Distance by Herself
Chapter: One

02/21/2008 06:00 am
enjoy the starting point. loved "That's all you Indians need to know."

01/12/2008 07:59 pm
wonderful ending - so glad to be able to read another of your works - this really gets to my "bleak side" mind set of their relationship -

"She made up her mind there and then that Spike's surfacing was no reason to leave Scotland."

fine lines, but oh so cold and hard; scary and really got to me. In so many ways a perfect picture of Buffy and their relationship. There was a part of Buffy that would be so cruel and heartless and angry. Even if it all came from some very deep and troubling self-doubts and self-hatred, there was a big part of her that was very difficult to accept or like.

01/12/2008 09:05 am
It hurt me a little for Buffy to admit that she didn't love Spike! I guess it makes sense that with the trauma and craziness of the two years after she was brought back she could never quite allow herself the chance to really love him. But she did care, enough to strangely compel her to go to him.

01/11/2008 03:20 am
very nice card metaphor. Buffy deserves a smack for being so hard hearted.

01/10/2008 11:57 pm
Intriguing beginning; Spike's feral (I love him like that, yum!) and doesn't know Buffy? Obviously a sign of the apocalypse! So glad to see a new story by you; absolutely LOVE your work! Any new Bittersweet on the horizon?? *hint hint?, LOL* Can't wait to see more of this new one; update again soon!