"dont be sad, william"...yeah...that's gonna work after all *those* bombshells...great chapter, love :)

Well why didn't the Powers stop it in the first place, stupid Powers. Now poor William must go back again, sooo not fair. Good chappie.

whimpers no no no

Uh-huh.. what happened to William Jr.? He isn't back. *reads on* Oh my.. this is truly bad. Things didn't get better, things got worse. That's why nobody is there (except the ghost of Joyce). The PTBs wants William to make things better? Good I can read on, well even for one chapter, then I've caught up with the story..

great chapter

:( omg.. that is soo sad... i was crying..

Oh my gosh ... {Stares at the screen with a gaped open mouth} ... that was more than evil, Opal. I do hope that your muse has inspired you to write more ... and hopefully soon.

I can't wait to see what Joyce and the PTB are going ot have him do to make it right. Damn that jerk travers. He peeves me off to no end. Him and his self-righteous ways. {growls}

Excellently written chapter.

yes you are evil. deliciously evil. love the update. thanks

*runs off back to her room to cry*

Evil? Yes!

The PTBs think it can be fixed, eh? Oh, boy.

Gr, yes u are evil, with two E's and two I's,lol. You can give Dr. Evil a run for his money. Now get to work on the next chappie.

uh ooh....and the plot thickens hehe...anyway im lovin this story!! even with all the evil cliffies you have been throwing around like rice....*grins*...good job...keep it up!

oh you truly are evil...I really need more...PLLLLLEEEAASE :)

Brilliant as usual!

ack!! whimpers...*looks around for the biggest thing i can throw* rofl...you weren't kidding when you said angst!

Hmmmm. Pretty wretched happenings that Joyce described. What can William do to change all those bad events? Can he off Travers first? More story please.

yes, you are very evil! But that's okay, I am too. :D Such an interesting development. Looking forward to more. Write fast!

Ohh that Travers needs to die...and die slowly and painfully....lets get Angelus and Dru to play with him...I'm sure Dru would love to have him over for a nice Tea party :)

Well I am glad that the Powers will give William the opportunity to fix this mess. Can't wait to read what he will have to do.

Oh you so need to write faster. I can't believe you just left it off like that for me. Wonder what Joyce is going to tell him?

Evil Opal. Good chapter. Darn that Travers. He needs to be staked over and over again.