DUST by KnifeEdge
Chapter: Chapter 7

05/16/2012 10:51 am
Hahaha! Love your snarky Spike getting right up under her skin: "Slaughter everything in sight, set Main Street on fire, and dance naked on your Watcher's lawn, that all right by you?" Spike raised his eyebrows and batted his eyelashes innocently at her.

They irritate each other in just the right way. Well done dialogue, love the back and forth between them and all of Spike's observations. I find it interesting that he doesn't think anything of the fact that she arouses him, just takes it as part of her Slayerness. She's supposed to provoke him, right? 

You're building the attraction so subtly, we can see it creeping up on both of them. Can't wait for the inevitable explosion when they realize. 

05/19/2011 04:06 am

Excellent  :)  Except Buffy didn't stake Parker which he so deserves. 

05/09/2011 03:16 pm

Pick the Converse, Buffy...
Buffy is getting really annoying, and I'm not even a bleached British vamp.  You're writing her like she was on the show, no worries there, and she was annoying then too!  Well done!  OK, that was a weird way to say that this is a finely done piece of writing.

su
05/09/2011 04:20 am
Great story!  Buenos Aires is in Argentina, though, not in Brazil.

05/09/2011 03:13 am
You talk like Giles sometimes, you know that

ooo those are fighting words!

   o   =  ooo  

delle
05/09/2011 12:18 am

Truly great story, enjoying this as much as im enjoying "embers" by coalitiongirl atm. Hope you update soon.

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05/08/2011 10:41 pm

I do like this Spike..  his ability to get under the Slayer's skin with his cutting and truth be told words..
Yet  can't take a woman's tears.  Or being complimented by Buffy. 

Need to go back and reread a bit.  Three days in her house without harming them.  What else did he try and what did he finally do to wake her up ?  Maybe it will finally be his true confession that leads to the "awakenings". 

Sounds like something Ethan Rayne would do.. What would be the purpose of putting an entire city to sleep ?

More hints coming I hope?