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Something Blue, Something More by Opal
Chapter: Ch 1 through 9
olinka
08/27/2008 11:03 pm
The story is interesting; yet, I wish the labor descriptions had been less graphic if non-existant
08/31/2007 03:40 am
Second time to read your story - am enjoying it again just as much as the first time -
DoWnEr
04/12/2007 01:28 pm
Was enjoying the story till the whole Buffy being a cheap 2 dollar whore while Spike has to remain all faithful and pure. Why do people claiming to be Spike fans always strip away all his pride and emasculate him?
Oh it's always ok for the women Spike loves to sleep around on him but nooooo Spike can't touch anyone else. Looks more like you hate him than love him.
ftfchris@hotmail.com
Oh it's always ok for the women Spike loves to sleep around on him but nooooo Spike can't touch anyone else. Looks more like you hate him than love him.
ftfchris@hotmail.com
08/27/2006 11:50 pm
9 -- awww....cant wait for this conversation :)
08/27/2006 11:47 pm
8 -- good at last she's thinking more clearly!! great chapter :)
08/27/2006 11:44 pm
7: Iowa? how boring...lol...poor buffy....i'm glad she warned spike, though...
08/27/2006 11:40 pm
6 -- well now that riley's at least been honest with her, i feel a little better about him, he seems to have good intentions mostly...can't wait to see what happens next :)
08/27/2006 11:37 pm
5 -- well of course it's william :) great chapter :)
08/27/2006 11:33 pm
4 --- poor buffy, so alone...spike needs to go on back now i think :)
08/27/2006 11:29 pm
3 -- oh yeah...right...sure walsh wont find out... *rolls eyes*...*sigh* spike needs to get back quick i bet :)
08/27/2006 11:25 pm
2 -- man riley *is* a jerk, after all! how could he just leave her there like that, whether the baby's his or not?? poor buffy!! great chatper :)
08/27/2006 11:22 pm
1 -- at least riley's not being a total jerk about it -- yet -- but why am i convinced that it's not his baby anyway? great chapter though :)
Verda
06/27/2006 01:24 am
This is a great story. Glad you updated, hate to begin a story only to have it abandoned. This is going to be interesting to see all that testosterone around Buffy and how they're going to deal with Walsh and the Initiative. Thanks for the read.
Thank you. I'm so glad that you like!
Kyra Storm
04/10/2006 09:21 pm
This just sucks! Talk about totally stupid and mellodramatic. Why do people waste their time with such rot.
02/15/2006 02:13 pm
Excellant story - I enjoyed the beginning very much. I think Riley is a sleaze bag and that Buffy seriously doesn't give Spike enough credit. Although at least she is starting to come around. Looking forward to the next chapters.
11/06/2005 08:29 am
wonderful! love little baby william...and mom's fangs are pretty cool too....
11/04/2005 10:37 am
Very good! Can't wait to see what happens next!
10/09/2005 06:27 am
Interesting story so far Liked how Drusilla came in to help in several ways. Awe - Buffy has a son now, William :) Oh - the familiar link - I like that *g* It's nice to see Riley helpfull too. The green eyes? Has little William a little 'keyness' in him? Gonna read the next chapter - maybe I'll find out?
Old BSV Site Reviews
10/01/2005 02:01 am
Oracleholly 09/15/2005 @ 02:37 am
Going to be interesting now with Angel, Spike and Riley in one room. Let the ruckus begin! And bully for Buffy to start realizing what a selfish, scared bitch she was being.
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ElizabethAnneSummers 09/15/2005 @ 01:54 am Oh god, Angel is going to FLIP!! ~~~*~~~
DK 09/15/2005 @ 01:28 am I love stories where Buffy and Spike are parents. This story is going great, going to LA with Riley of all people. You do write well. ~~~*~~~
Max 09/15/2005 @ 12:14 am Wow Buffy actually allowed past events to work in Spike's favor for once - let's just hope she doesn't fall into Angel's old no soul = evil excuse again when she gets to LA. ~~~*~~~
Niamh 09/14/2005 @ 11:21 pm I can't wait to see what Angel's reaction is. . . and when Will finally gets to his daddy. . . . good job. . . ~~~*~~~
spike_spetslayer 09/14/2005 @ 11:11 pm Opal--Thank God you finally saw the light! thought we were gonna have to do an intervention there (can you see THAT on the tagboard? LOL) Good story, glad Buffy finally got her head on straight. Can't wait until Spike catches up with her and Cornbred...MORE! ~~~*~~~
maria 09/14/2005 @ 10:21 pm I just started reading this story and so far it is great. I can't wait till Spike can hold William and I'm glad Buffy is realizing how foolish she has been and hope fully she will let spike in her life. Please update soon!!! ~~~*~~~
Karyn 09/14/2005 @ 09:58 pm oh thank the powers that she's starting to see the truth...thought i was going to have to start a lynch mob to ...lol...dramatic yet effective ~~~*~~~
Sara 09/14/2005 @ 09:56 pm Iowa?!?! That is so not right! Hopefully Spikes not that far behind. ~~~*~~~
Rhonda 09/14/2005 @ 08:14 pm I am so glad that Spike got a chance to get a peak at William. And now that he has his link in place with his son, there is no place that Buffy will be able to go and get away from him completely. I just hope that Riley can help and not be a hinder truely what Buffy and Spike could have with Willam as their son. ~~~*~~~
Pam 09/14/2005 @ 06:22 pm Email love the story. please, please, please write more soon!!!!!!!!!!! ~~~*~~~
ElizabethAnneSummers 09/14/2005 @ 04:50 pm Noo! No! She can't go play house in Iowa with the big wanker!! No way! ~~~*~~~
Oracleholly 09/14/2005 @ 11:25 am *ch7* ARG! Love the connection between Spike & his son. ARG with Maggie Walsh - bitch! Confused Muse 09/14/2005 @ 10:36 am I hope there's a nearby graveyard and lots of lurkable spots in Iowa. Although Riley's a bit dumb going missing *with* Buffy to his hometown. Like Walsh isn't gonna figure that one out? I so can't wait until we see Maggie's butt get kicked :) Oh, and ignore pet about the cliffies - cliffies are the way forward...as long as you update soooon. ~~~*~~~
ComedyofErrors 09/14/2005 @ 10:09 am Grr. Buffy on the road with Riley. Grr. ~~~*~~~
spike_spetslayer 09/14/2005 @ 09:31 am Opal, how can you leave us like that? Going to Iowa? Corn-fed can't raise a vampire baby, he needs his daddy, and even though buffy doesn't know it yet, so does she. Good update, but God, the cliffhangers! ~~~*~~~
Mali 09/14/2005 @ 07:54 am Email O.o Farmer girl Buffy. I'm happy that Riley understands Buffy, Spike and Will's familial bond, and isn't trying to butt in. ~~~*~~~
Max 09/14/2005 @ 07:31 am Buffy needs to be taught a lesson and Riley needs to suffer a horrible accident. Technically with Angel ensouled and Dru insane Spike is the head of the clan of Aurelius - not smart to steal his son from him. ~~~*~~~
stephanie 09/14/2005 @ 05:43 am Email Riley is evil, I just know it. he is just being nice because he wants Buffy... don't believe he has any good intentions twards her nope, don't believe it. and Iowa. Bah! Cornfields. Sniff ... go spike get your woman and your baby ~~~*~~~
MarzBar 09/14/2005 @ 03:54 am GADZ!! Captain Cardbored's friends are after Buffy and baby. Is she safe with him? Why is she still so stupid about Spike? She's going to Iowa? Confused Muse 09/14/2005 @ 01:58 am Aargh! I don't think Spike's going to tale Riley#s protectiveness very well :) I think Joyce is going to lose her temper with Buffy somewhere down the line too if Buffy doesn't get a grip... Keep going, keep going! ~~~*~~~
Oracleholly 09/13/2005 @ 11:20 pm Okay you're getting 2 reviews in one day b/c viola you updated - so *6*: GRRR @ Riley and GRRR @ stupid Buffy. that is all. ~~~*~~~
DK 09/13/2005 @ 11:09 pm Riley must find protecting her and Wm from Daddy easier than from Walsh. He is such a jerk. Type fast. ~~~*~~~
Oracleholly 09/13/2005 @ 11:07 pm Email *up to ch 5* Awww she named the baby William. Liked how Drusilla's helping of Spike via concealment charm. Nifty Slayer dream. I'm having mixed feelings about Riley - while hate that he left, he's not the dad; while he claims Buffy as a friend and stuck up for her to his army pals, he's a complete prejudiced ass. ~~~*~~~
ElizabethAnneSummers 09/13/2005 @ 09:34 pm Email URL *growls at Riley* he better not get between Buffy and Spike ~~~*~~~
spike_spetslayer 09/12/2005 @ 06:05 pm Email Type fast, Opal, cause here is your review! Good story, loving it...more, more, more! :) ~~~*~~~
Stephanie 09/11/2005 @ 05:35 am Email Great story I really enjoyed it. Please write more soon! ~~~*~~~
MarzBar 09/10/2005 @ 02:56 am Email I hope Dru will come and help Spike protect the baby. How long will it take for Buffy to have enough energy to grow some brains now? Spike would be a better daddy than Captain Cardbored ever would. More please. ~~~*~~~
Tami Brandt 09/09/2005 @ 09:10 pm Email Great chapter. Can't wait for Spike to show up! ~~~*~~~
~*~Tasha~*~ 09/09/2005 @ 12:50 am I'm ecstatic over chapter 4 and 5 that I read today. Glad that SPike knows and Dru is actually being helpful. I'm scared about what Angelus will have to do with this. I hope that Dru and Angelus are actually both just there to make their vows to protect all of the family. I can't wait to see what you write next. Love this story. ~~~*~~~
ElizabethAnneSummers 09/08/2005 @ 11:43 pm Awww, how sweeeet ~~~*~~~
redwulf50 09/08/2005 @ 09:57 pm Damn good chappies I love the flow of this fic ~~~*~~~
tina 09/08/2005 @ 08:51 pm update soon!!!! ~~~*~~~
Steph 09/08/2005 @ 05:50 pm Awww baby william...I love it! ~~~*~~~
vicki 09/08/2005 @ 09:41 am Great update and labor scene. Let's hope Spike beats Riley home. Can't wait for more. ~~~*~~~
ComedyofErrors 09/08/2005 @ 09:08 am Great chpaters that covered a lot of ground and brought a lot of characters together in a very fluid way. Can we kick Riley now? Jerk. Well, at least Spike will be home soon and they can get some things settled. Great chapters. ~~~*~~~
Lou 09/08/2005 @ 04:53 am Aaaah - Sweet William ~~~*~~~
DK 09/03/2005 @ 02:21 am Sometimes Dru can be alright! Does that make her a Grandmother? ~~~*~~~
Good chapter. ~*~Tasha~*~ 09/02/2005 @ 10:48 pm GO SPIKE ... RUN back to Buffy as fast as you can. Hell ... even bring Dru if she is willing to protect Buffy ... Just get your arse up there fast. If Walsh finds out, oh boy. Plus he heard the news from Finn himself. Oh please let Buffy realize that the baby is Spike's. Look forward to the next update. ~~~*~~~
TINA 09/02/2005 @ 05:20 pm PLEASE MORE SOON ~~~*~~~
spike_spetslayer 09/02/2005 @ 04:32 pm More, Opal! more!!!! ~~~*~~~
vicki 09/02/2005 @ 01:18 pm I love this story. But how did she really get pregnant with Spike's child? I can't wait to find out more! ~~~*~~~
ComedyofErrors 09/02/2005 @ 12:48 pm That's a great idea! Riley volunteered for South America, and of course Spike went back there. Brilliant! Nice of Dru to make sure that Spike paid attention. Now he can get back to Sunnydale and convince Buffy that he really loves her and that she loves him. ~~~*~~~
Ariel Dawn 09/02/2005 @ 12:33 pm hee hee, Loved the chappie! Still want to bash Riley's skull in, but now Spike knows! Yay! ~~~*~~~
Max 09/02/2005 @ 12:19 pm I can't say I like that fact that Spike seems to be running back to Buffy like he seems to be doing. PLEASE do not make him weak and wimpy Spike begging for scraps. We all got way too much of the in season 6. Spike has it right, Buffy refuses her feelings for Spike because of what he is not who he is even with proof of his loyality with Drusilla, she's just being a bitch about it. And about Buffy trying to run away with the kid mentioned in the challenge, anyone remember how well Spike to care of Dawn versus how poorly Buffy did. Spike is a LEGENDARY master vampire, who Angel feared more than the Master, despite how much Whedon apparently hates him and just slowly destroys him over the course of the series, remember how protective he was with girlfriend? I can't wait to see what happens when Buffy and friends try to keep him away from his child. ~~~*~~~
~*~Tasha~*~ 09/02/2005 @ 10:59 am Email URL {growls} What a bastard Riley is. He didn't even tell Buffy that he knows the child isn't his. {Growls again} I hope that Buffy gets the realization through her head that it can't be RIley's baby, and the baby is Spike's. Look forward to the next chapter. ~~~*~~~
Ariel Dawn 09/02/2005 @ 10:38 am Can we smack Riley over the head now? With a mace? Unfeeling bastard. Grrr. Not that I want him with Buffy for anything but...grrr. Bring on the next chapter! ~~~*~~~
ComedyofErrors 09/02/2005 @ 10:32 am About what I expected of Riley. Can't wait to see Spike in the future. Keep up the good work! ~~~*~~~
Max 09/02/2005 @ 07:27 am It's a good start. When Spike comes back please don't make him wimpy Spike (and preferrably no chip either), he can be nice without being a wimp like he was made out to be after the chip. ~~~*~~~
chanel 5 08/20/2005 @ 04:38 am Great start, but short. can't wait for more :) ~~~*~~~
Alice 08/18/2005 @ 09:29 pm Great fic, but not much Riley. ~~~*~~~
~*~Tasha~*~ 08/18/2005 @ 09:07 pm Excellent start to this challenge. I love it. I hope we get more of this one soon and continuously. Look forward to the next update. ~~~*~~~
ElizabethAnneSummers 08/18/2005 @ 06:23 pm Oooo, when's Spike going to show up?? ~~~*~~~
Braat44 08/18/2005 @ 06:18 pm Excellent start! Can't wait to see where it goes. ~~~*~~~
ComedyofErrors 08/18/2005 @ 04:46 pm Potential for a great story. Keep it going! ~~~*~~~
Ariel Dawn 08/18/2005 @ 04:10 pm Fantastic start. Can't wait for more!
ElizabethAnneSummers 09/15/2005 @ 01:54 am Oh god, Angel is going to FLIP!! ~~~*~~~
DK 09/15/2005 @ 01:28 am I love stories where Buffy and Spike are parents. This story is going great, going to LA with Riley of all people. You do write well. ~~~*~~~
Max 09/15/2005 @ 12:14 am Wow Buffy actually allowed past events to work in Spike's favor for once - let's just hope she doesn't fall into Angel's old no soul = evil excuse again when she gets to LA. ~~~*~~~
Niamh 09/14/2005 @ 11:21 pm I can't wait to see what Angel's reaction is. . . and when Will finally gets to his daddy. . . . good job. . . ~~~*~~~
spike_spetslayer 09/14/2005 @ 11:11 pm Opal--Thank God you finally saw the light! thought we were gonna have to do an intervention there (can you see THAT on the tagboard? LOL) Good story, glad Buffy finally got her head on straight. Can't wait until Spike catches up with her and Cornbred...MORE! ~~~*~~~
maria 09/14/2005 @ 10:21 pm I just started reading this story and so far it is great. I can't wait till Spike can hold William and I'm glad Buffy is realizing how foolish she has been and hope fully she will let spike in her life. Please update soon!!! ~~~*~~~
Karyn 09/14/2005 @ 09:58 pm oh thank the powers that she's starting to see the truth...thought i was going to have to start a lynch mob to ...lol...dramatic yet effective ~~~*~~~
Sara 09/14/2005 @ 09:56 pm Iowa?!?! That is so not right! Hopefully Spikes not that far behind. ~~~*~~~
Rhonda 09/14/2005 @ 08:14 pm I am so glad that Spike got a chance to get a peak at William. And now that he has his link in place with his son, there is no place that Buffy will be able to go and get away from him completely. I just hope that Riley can help and not be a hinder truely what Buffy and Spike could have with Willam as their son. ~~~*~~~
Pam 09/14/2005 @ 06:22 pm Email love the story. please, please, please write more soon!!!!!!!!!!! ~~~*~~~
ElizabethAnneSummers 09/14/2005 @ 04:50 pm Noo! No! She can't go play house in Iowa with the big wanker!! No way! ~~~*~~~
Oracleholly 09/14/2005 @ 11:25 am *ch7* ARG! Love the connection between Spike & his son. ARG with Maggie Walsh - bitch! Confused Muse 09/14/2005 @ 10:36 am I hope there's a nearby graveyard and lots of lurkable spots in Iowa. Although Riley's a bit dumb going missing *with* Buffy to his hometown. Like Walsh isn't gonna figure that one out? I so can't wait until we see Maggie's butt get kicked :) Oh, and ignore pet about the cliffies - cliffies are the way forward...as long as you update soooon. ~~~*~~~
ComedyofErrors 09/14/2005 @ 10:09 am Grr. Buffy on the road with Riley. Grr. ~~~*~~~
spike_spetslayer 09/14/2005 @ 09:31 am Opal, how can you leave us like that? Going to Iowa? Corn-fed can't raise a vampire baby, he needs his daddy, and even though buffy doesn't know it yet, so does she. Good update, but God, the cliffhangers! ~~~*~~~
Mali 09/14/2005 @ 07:54 am Email O.o Farmer girl Buffy. I'm happy that Riley understands Buffy, Spike and Will's familial bond, and isn't trying to butt in. ~~~*~~~
Max 09/14/2005 @ 07:31 am Buffy needs to be taught a lesson and Riley needs to suffer a horrible accident. Technically with Angel ensouled and Dru insane Spike is the head of the clan of Aurelius - not smart to steal his son from him. ~~~*~~~
stephanie 09/14/2005 @ 05:43 am Email Riley is evil, I just know it. he is just being nice because he wants Buffy... don't believe he has any good intentions twards her nope, don't believe it. and Iowa. Bah! Cornfields. Sniff ... go spike get your woman and your baby ~~~*~~~
MarzBar 09/14/2005 @ 03:54 am GADZ!! Captain Cardbored's friends are after Buffy and baby. Is she safe with him? Why is she still so stupid about Spike? She's going to Iowa? Confused Muse 09/14/2005 @ 01:58 am Aargh! I don't think Spike's going to tale Riley#s protectiveness very well :) I think Joyce is going to lose her temper with Buffy somewhere down the line too if Buffy doesn't get a grip... Keep going, keep going! ~~~*~~~
Oracleholly 09/13/2005 @ 11:20 pm Okay you're getting 2 reviews in one day b/c viola you updated - so *6*: GRRR @ Riley and GRRR @ stupid Buffy. that is all. ~~~*~~~
DK 09/13/2005 @ 11:09 pm Riley must find protecting her and Wm from Daddy easier than from Walsh. He is such a jerk. Type fast. ~~~*~~~
Oracleholly 09/13/2005 @ 11:07 pm Email *up to ch 5* Awww she named the baby William. Liked how Drusilla's helping of Spike via concealment charm. Nifty Slayer dream. I'm having mixed feelings about Riley - while hate that he left, he's not the dad; while he claims Buffy as a friend and stuck up for her to his army pals, he's a complete prejudiced ass. ~~~*~~~
ElizabethAnneSummers 09/13/2005 @ 09:34 pm Email URL *growls at Riley* he better not get between Buffy and Spike ~~~*~~~
spike_spetslayer 09/12/2005 @ 06:05 pm Email Type fast, Opal, cause here is your review! Good story, loving it...more, more, more! :) ~~~*~~~
Stephanie 09/11/2005 @ 05:35 am Email Great story I really enjoyed it. Please write more soon! ~~~*~~~
MarzBar 09/10/2005 @ 02:56 am Email I hope Dru will come and help Spike protect the baby. How long will it take for Buffy to have enough energy to grow some brains now? Spike would be a better daddy than Captain Cardbored ever would. More please. ~~~*~~~
Tami Brandt 09/09/2005 @ 09:10 pm Email Great chapter. Can't wait for Spike to show up! ~~~*~~~
~*~Tasha~*~ 09/09/2005 @ 12:50 am I'm ecstatic over chapter 4 and 5 that I read today. Glad that SPike knows and Dru is actually being helpful. I'm scared about what Angelus will have to do with this. I hope that Dru and Angelus are actually both just there to make their vows to protect all of the family. I can't wait to see what you write next. Love this story. ~~~*~~~
ElizabethAnneSummers 09/08/2005 @ 11:43 pm Awww, how sweeeet ~~~*~~~
redwulf50 09/08/2005 @ 09:57 pm Damn good chappies I love the flow of this fic ~~~*~~~
tina 09/08/2005 @ 08:51 pm update soon!!!! ~~~*~~~
Steph 09/08/2005 @ 05:50 pm Awww baby william...I love it! ~~~*~~~
vicki 09/08/2005 @ 09:41 am Great update and labor scene. Let's hope Spike beats Riley home. Can't wait for more. ~~~*~~~
ComedyofErrors 09/08/2005 @ 09:08 am Great chpaters that covered a lot of ground and brought a lot of characters together in a very fluid way. Can we kick Riley now? Jerk. Well, at least Spike will be home soon and they can get some things settled. Great chapters. ~~~*~~~
Lou 09/08/2005 @ 04:53 am Aaaah - Sweet William ~~~*~~~
DK 09/03/2005 @ 02:21 am Sometimes Dru can be alright! Does that make her a Grandmother? ~~~*~~~
Good chapter. ~*~Tasha~*~ 09/02/2005 @ 10:48 pm GO SPIKE ... RUN back to Buffy as fast as you can. Hell ... even bring Dru if she is willing to protect Buffy ... Just get your arse up there fast. If Walsh finds out, oh boy. Plus he heard the news from Finn himself. Oh please let Buffy realize that the baby is Spike's. Look forward to the next update. ~~~*~~~
TINA 09/02/2005 @ 05:20 pm PLEASE MORE SOON ~~~*~~~
spike_spetslayer 09/02/2005 @ 04:32 pm More, Opal! more!!!! ~~~*~~~
vicki 09/02/2005 @ 01:18 pm I love this story. But how did she really get pregnant with Spike's child? I can't wait to find out more! ~~~*~~~
ComedyofErrors 09/02/2005 @ 12:48 pm That's a great idea! Riley volunteered for South America, and of course Spike went back there. Brilliant! Nice of Dru to make sure that Spike paid attention. Now he can get back to Sunnydale and convince Buffy that he really loves her and that she loves him. ~~~*~~~
Ariel Dawn 09/02/2005 @ 12:33 pm hee hee, Loved the chappie! Still want to bash Riley's skull in, but now Spike knows! Yay! ~~~*~~~
Max 09/02/2005 @ 12:19 pm I can't say I like that fact that Spike seems to be running back to Buffy like he seems to be doing. PLEASE do not make him weak and wimpy Spike begging for scraps. We all got way too much of the in season 6. Spike has it right, Buffy refuses her feelings for Spike because of what he is not who he is even with proof of his loyality with Drusilla, she's just being a bitch about it. And about Buffy trying to run away with the kid mentioned in the challenge, anyone remember how well Spike to care of Dawn versus how poorly Buffy did. Spike is a LEGENDARY master vampire, who Angel feared more than the Master, despite how much Whedon apparently hates him and just slowly destroys him over the course of the series, remember how protective he was with girlfriend? I can't wait to see what happens when Buffy and friends try to keep him away from his child. ~~~*~~~
~*~Tasha~*~ 09/02/2005 @ 10:59 am Email URL {growls} What a bastard Riley is. He didn't even tell Buffy that he knows the child isn't his. {Growls again} I hope that Buffy gets the realization through her head that it can't be RIley's baby, and the baby is Spike's. Look forward to the next chapter. ~~~*~~~
Ariel Dawn 09/02/2005 @ 10:38 am Can we smack Riley over the head now? With a mace? Unfeeling bastard. Grrr. Not that I want him with Buffy for anything but...grrr. Bring on the next chapter! ~~~*~~~
ComedyofErrors 09/02/2005 @ 10:32 am About what I expected of Riley. Can't wait to see Spike in the future. Keep up the good work! ~~~*~~~
Max 09/02/2005 @ 07:27 am It's a good start. When Spike comes back please don't make him wimpy Spike (and preferrably no chip either), he can be nice without being a wimp like he was made out to be after the chip. ~~~*~~~
chanel 5 08/20/2005 @ 04:38 am Great start, but short. can't wait for more :) ~~~*~~~
Alice 08/18/2005 @ 09:29 pm Great fic, but not much Riley. ~~~*~~~
~*~Tasha~*~ 08/18/2005 @ 09:07 pm Excellent start to this challenge. I love it. I hope we get more of this one soon and continuously. Look forward to the next update. ~~~*~~~
ElizabethAnneSummers 08/18/2005 @ 06:23 pm Oooo, when's Spike going to show up?? ~~~*~~~
Braat44 08/18/2005 @ 06:18 pm Excellent start! Can't wait to see where it goes. ~~~*~~~
ComedyofErrors 08/18/2005 @ 04:46 pm Potential for a great story. Keep it going! ~~~*~~~
Ariel Dawn 08/18/2005 @ 04:10 pm Fantastic start. Can't wait for more!
Old BSV Site Reviews
10/01/2005 01:59 am
Lou 09/15/2005 @ 05:36 am
Poor Spike - getting the shitty end of the stick as usual. Hopefully he'll get the chance to make them all eat their words!
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Old BSV Site Reviews
10/01/2005 01:57 am
~*~Tasha~*~ 09/21/2005 @ 12:31 am
Ooooooooooo ... I just caught up on my reading of your story. Man am I sorry that I was behind on it. I read 6-9 and WOW. Loved em all. Loved how Angel just came right out with the realizations. Hope he doesn't cause problems, but it looks like he has at least accepted it,even if he doesn't like it. Can't wait for more.
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Lou 09/19/2005 @ 05:33 am l Delighted that Buffy's seeing sense at last! ~~~*~~~
ComedyofErrors 09/18/2005 @ 12:05 pm Oops, looks like baby William is more than he seems. I'm glad Angel didn't freak out completely. ~~~*~~~
Confused Muse 09/18/2005 @ 08:25 am Hmmm, do I sense smut? And probably a very very outraged Riley :) ~~~*~~~
redwulf50 09/18/2005 @ 07:46 am You, you, poopyhead. arrrrrrggggggggghhhhhh It was just getting good I feel like you changed the channels in the middle of the superbowl. (Pulls out own hair) freakin great chappie but I need more (whines) ~~~*~~~
spike_spetslayer 09/18/2005 @ 04:33 am God, Opal, this is getting better and better--and why are the baby's eyes flashing green? come on, baby, gimme more! ~~~*~~~
Erin 09/18/2005 @ 01:35 am Loved it!! More soon please. ~~~*~~~
txjmfan 09/18/2005 @ 12:56 am It's been a while since I'd read the story, I had to start over. But it was well worth it. Love what you've done with it. ~~~*~~~
MarzBar 09/18/2005 @ 12:46 am Thank the PTB that Buffy went to LA and not Iowa. Good thing that Spike is smarter than she is and has his connection to the baby. We need more soon, please. ~~~*~~~
ElizabethAnneSummers 09/18/2005 @ 12:38 am Oooooo, can't wait to hear the explainy bits. ~~~*~~~
Tami Brandt 09/17/2005 @ 11:25 pm can't wait for another update for this one :) ~~~*~~~
Max 09/17/2005 @ 11:17 pm That's it? After all the crap Buffy put Spike through when before she drove him off and trying to keep him apart from his son, it's just high honey I'm home, I don't mind being treated like crap and almost losing a child I never though t he could have just because of Angel and your delusions of a normal life, it doesn't matter if I'm fiercely loyal and protective with those I care about. Ask a couple parents how they'd feel if they someone tried to steal their child from them before you write the next chapter. I wouldn't be suprised if Spike gets violent, Buffy REALLY needs to get past her Angel issues even if Spike has to kick her ass a little bit to do it, we all saw WAY too much of that during the TV series. Other than my rant, it's a great fic. ~~~*~~~
vladt 09/15/2005 @ 09:29 pm Email great update. Buffy and William, Riley, Angel and Spike minutes behind. this should be fun. thanks ~~~*~~~
redwulf50 09/15/2005 @ 07:05 pm Email Sorryabout tghe missing reviews, but this story is still one of my faves :P, great story so far ~~~*~~~
ComedyofErrors 09/15/2005 @ 02:52 pm I like the idea of going to L.A. Angel is the perfect person to help, though Cordelia will probably freak out. I also like the connection between Spike and his son. ~~~*~~~
Rhonda 09/15/2005 @ 12:54 pm Finally something is coming to light for Buffy when it comes to Spike. I am so glad Spike was able to connect with William before they hit the road. And what fun it will be when Angel gets close enough to William to smell Spike and realize that he is family. ~~~*~~~
Lou 09/19/2005 @ 05:33 am l Delighted that Buffy's seeing sense at last! ~~~*~~~
ComedyofErrors 09/18/2005 @ 12:05 pm Oops, looks like baby William is more than he seems. I'm glad Angel didn't freak out completely. ~~~*~~~
Confused Muse 09/18/2005 @ 08:25 am Hmmm, do I sense smut? And probably a very very outraged Riley :) ~~~*~~~
redwulf50 09/18/2005 @ 07:46 am You, you, poopyhead. arrrrrrggggggggghhhhhh It was just getting good I feel like you changed the channels in the middle of the superbowl. (Pulls out own hair) freakin great chappie but I need more (whines) ~~~*~~~
spike_spetslayer 09/18/2005 @ 04:33 am God, Opal, this is getting better and better--and why are the baby's eyes flashing green? come on, baby, gimme more! ~~~*~~~
Erin 09/18/2005 @ 01:35 am Loved it!! More soon please. ~~~*~~~
txjmfan 09/18/2005 @ 12:56 am It's been a while since I'd read the story, I had to start over. But it was well worth it. Love what you've done with it. ~~~*~~~
MarzBar 09/18/2005 @ 12:46 am Thank the PTB that Buffy went to LA and not Iowa. Good thing that Spike is smarter than she is and has his connection to the baby. We need more soon, please. ~~~*~~~
ElizabethAnneSummers 09/18/2005 @ 12:38 am Oooooo, can't wait to hear the explainy bits. ~~~*~~~
Tami Brandt 09/17/2005 @ 11:25 pm can't wait for another update for this one :) ~~~*~~~
Max 09/17/2005 @ 11:17 pm That's it? After all the crap Buffy put Spike through when before she drove him off and trying to keep him apart from his son, it's just high honey I'm home, I don't mind being treated like crap and almost losing a child I never though t he could have just because of Angel and your delusions of a normal life, it doesn't matter if I'm fiercely loyal and protective with those I care about. Ask a couple parents how they'd feel if they someone tried to steal their child from them before you write the next chapter. I wouldn't be suprised if Spike gets violent, Buffy REALLY needs to get past her Angel issues even if Spike has to kick her ass a little bit to do it, we all saw WAY too much of that during the TV series. Other than my rant, it's a great fic. ~~~*~~~
vladt 09/15/2005 @ 09:29 pm Email great update. Buffy and William, Riley, Angel and Spike minutes behind. this should be fun. thanks ~~~*~~~
redwulf50 09/15/2005 @ 07:05 pm Email Sorryabout tghe missing reviews, but this story is still one of my faves :P, great story so far ~~~*~~~
ComedyofErrors 09/15/2005 @ 02:52 pm I like the idea of going to L.A. Angel is the perfect person to help, though Cordelia will probably freak out. I also like the connection between Spike and his son. ~~~*~~~
Rhonda 09/15/2005 @ 12:54 pm Finally something is coming to light for Buffy when it comes to Spike. I am so glad Spike was able to connect with William before they hit the road. And what fun it will be when Angel gets close enough to William to smell Spike and realize that he is family. ~~~*~~~
09/30/2005 10:01 pm
I think I reviewed this before. I still like it and hope you give us more soon.
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