

It's fantastic so far!!! Loving it!
I'm glad!

10/24/2007 06:00 am
A Bunny In The Oven         
I love this fic. Like, I want to marry this fic and have little half-human half-fic babies with this fic. Which, I guess, given the subject matter, is sort of appropriate. I've said this before, but I'm so glad you're reposting your stuff, because it gives me an excuse to reread it all. :)
I'd be honored to godmother your little half-fic babies, Eowyn - even if they ARE freaky little scraps of paper with cartoon legs and sneakers.

Glad you like it enough to reread. :)

10/15/2007 01:41 am
A Bunny In The Oven         
ROFLMAO
BBQ?

10/03/2007 02:42 am
A Bunny In The Oven         
very good read, thank you. spike really can push all her buttons.
Alll her buttons, wink wink.

DeanSamWinchesterfan
10/02/2007 10:08 pm
A Bunny In The Oven         
Good story so far.Update soon. I love this so far. I like that Buffy panicked about maybe being knocked up with a bunny.I love Spike's joy about knocking her up.
Spike is weird that way. I'm glad you liked.

jane
10/02/2007 09:09 pm
A Bunny In The Oven         
What can i say, But Loved. Great to see B/S being so feisty and still getting on.
Gotta love the feisty. Thanks jane :)

10/02/2007 08:46 pm
A Bunny In The Oven         
I have read this one every time you've updated and am excited it will be completed YAY YOU!!!

Laugh every time I read this line:
"Oh, cute!" Willow cooed without thinking. When all eyes rested on her, she amended, "In a... really creepy way."
Because each time I read it I have just thought the same thing..LOL

This is another that never gets old:
"Who's fault is it really, huh?" Buffy accused him, "The witch who made us into bunnies, the boy who put us in the same box, or the bunny who molested me?"
Somehow the picture of Spike as a molesting bunny is too too funny!

I really am so pleasedthis is here. I was excited when you started the sequel to Humping Like Bunnies (another favorite fic) and kept looking for updates. Now I'll get notified here and I am a happy camper.

Kathleen
Loving your reviews. Thanks again.

10/02/2007 06:45 pm
A Bunny In The Oven         
what a fun story! Looking forward to the next installment.
Thanks! There are thirteen more installments up as of today. :D

10/02/2007 03:44 pm
A Bunny In The Oven         
This premise has all kinds of potential - can't wait to read the rest!

(I'm not usually a fan of baby fics, but as long as B & S stay true to character and don't go all fuzzy, I'm game)
(See "I'm not a fan of baby fics either" reply below. Can't stand babies or the thought of pregnancy, and yet, there I went with a whole entire story. I don't get it either.)

Thanks for the review, Luna. I'm really glad you're enjoying my fic.

10/02/2007 01:28 pm
A Bunny In The Oven         
Awww - not a fan of baby fics, but this is sweet and fun.
Yeah, I'm not a fan of baby fics either. Hell, I'm not a fan of babies. Or pregnancy. Or anything like that. Why I started (and kept on) writing a story about Buffy having one with Spike, I have no idea. Freaking Saber and her wanton wiles...

Anyway, uh, I hope you like it! ;D

veronica
10/02/2007 08:33 am
A Bunny In The Oven         
wow you have a wonderful way of hooking your reader. awesome job! keep em coming please! :)
Thanks, I'm glad you like it!