hi
i'm looking for a someone to look over something i wrote. it's the first of a post NFA mostly ignores the comics series. i'm not sure how long this series will be, but i  have 1 and half stories finished so far. i'm thinking maybe 4 or 5 parts? i'd prefer if this beta was available to look at the whole series as i go along, but if you're interested in reading just the first part, that would be fine cuz i'm kinda hoping to have it out for christmas.

as for what i have the most trouble with, i'd have to say character voice. i'm not sure if buffy sounds like buffy and spike like spike. i think that maybe buffy sounds like what i sound like if i tried to speak like buffy and spike sounds like...well you get the point.

if you're interested in this, please let me know. thanks a bunch!

I'd be happy to look at the first of it for you and give you a heads-up on any character voice issues.  Can't promise I'd beta the whole thing, but I would do the first part and get you started while you find a permanent beta.

that would be great!! thank you so much! how do i send it to you? 

Find me under "author" and click on my "email" link. Or, just use the address: pattific@hotmail.com. Send it as an attachment. I'll look at and do a beta (using Track Changes) on it and send it back.