|
Dark Night of the Soul by pfeifferpack Joyce 07/26/2016 02:36 pm Chapter 41 Looking good! Hoping the outcome is also. Thank you. Hope is always a good thing. k I'm really enjoying the harshly realistic, take-no-prisoners direction this fic is going in. There's a lot more cultural depiction than in the usual Riley-goes-medieval-on-Spike plot, and more careful voicing of character. The slower progress also amps up the tension. Looking forward to see just where you take it. :) Thank you. It's sometimes painful to write (and research into the real world issues I'm using as inspiration is even more painful) but I am going for realistic and happy you think I've managed it. I also wanted to choose characters who had the seeds within them to make the choices I have then make instead of character bash or a change out of the blue. I really appreciate your comments and am so glad you like how I am telling this story. Kathleen Love this story but I'm not seeing how Congress would go along with it when there is a 4th Amendment to protect persons. Scary. But this is fiction and authoritarian types can just disregard rights. If things worked as they should you are right. Unfortunately we have already compromised many of our Bill of RIghts under the Patriot Act and if they sold something like the exposure of demons as a true threat they would likely allow for exceptions just as they have for terrorists. http://www.crf-usa.org/america-responds-to-terrorism/the-patriot-act.html And, of course the best reason of all...this is fiction LOL. Thank you for reading and the review. Kahtleen | |||
Disclaimer If you are under the age of 17, please use your head and do not read fics that are labeled "NC-17". Parents, I cannot control what your children are reading, so please be advised that the majority of the fics archived here are NOT suitable for those under the age of 17. I do not own Buffy the Vampire Slayer and I am in no way making any profit from this site. This is for pure entertainment purposes only. Concept: (c)bringonthebloodshed.com (2004), Code & Design: (c)Diabola (2006), Graphics: Selene & Always |