Distance by Herself
Chapter: Fifty-one

04/27/2008 03:16 am
loved faith's move. very good red, thank you. spike can be a bit stubborn, can't he?

BT_
03/19/2008 05:29 am
I like your changes. 

03/17/2008 12:40 am
Spike thinks entirely too much.  Loved the "guys are situational" line. and silence on her end. Stubborn, sad, angry, he couldn't tell

03/16/2008 07:51 pm
Definitely liking the rewrite. It  feels more fluid and does not have the angsty jerking back and forth.  Thanks for your efforts.

03/15/2008 11:57 am
Surprising selfless Faith there, honest too.  Dare we hope something good will come of this?

Laura
03/15/2008 02:40 am
I liked Faith's kick in the pants.

Dee
03/14/2008 09:41 pm
This was a great chapter.  Makes me glad for the rewrite.  I like the Spike/Faith interraction.  Like the realization he has. 

03/14/2008 06:33 pm
Yay for Faith, for coming through like this! And yay for Spike finally trying to get in touch with her! Can't wait to say how their meeting goes

*keeps fingers crossed*
xxx

03/14/2008 06:23 pm
NICE encounter with Faith and Spike - I always thought that Faith and Angel would have been so good together - good for each other.  Thought she was wonderful in this chapter.   I loved her line about "clarity"
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Could all that be all right? Or was it—the idea dug its claws into his mind and could not be torn loose—was it that her painful career had so warped her that she was ruined for a real man, real love? Her desire for him the principal symptom of a terrible, an unfortunate, pathology?
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Good questions because so much of their history, IMO, was fracture and made tragic by her past -

Pin
03/14/2008 05:24 pm
Very nice; loved the conversation with Faith, who would have been a contender, if his affections weren't so thoroughly captured.  And Buffy, hovering and hoping.  Lovely.

Reb
03/14/2008 05:20 pm
The dialogue in this chapter is loads of fun, but the bit about putting on a pot of coffee for friends far away . . . just stunning. So simple and evocative.

sue
03/14/2008 04:22 pm
Absence makes the heart ......... and a perfect picture, those tears on the runaway, supposedly 'ambivalent' vampire's face.

Lovely.

ya_lublyu_tebya
03/14/2008 04:08 pm
Very good chapter. I was ready to get very pissed at Faith... but she did good (in a weird, twisted sort of way). Hope they can talk and fix all this badness.

03/14/2008 03:38 pm
Can't wait for the next chapter, excellent as always!

Pam S
03/14/2008 03:14 pm
 Thank you.. Faith.. Made him have a few realizations.. Step 1 - I guess.. 

    Maybe a few battles with demons and Buffy..  at another Hellmouth would put things more into perspective.. he does love watching her fight..

  Enjoying..

  

 

pearlseed
03/14/2008 03:12 pm
"He believed her, but still wasn't sure."
Oh, gawd, he does still love her!!  Thank you thank you--and if I ever get off this addicting roller coaster of a story, I think I'm gonna hug your neck.  She is grown up now--is Spike finally there too?  Take care of them (and us) I'm so glad to be reading your story again!!