What a fantastic fun story! A real treat.

Loved the start to this one, good to see riley getting clocked with a stake LOL.
Keep up the good work!!!

Chez

Intriguing start. I love the banter between the various characters. The snarky, witty dialogue was always one of the things I loved about the series, and you've captured that brilliantly. I'm looking forward to more.

Awesome start. Can't wait to see more :)

Good story so far. Update soon. I love Portal!Buffy. I wonder if she'll get Regular!Buffy and Spike together.

Excellent start here. Will be interesting what this visiting Buffy tells and does not tell to this group. YAY on the Eddie rescue.

Kathleen

definitely set the hook with this opening chapter. very good read, thank you.

Really interesting start.

Oh what a wonderful start! Here's hoping FutureBuffy can head off the travesty that is Buffy/Riley and show the benefits of accepting Spike. Can't wait for more.

I love this story! What a fantastic start. I cannot wait to read more!! I love your funny, snarky banter between S4 Spike and Buffy that had a layer of friendship underneath. :)

Great beginning to a time-travel fic. I like how you're focusing on the characters in the past, not the all-knowing future characters going back in time. That Portal-Buffy is so open and friendly, not bitter and cynical, after eleven years of slaying makes me think we'll be discovering her past along with the original Buffy and Spike and I'm fascinated by it.
That little hint of Spike's feelings after he explains about Clem's family and Buffy instantly decides to help the child, demon or not, is beautifully done. It's not glaringly obvious or love-at-first sight, and it's realistic. The banter and patrolling together and awe Spike shows at Buffy's decision about Eddy is a great start to a romance.
Hope you update soon, this story sounds like it'll get very interesting very soon with the Initiative skulking around!

Good start, looks very promising. Looking forward to more

Great beginning! Looking forward to future chapters.

well done :)

Nice start looking forward to more of this tale.

Let's hear it for Buffy the independent thinker, not buying the Council line on demons.

so far so good on the new story, i'll keep an eye out for more.

Oh, that was really good; nice to see Spike and Buffy getting along sort of!! You've got Spike's voice down to a T, and I love the banter between the two of them; please update again soon!!

Very nice start to what looks like and interesting story, thanks.

Interesting start, I'm enjoying this so far. Stupid Initiative, who cares if he's a demon? He's still just a kid, but they only seem to live in a black and white world. I'm glad Buffy helped distract them, so Spike could get him out of there. I'm guessing by future Buffy's reaction that Spike isn't with her in the future, but I could be wrong. I also really love time travel fictions. Can't wait for more=)

Ooh, I love time travel fics, they're my favorite!
Love this so much, can't wait for an update!