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Last Orders by SpikesDeb 09/11/2007 04:06 am I cheated a little. Read in someone else's review that this story was finished on another website so I went looking for it and read the whole thing. But since I didn't leave you reviews on the other site, I figured it's only fair to leave you some here. lol Giles all flustered because of drunk Buffy and then being used by the others for booze was just priceless! Buffy's got an amazingly good boss to let her drink like that on the job :) Drunk Buffy is sooo funny. God, she was such a mess, I loved it. And poor Xander. What is it with him and women? He really should consider becoming gay. *grins* Very enterprising :) I think Giles is easily manipulated by his girls, and he's such a sweet chump. And Geno is TERRIFIED of Buffy, so it's more a case of him hiding his head. I love drunk Buffy, she keeps creeping into my stories with amazing regularity. And Xander should definitely dance with a different partner. Thanks so much for your detailed feedback, much appreciated. 09/10/2007 06:55 am very good read, thank you. loved the chapter ending. Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it. I had such fun writing this story! I'm glad people have enjoyed reading it. Kim Adams 09/09/2007 08:53 am ROFL! Buffy, alcohol, and toilets, perfect ending! I loved this chapter and poor Xander and his demon attraction...lol, but it is only fitting, maybe he will find a woman he can love and treat better than Anya, whadaya think? I loved the sneaky reference to Rocky Horror you did...you are so bad... Can't wait for the next chapter! Kim Glad you liked it - I loved this chapter when I was writing it. And Xander needs the love of a good woman, sure enough. I couldn't help the Rocky Horror - they were singing in my head, so I had to let them. Next chapter now up! 09/09/2007 07:42 am Ok, it was worth the wait. I really enjoyed this chapter, and Spike causing small evils, ROFL! I knew something had to be wrong with that chick Xander was talking to, and when he fell off the stole, I was thinking he's a man. Enjoyed the fight scene too, and the ending... classic. Can't wait for more!!! Thank you so much :) I'm glad you liked it - I've just put up chapter 7 so I hope you still enjoy. 09/09/2007 02:03 am Excellent, an update - and they've seen each other - yay! Is "Brad and Janet" a little nod to Rocky Horror, or just a happy coincidence? Love sneaky little references like that ... VW. Hee! Yes, you caught me out in my little nod, most definitely a RH reference. I'm an addict, I admit it. Thanks for reading :) | |||
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