Break You by TammyDevil666

alým
02/04/2008 04:46 pm
Chapter 15         
it was cute, I loved it:)

11/10/2007 06:21 am
Chapter 15         
fluff (as in this case) can be a very good read, thank you.

11/10/2007 03:47 am
Chapter 15         
Fluff can be of the good! Life is fluffless enough without our escape being that way all the time. Nice sweet story.

Kathleen

11/09/2007 07:28 pm
Chapter 15         
Yay! Happy ending! You're right, it did get fluffy, but dark to fluffy is good.

11/09/2007 07:27 am
Chapter 14         
fun read, thank you. think red needs to have oz around a little bit more. it has to be frustrating.

Nikkole
11/05/2007 08:21 pm
Chapter 13         
LOL!! I really like that last part!

Ann
11/05/2007 06:30 pm
Chapter 13         
Ooh, I knew the Initiative was going to get brought up again. Can't wait to find out just how much the'll be playing teh villain in this story. I always loved Oz, but Tara was hard competition. Without Tara, I hope we get to see a lot more of the cool werewolf, but hopefully not in an Initiative cell. Spike, Oz, Willow, Buffy as a normal girl but being way too involved with the supernatural... Oh, the possibilities!
Good luck with the rest of the story!

11/09/2007 07:15 am
Chapter 12         
very good read, thank you. although i will miss dru.

11/04/2007 12:32 am
Chapter 12         
AHA she heard the important part. Well Dru's out of the way now. No more trouble for our pair on the horizen at any rate.

Kathleen

11/03/2007 11:14 pm
Chapter 12         
Great chapter.

Nikkole
11/03/2007 01:57 pm
Chapter 11         
OOOOO.....that can't be good!

11/02/2007 05:35 am
Chapter 11         
dru is always entertaining, but her planning is not always up to the task. very good read, thank you.

11/01/2007 08:40 pm
Chapter 11         
Great chapter, can't wait to see what happens next.

Cara
10/31/2007 05:18 am
Chapter 10         
I'm loving this story, you're doing a great job.

sara
10/29/2007 05:40 pm
Chapter 9         
really great chapter!

10/28/2007 06:15 am
Chapter 9         
very good read. bonus points for buffy dusting angel. love spike's uncertainty at the end of the chapter.

Jasbrico
10/28/2007 03:17 am
Chapter 9         
A very pleasurable ride with plentiful detail, a solid plot, and the characters sounded very close to canon (other than the obvious changes you made to each role).

10/26/2007 08:20 pm
Chapter 8         
could have listened to harm annoy angel for a long time. fun while it lasted. good read, thank you.

Nikkole
10/25/2007 11:02 pm
Chapter 8         
NICE!! I like it!! I love the ending of this one, with her claiming him back....perfect ending!! I can't wait to see more...

sara
10/24/2007 04:40 am
Chapter 7         
really good chapter, loved it!

10/26/2007 08:11 pm
Chapter 6         
i can't beleive she dated that guy, either. very good read, thank you.

10/20/2007 02:04 am
Chapter 6         
Ahh! Is Willow the Slayer, or just lucky? Loving it!

sara
10/20/2007 12:10 am
Chapter 6         
very unexpected twist, can't wait for more!

10/18/2007 06:36 am
Chapter 5         
that's ok buffy, riley is very forgettable. very good read, thank you.

sara
10/18/2007 02:00 am
Chapter 5         
loved the chapter!

10/17/2007 09:14 pm
Chapter 5         
I'd forget about the not normal Riley too....worried with him showing up in the story. Trouble ahead from both Angelus and Riley, not a good combination.

Kathleen

alým
02/02/2008 09:52 pm
Chapter 4         

Yeah,Spike,wipe Angelus' touch away ;)

10/16/2007 04:48 am
Chapter 4         
love the tale, thank you.

sara
10/16/2007 04:18 am
Chapter 4         
poor spike and evil cliffhanger, can't wait to see what happens next. i don't think angelus would be too happy.

10/16/2007 03:18 am
Chapter 4         
Willow's an idiot. Hard to believe she'd wait four days for Buffy to show up.

10/16/2007 03:15 am
Chapter 3         
Oh yeah - another dumb Spike plan - like Angel is going to kick his butt and find Buffy anyway.

10/14/2007 03:03 am
Chapter 3         
very good read, thank you.

sara
10/14/2007 12:35 am
Chapter 3         
excellent chapter, glad buffy is safe for the time being.

JO
10/13/2007 08:16 pm
Chapter 3         
Great chapter Tammy , this is really good , I just hope that gross animal does'nt hurt spike or Buffy again. Is the slayer going to turn out to be Faith?

10/16/2007 03:12 am
Chapter 2         
That was gruesome Tammy D - glad you didn't pull back tho. If you're going to horrible, then go all the way.

10/12/2007 09:49 pm
Chapter 2         
angelus at his best. spike getting fed up. good read, thank you.

margaret
10/11/2007 11:54 pm
Chapter 2         
great story, can't wait for more

sara
10/11/2007 09:19 pm
Chapter 2         
wow, that was a little hard to read, but i think you wrote it very well.

10/12/2007 10:50 pm
Chapter 1         
Cool story Tammy D and cool banner.

where Angelus and him - should be he and Angelus.

goldenusagi
10/10/2007 01:22 pm
Chapter 1         
Hmm, vampy Spike and human Buffy. I like. And evil Angel! Yay!

sara
10/10/2007 05:42 am
Chapter 1         
loving this so far!

Jasbrico
10/10/2007 05:06 am
Chapter 1         
Interesting, however somewhat familiar plot line. Has Buffy been called as the Slayer in this story? It doesn't seem like she is based on her inability to sense Spike and Angel while dancing at the Bronze...
I look forward to more chapters to see where you take the plot and characters.

10/10/2007 05:06 am
Chapter 1         
always preferred angelus to angel. never liked either charcter, but preferred angelus. considering where this is posted should really enjoy the read. very good beginning.

Izzy
10/09/2007 10:43 pm
Chapter 1         
Very interesting beginning!
I don't usually go for Human AU stories, but the idea of vamp Spike and Buffy, more like the girl she'd be without the Slayer, sounds great. Even without the soul nonsense, Angelus' evil is going to get compared to Spike and show how unique the punk vampire is. I'm really looking forward to reading how this Buffy fights back or defies Angelus, and how Spike's feelings for her grow.
Good luck!