DUST by KnifeEdge
Chapter: Chapter 23

Jac T
01/01/2013 06:39 pm
I liked this one

08/05/2011 11:55 pm

Nice chapter.  I liked poetic Spike sneaking in because he's with B. 

In the first section you switched POV from Spike to Buffy.  It would probably be good to have a break there. 

ejmlam
07/02/2011 05:39 pm
This is one of the most creative fics I've read--really, really liking it. It makes my day when there's an update. Loved the cconversation between Spike and Buffy in this chapter! Can't wait for more!

Yingxs
07/02/2011 10:23 am
That was beautiful,

thank you, for the update

nikki
07/02/2011 06:51 am

Oh, wow! I hope we are slowly getting to the turning point. This is definitely my favorite chapter so far. Although I thought that of the last one too. Excellent story!

shefelldown
07/02/2011 12:31 am
Your Spike is so Spike, and your Buffy is so Buffy.  Lovely.