Learning To Fly by spike_spetslayer
Chapter: Chapter 21--Vapor Trail

smlcspike
04/11/2007 03:58 pm
Oh I love how she told Angel of and then Spike points out she was being to hard on Angel.

Verda
06/23/2006 11:03 am
Nice Angel bashing, myself, I would have loved to have it drawn out a little more, maybe even a spot of violence. He got off easy. Just love this.

12/14/2005 04:43 pm
Well that certainly showed Angel (and I bet wulfie's happy! lol) Glad to see BUffy and Willow actually bonding and working through it - god knows, if she'd done that in the series, we might have avoided all the angst/bad Willow rubbish. Beautiful, involving, and touchingly humourous - loved this chapter

Nikkole
12/11/2005 11:04 pm
Another great chapter! I love it when people bring in DeHofryn (however thats spelled! To early for me!)! He is also one of my favorite characters that is not used enough. Keep up the great work!!

~*~Tasha~*~
12/11/2005 04:10 pm
Wulfie must be doing his own version of the Snoopy Dance on this chapte.r {chuckles} Love seeing Angel get kicked to the curb in this one. Her knowing about Cordy was an excellent way to keep things very plausible. Of course if she saw everything and everyone else, she would know about Cordy and Angel. Bravo!!! Love this chapter.

12/11/2005 03:53 pm
Great updates! liked the repentant Xander.

angelic_amy
12/11/2005 12:25 pm
Excellent update as always. Loved that Buffy went and saw Willow but if it were me I don't think I would have been so forgiving. Intrigued by the thing with Dawn - hope we find out more about it soon!
You know that old saying, amy--keep your friends close, keep your enemies closer....

Richard
12/11/2005 10:00 am
Buffy opening the door and disinviting Angel? From Dawn's accidental invitation of Harmony on the show, it's obvious that you can't disinvite a vamp simply by saying something. Having to open and keep hold of the door might be the smallest possible requirement of a full ritual. Which makes me wonder whether it's you that's so clever or whether it's your subconscious that's so clever ....
You know, you go from hot to cold, keeps a girl confused.... Yes, I realize that in the Jossverse, there are magics involved in the disinvite spell...but didn't you ever notice that nobody just tried revoking their invitation? Nobody ever said anything about it being unable to be done...and if something as simple as what Dawn said in season four was enough to invite them in, couldn't a disinvite be as simple? Don't read so much into things...take them as they come...because it clearly states on the top of my story that this is an alternative universe...and a disinvite may be all it takes.....in my world... After all, nothing else is the same in this season six, now is it?

Jeni
12/11/2005 07:37 am
Pet I really like how you are exploring the aspect of the key. I always thought that Dawn should have a more central 'use' for lack of a better word. the key opened portals to other deminsions, but after Buffy's death/resurrection Joss just kind of made her normal. She could have played a larger role.

kat
12/11/2005 03:01 am
This story is addictive. I can't stop reading it. Which i guess is a good thing for you. lol. I am waiting for more lol

12/11/2005 12:29 am
Good chappy.

12/10/2005 11:59 pm
Nice little Angel punishment; just enough to be really irritating. Looking forward to finding out more about the Stewardship.

murph
12/10/2005 11:41 pm
ok that was awesome. there can never really be enough Angel spanking. good job!

Judy
12/10/2005 10:48 pm
Great chapter. With this story, I think I'm actually beginnng to like Xander.

12/10/2005 09:02 pm
lol, thank you, this is a great way to wake up on a Saturday morning

jane
12/10/2005 07:53 pm
Awesome chapter really enjoyed it. For a big hero Angel has no qualms about pushing little girls around. Let's not go into how he treats poor Cordy. If she had any sense she'd kick him into touch as well.

Tamara
12/10/2005 06:59 pm
I am loving this chapter so much!The soul convo was needed to be in canon. I love that Buffy realized that Angel sees her as Property and he really has no manners at all , does he?

12/10/2005 05:42 pm
MORE! Most fantastic!

12/10/2005 04:57 pm
Oh squee! Hoffie! yay...and it's gonna be slayer central just like when the potentials were all there. YAY.

sue
12/10/2005 04:23 pm
I'm so happy - Buffy kicked Angel into touch! Happy sighs. Loving this and looking forward to more. Thanks.

12/10/2005 04:17 pm
Yay! I actually like D'Hoffryn a lot. He is one of my favorite underused characters, and it's nice to see him even mentioned in a fic. Great chapter update. -Lisa