Embers by coalitiongirl
Chapter: Chapter 16

07/04/2011 11:17 pm
This is the best chapter so far! Honestly, this was fucking awesome. Holy shit! First of all, the Spuffyness. Be still my heart. Finally. So good, so in character, so perfect. Can I please just marry this fic? I promise not to ravage it THAT much ... Oh, and you are just spoiling us with all these updates! Thank you for updating so quickly and not letting me suffer :D

I'm so very anxious for the next chapter.

katamaphone
07/04/2011 07:20 pm

 Your killing me here............Awesome update. Love the the interaction between my favourite dynamic duo, but now I'm afraid there's no cure and all...... Buffy's nearest and dearest are probably being held captive or already hurt.......Maybe Spikes' bugs can save the day!........Loved the reference to "Spikes' Queen" too cute!   Though right now I'm anxious, because I don't know where you're going to go from this point, I  still have to say, well done! Excellent writing. The tension to draw the reader in is there,from the very beginning, and you've written not just unending drama, but laughter, love and tenderness. It's really a wonderful story and you're a great story-teller, and yes, it's true, I can't wait for more.....that was a truly wrenching cliff-hanger, you bad girl you!!::))

07/04/2011 01:18 am
Oh Wow. I was thinking trap, but...  oh dear. Oh dear.  Get 'em, Spike!