The Man He was Meant to Be by behind blue eyes
Chapter: Chapter One

06/06/2014 09:43 pm

Very good!    Thank you for sharing your talent with the rest of us!

Allie
06/01/2014 01:03 pm
Your Spike is fantastically written!
 I'm so happy you think so!  Thanks so much, Allie!  More will be coming soon.

Allie
06/01/2014 01:01 pm
Oh no I'm hooked! I hate getting hooked on Uncompleted stories!! And by hate I mean *LOVE*
I have no intention of leaving this uncompleted, and just know reviews/support from wonderful readers such as yourself is what keeps me going!  Thanks! 

Theresa
05/31/2014 10:10 pm
Very good! I hope to read more soon. Thank you for sharing your talent with the rest of us!
No, thank you Theresa for taking the time to read, enjoy, and review my story.  More will be up on Wednesday.  I'd love to read your thoughts. 

05/31/2014 03:26 am
Illyria certainly has a way with words!  Great opener.
I was a tad worried since I've never written Illyria before, I'm glad what I wrote worked!  Thank you, Lou, for taking time to let me know your thoughts. 

05/31/2014 02:50 am
Eagerly awaiting next chapter and wondering how Spike will make a new start.  
Thank you, Joyce.  More will be up on Wednesday.  I'd love to read your thoughts. 

05/30/2014 08:10 am
Very interesting start but not enough. Need more please.
Thanks ever so, cathainsheart!  More will be coming shortly!  I'd love to know your thoughts on future chapters. 

05/30/2014 03:19 am
A fine beginning, with themes of loneliness, loss, and battle. Looking forward to the read.
I was hoping to capture loneliness, loss and battle, under the guise of humor.  I can't picture Spike and Illyria having an emotional heart to heart.  Thank you, Saggit for taking the time to read, enjoy and review my story.  More will be coming soon.