Dark Night of the Soul by pfeifferpack

Joyce
07/26/2016 02:36 pm
Chapter 41         
Looking good!  Hoping the outcome is also. 
Thank you.  Hope is always a good thing.

k

01/13/2016 08:07 am
Chapter 16         
I'm really enjoying the harshly realistic, take-no-prisoners direction this fic is going in. There's a lot more cultural depiction than in the usual Riley-goes-medieval-on-Spike plot, and more careful voicing of character. The slower progress also amps up the tension. Looking forward to see just where you take it. :)
Thank you.  It's sometimes painful to write (and research into the real world issues I'm using as inspiration is even more painful) but I am going for realistic and happy you think I've managed it.  I also wanted to choose characters who had the seeds within them to make the choices I have then make instead of character bash or a change out of the blue.  I really appreciate your comments and am so glad you like how I am telling this story.

Kathleen

01/26/2016 08:30 pm
Chapter 7         
Excellent chapter!
Thank you!
Kathleen

01/26/2016 05:22 pm
Chapter 6         
Love this story but I'm not seeing how Congress would go along with it when there is a 4th Amendment to protect persons. Scary.  But this is fiction and authoritarian types can just disregard rights.
If things worked as they should you are right.  Unfortunately we have already compromised many of our Bill of RIghts under the Patriot Act and if they sold something like the exposure of demons as a true threat they would likely allow for exceptions just as they have for terrorists.
http://www.crf-usa.org/america-responds-to-terrorism/the-patriot-act.html    And, of course the best reason of all...this is fiction LOL.

Thank you for reading and the review.
Kahtleen