The Writing on the Wall by Holly
Chapter: Chapter Twenty-three

05/22/2009 03:28 pm
My word!  So happy to see another chapter was posted.  I just can't get enough of this one.  I'm fighting the urge to start re-reading just so I can still be reading it. 

05/22/2009 07:23 am
I'm so... so... content. So happy I want to cry. Yet there's so much more to be done. Buffy still has to learn what happened to her, what the writing on the wall really means, how to get out of there. And then when they go back, what then?
It's interesting that Spike's gameface that last time was the straw that broke her open. I loved the shaking feelings and closeness and intimacy in this chapter. You write so brilliantly, the scenes just play out in my head and I ache for them. They both have so much pain to go through before this is done, I'm sure. How anyone could just get over something like this... it can't be done. I'm looking forward to learning more about Buffy's long solitude and about her thoughts and feelings and memories.

ya_lublyu_tebya
05/19/2009 07:40 pm

Well I for one am glad you went ahead and posted this chapter. It was beautiful and yet heartbreaking... Buffy's got a lot more to re-learn. I loved that she thanked Spike though. Look forward to more.

me
05/19/2009 06:16 pm

Wonderful!  I was worried  you gave up on it. Loving this story.

Eyghon
05/19/2009 08:30 am
yay! It was great, I feel sad and happy at the same time. I like that Buffy's okay with Spike, and that she's so sure she didn't hate him. I finally feel like they have a chance to get out. But please please please, don't mkae us wait so long next time, I tend to "forget" stuff after a while and the story's not as good when you can't remember all the plots and twists and stuff.

05/19/2009 06:56 am
awesome chapter!!!  so glad you didn't forget about this story!  Can't wait for more!!!!!

kim
05/19/2009 06:26 am
Just beautiful. I'm SO glad she sees he's only tried to help.

05/19/2009 03:58 am
Nice sweet chapter.  Now they just have to claw their way out, right?

Bridget
05/19/2009 01:34 am
This was a lovely chapter.  Just perfect.  I can't wait for the next update.  I am glad that Buffy and Spike actually had a conversation that was not full of snark.  I think she now understands the depth of his love for her.

05/19/2009 01:25 am
You have me in tears, hon. This was the chapter I've been waiting to read, and you didn't disappoint. Excellent emoting from both Spike and Buffy. Heart-wringing. Brava!

**hold out bowl** More, please?

05/19/2009 12:21 am
A beautiful scene without lingering too long on how these two characters suffered. Buffy is so in character, but in a way the Buffy on the show never had to be with nowhere near a similar experience. The only problem i had with the chapter was with the fact that it ended; You've finally updated, but now I want more!
Great installment, please update soon.