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Spellbound by Shadowlass Turnabout is fair play! Love it! Mars 07/06/2014 04:44 am Five Absolutely loved the ending! It was great! Theresa 03/18/2014 11:09 pm Five
I liked this story right up until this chapter. . . .please tell me it doesn't end this way!!! I was really hoping that Buffy would realize that Spike did not have to help her at all, because the chip only kept him from killing; it didn't make him GOOD! Why doen't anyone in Sunnydale see what a rarity Spike is??? He is supposed to be EVIL all the time, yet he is one of the nicest "people" in town. He doesn't automatically judge someone based on what they do, but how they treat others. Spike liked Tara right away when she met the Scoobies, becasue she is a good person. . .he also liked Joyce Summers and Dawn right away, becaue they were both nice people. Why doesn't anyone (especially Giles) see that!!! Maybe that would make a good story! magnus374 03/11/2014 11:42 am Five This is good. I am so glad to see that you have come back to complete this story. Maybe you will even take up writing new Buffyverse stories. Have been a fan of your work for many years. Time to do some re-reads now. Hahaha, that was pretty great right there. Loved this fic. Wow I'd forgotten this gem! It's great to see you back. The entire city was moping! Perfect. I so enjoyed this little romp and an unwhupped Spike. Thanks so much for finishing it, and don't be a stranger! The naughtiest bribe ever! Buffy Convert 03/02/2014 08:57 pm Four I love the way it ended! Much more realistic than having her be all lovey-dovey or him nobly leaving town. What a hoot! Saying it's more "realistic", when discussing a reanimated corpse and a super girl! Brunettepet 04/09/2010 06:35 pm Four Buffy coming to the realization that Jonathan is not quite right during sex was great, and I enjoyed Spike confronting her after getting off. You're writing the evil fiend beautifully. Using Jonathan as leverage to get the chip out was brilliant and I was laughing out loud at the doctor's star struck reactions to the request and Spike trying to get him to calm down and be a bit professional was hysterical, too. Now that the spell is broken, Spike's holding all the cards. Poor Buffy, blackmailed into keeping the vampire in line. Whatever can she do to wiggle free of the monster? i can't wait to find out! 04/01/2010 05:36 am Four Ooh, I love the blackmail- Spike just handed Buffy the most wicked, delightful threat and it's just reasonable enough that she might want to pretend for it... *evil grin* I can't wait to hear what happens next! And now that Spike can bite again? ;) Great update, and the beginning where Buffy was experiencing everything with Spike as they had sex but also trying to pinpoint memories was very well done. The explanation of Jonathon keeping the demon contained to keep HIS world stable works perfectly, too. superscar 03/31/2010 09:44 am Four He's so brilliantly evil. Gotta love it. Clever concept, great tale. BuffyRat 03/30/2010 11:08 pm Four Love Spike's little scheme. He always is more fun when he's unchipped. Love it. Update soon. Brunettepet 03/25/2010 12:03 am Three The sex was white hot. I really think Spike hit the nail on the head with his synopsis of her problem with the bodyswitch, but pointing out that he recognized the switch and Riley didn't was cruel. Spike being a complete asshole to her is in character for this timeframe, but I can't see Buffy forgiving the vampire any time soon no matter how fantastic the sex is. Great balcony sex - but that ? after the 'oblivious' is making me a bit nervous for Spuffy... Great chapter. I always love public Spuffy sex. Cannot wait to see what Buffy thinks about the whole Spike knew it wasn't her thing when her (stupid) boyfriend didn't. Update soon and all that! But this time doing what he wanted made her skin crawl. Buffy, listen to your skin! It's telling you something important. Three hits! No wonder Buffy wants her groove back! I love your little nods to future!Spuffy: not your girl, make me, Buffy little bit of jealousy. I also have a little kink about Spike and Buffy discussing the champagne!Faith incident, so I'm all in! Great chapter! Besides the quick shags, they really aren't nice to each other at all. Buffy Convert 03/02/2014 08:19 pm Two TextThe only thing wrong this chapter was having to key in the string of numbers! Loved it, totally! Brunettepet 03/24/2010 11:54 pm Two Buffy's never agains just seems to make her and Spike even hotter for one another. It's delicious and hilarious. Is the demon the anti-Jonathan? Nah, that would make it all be over too quickly. And with these two, apparently it ain't over, even when it's over, IYKWIM. Yup, never again, after this next time. Right. Great chapter fyreburned (Kara) 02/28/2010 10:25 am Two I SO need to take up smoking cigarettes!!! Especially when reading chappies like this one! LOL! BuffyRat 02/26/2010 02:07 am Two Tomorrow... For them, I feel tomorrow never comes. Love when they run on instinct. Update soon. 02/23/2010 11:42 pm Two wow, love the intricate plot LOL. keep it coming. SNORT! Go, girl! I absolutely understand her frustration, and why not take it allllll out on the Slayer of Slayers? attempting, without much finesse, to unhook it. Hee! I always get a kick out of less than perfectly airbrushed sexytimes. I'm pleased you used the "Betty" thing, as that was one of the funniest things in an wonderfully funny episode. That and the Jonathan swimsuit calendar. Can't wait for more, and I'm in luck, there are two more chapters up already! BuffyRat 02/26/2010 02:05 am One Pretty intense. Hope she gets what she needs from him. What a fine way to straighten out one's kinks! Dreylin 02/14/2010 10:59 pm One Great start. Keep it coming! Just enough flitter of defiance! Brunettepet 02/04/2010 12:13 am One "Superstar" is one of my favorite episodes and it's wonderful to get inside Buffy's head when she's under the spell. Her chafing at the bit was a good catalyst for reasserting herself. It's a good thing Spike was just hanging about, waiting to help her with it! This is a great description: Trapped. Like she was a tiger in a circus, trained to be docile, to jump from stand to stand, when she was really made for stalking and killing. Like she’d been wild, and free, and someone had caged her. NICE - don't know if you are planning anymore to this, but having a story around "Superstar" is neat. I don't think I have ever read a Spuffy Superstar Era fic. Now that's a way to empower yourself. lol Great opening chapter. Can't wait for more. | |||
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