Second the First by SinisterChic

05/05/2014 10:24 pm
Helpless         
This is a really cute story and a goo continuation of Replay [which I loved!] I'd love to know how things continue

03/28/2014 02:23 am
Helpless         
consider this the kick in the pants...  or the desperate plea... whatever it takes to make you come back and finish this.  I hope real life is being kind and that you just got distracted.  I can't wait to see where this goes...  please?

Blue

Such a shame it's not finished! Thx. :-)
07/07/2010 02:41 pm
Helpless         
 

07/26/2008 03:32 pm
Helpless         
are you kidding me?? this was as excellent as ever! i really, really hope you pick this story back up one day... i just read all of replay and these 8 chappies in one night and am soooooooo hooked! i really wanna know how things turn out! its sooooooo good!

Ellen
01/17/2008 07:03 pm
Helpless         
Is there gonna be more? Because I really like the story. I do hope you continue. Kay, that kinda sounded like Giles.

SunshineSlayer
12/02/2007 09:56 am
Helpless         
omg i love this. please please please continue asap... its amazing!!

and i hope spike stays spike and we can get some more spuffyness - along with more info on the first. coz we all know that its gotta happen sometime.i cant remember the timeline tho.

anyway, i love it, and am waiting eagerly for an update!

SS xo

Melissa
07/17/2007 02:52 am
Helpless         
Are you going to finish it ever? You should its like reading a whole new season a MUCH better season!!!!!! Please finish it if you ever can! Great little series!!!

06/29/2007 08:42 am
Helpless         
great story

Victoria
01/01/2007 10:47 pm
Helpless         
I love it already. n Replay was great. i cant wait 4 u 2 finish

12/06/2006 07:08 am
Helpless         
Please pick this story back up. I am so interested to see what you will do with this.

Anne
11/24/2006 05:55 am
Helpless         
I thought it was great looking for more soon please

Stella
08/19/2006 10:20 pm
Helpless         
I just discovered this series. What an interesting twist with William/Spike. I love the fact that you used Cassie to show Buffy that there are things in life that you can't change. I hope you can update again soon.

08/17/2006 02:51 pm
Helpless         
this chapter was actually excellent...poor cassie...her last words were hopeful though...please *please* update this soon!! i love this story!! great job

Clare
07/19/2006 08:59 pm
Helpless         
This story is awesome! Guilt. Guilt. Guilt. Please continue it! Please?? If it sounds like I'm whining it's because I am. Thanks! LOL

~*~Tasha~*~
07/16/2006 10:55 pm
Helpless         
You have NOTHING to worry about. This is good, and I knew it would be. I love this story. It is sad that some things can change and some can't, but unfortunately that is life.

I LOVED when Spikey/William backed Velvet up. I got a kick out of the fact that it was Velvet's words that helped the two of them to get in sync. {Grins}

I look forward to more of this when the muse strikes. I've always enjoyed seeing what was going to happen next with this one.

Stephanie
07/14/2006 03:06 am
Helpless         
Loved Replay. Please finish this one. I want to know how it ends. As for Velvet send her ass home. More please!

vladt
06/13/2006 05:11 am
Helpless         
good read, thanks

06/10/2006 12:44 am
Helpless         
it is very good buut you know I need another chappie to be sure

DeanSamWinchesterfan
06/07/2006 07:09 pm
Helpless         
It's sad that Cassie couldn't be saved.I forgot about Replay and the sequel,but then I saw it again and decided to read.Like Buffy,I have a hospital phobia.
Mine's even worse.I can't even go see people in the hospital without freaking out.My dad had to go to the hospital in March(On my mom's birthday),and I freaked out when we already on our way.I was doing okay until we were on our way down.I hate hospitals. Update soon.

RJ
06/07/2006 03:51 pm
Helpless         
This story is super! I was more than happy to reread the first part since I had forgotten what was going on. Hope you have time to continue it.

06/07/2006 11:49 am
Helpless         
WOW... I am just so sorry that she could not help Cassie... BUt I am glad that at least she has Spike back for a little while. I know enough to know this is not it but so happy that he put Velvet in her place.

08/17/2006 02:47 pm
Puzzle Pieces         
okay, maybe she *should* try to be psychiatrist buffy...willow's magic could end up just messing things up worse...or maybe that's just me...i don't know...great chapter

vladt
06/13/2006 05:06 am
Puzzle Pieces         
good update. thanks

Catrine
06/05/2006 04:43 pm
Puzzle Pieces         
I recently came over this story (the starting story) and I had to continue reading it. A really nice story,good sequelI hope to see an update soon.

05/29/2006 01:08 pm
Puzzle Pieces         
ya know the only thing worse than a cliffie??? One that goes on for monthes pleasse more of this one soon??

~*~Tasha~*~
04/08/2006 06:14 pm
Puzzle Pieces         
Excellent chapter. I know it has been a while since you updated this one, but I know how that goes. I look forward to reading more when you are inspired to do so.

Pet
03/15/2006 04:36 pm
Puzzle Pieces         
Great story! I really hope there will be un update soon.

01/25/2006 08:12 am
Puzzle Pieces         
WOW can't wate to see more of it. It's a grate story please keep up the good work.

Spikes Slayer2
01/24/2006 06:11 am
Puzzle Pieces         
this is really interesting.. i cant wait to see how everything turns out...

Wicked Angel/Cass
01/21/2006 07:16 am
Puzzle Pieces         
Well, glad William didn't freak too much or anything. Will be interesting to see where you take this. Hope you feel better soon!
Thanks. At least my fever is gone from wed. Now I'm stuck with a stuffy nose and I'm real tired. Ugh. Anyway, I hope you like what I have in store.

01/21/2006 05:04 am
Puzzle Pieces         
I hope Spike and William get together pretty soon. This back and forth stuff won't help too much with beating the First or helping the potentials. More story soon please.

08/17/2006 02:44 pm
Oh, You Again         
wow...this could get traumatic for all parties concerned....great chaptter though

06/14/2006 01:34 am
Oh, You Again         
Regarding your AN (Velvet), you could make her a potential. Interested?

Btw, still got me. keep it up.

vladt
06/13/2006 05:01 am
Oh, You Again         
fine chapter. thanks for the read. good luck with velvet. like what you done so far.

05/14/2006 07:42 pm
Oh, You Again         
Give her to Giles.....he needs somebody after all unless she turns out to be gay then Kennedy can have someone to scare ...er...love. If she wants a demon there's always Clem! Maybe Angel's lonely.......Wes?

No matter, the story is shaping up nicely and I am enjoying it all.

Kathleen

~*~Tasha~*~
04/08/2006 06:11 pm
Oh, You Again         
Ohmy gosh!! Those two are going to go nuts. Spike and William switching back and forth like that. As for Velvet ... I like her, but I don't like her and William or Spike being together. So, I don't care what happens to her one way or the other. {winks} I think she was an awesome OC that took care of William and stuff. Maybe they can all be friends?

Wicked Angel/Cass
01/20/2006 12:43 pm
Oh, You Again         
Hey! I figured out how to review! I'm not a complete moron then. -lol- Anywho, loved "Replay." *Adoring* "Second the First." Velvet... I dunno. Kinda... hmm... Maybe you could have her eventually join the Scooby Gang for some reason? Doesn't sound like she's got too much goin' for her in Indiana. Maybe California holds better prospects. Or there could be some reason for Angel to come down! And he brings his whole crew, and she bonds with them (*hint hint* Fred). Eh, just some ideas. Anywho, I'm loving the switches from Spike to William. Especially the last one. -lmao- Man, that's good. Poor William. -lol-

SpaceLord
01/19/2006 07:23 am
Oh, You Again         
Hmm now they will need to merge william and Spike. As for Velvet I can only say 3 way action, that will keep everybody happy

01/18/2006 04:48 pm
Oh, You Again         
William and Spike are going to have to learn to get along with each other and share Buffy. Maybe Velvet will like Clem. More story please.

idk5743228
01/17/2006 10:16 pm
Oh, You Again         
I see 2 options, do the back and forth with Spike and that would keep Velvet in the loop. You know kind of a Jr. Scoob or you could bring the 1st into the mix, sacrifice poor, clueless Velvet and set William on his way back to being Spike. Anyway you see the future chapters, I'm sure will be great.

01/17/2006 02:08 pm
Oh, You Again         
Oh swappy Spike and William. Good things could come from this split personality. Can't wait to see what.

01/17/2006 12:02 pm
Oh, You Again         
kill the bitch...just kidding. Threesome? Ok i'm being naughty now lol. I like this going back and forth, this should prove interesting lol.

neo_trinityknot
01/17/2006 11:20 am
Oh, You Again         
Ignore her and maybe she will go away...Great chapter.
Ha! I can be like those cit-coms and just not write her in anymore and hope no one notices she is gone. The trouble is, I created her but didn't have a plan as to her role in the larger picture.

08/17/2006 02:41 pm
It Starts         
great chapter, very intriguing...can't wait to see what happens next

vladt
06/13/2006 04:51 am
It Starts         
good chapter, thanks for the read.

~*~Tasha~*~
04/08/2006 06:06 pm
It Starts         
Oooooo ... Spikey is talking to William from within. I like it!!

01/15/2006 05:58 am
It Starts         
yes, we get what's going on.

01/15/2006 04:48 am
It Starts         
LMAO, these chappies freakin rok I loveem

neo_trinityknot
01/15/2006 03:47 am
It Starts         
Did thatevil soul push Spike down? Bad soul, bad!

01/15/2006 02:36 am
It Starts         
Oh I loved the whole William/spike conversation. Very nifty indeedy. I read all of Replay yesterday and wen tright to this. I do love both stories very much! Can't wait for more.

idk5743228
01/15/2006 01:58 am
It Starts         
Excellent chapter. I really don't like to see Spike comforting anyone else but I know that's what William would do. Last part with Spike talking inside his head was brillilant

08/17/2006 02:38 pm
Lock it up and Throw Away the Key         
it may have been an accident, but i have a feeeling what dawn just did was probably of the good....they were all just going to keep it a secret...i think this is better

vladt
06/13/2006 04:46 am
Lock it up and Throw Away the Key         
hi velvet, welcome to sunnydale. thanks for the fun read.

~*~Tasha~*~
04/08/2006 06:03 pm
Lock it up and Throw Away the Key         
ROFL!! Ooopppssss Dawnie! Open mouth and insert foot. Great chapter!

01/15/2006 06:40 am
Lock it up and Throw Away the Key         
i really like Dawn saying that. And I really like what Anya says in the next chapter.

Nikkole
01/14/2006 10:14 am
Lock it up and Throw Away the Key         
I agree, I think Dawn blurting out is much easier than keeping secrets for multiple chapters. Update again soon please!!

neo_trinityknot
01/14/2006 04:50 am
Lock it up and Throw Away the Key         
Oops...just like Dawn to blurt things out. I'm glad though, keeps down the agnst.

08/17/2006 07:01 am
Decisions         
oh this is about to get really good, i can tell...great chaper...cant wait to see how velvet adjusts to sunnydale, and how spike re-adjusts to everything..great job

vladt
06/13/2006 04:41 am
Decisions         
tale continues to grow. wonder what velvet will make of the sundale crew. thanks for the fun read.

~*~Tasha~*~
04/08/2006 04:57 pm
Decisions         
Hmmm ... this seems to be where I left off because I remember Buffy getting there, but not what happened next. I definitely don't remember Velvet wanting to go to Sunnydale.

Good update, and I'm reading more. I hope Spike/William does remember. Plus I hope they can convince Velvet that he is who he thinks he is.

Neo_trinityknot
01/14/2006 02:57 am
Decisions         
Just read Replay, and all three chapters of this so far, I love them, and cant wait to read the next chapter!

08/17/2006 06:58 am
Those Golden Eyes Upon Me         
wow...that was intense...does he remember her? can't wait to find out!

vladt
06/13/2006 04:33 am
Those Golden Eyes Upon Me         
very good read. but i think buffy might be wrong. i think it will matter. thanks for the fun read.

~*~Tasha~*~
04/08/2006 04:52 pm
Those Golden Eyes Upon Me         
Ooo ... Buffy found him, and William went a bit vampirey there for a while. Interesting. I wonder if he is both still vampire and human ... a living vampire perhaps?

08/17/2006 06:56 am
There's More than Corn in Indiana         
oh i cant wait for buffy to find him and help him remember! an excellent start! great job!

vladt
06/13/2006 04:12 am
There's More than Corn in Indiana         
interesting start. even with memory loss, spike remembers a "blond goddess with green eyes." thanks for the read.

05/13/2006 12:41 am
There's More than Corn in Indiana         
...:::snicker:::.... I grew up in Indianapolis and am loving the idea of Spike in my birth State.

Hope he gets his memories back before the FE starts to mess with him.

Great start.

Kathleen

~*~Tasha~*~
04/08/2006 04:49 pm
There's More than Corn in Indiana         
I could have swornthat I read some of this story before, but I don't see any reviews here for me for it. {ponders that} Strange. So, I'm reading from the beginning here. I know that I had missed the half of the chapters wherever I was reading it before too.

I was glad to see a sequel to Replay started. I liked that fic. I look forward to what this one has to offer. I like how it started off.

Stacy
01/17/2006 06:56 am
There's More than Corn in Indiana         
Well, I did have to read Replay again. But that's ok because I really enjoyed it the second time around also. This is a great start and I hope you keep the updates comin'. Thanks for writing.

Nikkole
01/14/2006 10:03 am
There's More than Corn in Indiana         
HMMMM, interesting! So it is the poet that was returned first, very sneaky of you!