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Other Enemies by Chelle I enjoyed this. It made me laugh.. and the unique way they dealt with the mayor... don't think I've EVER seen that one before. Good on you. Blue Dork isn't a whale's penis. http://urbanlegends.about.com/b/2009/05/05/dork-definition.htm Really like this story - read it before - I like how you brought Faith back into the white hat side and managed the Buffy-Angel relationship. Lambean 10/07/2013 12:55 pm Other Enemies I know you wrote this a long time ago but I liked it so much I just had to leave a review.
The story was wonderful and Spikes description of her as a thunderstorm was beautiful. Loved this story - as much as I like your other works - Pleasure reading your work - Wonderful! What I liked most was the Spuffy back and forth angry,hurt, exasperated and back to love dialogue. Excellent. Thank you! 03/26/2010 02:17 am Other Enemies Spuffygirl 09/11/2008 12:32 pm Other Enemies I remember reading parts of this like forever ago. lol. It's great to see it finished. Really wonderful story. jewel5 09/10/2008 05:16 pm Other Enemies This was an awesome story...very true to the characters, and funny as hell!! Cate 07/10/2008 02:28 pm Other Enemies Absolutely brilliant! Not only did you write in a season that rarely ever gets written about, you were also able to portray and encapsulate characters realistically, making your story much more identifiable than some, whom seem to name their characters Buffy, Spike, Angel etc. yet portray something that is nothing like them. Your Buffy and Spike relationship was also very believable as it was not all "hugs and puppies" from right off the bat. I also loved how you dealt with Angel. I usually, like most, shallowly laugh at most Angel bashing, but to be truthful I do like the character *hides* and I liked how you treated him, purposefully or not, giving him dignity that most writers do not. You are a great writer. Well done! pearlseed 07/10/2008 11:24 am Other Enemies “If we start this, we WILL finish it, Slayer. I don’t care if you change your mind half way. There is no turning back if you don’t tell me no now.” “There is nothing I won’t do to you, luv. But we aren’t in any hurry.” Fine lines those are Miz Chelle and I appreciate your story that holds the Beloveds' voices so neatly. Thanks for the story!! *Great* story, a real blast to read. The banter between Spike and Buffy was a real treat to read! Alien 08/27/2007 03:14 pm Other Enemies I like it realy Serenity 03/01/2007 09:14 am Other Enemies Just wanted to say that I am glad you finished this story because I enjoyed reading it and would have hated to never know the ending! nice spuffy road trip story, very good dialogue, funny and sweet and sexy all at once...good job :) Celest 11/13/2006 02:35 pm Other Enemies I meant to leave a review when you first put up your completed fic on BSV, but somehow I forgot! I just wanted to tell you that I've loved your fiction for the past five years, and this fic was constantly drawing me to your site. You, Saber Shadow Kitten, Lisa Drexel, and Ripe Wicked PLum remain some of my favorite authors, and are the ones who first drew me into the verse. Now, I'm clumsilly trying out my own pen. . . err...keypad. I just wanteed to tell you what an amazing journey it's been with you over the years, and the end was well worth the wait. This story still remains my favorite, even though it was unfinished at the time, you left it at a point where your mind was allowed to wander. Thank you so much for cmpleting my favorite piece of fanfiction. Welcome back, Chelle. dancing puma 10/05/2006 11:59 am Other Enemies So glad you finally finished this. I kept finding it and re-reading it and it alwAYS stopped at the same place. It was a pleasure to read again this time. Jags 10/04/2006 09:29 pm Other Enemies OH. MY. GOSH!!!! THAT WAS SO INCREDIBLE! Verona 09/16/2006 07:15 pm Other Enemies Great story! I love it! I can't believe it's the first one you ever wrote. Very funny and cute. Oh my god - that was fantastic! I've been waiting for the end of that for half a decade too (:P) and it was oh so worth the wait - your writing style is, as always, brilliant! I love the way you involve the characters, and their conversation is always so funny! Simply fabulous - I'm so chuffed I can't stop smiling! All I can say is thank you, thank you, thank you - it's wonderful! Rose 08/04/2006 07:31 am Other Enemies Great story! Kristy 05/24/2006 11:13 am Other Enemies Wow. I had originally passed over this story the first time I came across it. I can't really remember the reasoning for it now. But I'm glad the second time around I gave it a chance. By far one of the better stories I've ever had the pleasure of reading. I especially enjoyed the thunderstorm analogy,the best part of the whole story. I love poet Spike. He's yummy. Hopefully you'll continue more stories in this vein, I would definetly look forward to reading (and re-reading) them. I absolutely adored this fic! Best season 3 fic I've ever read. You write all the characters very well. Loved the ending. :P Very cute. ~*~Tasha~*~ 04/09/2006 04:20 pm Other Enemies This was good ... especially if it was your first fic. I think you handled the Season 3 elements very well, as well as the characters too. I enjoyed the plot and the originality of the story. {Smiles} Nice work. Well all I can say is; at least the five year wait I had to endure is finly over, and was actualy worth it. Grate ending, and Im sure I dont have to say took you long enough. Please dont every leave me hangen like that agen. I dont think I'll get the feeling back in my fingers as it is. lori 04/07/2006 09:02 pm Other Enemies Loved it!!!! vladt 04/07/2006 08:13 pm Other Enemies fun tale. enjoyed the read, thanks SpaceLord 04/07/2006 01:20 pm Other Enemies So wrote this while season 3 was airing....well you certainly saw the spuffy potential early. Don't know if I did to be honest but Spike was a fun character I remember. Loved the story and can very well imagine a nice sequel to it. Road trip to Vegas should be lots of fun....hmm will Angel go off to LA in this story? Whatever happened to Wesley? I really enjoyed this. I love how good Spike is for Buffy, and I have always enjoyed Spike's and Joyce's relationship. Thanks for sharing this. :) Esther 04/07/2006 08:53 am Other Enemies Squee!!! I remember this story from a few years ago: it's the one that got me into reading Spuffy fanfics. So glad it's finished! I absolutely loved it all....and boy howdy, it's also the one that got me to thinking of the Spike/Billy Idol resemblance; physical-wise. Gah!! This was just fantastic!! I love it!! This is a fun road trip Spuffy story. Thank you for sharing. Wonderful! I really enjoyed reading this fic. Nice story! | |||
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