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Broken by Athenewolfe
Chapter: Broken
02/10/2008 10:48 pm
Wow. Dark and wonderful. That final line is just perfect - the selfish and selfless combined in a way that unrequited love can cause.
alým
02/02/2008 09:16 pm
wow...it REALLY is dark
~*~Tasha~*~
07/16/2006 11:03 pm
Wow, Steph. Catching up, and I know I read this before but there isn't a review here. This is just wow.
Thank you Tasha - I am glad you liked Broken - I have to admit I liked writing it - course I realy love the dark fic... just makes me think what if...
06/10/2006 05:26 am
Whoa! Can I say, wow. Really sucked me in!
thank you sweetie!
Whoa! Can I say, wow. Really sucked me in!
Whoa! Can I say, wow. Really sucked me in!
Verda
06/10/2006 02:57 am
WOW! that was dark, powerful and so sad and what else could he do? Evn in his darkest hour, he still thinks of only her. Loved it!
Thank you *blushes* Spike is so very complex I think that is why we love hiM!
WOW! that was dark, powerful and so sad and what else could he do? Evn in his darkest hour, he still thinks of only her. Loved it!
WOW! that was dark, powerful and so sad and what else could he do? Evn in his darkest hour, he still thinks of only her. Loved it!
Tonia
06/09/2006 03:38 pm
That was raw. Stark, bleak, and raw. Damn good too.
Now I need to go read some smut to feel better. ;)
Now I need to go read some smut to feel better. ;)
thank you - I really appreciate the review!
That was raw. Stark, bleak, and raw. Damn good too.
Now I need to go read some smut to feel better. ;)
That was raw. Stark, bleak, and raw. Damn good too.
Now I need to go read some smut to feel better. ;)
Smokescreen
06/09/2006 05:03 am
Omg...that's so sad. piercing... you've captured the "what-if" perfectly. if that had really happened...omg...
good work :) nice rhythm and flow of words.
good work :) nice rhythm and flow of words.
Thank you so much! I was captivated by what would happen if he had succedded in the bathroom and I thought it just might break them both! *hugs*
Omg...that's so sad. piercing... you've captured the "what-if" perfectly. if that had really happened...omg...
good work :) nice rhythm and flow of words.
Omg...that's so sad. piercing... you've captured the "what-if" perfectly. if that had really happened...omg...
good work :) nice rhythm and flow of words.
06/09/2006 02:57 am
Wow! Very dark... and VERY good. Thanks
Thank you sweetie for the review!
06/09/2006 02:44 am
Very angsty AW. Hope there's more. Not sure Spike wouldn't have dusted himself if he'd actually raped her.
Thank you - those darn dark prompts were taunting me!
Very angsty AW. Hope there's more. Not sure Spike wouldn't have dusted himself if he'd actually raped her.
Very angsty AW. Hope there's more. Not sure Spike wouldn't have dusted himself if he'd actually raped her.
06/09/2006 12:14 am
oh my gosh...that is so very powerful...dark but very well written and moving...i have no other words...this is incredible :)
thank you sweetie I really appreciate it!
nat
06/08/2006 11:01 pm
Loved this! It would make a great beginning to a much longer fic. I just want to know more.
thank you! One day I may expand past the two drabbles *grin*
06/08/2006 07:44 pm
Uh! That was utterly gut wrenching. Just... wow.
thank you! I was on a dark trend that week!
Kat
06/08/2006 06:25 pm
yikes yes that was dark. yet somehow moving. it was written really well. it kinda made my heart jump into my chest
Thank you! I appreciate the review!
yikes yes that was dark. yet somehow moving. it was written really well. it kinda made my heart jump into my chest
yikes yes that was dark. yet somehow moving. it was written really well. it kinda made my heart jump into my chest
06/08/2006 05:40 pm
GAH! *runs and hides* powerful ficcie hun! *hugz*
thank you sweetie! *hugs*
ms clawdia
06/08/2006 05:21 pm
Jesus!
Was that good or bad?
Review by ms clawdia
Jesus!
Review by ms clawdia
Jesus!
06/08/2006 05:20 pm
*sobs* Excellent piece. Perfect in its darkness.
thank you sweetie! I am glad that you liked broken! *hugs you*
Robyn
06/08/2006 04:11 pm
Heartbreaking and oh so well done. You managed so much with so little.
Thank you Robyn, I am glad that you enjoyed Broken. *hugs*
06/08/2006 03:22 pm
Awesome... the best dark fic i read in a long long time.
At first I felt like there should be a continuation. But after a thought... no. It's better this way.
At first I felt like there should be a continuation. But after a thought... no. It's better this way.
thank you - I am glad that you liked it :-) *blushes*
06/08/2006 03:20 pm
Scary, but so sad. Poor Spike, his lack of restraint finally caused him to lose his mind. Achingly wistful.
Thank you - I am glad that you liked it. I am having a lot of fun with my prompt table for dark fics. Just must be my twisted mind.
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