Origins by Niamh
Chapter: Part 5

10/26/2006 04:02 am
21 -- i hope tara doesn't leave for good...and i love how spike and buffy are slowly getting closer and closer...lovely job with this chapter :)

10/26/2006 03:55 am
20 -- wow...i hope they're not moving too quickly...it *has* only been days...and poor tara...*sigh*...willow needs to get a clue...good chapter :)

10/26/2006 03:22 am
19 -- i think tara's making a mistake to even consider it....willow's seriously messed up...it's good to see buffy laughing adn such again....great chapter :)

10/26/2006 03:13 am
18 -- as i suspected, willow's not even listening, is she? *sigh* how are they ever gonna fix all buffy's problems...this is heart-breaking, but a very interesting story

Verda
06/29/2006 08:38 am
Thanks for giving us a more realistic view of the series. As much as I have love that show from episode 1 back in 1997, there have been parts that have frustrated me as well. Thanks for the laugh when Dawn thought Spike might want a blood slurpee and for the tenderness that Buffy's showing towards Spike. The turmoil that Tara's dealing with is so real, it just brakes my heart. You've got such a handle on these characters... it's just fantastic.






06/28/2006 01:51 am
Chapter 20 - Excellant realization that Tara had. Willow never apologized, doesn't even think she did anything wrong. Great chapter!

Chapter 21 - Poor Tara - she doesn't realize that everyone does love her. I hope she realizes that she has options. Great chapter and update!

06/28/2006 01:46 am
Chapter 18 - Willow's arrogance and self-absorbtion (sp?) knows no bounds! She has no clue why anyone would be upset - no idea of consequences - shakes head. I love this chapter - very well done!

Chapter 19 - Willow didn't even think that she might hurt Dawn or Tara with the tea, didn;t care that she stole Tara's blood. Shakes head. I wonder how long until Willow screws up again and loses Tara! Excellant job with Willow as the bad guy!