Oooh, this is very promising.

Hi again!
Was just rereading this wonderful trilogy, and it must be my inner critic because this time I picked up on a continuity error in your stories.
In 'Origins' Kirsten and Dawn are said to have known each other since they were very young, but in 'Revelations' its made clear that Kirsten is Spike and Buffy's daughter. Therefore, unless she knew some really ridiculous magic, Kirsten would have had to have gone back in time when she was younger than five years old. It's the only error you've got though, so that's okay, everything else is, as our favourite Master Vampire would say, bloody brilliant.
 

wow..poor buffy...what willow's done to her is so terrible...poor thing...at least she's surrounded by people who care about her, especially spike...totally intrigued by now, pet...on to more :)

11 -- i hope tara leaves willow for good, she's really messed up...i'm afraid we'll see exactly how soon, won't we? that last bit with spike and buffy was very touching...i have a feeling as far as buffy's concerned, things might be a bit different this time around...

10 -- oh wow...come on spike, you have to notice buffy, have to help her...and willow needs to be stopped, before things go any further than they already have...

9 -- i'm feeling majorly unsettled by what willow's doing here...just the fact that she's using dawn and tara without telling them about it or getting their consent alone is disturbing....i am glad that you didn't put any actual rituals and such in here, because that could only be bad...the chapter itself was very interesting...moving on to more...

8 -- what a revelation for giles....wonder what's coming next...

7 -- so what's up with kirsten? hmmm...reminded me a bit of cassie in season 7...well-written chapter, though i must say i'm disturbed a bit if there's actual rituals and such in this fic...skimmed the first part mostly....but very curious about dawn's little friend :)

Can't stop saying it, this story is amazing. Everything about is awesome. So happy for Spike and Dawn of course, but Tara's got this whole situation with Willow now to deal with. Thank you for your amazing words.

Chapter Ten - Shudders, you wrote her awakeing in the coffin brillantly. It was intense. I hope that Tara finds the streghth to protect herself against Willow and to leave her for the invasion and rape of her mind.

Chapter Eleven - *shakes with rage* Willow is toying with people, elements and things she never should. She needs to be stopped. I am rather glad that is was Spike who found Buffy. Poor Buffy however, digging her way out of her grave.

Chapter twelve - What an emotional chapter. I have gone from heartbroken to angry and back to heartbroken. You manege to bring out the emotional aspects of this fic very well. I adore this story!

Chapter Eight - I liked Giles reflections about Spike's character. very nicely developed and excellantly written. He is right of course - Spike is a protector and would do anything for those he deemed his. I would like to mention now that Willow scares the heck out of me at the moment. *shakes head* Lethe's Bramble - how could she? *Sigh* this is so not going to go well!

Chapter Nine - Willow just keeps getting scarier and scarier. She thinks she can manipulate people, thier memories with no condequences. It is frightning to see the ease that she does this with. Again, I enjoyed the social worker thinking Spike is her father, it is quite fun!