Outstanding - especially the beginning. 

I love how you use words  - super effective torture scene, just enough to make a powerful statement about Angel/Angelus without becoming extreme. 

 

oh this looks good.

very good..i liked it a lot..very true characters

Excellent start! I really like this... off to read some more.

Wonderful fic. Can't wait to see more of it.

Love it. amazing writing, your metaphors are brilliant and I think I'd still say this was great if it was a description of how to mix cement. But I'm glad it's not. the plot is fantastic. :) more, please!!!

Good start and suitably vile Angelus.

I've read it before, and it is still a great story worthy of many reading.

Great chapter.

I'm glad that you say this fic is done because I will be eagerly awaiting each chapter. I saw in your response to BSB's review that you have the whole fic at your site ... I might just run there cause I can't wait. {chuckles}

Fantastic story!! Welcome to the BSV, btw, sekkret friend of Spikeskat! Looking forward to reading more of this fic (or I might just hunt it down, LOL!)