Fate by moluvsnumber17

tamisnead
07/11/2016 11:52 pm
Epilogue         
I wanted to let you know I've really been enjoying your story, unfortunately the last two chapters seem to be missing.

08/23/2013 03:26 pm
Epilogue         

I loved this story and your original character Camilla - she is a wonderful child character.   Enjoyed very much reading your other works as well.  I like how you used all of the characters and even that you managed to bring back Angel. 

04/02/2013 12:58 pm
Epilogue         
I really Loved your Story :)

11/02/2012 12:20 am
Epilogue         
Uh oh, same problem again no text just horizontal lines.???
I think it's because the text is also black. I'm not sure how to change the text color. You can see it if you hightlight it. I'll see if I can figure out how to change the font color.

random observer
11/10/2012 12:16 pm
Chapter 16         
Hi, the text is black on a black background - changed the coloring option to light and could read it.

sayra
10/25/2012 03:10 am
Chapter 16         
Yeah same hear. Only blank pages.

Saggit
10/25/2012 02:34 am
Chapter 16         
Maybe it's me, or maybe the story needs to update somehow with each chapter, but I'm only seeing blank space above with horizontal lines.  Just writing this to let you know.  Best of luck--been enjoying what you've written, thus far. :)

10/21/2012 08:04 am
Chapter 15         
How about just putting a soul back in the bastard? But no let's hurt Spike to get the answers. That's a much better plan.

TwilightChild
10/11/2012 12:56 pm
Chapter 14         
I'm very glad you decided to finish this story. It has kept me reading all the way through, well into 7 in the morning. I greatly look forward to your next update.

Amaya
10/09/2012 11:54 pm
Chapter 14         

I liked the chapter. Please try to update as soon as you can.

10/09/2012 11:41 pm
Chapter 14         
Crap! Why would her father steal her from the airport and take her to a warehouse? And who in the hell called Buffy?

Tessica
10/16/2012 10:47 am
Chapter 12         
Loving the story, hope to see more updates soon!

10/02/2012 07:11 am
Chapter 12         
Since your note states you have finished this story I definitely picked the right time to find it.
I wonder if Spike was kicked out of the 'Hell' dimension for having too much good in him.   

cheryl
01/18/2012 12:13 am
Chapter 11         
Please finish this?  I am really enjoying it.  Kind regards, Cheryl

07/20/2011 10:52 pm
Chapter 11         
Tell me it doesn't end there!

em_wishes
06/23/2011 01:22 pm
Chapter 11         

I've only just started reading this and now I can't wait for the next update - horrid cliffhanger ;o)))

Cheryl
06/09/2011 01:31 pm
Chapter 11         
Lovely chapter - cannot wait for the next installment!  Thank you and kind regards, Cheryl

Cheryl
05/05/2011 11:19 pm
Chapter 10         
Hi, I don't normally read unfinished fics anymore (too depressing if they remain unfinished) but I just read this one.  It is super fabulous, and I cannot wait to read future installments.  Please keep up the good work!  Kind regards, cheryl

More please please please :-) :-) :-)
06/05/2010 05:15 pm
Chapter 9         
 

More
06/05/2010 05:14 pm
Chapter 9         
 

05/12/2009 05:18 am
Chapter 9         
delightful chapter, thank you.

05/08/2009 11:16 pm
Chapter 9         
So happy to see an update!

More please.

Fangfaceandrea
05/08/2009 03:56 am
Chapter 9         
hee like Camilla wouldn't approve . XD

Nice chapter.

07/20/2011 10:25 pm
Chapter 8         
That took long enough!

Sweet. :-)
06/05/2010 05:07 pm
Chapter 8         
 

10/17/2008 08:28 pm
Chapter 8         
very good read, thank you.

10/16/2008 02:50 pm
Chapter 8         
I'm really happy about the update. 

I like how you treat the characters as if they actually were grown-ups.  *gasp* 

I'll be interested to find out how you will handle Buffy and the fact that she gives everyone else's opinion more weight than her own concerning Spike.  I've never really understood that.  I mean, arguably, she's spent way more time with him than anyone else under a huge variety of circumstances.  They don't seem to be in possession of the facts to truly back up their opinion.  I assume it's a low self-esteem issue on her part.  (Sorry, my musings.)

Given the structure of your story and how Buffy is haunted by Martin,  I assume he will be making an in person appearance at some point.  I look forward to that.  Although...I am wondering, since so far he has been portrayed solely as an insensitive, heavy-handed jerk and not as well-rounded and well, as real as the other characters,  what did Buffy ever see in him?  There must have been something.  Hope to find out - maybe in a flashback?  I think that balance needs to be there given your story.  I don't think he can just have been evil in sheep's clothing.

A nice, sensitive portayal of adults with complicated lives and feelings.  Refreshingly different.  I'm looking forward to more.

10/17/2008 08:20 pm
Chapter 7         
good chapter. delightful ending, thank you.

11/04/2012 05:48 am
Chapter 6         
This koolaid sounds just like Buffy's lemonade  

:-)
06/05/2010 04:54 pm
Chapter 6         
 

Tish Tash
05/19/2008 10:29 pm
Chapter 6         
Update soon! I love this story, so cute and easy to read.

05/19/2008 11:28 am
Chapter 6         
Wow, that had obviously been weighing on her mind all day. Talk about your random blurting out of important things.

05/17/2008 02:35 am
Chapter 6         
hopefully it will work out better than the sugarless kool-aid. fun read, thank you

05/14/2008 10:06 pm
Chapter 6         
Love it this far! Super-sweet :)

anon462
05/13/2008 11:29 pm
Chapter 6         
Yeah, being friends?, that's good. Being friends with ... benefits? that's even better. ;)

05/13/2008 02:10 pm
Chapter 6         
Okay, friends is good... But sometimes Buffy is just so stupid.

11/04/2012 05:41 am
Chapter 5         
I'm sure Giles looked fab in those heels  

:-)
06/05/2010 04:48 pm
Chapter 5         
 

Jelly
05/08/2009 12:48 am
Chapter 5         
Great, just marvy... now if I see JM at DragonCon this year, I won't be able to keep a straight face!

(Great story!)

05/13/2008 02:05 pm
Chapter 5         
HAHAHAAHAHA. I can just imagine Spike dressed up playing tea party. Camilla's so sweet and Spike is a great surrogate daddy. Hope Buffy and Spike get their arses in gear soon though - they so want each other.

03/11/2008 03:25 am
Chapter 5         
Loved the imagery of Spike at a tea party! Too funny!

11/04/2012 05:26 am
Chapter 4         
feh Buffy just had to go and ask about Captain forehead

02/01/2008 02:55 am
Chapter 4         
one of the many joys of being a single parent. still have to love them. good chapter, thank you.

April
01/31/2008 05:37 am
Chapter 4         
Let me just say that I am ABSOLUTELY loving this story! It''s cute & fluffy & just the right bit of UST! & Kids are always great!
My FAVORITE line was "I'm ok, but I don't think Barbie's gonna make it!'

Can't WAIT to read more!

01/29/2008 11:54 am
Chapter 4         
Allmost kissing is good, I mean they can't have wild couch sex with a child a home.  Is Camilla going for a sleep over soon?  Thanks for the update!

01/29/2008 05:55 am
Chapter 4         
Read this over on Spuffy Realm and thought it was finished.  So glad you've continued it, I was really hoping you would write about what happened after Spike decided to go with them!  Love Spike with Camilla and hope Buffy figures things out before she makes the situation worse.

IT
01/29/2008 05:14 am
Chapter 4         
 Hmmm... just wonder how much Spuffy will ensue with a five-year-old around.  Good thing there's a sitter next door! :)

01/29/2008 03:29 am
Chapter 4         
Thanks for the update, looking forward to some Spuffy soon! Well done!

11/04/2012 04:49 am
Chapter 3         
Spike stared at himself in the mirror    ????

:-)
06/05/2010 04:19 pm
Chapter 3         
 

02/01/2008 02:43 am
Chapter 3         
seems camilla will cause them both to think a bit differently. very good read, thank you.

01/26/2008 11:14 am
Chapter 3         
I like the story line, I was disappointed in the lack of dialogue - even without their history, if you hadn't seen someone in years there would be questions, conversations etc. Also evenone being so excepting of Spike just turning up not really getting that? I'll keep reading to see where you go with this, as I said I like the premise nice idea.

01/23/2008 03:18 am
Chapter 3         
Is this the end? I hope not, more soon, please?

11/04/2012 03:57 am
Chapter 2         
Like the awkwardness - that feels very right.

:-)
06/05/2010 04:09 pm
Chapter 2         
 

01/22/2008 04:45 am
Chapter 2         
the reunion was not as awkward as it could have been. camilla does tend to steal scenes, doesn't she? very good read, thank you.

01/19/2008 07:54 pm
Chapter 2         
There's a lot of fuzzy math with vamp ages in canon; I wouldn't worry about it much. This story is shaping up so nicely. The awkwardness of the reunion was completely realistic and not a bit overdone. And Cammy is a darling! I look forward to more.

01/19/2008 03:54 am
Chapter 2         
Great update, looking forward to more soon!

01/19/2008 03:53 am
Chapter 2         
Ok, so SPike's not her father; I was hoping that Cammie was old enough, but oh well... still, good story; looking forward to seeing where you're going to go with this; please update again soon.

11/04/2012 03:50 am
Chapter 1         
nice start - I love that Buffy's daughter can kick a vampire hard enough to hurt.  :)

07/20/2011 08:38 pm
Chapter 1         
Someone who didn’t know them who saw them right now might think they were father and daughter. And that thought was enough to disturb Spike immensely.

That's too funny...  Yes, Spike as daddy...  thoroughly disburbing.

Blue

Cool :-). Hope it gets finished sometime :-)
06/05/2010 03:59 pm
Chapter 1         
 

07/05/2009 10:05 pm
Chapter 1         
I'm hooked and ready for the next chapter! 

just a note for you. you wrote:

She had taken Camilla out for ice cream. When she had been ordering the little girl had wondered off and no one in the shop knew where she’d gone.

The second sentence is a little grammatically awkward.

now on to chapter 2!

10/16/2008 11:03 am
Chapter 1         
 I'm enjoying this immensely.

01/19/2008 03:49 am
Chapter 1         
Oh, that was wonderful!!! Is Spike the father?? Please, PLEASE let him be the father!!! Going on to read the next chapter now; awesome story so far!!!

tammy
12/12/2007 05:42 pm
Chapter 1         
ok where is the rest. Please give me more.

11/06/2007 08:50 pm
Chapter 1         
camilla has spike hooked already. very good read, thank you.

11/05/2007 01:37 am
Chapter 1         
Intriguing enough that I definitely want to read more. Buffy's little chip off the ol' block is too cute for words. Another Summers girl who's obviously gonna have Spike wrapped around her little finger. Really looking forward to the scene where Spike and Buffy meet again after all these years.

11/04/2007 09:33 pm
Chapter 1         
Oooh, I'm liking it so far! Like Mom, like daughter re "bampire". Does Spike have a clue?

JO
11/04/2007 08:56 pm
Chapter 1         
Wait until he finds out he's the daddy that's gonna throw his head into a spin , can't wait for the reunion, more pleae.

Rigby24
11/04/2007 06:50 am
Chapter 1         
Oooh, I like this a lot!

11/04/2007 02:39 am
Chapter 1         
Hi Moluv - nice story. You don't need all the backstory in the beginning - who gives a damn where Angel is? Also, I don't believe for a minute that Buffy wouldn't be running around like a crazy person looking for her kid - not for two hours. The little girl is cute and her conversations with Spike are very nice.

duke6665
11/04/2007 01:49 am
Chapter 1         
great start. can't wait to read more.