The Writing on the Wall by Holly
Chapter: Chapter Six

10/23/2008 06:09 am
Really liking this story. More please!

10/21/2008 03:18 am
So wonderful to see Spike hanging on to his cool (in his own special way -lol) and thinking things through.

10/20/2008 06:19 pm
Well, you sure know how to keep your readers off balance!  The confusing beginning, the ...cheese? 
I'm enjoying this story, and wondering what you've got planned for the rest of the trial.
Looking forward to more!  :)

All4Spike
10/20/2008 04:31 pm
Surely Spike can longjump 4 metres... with the hope that the wall is an illusion... or perhaps not... hmm... Ingenious test.

10/20/2008 12:05 pm
 If the nightmare opening is anything to go by, this is going to be grand guignol horror all the way.  Perfect!  I love a bit of horror.  Spike knows about the trickery and misleads, let's hope he keeps his head!

10/20/2008 10:55 am
there has to be an escape for our vamp hero - seems like something being earth-bound should not necessarily have to work same in a different plane -

Love your voice for Spike -

your description of the imagined funeral was very effective - it felt like just what Spike would have felt had it been real.   Not only Buffy's nightmares but like Spike's also - the worst that could have would be for him to fail.

ya_lublyu_tebya
10/20/2008 09:04 am
Had a feeling it might be holy water. Interesting trial. The way you weave this story is amazing, Holly. I look forward to the next update.

kim
10/20/2008 04:33 am
Ooooo, ouch.....talk about difficult!