The Truce by Eternal_red
Chapter: Chapter 3

Brunettepet
02/13/2008 12:15 am
 The markings are going to alert everyone that the "happy couple" haven't gotten happy yet.  I'm sure Spike won't take kindly to the unwelcome notice.

The matriarchy of the  Aurelians is going to put Buffy at an unknowing advantage.  Dru spelled it out for her, but she probably hasn't put it all together yet.
yes Spike is not going to be a happy bunny about the tatts and he'll be pretty determined not to let Buffy get the upper hand. Poor dear.

01/30/2008 06:37 am
 what a lovely thought to start a marriage: "The bitch was going to pay for that." fun read, thank you.
Methinks he doth protest too much. Our jaded soldier Spike is going to have a few more bad thoughts before he's done - but then so is Buffy. Glad you like.

Reb
01/28/2008 09:43 pm
I love the little hints you've dropped that neither party will find the other's world as distastful as they imagine, once they get around to actually tasting. The fresh air and matriarchy intrigue Buffy, the music and technology appeal to Spike, and it's only been one day. I'm sure they'll find many other surprising and satisfying cultural exchanges as they go along. Such as, ". . . all he had to look forward to was a dutiful rut with the fragile little earthling." And he thinks she has no idea!
Yes I almost feel sorry for Spike - this will definitely be a battle of the sexes - and of other things. Perceptive comment about their mutual curiosity - thank you.

sirc
01/28/2008 06:09 pm
Well done :)
Thank you sirc.

01/28/2008 02:08 pm
This foc is so much fun. Can't wait to see where it goes :P
Thank you Avalon.

Deb
01/28/2008 09:45 am
I love your truly inventive way of pitting them against each other as enemies that have to make the best of a tough situation. Remarkable glints of Spike's devotion to do Droosilla's (hoot!)bidding. Buffy's "I'm tired" bitchiness. I'm cracking up with mirth and loving the tension at the same time. Really interesting writing and I'm truly looking forward to updates!
Love the to-and-fro of attraction/annoyance between our couple in other fictions - would be boring if they just fell into the other's arms. Glad you share my sense of humour too.

01/28/2008 03:18 am
LOL - poor Buffy. Wonderful chapter.
Thank you Spikez-tart - really glad you liked the chapter.

Jasbrico
01/28/2008 12:32 am
Awww poor things, arranged marriages are never fun at first.
I can't wait to see more of Buffy learning about her inner beast (and its effect on Spike!)
Keep up the great work and be sure to feed your fans soon!
Spike's almost the civilized one in this pairing. Buffy's inner beast will be coming out to play some more before her human self realises that she's on to a very good thing. Thank you Jasbrico.

01/27/2008 11:17 pm
Damn indeed. Poor little Spike. Nice idea - was wondering what would break the barricade Buffy would inevitably put up. Now let's see how long she lasts. He he he.
Nothing like a bit of UST to muddle the feelings - poor things indeed. Thanks jess.

01/27/2008 09:06 pm
I remember reading this (at least this far) on the LJ and lost track of it. I can't tell you how delighted I am that you are posting it here. I have thought of it often and enjoyed rereading up to here and can't wait for more. This is so original!

Kathleen
Am back in the flow of it now. Am so glad you remember it after all this time.

SpaceLord
01/27/2008 08:26 pm
Is this going to be some lame ass story where Buffy's got Spike by the balls and we have a wimp Spike?
Ah. Well given the original challenge brief on Spuffy Haven it probably should be but as I don't much care for wimpy Spike myself It will even out in the end. You may want to protect your manly bits for a little while longer though.

IT
01/27/2008 08:15 pm
This just keeps getting better! More soon, please!
Soon I promise

Cas
01/27/2008 08:01 pm
Like he would need any extra incentive! Love the touch about the wrisst cuffs - can't wait to see how it plays out.
Glad you liked the cuffs. Like to steal little touches from the original show and playing with them.

BerMH
01/27/2008 07:38 pm
So, I'm very interested to know what the "marriage" entails. I can't wait to hear more of the bond that they share, especially when they figure out that they aren't so wrong for each other after all. Keep up the good work!
This fic is all about their relationship. Like all marriages its going to take a lot of work but I think we know how its going to end up.