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More Than You Think by Mad Dog Bite momnesia@yahoo.com 12/04/2013 11:59 pm Morning
I just started reading Buffy fan fiction, and really LOVED this! I really hope you will finish this someday soon. This is one of the Best fan fictions I have read so far. NICE update - like your Dawn and Buffy bedroom scene - you really write the characters very well, capturing their personalities, speaking style, mannerisms...excellent chapter, love, and i'm so looking forward to reading that conversation between tara and buffy!!!! Isabel 09/27/2007 05:57 am Morning Good story. I'm enjoying it. I'm glad Dawn wasn't too harsh on Buffy after the talk they had. Can't wait to see how the conversation between Tara and Buffy will go. Kim Adams 09/27/2007 04:03 am Morning So, Martha stewart is a witch? I shoulda known... I love the interaction between Buffy, her sister and Willow, even. I hope she will get some help for her magic problem in this story before it is too late. Please don't let Tara die, please! I look forward to the return of Spike and another fabulous update! This is such a great "what coulda been"!! between dawn and spike, buffy just might figure things out. good read, thank you. Spikeskatmac 09/27/2007 02:40 am Morning Great chapter, but so short, and no SPIKE!!! What are you doing to me??? Just kidding; it really was good; I love the interaction b/n Dawn & Buffy; you've definitely got a feel for the character voices. louise39 09/27/2007 01:52 am Morning Great to see that Dawn is bringing a little normalcy into their their talks. Fun cooking episode. BT_ 09/26/2007 11:22 pm Morning I just read everything in this piee so far. looks like a really great begining. Keep it up :) Kim Adams 09/23/2007 06:30 am Dawn Sorry my reading and reviewing the last chpt was so late but this story has utterly captivated me in so many ways. I love how Dawn was used to help wake Buffy up to what she is doing to herself and everyone else who truly loves her. I want to see her really lay into Willow, Xander, Anya and Tara (who should have known better) for bringing her back like that. Esp Xander, the bigot. You have got a solid winner here and I can't wait for the next chapter! :D -giggles bashfully- You made me go all blushy, lol. Thank you. I'm so glad you're enjoying the story, and I hope I don't disappoint! I like this articulate Dawn -- way better than the whinger we actually got. lol, thank you. I'm glad you like her :) Rigby24 09/22/2007 08:34 am Dawn Love this, if I was Spike that would be my price too! Keep up the good work! Thanks! Dreamsofspike 09/22/2007 07:19 am Dawn poor little dawnie... :( so sad to think she has to feel that way about her big sister, but i'm proud of her for standing up for herself and not backing down with buffy...great chapter, love, looking forward to more :) I think that Dawn really started to grow up in those times. It's the bad stuff that makes you strong, and I thought it was about time Dawn started showing it, lol. Thanks for the review! kim 09/22/2007 05:06 am Dawn Ooo, yay, truth from both of them at the same time! Can't run away from it now. Buffy can stay the way she's been, but there's no way she can delude herself about it anymore. Go see a therapist, Buff, like everybody else does. Hit the nail right on the head there, girl! Hopefully the truth will do Buffy some good, huh? Thanks for the review! Syndyloo 09/22/2007 03:10 am Dawn Loved it, your Buffy is sympathetic and I wish her conversation with Dawn had actually happened on the show. In season 5, it is so evident how much Buffy loves Dawn, and in season 6 it seemed to disappear with all her other troubles. Love how you're making it better. -smiles- Thank you. I agree that Buffy and Dawn drifted apart, or at least Buffy drifted away. I felt Dawn needed to approach Buffy about it before things got too far in. Thanks for reviewing! All4Spike 09/22/2007 02:56 am Dawn So glad Buffy is trying to open up to Dawn and come to terms with her actions, we never did see an apology for that beating and Spike certainly deserved one. Dawn is very good at bringing Buffy back down to earth and dosing her with reality. More please. Thank you for the review :) I'm glad you liked my Dawn! louise39 09/22/2007 02:48 am Dawn Your Dawn is insightful and a little unforgiving. “He said it was a demon, but it wasn’t… was it?†Her tone was accusing. I've always thought Dawn was a bright girl. She values Spike as a very close friend, if not a brother, and she knows her sister like the back of her hand. I hope I can make those facts about Dawn ring true in my writing. Thank you for reviewing. :) I was so glad to see Dawn giving Buffy a piece of her mind; I love a well written Dawn, and yours is very good. No whining or screaming, just emotion. Really great! But no Spike??!!?? What are you doing to me?? LOL! Lol, stick with me, his moment's coming. I promise. It wouldn't be much of a Spuffy if there wasn't a Spike. :-P Thank you for reviewing! Kim Adams 09/23/2007 06:22 am Decision One could only wish that this had really happened during the show...Joss was not smart to my way of thinking... Spike really could have helped Buffy but the writers had to go and screw that up royally! This is such a wonderful way of retelling a pivotal moment in spuffy history and I thank you for it! LOVE THIS and want more so on to the next one..:D lol, darn writers. Thank you very much for reviewing. I'm so glad you like what I'm writing! spike did the right thing -- in not throwing the bottle of whiskey. hopefully he did the right with thing giving buffy an ultimatum. good read, thank you Lol, he's a smart guy. I still think that he's always had a good perception on what's what in Buffy's head. Just wish he'd done something about it in the show. Oh well, that's what Spuffy's for lol. Thanks! Good to see Spike make a stand -- all or nothing! Hopefully a wake-up call for Buffy. Always good to see a bit of the old Spike shine through. I miss the guy sometimes lol. Thanks for reviewing :) I would also add to his "I hope List" that he also has the resolve to carry this through to a solution for himself as well - they can both "make it out," maybe not his chip problem but being a partner in this insane relationship is something he can do. Great Start - Hopefully Spike will be able to follow through on the part he has to play in this "get Buffy happy again" scheme of his. He's a pretty generous guy when it comes to love, though. Or at least I'd like to imagine him that way lol. Thanks for reviewing, nmcil! If she runs true to form, Buffy will either show up without telling her friends and expect him to take her back OR she'll wallow in misery for weeks refusing to tell anyone why. Hmm... seems like the Buffy I've got in the makings is kinda finding her own way around the problems that faced her in S6. I'm hoping you like her :) Thanks for the review! wow!!! this is so incredible...spike's idea was brilliant, hope she goes through with it, because i always thought that if she'd been honest about it, the fallout wouldn't have been nearly so bad as it was when the scoobies found out the way they did in the show...excellent chapter, love, looking forward to reading more :) I completely agree. Honesty is always the best way through any hard times, even if it hurts. Thank you for the review :) Good chapter Mad Dog - About time Spike kicked Buffy's butt. lol, I always thought Spike needed a chance to toughen up. He kinda lost himself in S6, but I'm hoping this fic shows the old him a bit more. Thanks! time of change 09/18/2007 03:28 am Decision An excellent start. I look forward to more. Thank you :) louise39 09/18/2007 03:14 am Decision Spike is changing his approach as he tells Buffy, . "You want to atone for what happened in that alley the other night? This is my price. Tell your friends about us. Until then, don’t come around.†What next? There are a couple reasons why Spike does it this way, which I'm hoping will make more sense later on in the story. I hope you'll like it :) Thanks for reviewing! Yeah! All through S6 I prayed for Spike to grow a pair!!! Oops, did I say that out loud?! (hee-hee). Finally, we're seeing the Spike that we were denied for the better part of the show; the Spike that COULD have pulled Buffy out of her depression. Congratulations on another great chapter; I'm waiting for the next with bated breath. BTW, you capture Spike's voice beautifully. -blush- Thank you. I've always been kind of insecure about my Spike voicing, so it's unbelievably relieving to know you like it. :) Syndyloo 09/18/2007 02:59 am Decision Great chapter, think it will take Buffy some time to realize what she needs, but I'm hopeful she gets there :) Keep hopeful, but keep patient ;)Thank you for the review! louise39 05/13/2008 11:01 pm Sorry "...determined to make her finally see what she was putting herself through" Fine emotional pcture of s.6 Buffy. sad and sweet beginning. very good read, thank you. Thank *you* for reading! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. :) this has to be one of the best descriptions of their horrendous and tragic alley encounter I have read - bravo for the excellent work. Funny how things work out - I have been thinking of this scene and wanting to do some digital studies from it - worked on 2 variations last night from her DTngs dream sequence - Call it "Thinking of Murders and Suicide" Oh, wow. Seriously? I don't even know what to say. I mean... really? *blushes profusely* Thank you. And that sounds really interesting! I'd love to know more about it. :) that's heartbreaking, love...so sweet and sad, and you've captured their emotions very realistically, too...i love this and can't wait to read more :) -smiles- Thank you. I wasn't too sure about how well I was portraying them, so it means a lot that you think I'm doing alright. :) WOw, Buffy apologizes. That's a first. Yep. Buffy didn't do that very often on the show lol. Thanks for reviewing! Kim Adams 09/18/2007 01:05 am Sorry Finally, Buffy apologizing for what she did...about time and yet, being a major Spuffy fan, I know she needs his love and his backbone in standing up to her. This is a beautiful story and thank you for it. I can't wait for more! Wow. Thank you, Kim! I'm glad you're enjoying it! SpikesKatMac 09/17/2007 03:27 pm Sorry Very nice! Always good to see Spike with some backbone! Can't wait for more! I totally agree. Spike didn't get his glory moments enough in S6 lol. Thanks for reviewing! | |||
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