Last Orders by SpikesDeb
Chapter: Chapter 5

09/08/2007 05:49 am
if only dawn could take for both spike and buffy, the anger and stubbornness would not get in the way. very good read, thank you. you have the voices of dawn, spike and buffy nailed.
Yes, Dawnie talks the best sense. Maybe she'll wear off on them.

And wow...thanks for your comments on voices. To hear I have the voices right is the best compliment I could ever have.

Thanks so much for reading and the next chapter is going up very soon.

09/06/2007 09:05 pm
Great chapter.
Thank you. Hope you enjoy the rest.

Kimberly Adams
09/06/2007 10:13 am
Now I wanna slap both of them! Talk about the stupidity of pride but I understand Spike not wanting to be kicked in the head anymore. I do look forward to seeing Drunk Buffy again so that should be rather hilarious...and sad.

Hope they both get a clue and kiss each other senseless in the next chapter and I will be eagerly awaiting it!
Great story Deb!
Yes, stubborn as anything, both of them. Drunk Buffy is a delight, so hope you like. Next chapter is going up very soon - hope you like...*bites nails*

Thanks!

Isabel
09/06/2007 09:37 am
lol maybe alcohol is a good thing in this situation. It makes me happy that they're all trying to get them together, even Giles. Great chapter, great story. Can't wait for the next update!
I think in face of the evidence before their eyes - of a slowly-sinking Buffy and a seemingly ardent Spike - the Scoobies and Giles would have to admit defeat and make things happen. And alcohol is probably a good thing, you're right ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing - next chapter going up very soon.

kim
09/06/2007 04:29 am
Yeah, no food all day, and then a lot of booze? Slayer's going night-night.

I don't blame Spike for wanting to be the chased this time, even though it's getting in the way.
*giggles* She's definitely going to be a leeeeetle big groggy at least. ;)

And Spike needs to know he's loved and wanted, not just tolerated. Don't we all? Thanks for reading and reviewing :)

09/06/2007 03:27 am
Ok, ugh, Spike! You bone-head. Staying in the house refusing to go to Buffy. But what can we expect? lol I liked how Willow told him that she missed him. I think even in canon if the show went on, they all would have missed Spike.

Buffy and Giles both drunk, not good. But would she get drunk so soon? I can't remember back to Beer Bad and how long it took her to get drunk.

Well, I'm sad, now I have to wait till the weekened for another update, lol. But it's worth the wait!!!
He can be a stubborn vamp, just like the Slayer. They need their heads knocked together. I'd like to think that the Scoobies would get a brain cell eventually, and Willow would be able to persuade them all to see the good in Spike - in my world anyway.

Buffy was drinking beer in Beer Bad, and she's drinking shots in this, so yes - I think she would get drunk very quickly due to the high alcohol content, and no food! Glad you're enjoying, and next chapter is going up very soon.

09/06/2007 02:46 am
Thanks for the update, looking forward to Saturday.
Thank you, glad you're enjoying. Next chapter going up in a short while :)

09/06/2007 02:40 am
Good for Spike. He shouldn't stick around to be her punching bag. And *drunk* Buffy - should be funny. Looking forward to the next installment.
He needs to have an equal, not a master. I think they are equals, if they can just realise it. Drunk Buffy is just a gigglefest to write. Thanks for reading, and hope you enjoy the rest.