The Return by ya_lublyu_tebya
Chapter: Coming Back

Buffy Convert
07/11/2009 09:06 pm
     Oh, I get it, of course! The Buffy-bot. And Riley can't tell the difference. Well, after all, he's just a regular Joe - can't expect him to know the difference in one blonde over another.

07/01/2009 06:16 am
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01/24/2009 09:47 pm
love the beginning, thank you. last line shows how much riley has not changed.

01/17/2009 09:31 pm
riley you be fuck by spike ... I beat that he like that... and then my maybe he spike could fuck buffy infrot of him  i think that buffy would like that to that would be a gog story not this shit you are writting
Very mature. I would be insulted, except for the fact that you obviously have no "writting" skill of your own. If you don't like, don't read.

11/06/2008 03:59 am
Woo hoo! - my favorite the Buffybot.  No doubt she's hurrying off to see Spike naked. 

11/05/2008 06:21 pm
I'm glad your muse decided to come out of hibernation - looking forward to reading more.

It just needed a little encouragement, it seemed. :-) It's now back and the words are pouring out. Yay! Thanks for your support as always.

11/05/2008 12:08 pm

Buffy, wait, where are you going?”

“I’m going to see Spike,” she answered with a bright smile, flicking her hair over her shoulder and moving off.

ROFLMAO Off to a great start...looking forward to seeing where you go from here.
 

Glad you liked that. Writing the Buffybot is great fun - especially with a clueless Riley involved.

11/05/2008 11:57 am
Smashing start - and such an original pov.  I look forward to more.
Thanks. I thought it would be a very interesting one. More to come soon.

11/05/2008 08:40 am
love his reaction to the buffybot. hes such a dork.
Hehe. He is indeed. More Buffybot fun to come.

Aurelia
11/05/2008 07:52 am
“And you’re a big ponce,” she announced with a nod and a smile.

^Still chuckling over that one. Can't wait to see where this goes.
Good to know! :-) Hope you enjoy the next installment.

Winchester Hemery
11/05/2008 02:35 am
I am looking forward to the next chapter. I really like this idea, and the way you are approaching it. Not usually a Riley fan, but seeing things through his eyes is going to be very interesting. Also interested to see this summer explored. Spike's position in the group was mentioned ,but then no one ever really talked about it agan after the first few eps of S6. Hope you update soon, as I am dying to see were you go with this !
-Mari
The summer before S6 is definitely unexplored territory in many ways and I'm going to enjoy playing with it. Thanks for reading! The next chapter will be up soon.

11/05/2008 02:21 am
I do like the Buffybot comeuppance. Guess she did have a purpose after all.
Making Riley look stupid is always a good thing! :-)

11/05/2008 01:24 am
OMG! I love this! Having Riley return while Buffy's dead and then resurrected has always been one of my many S6 What If scenarios that I've never had the talent to write. And as much as I hate Riley and constantly wish he never existed, the way you've written him is really tolerable! For once I don't wanna punch him in the face! And that's saying a lot, trust me :) This looks like it's gonna be really good and I can't wait for more!!!
I hope my talent is enough to satisfy your 'what if 'curiosity!  Glad to hear you don't completely hate Riley. He deserves some pity at least... More soon.

shadow
11/05/2008 12:40 am
love it please update soon
Will do! Glad to see you along for the ride again.

Dee Bradfield
11/05/2008 12:14 am
Ah, you seem to have hit on my fic kink with this one - third person POV. I love reading stories where a relationship is observed by someone on the sidelines. Can't wait to read more.
Oh, and interesting to have him meet the Bot first - wasn't expecting that. :)
I hope it pleases :-) Riley's POV is going to be an interesting one to write as things progress...

11/04/2008 11:41 pm
Of course he assumes Spike put a spell on her, doesn't even realize that's not Buffy.  Then again, he didn't exactly know that wasn't her during the body switch, either.  And this is the woman he claims to love?  Have to say, Riley has a lot of nerve just coming back like that and expecting her to forgive him, he doesn't even think about the fact that she could have moved on.  I'm interested to see where you go with this, but I'm gonna hold you to the no Biley. 
I will allow you to beat  me with a stick if there is any whiff of Biley. Riley may still be in love with her, but that doesn't mean Buffy's going to be running back to him! :-)

11/04/2008 10:46 pm
Hee! What a clever and original idea. Can't wait to see where you go with this. :)
Thank you! I don't know where it came from... but then, they're always the best ideas! Thanks for reading.

11/04/2008 09:55 pm
 this will be fun to read i cant wait for more i like your writing i have read the rest of your fics they are great well keep this one up
Thanks so much! Hope you enjoy all that's to come.

11/04/2008 09:22 pm
Ahhhhhh Riley meets the Bot *snerk* and as always can't tell the difference.  Buffy would be furious although I don't think you can really blame the guy.

Looking forward to this.  I have zero love/like for Riley (it's all about his attitude towards the experiments of the Initiative not because he "came between" Buffy and Spike mind you) but that does not put me off of a story.

Kathleen

11/04/2008 09:22 pm
Ahhhhhh Riley meets the Bot *snerk* and as always can't tell the difference.  Buffy would be furious although I don't think you can really blame the guy.

Looking forward to this.  I have zero love/like for Riley (it's all about his attitude towards the experiments of the Initiative not because he "came between" Buffy and Spike mind you) but that does not put me off of a story.

Kathleen
I'm very glad the presence of Riley hasn't put you off! Woo hoo, one reader! :-) I thought it would be fun to throw him in and have him see a different Spike, a robot Buffy, a reincarnated Buffy etc. A different POV than usual at least. Hope you enjoy.