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Pinch Hitter by dreamweaver
Chapter: Chapter 2
slinkz
09/25/2009 09:54 pm
hell yeah, talk about settin things straight - riley, angel, all of them!
I really wanted Buffy to kick them around a little. :D
09/10/2009 04:52 pm
Loverly! And good pre-emptive actions all around.
Buffy with a chip on her shoulder and thinking. :D
08/28/2009 01:16 am
second chapter as well done as the first. very good read, thank you.
I'm so glad you liked it! The role reversal was fun.
Brett
08/13/2009 04:37 am
Oh this is just hot. Buffy not demanding of Spike. Taking what is offered and giving everything. Love it.
After losing him, this Buffy would. I'm so glad you liked it!
BloodyHell
08/11/2009 11:59 am
Okay.I like how you write.It's fluent and nice to read.
I'm not completely happy with Buffy's attitude towards the people who are not Spike but maybe that's because I don't like her bitchy and Faith-like. Maybe that's just me.
Good work again!
I'm not completely happy with Buffy's attitude towards the people who are not Spike but maybe that's because I don't like her bitchy and Faith-like. Maybe that's just me.
Good work again!
Thank you! I don't usually write stories where Buffy is bitchy, but this one called for her to have a chip on the shoulder about the Scoobies, at least in the beginning - the one she's usually bitchy with is Spike. :D It's novel and fun for me to be able to write it the other way around.
08/11/2009 12:37 am
Isn` today the today with the new chapter that was going to come everyday?^^. *Cries*.
Coming right up!
Belle
08/10/2009 10:41 pm
Hurray!!!!!!!! Another story!! And it's reading like all your other great stories! So glad you had Buffy tell Giles about the helping Spike to be good instead of stepping all over him. 'Cause honestly, who would be able to completely convert into doing good after being evil for 100+ years?? That's insane! Can't wait for the next update!
Yeah, I can't understand why supposedly good people wouldn't help. Next chapter's up; I hope you like it!
08/10/2009 05:15 pm
This is a great switch for the Buffy/Spike relationship and you're keeping Spike realistic and this Buffy in character. I love your stories, though sometimes I think Buffy is a little too stubborn about hating her friends, so I'm glad Joyce asked her to ease up on them. Buffy can still be firm enough not to accept any shit from them but remembering how they've wilingly risked their lives and been good people before to want to explain how they should change and not just tell them how they are is unacceptable.
Can't wait to see Spike resisting Buffy but falling in love with her anyway. And is Angel going to stick around? Can't wait for more!
Can't wait to see Spike resisting Buffy but falling in love with her anyway. And is Angel going to stick around? Can't wait for more!
Right at the moment, she's really furious with them - it was only a few days ago for her that she found they had kept Spike's resurrection from her. But she will start to ease up and think - she always acts first and thinks later, right? :D Thank you for liking the story!
laura
08/10/2009 08:40 am
Love this story! looking forward to Spike falling for Buffy.
I'm so glad you're enjoying it! Thank you!
Eyghon
08/10/2009 07:50 am
I know this is written in advance, but I'm so happy with the way this is going! I like this Buffy. Pretty sure the others will try something stupid, even though she warned them.
You know it! :D I'm so glad you're liking this! Thank you!
08/10/2009 02:59 am
Just blew through the first two chapters and had to say wow! What a great beginning, and what a neat, original concept. This Buffy is something else. I love her take charge attitude. And It's lovely to see Spike at this point in time - all snark and defiance. I can't wait to read more of this. You've got me hooked for sure.
Thank you! I'm so glad you're liking it! I wanted to play with a chip-on-the-shoulder Buffy and a role reversal between her and Spike.
08/10/2009 02:22 am
Holy hell, I can`t wait for the next chapter tomorrow...
I'm glad you liked it! Thank you! More tomorrow.
spikes_heart
08/10/2009 01:50 am
If you need me... I do believe I'll be in my bunk. Hot and sweet - what a wonderful combination.
Oh, I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you! More coming tomorrow.
Pam S
08/10/2009 12:43 am
Enjoying.. especially this Buffy telling the "gang" to get 'f------
And how could Spike go back to a Buffy that will treat him like dirt for a couple of years.. I know this futureBuffy said she wouldn't let him sacrifice.. but what ripple effect will what she is doing have? He was the one that killed the vampires in the hellmouth..
Interested in finding out ..
And how could Spike go back to a Buffy that will treat him like dirt for a couple of years.. I know this futureBuffy said she wouldn't let him sacrifice.. but what ripple effect will what she is doing have? He was the one that killed the vampires in the hellmouth..
Interested in finding out ..
That's coming up. Thank you for liking this!
08/10/2009 12:33 am
Wow. Okay, so my brain is offline right now, but when it comes back up, I'll be certain to tell you how much I liked this update; I love it when Buffy pulls her head out of her ass and realizes what she lost in Spike; I can't wait to watch Spike fall in love with her. Great update; more please!!!
Next chapter up tomorrow. I'm so glad you're liking it! Thank you!
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