DUST by KnifeEdge
Chapter: Chapter 10

Anna
06/20/2013 06:57 pm
just one example of my coecnrn in the world is: here in ontario we recycle, or most of us recycle as much as we can, in other provinces, an example is newfoundland, they do not practice the same, they do not recycle, they just throw everything out in the garbage, so my question is how do we make the world a better place for future generations and try to clean up alot of the landfill if every province, or countries dont practice the same, what difference are we making as a whole.Just sayin

05/16/2012 11:39 am
Beautiful. I love the inevitable confrontation as their frustration and exhaustion boils over. They're really getting to each other & yet they're both missing the truth of why. I like the growing snse of attraction that goes right along with the irritation. It strikes me as perfectly in canon. 

This could easily be a novel - a Buffy book perhaps. Very well done.

05/31/2011 01:09 am

LOL at Buffy threatening Spike with a plastic pen - good fight.

jane
05/24/2011 11:26 pm

Great update

shefelldown
05/19/2011 08:35 am
The plastic pen is such a lovely little detail!  I agree with Spike, Buffy is being kind of dumb about the culprit, but she's right as well, at least she's actively thinking up leads.  Love this story!

x
05/16/2011 06:07 pm

So much for my guess.. of Ethan- a little to vanilla spell for him.. Gone through the possible list of suspects in this chapter. 

Buffy and a plastic pen.. smart little slayer.  Always teetering on that edge of gotcha those two.. Love it - Spike ready to pounce, Buffy more aware, and then beggin' his way back..

 

hann23
05/16/2011 06:00 pm

This is an awesome story.  You nail there voices everytime.