Decoy by Isabel
Chapter: If only I knew how to lie

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05/22/2010 01:55 am
 

Brunettepet
06/19/2008 03:26 pm
 I loved Buffy's babbling about her hair and being all random and charming.  The depth of her mourning was heart hurting, but her reaction to his not contacting her immediately was even worse.  Spike was an idiot, but not listening to his explanation is making his actions seem callous.

Molly realizing there's something not kosher about Sergeant Vol's mission is a step in the right direction.  The slayers will have a woman on the inside if she discovers they're forces for good in the world.

Excellent Giles voice in this chapter.  His exasperation and anger were an entertaining read.
Yeah, these two have issues. Spike was an idiot for not telling her he was back, and she was an idiot for not listening to his explanation. But they'll figure it out.

I like Molly. I'm having fun writing her character. I like smart, strong women. It will be good to have her on their side, for sure.

I'm glad you like my Giles. I don't really like writing Giles because I always feel like I'm getting him wrong. It's harder for me to write proper British, then it is to write slang. When I travel to the UK, I hear mostly slang British because that's the way most young brits speak. So it makes it easier to write Spike.

Owen
06/17/2008 08:31 am
Very nicely done, not just Buffy's reaction but also Molly's.  They're both upset about being left out of the real story.
Exactly. You got it :) Two strong women who like to be in control. Thanks for your comment.

06/14/2008 01:03 am

Spike sighed. "Luv, I wasn't expecting to walk in, say 'Honey I'm home' and have you offering me a drink, the news paper and my slippers, but please, say something. Anything..."

"I cut my hair. I'm sorry."

This is UTTERLY perfect!! not being funny at all, that is one of the best buffy/spike interactions ive read in a VERY long time
so very descriptive of shock and so very Buffy it struck a cord. "I cut my hair. I'm sorry." <-- genius

This is so funny because I honestly wasn't sure if people would get the "I cut my hair" speech. Not that I think people are stupid, but because I was afraid it would only made sense to me. What I see happening in my head isn't necessarily what other people would expect. But I'm so happy I got so many great comments about this.

06/13/2008 07:19 pm
Just started this and am gobbling it up rapidly but wanted to make a pit stop to let you know it is brilliant!  THIS is how they should have written S8 in the comic. It even has many of their cherished elements in it but THIS  THIS makes sense...this is well written, well plotted and totally in character.  Fabulous.

Totally adored the reaction in realizing it was Spike and the inner musings.  Excellent and insightful view of Buffy's mind.  BUT the whole I cut my hair and further explanation was CLASSIC and marvelous.

LOVING this....you are reclaiming my characters from the debacle of the comic dismantling of all I loved.  I could kiss you.

Kathleen
Thank you thank you thank you!!! Honey, you just totally made my day. I was super stressed out because I'm about to spend seven days working with a guy who hates my guts and was starting to get a migraine just thinking about it, then I turned my computer on and your fabulous reviews made me so happy that I forgot all about the next seven days lol. I so needed the confidence boost.

It's funny because the hair monologue was the one thing I wasn't sure about, and it turns out everybody seems to like it. It was not even planned but while I was writing, I could just see it happening in my head. Glad you enjoyed it.

I was afraid a lot of people wouldn't read the story because they hate the comics so much. I'm not a big fan either (except for the ones with Faith) But it brought me back to the good old days when they would do something I disagreed with on the show, and I would write a fanfic to fix it. Not liking what they do with my favorite characters is such a great motivation for me to write. So God bless the frustrating comic books lol

05/31/2008 12:20 pm
I for one am enjoying this work very much - sorry you are not getting the amount of reviews you deserve but I know that your readers are having a great deal of pleasure reading your continuation of the series -
It's alright because the reviews I do get are great. As long as people are enjoying it, that's all that matters.

05/17/2008 03:31 am
buffy's "pointless conversation" was the beginning of her actual saying what she thought. or, it slipped out in the babble. she was again emotionally  honest up to the point that emotion took over completely. but if it was that easy we would be deprived of many  chapters to enjoy. very good read, thank you
Things are just never easy with Buffy. I didn't want a "they fall into each other's arms and live happily ever after" kinda thing. I was trying to keep it real. I hope it works. Thanks you so much. I always enjoy your reviews.

05/14/2008 07:31 pm
I'm a bad, bad reader and I haven't reviewed your story at all.  I"m sorry!  I am enjoying it!!!  I liked Spike's reaction to Buffy's outburst.  I cna't wait to find out what Molly does. 
Nah, you're not bad. As long as you stop by once in a while to let me know you're still reading... I'm happy lol That was my only problem: I wanted to know if people were still reading. Now I know :D I'm just glad you're still enjoying it. Thanks!

Leilani
05/14/2008 03:26 pm
It'll probably take a while for your former readers to discover you're updating this story again.  Don't take it to heart.

I just discovered this story and am loving it!!  So keep on writing - the masses will return...
I didn't want to come off as being all whiny. It's just that it's worrysome to get no reaction at all. You start wondering if you're litterally writing only for yourself lol Obviously--based on the wonderful reviews I got this time--I was worrying for nothing. I'm glad you found the story and liked it, hon. And thank you for the encouragements.

Reb
05/14/2008 07:51 am
It's nice to have this back. I had lost track and had to go back and read the whole thing. Italy was fun (a couple of chapters back), especially Mario and Illona. The reunion was wonderfully awkward and graceless on all sides. I am very excited to see what Molly Stevens will come up with. Military attache to the Slayers, perhaps?
If it was good enough to read twice, I'm happy lol. I'm just sorry that I took such a long break from writing this one that so many people had to read the previous chapters again. I had so much going on in my life. I'm a flight attendant and I spent the winter being gone seven to eight days at a time and going to places where I wouldn't dare bringing my laptop for fear it would get stolen from my hotel room. I also wanted to finish Aloha to get it out of the way and be able to focus only on Decoy. Plus, I spent tons of money to go to the Buffy Reunion in L.A. in March and had to work overtime to pay for that. Not making excuses, but that's basically what happened. Add to that a very reluctant muse, and you get months and months of silence. I'm back on track now and promise regular update. Thanks for your review, Reb.

anon462
05/14/2008 06:19 am
New reader, so my first comment.  I'm really loving this story!!! I started it a couple hours ago and couldn't stop reading it. Each chapter became more and more interesting as the story developed. Finding Spike in Vagas trying to start a new life and not think about Buffy was kind of funny in a way, because when it comes to Buffy it isn't possible for him to not think about her in one way or another. Then as soon as he heard that there was something going on at the Hellmouth and the military were interested in Buffy, he had to go find out why. And once he did he had to chase half way around the world to find her, still thinking she was involved with the Immortal. Then off he goes again to Scotland, has the big first meeting with Buffy and blows the whole thing by telling her how long he has been back.  Now he has to face her and make her listen to him.

That's the brief summary of the story and every bit of it was a fantastic read. The characters were perfect in the way they thought and acted. Reading the chapters was like watching new episodes of BtVS, the ones that should have been made by Joss.

Great work, great writing, great time reading it!!!  Really looking forward to the next chapter, can't wait to see how Spike makes Buffy listen to him and hopefully they can make up and have a night of screaming Spuffy porn!!!  :D
Thank you so much! That is such a nice review. Oh, and... I'm hoping for a nice night of Spuffy porn too. But first, there's one stubborn Slayer who's gonna have to get over herself and listen lol.

05/14/2008 04:50 am
Lovely to see an update!  I seem to have missed the last one somehow.  I imagine you might get some grief, but personally I like how you handled the 'Spike's been gone for a year' fiasco.  I know Buffy had issues, but it always irritated me when people have her go running back to Spike the minute she see's him back.  I mean, hello, does the name Harmony ring a bell?  Authors tend to forget that...

But, the point is - I really enjoyed this chapter and am looking forward to the next one! :)
Well, she kinda ran to him... she just expected to run through him lol. Glad you enjoyed it.

Dee
05/14/2008 02:43 am
Well, I hope this review helps.  I read this story when you first put it out and was happy to see it again.  I almost thought it was a completely new story until I got to the second chapter and things started sounding familiar again.  I hope you will be able to finish because I find it very interesting and entertaining!
You thought it was a new story? That's funny :) Wow, you know it's been too long when... lol No worries, I always finish my stories. It would break my heart to abandon one of them--they're like my babies. Especially this one because I have so many ideas for it. Thanks.

TwilightChild
05/14/2008 12:20 am
  Uh oh, more trouble!  But, still, she shouldn't have run off like that.  with their relationship as new and tender as it is, she could end up losing it.  Hell, she could end up losing HIM with all the danger that pops up in their lives.

  I do love the babble she couldin't stop.  Very cute, and when confronted with that kind of loss, I think she would be at a loss for relevant words.  What do you say in that situation?

  Engaging story.
Ya know, for a girl who already died twice, you'd think she'd figured out by now that life is too short to waste time like that. Or at least, she should give people a chance to explain themself. But our Buffy doesn't deal well with rejection so she jumped to conclusions. She'll come around. Or at least, something will happen to make her.

You got my point exactly about the seemingly pointless hair monologue. That's it. What do you say in a situation like that? When you imagine a situation like that in your head, you think of all these wonderful things you'd say. But then, when it does happen, things never go as planned. You have too much things to say, it all wants to come out at the same time, and none of these meaningful things you thought you needed to say don't seem to matter anymore. And you end up saying something completely unplanned that seems pointless and random, but says it all in a weird way. So anyway, that's what I was thinking.

Thank's for the feedback, it's greatly appreciated.

Amy
05/14/2008 12:11 am
What an original plot idea!  You definitely have my attention.  This has a good start to it and I am eagerly waiting for the next one...oh, and the spuffy goodness please!  More of that!
The Spuffy goodness will come... as soon as they get over their issues. Just kidding! The day Spike and Buffy have no more issues is November 12th 3024 lol I won't make you wait that long :D :::sighs::: I'm funny tonight. Glad you like the plot idea, it's the first time I try my hand at something so involved. I have so many ideas, I can't wait to write more. I'll post again soon. So happy you like it.

Goddess_Hecete
05/13/2008 11:58 pm
Brillant story.  Seriously, one of the best Post-NFA fics I've read.  Can't wait for the next chapter!
Really? Thanks! So nice to hear :)

05/13/2008 11:47 pm
I left you a review for the last chapter over at EF.  Great update, things didn't go to well for poor Spike now did they?  Hope he can make it up to her.  Looking forward to your next update!
Things never go well for Spike. Poor guy. If only he'd start explaining himself before saying how long he's been gone, she might not have reacted so badly. Note to Spike: don't blurt things out. EVER. But you just know he'll manage to fix things. And if he doesn't, well, there's always Harmony. lol Just kidding. As if ;)