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Rock, Paper, Scissors. by Ariel Dawn 12/10/2014 01:39 pm Hot and hilarious! 06/06/2014 09:21 pm I wanna be sedated! No, who'm I foolin', I wanna be wild!! Excellent! 03/30/2010 03:20 pm 09/07/2006 02:36 pm lol...very excellent little story here...funny and fun and sexy...great job :) Thanks! B 04/06/2006 10:07 pm That was good, sweet and hot. Nicely written to. Really liked it. Only tiny tiny critism i have, 'Ya' isn't a word. I could deal with it in the speech (although, i prefer 'yeah' or just 'yes') but it was in the narrative as well, and that was really jarring. Yes should be used in the narrative i think. It was in there right at the beginning and i nearly stopped reading because i thought if someone used that in narrative they would use other slang and non-words and it'd be badly written. I'm glad i read on because this was good, and that little word was the only issue i had. Thought i'd mention it just as something to think about. Ok, I can understand that, and I respect your right to not like how I write things. I use the word Ya. Ya, it's not exactly 'proper' however, I dislike how 'yeah' is spelt to such an extent that I do not use it, if I can help it. Perhaps it's a flaw, I'm ok with it. Thanks for your opinion, and I'm really glad you liked the fic other than that word. Oracleholly 12/25/2005 03:30 am What a great Christmas prezzie for BTL! Excellent ... I wanna play Rock, Paper, Scissors so Spike can come to my house too. *pouts* hmmm, don't we all...can I have Spike wrapped up and under my tree? 12/24/2005 01:39 am Great fic, but I still think Buffy needs a spanking :P lol wulfie you always think Buffy needs a spanking! ~*~Tasha~*~ 12/21/2005 05:42 am Loved this one. Always a treat to read your stories!! Thanks Tasha! *hugs fellow misfit* vladt 12/18/2005 03:01 pm what a lovely christmas present! Thanks kat 12/17/2005 02:25 am Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww so sweet lol love holiday stories Glad you like! 12/17/2005 12:37 am Teeheehee!! Nice snuggly love making and then RAMONES!! Fun story; thank you for sharing BTL's present with us. Glad you like! ComedyofErrors 12/16/2005 11:30 pm Very sweet; love the finale. Thanks! Lou 12/16/2005 09:27 pm I just love a good dose of the old festive feelings! Glad you like! idk5743228 12/16/2005 10:43 am What a way to spend a cold, snowy christmas evening. Do you think I could get Spike delivered? Merry Christmas, LOL Isabella lol, Can I have Spike delivered too? 12/16/2005 09:15 am Oh, I just had to read it again. It was good. *sigh*
And you put it under porn with some plot! *snerk* It doens't have 'some' plot? I'll argue it has at least 1/4 of a plot...that's still some 12/16/2005 08:19 am LMAO, poor Spike, Poor Joyce, Evil Buffy, she needs a spanking :-> You always think that Buffy needs a spanking wulfie! | |||
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