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Decoy by Isabel
Chapter: Visitors
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05/22/2010 01:47 am
Brunettepet
06/19/2008 03:03 pm
The slayer meeting was entertaining, especially Buffy's dismissive Dawn talk. Dawn whining and stomping outside the castle gave me a grin, too.
Spike and Andrew's ride to the castle was funny, and this line made me laugh out loud: "Contorted in a seat not fit for a small child, wrapped in a blanked that reeked of mold and other unidentified smells, and suffering from a mild concussion due to the numerous bumps in the road and the low ceiling, Spike started to miss his wooden crate." Poor Spike, he's getting battered and bruised on this European vacation
Buffy's stunned, then angry, then weepy reaction to Spike was stellar. I had no idea what to expect, but it was vivid and emotional.
Spike and Andrew's ride to the castle was funny, and this line made me laugh out loud: "Contorted in a seat not fit for a small child, wrapped in a blanked that reeked of mold and other unidentified smells, and suffering from a mild concussion due to the numerous bumps in the road and the low ceiling, Spike started to miss his wooden crate." Poor Spike, he's getting battered and bruised on this European vacation
Buffy's stunned, then angry, then weepy reaction to Spike was stellar. I had no idea what to expect, but it was vivid and emotional.
I always enjoyed the chemistry between Spike and Andrew. I like how Andrew worships Spike.
About Buffy... I couldn't see her just throwing herself in Spike's arms so I tried to imagine what kind of reaction she would really have. That seemed believable to me. Glad you liked.
About Buffy... I couldn't see her just throwing herself in Spike's arms so I tried to imagine what kind of reaction she would really have. That seemed believable to me. Glad you liked.
05/31/2008 11:57 am
Loved your interaction between Spike and Andrew - plus, I love how you bring Spike and Buffy together -
I look forward to seeing your version of season eight - great project -
I look forward to seeing your version of season eight - great project -
Thank you so much! I appreciate your comments and I'm glad you like the way I write Spike and Andrew. These two always made me laugh ;)
TwilightChild
05/14/2008 12:21 am
Love her running and smacking into him. Gotta love those unexpected reunions. There's just so many ways they can turn out.
Thank you for continuing your story. :)
Thank you for continuing your story. :)
No problem. Of course I was gonna continue it, I love writing this story. It's a little difficult keeping up with all the different characters, but I like a challenge. I wanted the reunion to be funny in an ironic way. I hope I managed. I figured Buffy was not the type of positive girl who believes in miracles unless they smack her in the face and she would jump to the worst conclusion. In this case: that The First was back. Happy you liked it.
Veronica
05/07/2008 11:39 pm
Just read this from the beginning and I love it! Can't wait to see how the reunion plays out!
Thanks, Veronica!
Veronica
05/07/2008 11:39 pm
Just read this from the beginning and I love it! Can't wait to see how the reunion plays out!
Thanks, Veronica. It means a lot to me that you love it. You shouldn't have to wait too long for an update, my beta already has the next chapter. I'll post as soon as she send it back.
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