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Denial by The Enemy of Reality
Chapter: Chapter two
01/29/2010 05:37 am
ooohhh....I love the suspense! I can't wait to find out how Willow messed up the spell and what effect Buffy's hair being inside the magic circle will have. You did a great job building up the mystery about what will happen next. Good writing!
And I love it that you love it! :D You know Willow... always mucking something up and who else would be in the middle of it, but Buffy... hee, you noticed the hair part. ;) Such an observant reader, I like that! Are you trying to make me blush, you minx? Compliments will get you everywhere. ;) Thank you for the awesome review!!! :D
01/04/2010 12:24 am
This is takinbg an interesting turn.. will they be caught in the appartment?
Maybe... maybe not. ;) Wait and see, I'll update soon. Thank you for taking your time to leave me this nice review!!! :)
Babs
01/02/2010 09:31 pm
Ooh, very nice chapter! If it's a repelling spell that got messed up.. All kinds of ideas are buzzing around inside my head. I can't wait to see what you come up with! Please update soon!!
Hee... I'm happy that you liked! :) Now I'm all curious about the idea in your head... are they the same as mine?? I hope you'll like what I decided to do. Another chapter soonish, it's already written. ;) Thank you for your awesomeness and the lovely review, Babs!!!
01/01/2010 11:48 pm
Another great chapter! I love how you let Willow and Buffy's conversation and just snippets of her feeling guilty show her mood and thoughts so well. The struggle of Spike dealing with how his life has changed was done very well. And, of course, how you handled eager-to-please, sympathetic Willow staying in character even as she messes up another spell and stays quiet about it rather than admit the mistake. Anya and Xander had a short cameo, but it fit them very well, and I still love your Giles!
Thanks for updating, and looking forward to more! This spell sounds fascinating and I can't wait to see how it turns out!
Thanks for updating, and looking forward to more! This spell sounds fascinating and I can't wait to see how it turns out!
*grins happily* Your review makes me want to buy you something sweet and delicious! It gives me gratification that you like the way her thoughts are shown, I'm trying to keep them realistic. :) I never saw Spike as a loner, he always seem to need someone's companionship and now with that chip in his head, he belongs nowhere. Not accpeted by demons, and definitely not by the Scoobies. Willow and her spells... things go often wrong but she never quite seems genuinely sorry and admits she made a mistake. She just goes and does the same thing again. I love it that you love my Giles, I like it when he's all sarcastic! :D Anya and Xander might make an appearnce a little later. ;)
The spell will have some interesting effect on Buffy and Spike... no tinkering with their feelings though. Those will be all theirs. Thank you for the amazing review!!! :)
The spell will have some interesting effect on Buffy and Spike... no tinkering with their feelings though. Those will be all theirs. Thank you for the amazing review!!! :)
Niori
01/01/2010 07:07 pm
Happy new year! This is a great story so far, and I hope you update soon.
Thank you and I hope you'll have a great year! :) Also, this is me being THIS glad you left me such a lovely review, Niori!!! I'll update within a week. :)
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